英語作文怎麼批註

㈠ 英語作文(My winter vacation)批註翻譯100詞急!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My winter vacation

During the winter vacation， is different of my life. I wake up 11 o'clock Am everyday，after a washing，I have a good lunch with my parents. Next ,I play computer games till the time to have supper. After have dinner, I go on playing till 2 o'clock Am， and then go to sleep with tired. This is one ll day of my winter vacation.

But I haven't bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books， sometime I listen to the music or the radio in the bed， because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. And I also meet some of my good friends ring the vacation， we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis together. And I watched the spring festival party of the CCTV ！I think this is the thing most people of China doing at that time.

That's all， all my ll，coldly and snowy winter vacation.

㈡ 幫忙修改一下英語作文 老師大概改了一下 可我不知道怎麼改 老師的批註 有圖片解釋