fit英語四級作文
Although honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor are all worthwhile characteristics, I feel the most important one in life to have is sensitivity. A sensitive person is aware of him/herself and the way their actions affect others. A sensitive person knows the place of honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor.
Honesty is not always the best policy. There is such a thing as a white lie. You don』 want to insult someone by saying that their new dress doesn』t fit properly or that you wouldn』t live in their new house if they paid you. You must be sensitive to when it is necessary to tell the truth and when it is better to tell a white lie.
Intelligence is a wonderful thing to have, but not all intelligent people use their intelligence sensitively. You don』t want to show off and make others feel stupid. You must be sensitive to the reactions of the people around you. It might be appropriate for you to admit that you have the right answer, but in some cases, you might have to say, 「I think this is the answer, but we might want to check it.」 A sensitive person would not make someone else look mb.
A sense of humor is always valued. Different people, however, laugh at different things. You don』t want to make someone feel uncomfortable by laughing at his /her mistakes. A sensitive person would understand whether a person could be teased or whether a person would appreciate a certain joke.
A sensitive person would make everyone feel comfortable. A sensitive person understands that people are different and that the values of honesty, intelligence and humor can be applied differently.
㈡ 請英語高手幫我點評這篇四級作文，萬分感謝！
[ . . . ]裡面的是增加的單詞、句子
( . . . )裡面是更改過的單詞、句子（語法或拼寫錯誤）
< . . . > 裡面是要刪掉的單詞、句子
【···】需要的時候，中文評論、解釋
我把1-2句話隔成了一個段落是為了我修改方便（眼睛看的不會太累），而並不是因為要分段的。
Talent Show(s) on TV
Nowadays, with the developing economy,more and more people [are] pay(ing) their attention to the entertainment [instry].
In this situation, all kinds of talent shows (have) appeared on TV. There are two reasons why talent shows (are becoming) so popular <in the following>.【明白你是想說「以下···」，可是寫英文文章的時候，如果要很舒服，很漂亮的，最好避開「請看以下幾點」這樣的句子】
First(ly), people (have became) richer so they have (enough) money [for] not only <to the eat> [food] and [shelter] <warmth>, but also [for] <to the> entertainment.
In the (modern) world, <the person> [people] work so hard to earn money that they need to relax themselves sometimes. The (recent) appearance of <the> [various] talent shows fit their need(s)【如果光是「the appearance of...」的話，會以為是talent show的長相呢！所以我加了「recent」在前面，這樣就表達清楚「（最近）talent show的出現···」的意思了！】.
Moreover, <the> teens <in this time> [today] are more interest(ed) in <the> talent shows. They <are so active that they> spend a lot of time on all kinds of shows.【不是很明白你說的「they are so active that they...」是想說他們很活躍嗎？我覺得直接就說重點，「他們放很多時間看不通的節目」】
More and more teens are absorbed in [watching these] talent shows, <so> [as a result,] (these) shows [are] becom(ing) <more and more> [increasingly] popular. 【最好寫作的時候不要重復同樣的詞好幾遍，適當的時候要換詞用噢！這樣給人感覺你詞彙量很大～】
<As far as I'm concerned> [Admittingly], I like to watch <the> talent shows on TV [too]. <I think it is very comfortable.>【很舒服？什麼很舒服？這句話語法沒錯，可是完全有點湊字數的感覺，還是不要為好】
[In my opinion,] talent shows are good for <the> teens <in my mind>. The shows [are] always <hold on> [aired ring] summer or winter <days> [vacations] so the students can [also] play a part on [the show itself.] <because they also have a long holiday at the same time.>
<They can entertain themselves after a long time study and also can learn a lot of things through the shows.> [After studying for hours at ends, they are able to entertain and relax themselves through the participation of these shows while learning a lot about themselves and everything else.]【嗯，最後一句我基本上全改了，主要是句子太中國英語，詞彙量有限】
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總結：
總的來說還是可以的。我覺得LZ主要的問題在於詞彙量不夠，所以經常會重復一樣的稱述句形，實際上還有很多不同的說法來表達同樣的意思噢。
語法方面要注意時態的表示。the有點用的過多，很多在沒有一個特定的「物品」或「人物」的前提下不需要用the（比如說「teens」，如果硬要加the的話，那就是 the teen，指的是一個單獨的青少年）。拼寫的話，如果我沒記錯一共有兩處，可能是打字的手誤吧。
Cheers!
㈢ 英語(chirstamas)作文
[英語四級作文Dancing(跳舞)]
Dancing-談談跳舞
Dancing
Dancing is a popular pastime to many people all over the world. Way back to past centuries, and even today, tribal
people engage in dancing as a form of worship or as a part of a
ceremony in a celebration. On such occasions, dancing can be
very solemn. In modern times, dancing appeals to different
people for different reasons.
Young people often include dancing in parties or at other
social gatherings.
It seems to be an incentive for them to
gather. They look forward to dancing into the night ring
parties without feeling fatigue.
To the elderly, the steps in dancing are reced with a
slower tempo in the music. They gather in community centers
to learn folk dance and, at the same time, to know one another
in such informal interactions.
Personally, I doubt the effectiveness of dancing as a major
role in keeping one's body healthy and in good shape. Activi-ties such as jogging, swimming and playing games are more
effective for attaining good health. They can burn off calories
in our bodies and develop our muscles. To me, there are more meaningful and effective ways to keep fit.
㈣ 2011年12月英語四級作文
Where There Is a Will There Is a Way
1．堅強的意志是成功的重要保證。
2．意志堅定的人才能完成偉大的使命，
3．學生也是這樣，不刻苦學習，終究不會成為有用之才。
One of the most important things to succcss is a firm.reso1ution. A great man is al ways one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit. One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory.
As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will. For example, Dr. Sun Yatsen set the Cbinese people free from the rule of the Qing Dynasty through a long pcriod of hard struggle. Many of his attempts failed and many of bis followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and sticked to his cause. Finally, he made the revo lution of 1911 a success.
A student who has no resolution will never succeed in his studies. The same is true of men in all walks of life. We must have a firm resolution first, if we wish to succeed. We must always remember thc old saying that where there is a will there is a way
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㈦ 英語四級寫作要背作文模板嗎背作文還是模板
什麼都不用，關鍵是理解、會寫。
下面給你一些模板。
一、主題作文及圖畫作文的模板：
These days 現象 often hits the headlines of newspapers and has been brought into focus of the public. Just as the picture shown that… (如果是圖畫作文可以寫出具體的現象或問題，也可以一句話描述圖畫：As is vividly illustrated above, in the +地方 +動詞(be, come, run, walk, jump, sit, stand, lie, crouch, float等)+主題詞，非謂語動詞/非限制性定語從句，獨立主格/非限制性定語從句。) Indeed, it is widely accepted / acknowledged that it has gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life/ college students.
Those who are in favor of 現象 maintain that 描述觀點1. In their view, 闡釋觀點1. On the contrary, those who are against 現象 hold/ point out that 描述觀點2. Besides, 闡釋證實觀點2 . (第二段可以根據文章來分析原因，影響，優點或缺點等。)
It is high time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of… (虛擬語氣的句子) 然後再分條來說明措施。On the one hand, … on the other hand, … I believe we humans can overcome this difficulty and we will have a brighter future.
改革之後，圖畫作文考的比較多，無論是圖畫作文還是主題作文，上面的結構是可以通用的，考生可以重點記下圖畫作文與主題作文的句型。
二、圖表作文各段的通用模板：
As is seen from the graph/chart, we can draw a conclusion that the number of …….decreased. Of these, the number of …….decreased the most, from …. in 1985 to ….. in 2000(根據圖表寫年代). On the contrary, the number of …….increased.
There are numerous reasons accounting for the phenomenon and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. Above all (To begin with), …….. In addition (What is more), ………
In my personal sense, it is imperative for us to take steps to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the charts. First and foremost,…….Last but not least,………Owing to +主題, not only can we accumulate wealth, but also establish our career, fit into society and even attain social status.
對於圖表作文，考生也要了解並熟悉其結構和句型。我們在准備時一定要充分，不放棄任何一種題型。
㈧ 4級英語作文
205字，原創，太長的話請追問哦~
As William Allin once said, "Ecation is not the answer to the question. Ecation is the means to the answer to all questions." Curiosity is the mother of advancement, and ecation is crucial in our search for answers. Attending school opens many doors, both in terms of employment and in terms of more intellectual endeavors.
Schools change us with the unique sets of people they each contain. For example, as Henry Brooks Adams once said, "A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops." I've known many inspiring teachers, whose words and actions I will remember forever, and even pass on to my children. Another influence is the curious, energetic friends we make, who challenge us with friendly competition and make school life more engaging. These people become an indispensable part of our identity.
What is most important about ecation is not simply learning to read and memorize, but also to use the information for critical analysis, as well as to form relationships with others. Every day, I walk into school excited about the new things I will be able to explore! Through ecation, I have learned to think, and I know that I have become a more useful person to society.
大意：為什麼教育如此重要？因為它能幫我們找到解決問題的方式，不止帶來更好的工作，也幫我們打開世界。學校有很多很特別的老師，他們的所作所為我永生不忘，學校結識了很多好朋友，活潑且好學，激勵了我。學校並非只教我死記硬背，而也教了我如何思考。）
㈨ 誰可以給我篇有關[環境保護]的優秀英語四級作文！
Nowadays, the biggest problem in our world is the environment is broken. The environment around us gets worse and worse, and the environment pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. Many lakes and rivers are seriously polluted and much water is polluted by factories. Many trees are cut down, and the animals don』 have home to go. The earth is our home and it is our ty to take care of it for ourselves and our future generations. Good environment can make people feel happy and fit. And the bad environment will bring illness to people. To protect the environment means to improve our life. As a middle school student, we must do our bit towards protecting the environment. It is our ty to do that. But what can we do for our Mother Earth?
In my opinion, I think protecting the environment should from ourselves. We shouldn』t throw the rubbish everywhere. And we should also tell others not to do that. We should put the trash into their own houses—trash bins. Whenever and wherever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into trash bins. Never spit in public. And don』t draw on public walls. As we know, water is the limited resources, and it is very important for human beings, we can』t live without water. But some people don』t care about it, and many cities need water now. So we shouldn』t waste the water. How to save the water? I have some my own idea. First, we can use some water which we have used again. For example, we can use the water we wash rice to water the flowers. Second, we should turn off the tap when we leave. We should try to protect the water resource. To protect trees, we can go to plan as many trees as we can. We can use cloth bag instead of plastic bag while we are shopping.
And I think we should tell others to protect environment, too. We should stop the people who throw the trash on the ground, and tell them it』s wrong to do this. We can also write to the boss of factories which discharge the pollutant. We can call our friends to plant more flowers and trees together. We should let people realize the seriousness of the environment pollution.
「There is only one earth,」 I hope everyone will protect the environment. If everyone makes their contribution to protect the environment, our earth will be more and more beautiful!
我自己寫的用來比賽的，會不會有些長了？