英語四級寫作常見錯誤匯總
A. 英語寫作要注意的幾種情況:常見的10個句子錯誤
Incomplete Sentence - Sentence Fragment
句子不完整——殘缺句
One common mistake many students make is the use of incomplete sentences. Each sentence in English must contain at least a subject and a verb, and should be an independent clause. Examples of incomplete sentences without a subject or a verb might include an instruction or a prepositional phrase.
許多學生都會犯一個常見的錯誤,就是寫出來的句子不完整。英語中,每個句子都必須至少有一個主語,一個動詞,並單獨成句。沒有主語或動詞的殘缺句子可能就只有表示指令的句子或者介詞短語了。
For example:
例如:
Through the door.
穿過大門。
In the other room.
在另一個房間。
Over there.
在那裡。
These are phrases we may use in spoken English, but that should not be used in written English as they are incomplete.
在英語口語中,你可能會用到這些短語,但是因為它們畢竟不是完整的英語句子,所以在書面語言中,我們一般不會使用。
Sentence fragments caused by dependent clauses used without an independent clause are more common. Remember that subordinating conjunctions introce dependent clauses. In other words, if you use a subordinating clause beginning with a word such as 'because, though, if, etc.' there must be an independent clause to complete the thought. This mistake is often made on tests asking a question with 'Why'.
由於缺乏獨立分句的從屬子句導致的句子殘缺很常見。記住,從屬連詞引出了從屬子句。也就是說,如果你用一些詞語來引出從句,例如because,though,if等等,就必須要有一個獨立分句來使句子完整。我們在考試中,使用why來提出問題時,經常會犯這樣的錯誤。
For example, the sentences:
例如,下面這個句子:
Because Tom is the boss.
因為湯姆就是老闆。
Since he left work early without permission.
自從他不經允許就早退。
We might answer the question: "Why did he lose his job?" However, these are sentence fragments. The correct answer would be:
我們可能會問:「他為什麼丟掉工作?」但是,這些句子都是不完整的。正確用法應該是:
He lost his job because Tom is the boss.
因為湯姆就是老闆,所以他丟掉了工作。
He lost his job since he left work early without permission.
他因為不經允許就早退而丟掉了工作。
Other examples of incomplete sentences introced by subordinating clauses include:
其他關於從屬子句的殘缺句還包括下面內容:
Even though he needs help.
雖然他需要幫助
If they study enough.
如果他們好好學習
As they had invested in the company.
因為他們投資了這家公司
Run-on Sentences
句子不連貫
Run-on sentences are sentences that:
不連貫句子指的是:
1) are not connected by appropriate linking language such as conjunctions
缺乏合適的連接詞,例如連詞。
2) use too many clauses rather than using periods and linking language such as conjunctive adverbs
使用過多的從句,而非句號和連接語,例如連接副詞
The first type leaves out a word - usually a conjunction - that is required to connect a dependent and independent clause. For example:
第一種是漏掉了一個詞——通常是連接詞——用於連接非獨立子句和獨立子句。
The students did well on the test they didn't study very much.
學生們考得很好他們沒有下多少功夫。
Anna needs a new car she spent the weekend visiting car dealerships.
安娜想買輛新車她整個周末都在約見代理商。
The first sentence should use either a conjunction 'but', or 'yet' or a subordinating conjunction 'although, even though, or though' to connect the sentence. In the second sentence, the conjunction 'so' or the subordinating conjunction 'since, as, or because' would connect the two clauses.
第一句話要麼應該加上一個連詞but,要麼加上yet,或者一個從屬連詞although, even though或though來連接前後兩句。
The students did well, yet they didn't study very much.
學生們考得很好,但他們並沒有下多少功夫。
Anna spent the weekend visiting car dealerships since she needs a new car.
因為想買輛新車,安娜整個周末都在約見代理商。
Another common run on sentence occurs when using too many clauses. This often occurs using the word 'and'.
另一種句子不連貫發生在使用太多從句的時候。常常是由於and一詞導致。
We went to the store and bought some fruit, and we went to the mall to get some clothes, and we had lunch at McDonald's, and we visited some friends.
我們去商店買了一些水果,去購物商城買了一些衣服,在麥當勞吃的午飯,又見了一些朋友。
The continuous chain of clauses using 'and' should be avoided. In general, do not write sentences that contain more than three clauses to ensure that your sentences do not become run-on sentences.
我們應該避免使用and來連接一大串的從句。一般來說,從句不要超過三個,以確保句子的連貫性。
Duplicate Subjects
兩個主語
Sometimes students use a pronoun as a plicate subject.
有時候,學生們會將代詞作為第二個主語。
Remember that each clause takes only one sentence. If you have mentioned the subject of a sentence by name, there is no need to repeat with a pronoun.
記住,每個從句只需要一句話。如果之前你已經提到主語的名字,就不需要再用代詞重復了。
Example 1:
例一:
Tom lives in Los Angeles.
湯姆住在洛杉磯。
NOT
而不是
Tom, he lives in Lost Angeles.
湯姆,他住在舊金山。
Example 2:
例二:
The students come from Vietnam.
學生們來自越南。
NOT
而不是
The students they come from Vietnam.
學生們他們來自越南。
Incorrect Tense
時態錯誤
Tense usage is a common mistake in student writing. Make sure that the tense used corresponds to the situation. In other words, if you are speaking about something that happened in the past do not use include a tense that refers to the present. For example:
時態錯誤在學生寫作中很常見。你要確保時態與事情發生的情況一致。也就是說,如果你要表達的是發生在過去的事,就不要使用現在時態。例如:
They fly to visit their parents in Toronto last week.
上周他們坐飛機去看望父母。
Alex bought a new car and drives it to her home in Los Angeles.
亞歷克斯買了一輛新車,並把它開進了洛杉磯的家。
Incorrect Verb Form
動詞形式錯誤
Another common mistake is the use of an incorrect verb form when combining with another verb. Certain verbs in English take the infinitive and others take the gerund (ing form).
另一個常見的錯誤就是在與其他動詞連用時,動詞形式的錯誤。英語中的動詞既有不定式形式,又有動名詞形式。
It's important to learn these verb combinations. Also, when using the verb as a noun, use the gerund form of the verb.
學習這些動詞的連用很重要。當動詞作為名詞使用時,就要使用動名詞形式。
He hopes finding a new job. / Correct -> He hopes to find a new job.
他想找一個新工作。
Peter avoided to invest in the project. / Correct -> Peter avoided investing in the project.
皮特沒有在這個項目上投資。
Parallel Verb Form
動詞復數形式
A related issue is the use of parallel verb forms when using a list of verbs. If you are writing in the present continuous tense, use the 'ing' form in your list. If you are using the present perfect, use the past participle, etc.
在使用多個動詞時,有一個問題就是動詞復數形式的使用。如果你是在用現在進行時進行寫作,就應該使用動詞ing形式。如果你使用的是現在完成時,就應該使用過去分詞形式。
She enjoys watching TV, play tennis, and cook. / Correct -> She enjoys watching TV, playing tennis, and cooking.
她喜歡看電視,打網球和烹飪。
I've lived in Italy, working in Germany and study in New York. / Correct -> I've lived in Italy, worked in Germany, and studied in New York.
我住在義大利,在德國工作,在紐約讀書。
Use of Time Clauses
時間從句的使用
Time clauses are introced by the time words 'when', 'before', 'after' and so on. When speaking about the present or future use the present simple tense in time clauses. If using a past tense, we usually use the past simple in a time clause.
時間從句由時間詞語引導,例如when,before,after等等。當我們表達現在或將來的事時,可以使用一般現在時的時間從句。如果使用過去時態,通常會使用過去時的時間從句。
We'll visit you when we will come next week. / Correct -> We'll visit you when we come next week.
下周我們會來看你。
She cooked dinner after he was arriving. / Correct -> She cooked dinner after he arrived.
他到了之後,她才開始煮飯。
Subject - Verb Agreement
主謂一致
Another common mistake is to use incorrect subject - verb agreement. The most common of these mistakes is the missing 's' in the present simple tense. However, there are other types of mistakes. Always look for these mistakes in the helping verb.
另一個常見的錯誤就是主謂不一致。最常見的就是一般現在時中漏掉了-s。但是,還有其他類型的錯誤。這些錯誤常發生在助動詞的使用上。
Tom play guitar in a band. / Correct -> Tom plays guitar in a band.
湯姆在樂隊里是彈吉他的。
They was sleeping when she telephoned. / Correct -> They were sleeping when she telephoned.
他打電話過來時,他們都睡著了。
Pronoun Agreement
代詞一致
Pronoun agreement mistakes take place when using a pronoun to replace a proper noun. Often this mistake is a mistake of use of a singular form rather than a plural or vice versa. However, pronoun agreement mistakes can occur in object or possessive pronouns, as well as in subject pronouns.
代詞不一致發生在用代詞來替代專有名詞的情況下。通常是使用了單復數形式的錯誤使用。但是,代詞不一致也會發生在賓語或物主代詞,和主格代名詞上。
Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job. / Correct -> Tom works at a company in Hamburg. He loves his job.
湯姆在漢堡一家公司工作。他熱愛這份工作。
Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. He thought they were very difficult.Correct -> Andrea and Peter studied Russian at school. They thought it was very difficult.
(正確)安德里亞和皮特在學校里學習了俄語。他們覺得俄語很難。
Missing Commas After Linking Language
連接語言後漏掉了逗號
When using an introctory phrase as linking language such as a conjunctive adverb or sequencing word, use a comma after the phrase to continue the sentence.
當我們使用介紹性短語,例如連接副詞或表示順序的詞語,通常會在短語後面打上逗號來連接下文。
我最後一次是這樣過的,不要笑啊
級
我英語基礎也不好,我大學英語四級一共考了四次,說出來挺丟人的,最後那次考了531,對於像我這種英語基礎不好的人來說已經算是比較高的分數了。我講一下我當時是如何復習的吧。
我當時復慣用了兩個月的時間。
第一個月復習計劃
一、先是背單詞,如果基礎不好,對英語的理解力差,單詞量就很重要。我當時用的書是《淘金式分頻詞彙4級分冊》,這本書的好處是,頻率出現最高的單詞會排在最前面,按照四級考試中出現的頻率高低依次往後排,這樣你就能從最重要的單詞背起。我每天背幾個LESSON,第二天再把前一天背的復習一遍,再背新的LESSON,第三天把前兩天的復習一遍,然後再背第三天要背的,單詞能盡快背完最好,每天背幾個LESSON的單詞根據你自己的情況安排。總體來講,一個月之內最好背完。(平均每天花2個小時)
註:背單詞的時候不要純背單詞,最好能好好看看例句,知道單詞的具體用法,語境等等,這對做聽力、閱讀都是有好處的。
二、每天都堅持聽聽力一個半到兩個小時,我當時還另外買了一本四級的輔導書,名字記不清了,好象叫《四級英語顛峰訓練》(大概的名字)裡面針對四級考試分項訓練,差不多夠你用一個月的時間了,第二個月,就可以做歷年真題了。(平均每天一個半到兩個小時)
註:如果基礎不好,開始聽得時候會有些關鍵地方總也聽不明白,不要先急於看答案和註解,多聽幾遍。看答案的時候把自己聽不明白和錯誤的地方仔細看看,裡面有一些你不太清楚地固定短語,單詞等等,把它們記下來,一般來說,四級英語的聽力都在一定的范圍內,你聽精了,自然就沒問題了。
三、閱讀。我閱讀正確率開始的時候很低,我覺得我理解的原文的意思和真正的原文的意思好像有差距。當時我看到網上推薦了一本書,叫《新編大學英語四級閱讀180篇》,是上海交通大學 潘曉燕主編,我當時的計劃是每天做6篇,180篇做完剛好30天,我做這本閱讀也是嚴格算時間做的,根據四級考試平均每篇閱讀所需時間。這本書也是第一個月要做完的,第二個月是要做真題用的。
註:雖然量變產生質變,但是也不能一味悶頭去做,做閱讀也有技巧的,首先先看下面的問題,帶著問題有目標的看閱讀,正確率會比較高,如果遇到時間不太夠的情況,你可以看每段開頭第一句,這樣也能幫你提高蒙答案的正確率。在這方面你可以上網搜一些技巧學習學習。
四、作文。對於作文我沒有太特意的准備,首先在背單詞的時候的很多例句或著好的句子我順便都背了,上文提到的《顛峰訓練》中對各個部分的訓練都有,對於作文的格式,一些好的範文的句子我都背了,有一些得分點你可以把握,比如說:連接詞用的好了會很得分,象then,in addition,also,等等,還比如一些表示邏輯關系的詞,最常見的first,second,third,還比如說我認為I think,你換一種說法,說as far as I am concerned,閱卷老師就會對你不自覺地產生好感,你的分自然就不會低拉。
接著第二個月
開始做真題,我當時把歷年的真題都做了3遍以上,最好卡著時間做,這是為了適應考試,如果你沒有一個整段的時間,你每部分卡時間做也可以。
我這兩個月所有做過的題都是卡著時間做的,看完了你也許覺得工作量滿大的,很費時間,我就是這樣復習的。
當時看了一篇文章很受鼓舞,大概意思是,一個人四級剛剛60分,六級的時候每天早上一起床就學英語,晚上睡覺前躺在床上聽英語,做夢都是英語,學英語學到想吐,最後她考了接近80分吧(百分制的時候)。
我最後那次復習四級的時候也有種學到想吐的感覺,我學累了想看點輕松的東西都看21世紀的娛樂版,全英文的,想聽歌休息一下的時候也聽英文歌,我以前基本很少聽英文歌,但是希望自己時時刻刻在這樣一種氛圍中。我做夢也會夢見英語。早上一起來就抱著書去學習,晚上最後幾個從自習室回來,躺在床上還在聽VOA,雖然聽不大明白。
現在都畢業好幾年了,頭一次寫自己考四級的經歷,希望對你有所幫助
追問:
語法知識要全部通熟嗎?我語法特不行
回答:
語法其實還好 主要就是詞彙量
C. 英語四級語法常見五大錯誤
英語四級語法常見五大錯誤:
一、句子結構錯誤
1. 主從句疊置
1) There are more and more students who like to use the computer. / More and more students like to use the computer.
2) There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted and resolved.
2. 簡單句疊置
I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
3. 從句疊置
It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computers play an important role in many fields of our life.
4. 句子成分缺失
If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.
5. 語序錯誤
1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer?
1) I often wonder where they have got their money.
二、動詞形式錯誤
1.時態錯誤
Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future.
2.語態形式錯誤
1) I have been excited several days at the news that you will come here.
2) Most of the students are satisfied with the service in the dining hall.
3.單復數形式錯誤
1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.
2) Some people are afraid that computers may control men in the future.
4.非謂語動詞形式錯誤
1) Let me say “hello” to you on behalf of everyone.
2) Doing exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.
3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.
三、代詞錯誤
1) We can use computers in doing everything we like.
2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.
四、冠詞錯誤
1) A/The horse is a useful animal.
2) The exam will be held in December, 2004.
五、詞性錯誤
1) I wish you can consider my suggestions.
2) If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to enre sufferings and setbacks.
用詞錯誤
1) Students must know how to operate a computer. / Students must know how to work on a computer.
2) People can be exposed to many new things on the Internet. / People can learn many new things on the Internet.
3) The purpose of this letter is to express some opinions on the service in the dining hall. / The purpose of this letter is to make some complaints about the service in the dining hall.
表達習慣錯誤
1) What generated so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?
2) Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 computer. / Now you can buy a P4 computer for 6000 yuan.
3) In a room often live 6-8 students.
4) I think there are three reasons for this great change.
5) The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.
6) The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.
標點符號及大小寫錯誤
1) However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.
2) The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.
3) At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.
4) My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.
5) The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.
英語四級語法常見五大錯誤小編就說到這里了,更多關於大學英語四級備考技巧,備考干貨,新聞資訊,成績查詢,英語四級准考證列印入口,准考證列印時間等內容,小編會持續更新。祝願各位考生都能取得滿意的成績。
D. 英語四級作文 主題關於英語作文中單詞拼寫錯誤問題 原因為何 如何解決
都考試啦!還拼寫?哪買的答案啊!
自己考吧
哥們!怎麼樣?考的還行吧!我的答案TMD就中了一篇作文!操
哥們!看在咱倆同病相連的份上,把分給我吧...
祝你四級必過了啊
E. 英語四級寫作常見問題答疑(一)
1、常常想不起想用的一個詞的英語說法,該如何解決?
這是考試時任何一個人都會碰到的問題,即使他的詞彙量很大。其實就算一個人的詞彙量再大,大到掌握所有英文單詞,也還是會碰到一些無法用已有單詞表達的情況。因為世界在變化,每時每刻總會有新的事物出現。碰到不會表達的思想可以用以下幾招:第一,模糊化即用上義詞表達。如不會說“手提電腦”,可以用它的上義詞“machine”, “gadget”, “invention”, “instrument” 等。第二,可以解釋說明。如我們可以把手提電腦寫作“the kind of computer that you can carry wherever you go and that you can put on your lap”。第三,可以把一些解釋不清的東西略去不寫。寫作是一個主動的創造過程,可以並且應該發揮自己的主觀能動性。寫那些自己會寫的,避開那些自己不會寫的。這才是寫作的樂趣所在。否再和前面的單項選擇題有什麼區別。
2、文章中長句越多越好,復合句越多越好,這樣的想法對嗎?
考試作文和平時寫作不完全相同。平時寫作不同作者有自己不同的風格——有些作者長於簡約;有些作者喜歡繁復。但考試作文是檢驗一個考生寫作水平的工具,命題人的目標之一就是要通過一篇文章考察考生是否掌握了復雜句。因此,在所有寫作考試中都有一條不成文的規定:沒有復雜句不能得高分。但是在寫復雜句的同時,我們還要注意不能寫太多這樣的句子。全是復雜句,文章讀起來會很累很煩很不自然。因此考試作文的句子要長短結合。一些基礎不好的同學最好少些甚至不寫復雜句,因為如果復雜句寫錯了會影響得分,而簡單句只要不錯分數反而不會低到哪裡去。
英語四級寫作常見問題答疑(一)的內容小編就說到這里了,更多關於大學英語四級備考技巧,備考干貨,新聞資訊,成績查詢,英語四級准考證列印入口,准考證列印時間等內容,小編會持續更新。祝願各位考生都能取得滿意的成績。
F. 英語四級寫作常見問題答疑(二)
1、腦子里想好中文的意思,再把它翻譯成英文,這樣的思路對嗎?
很多同學都是想好中文再翻譯成英文。嚴格說來,即使對學習英語多年的人來說,在寫作時想做到完全用英文思考都是極難達到的一種近乎神話的理想境界。關鍵是中文思考的程度——英文修養極高的人在寫作時可能已經很少意識到自己是在用那種語言、很難區分自己在什麼時候正在使用什麼語言,他已經到了“天人合一”的境界;英文很好的人可能只是在整體構思時用漢語,到具體寫作段落或句子時用英語;英文一般的人會將每句的意思大致用漢語想好,但寫作時還是要用英文的習慣句型和固定搭配來表達;初學英語基礎又很不扎實的人在不僅每句用漢語想好,還基本每字嚴格對譯,這就是中式英文的產生原因了。要想少些一點中式英文,就要多積累習慣句型和固定搭配,在“翻譯”時盡可能多用這些模式化的句型,少一些逐字對譯。
2、不知從何處著手復習寫作,提起筆來不知道怎麼寫,怎麼辦?
作文是現存考試中為數不多的考查英語主觀應用能力的考試類型,他在大多數權威的語言考試中都有出現。從理論上講,就是考查第二語言或外語學習者的“輸出”能力。另外,我們應該避免誤入用“大詞用長句”才算寫作的誤區,因為,好的文章或大作家往往是用“小詞”表達復雜思想。簡單無誤是第一原則。
在考試中,考生對作文的思維應該是:1、審題;2、思考簡單的分支觀點;考慮可以採用的成熟的句型或“萬能句”。其中,前兩步比較關鍵。一、對於審題,應該看到,近年四級或六級題目大多是給出提綱,那麼可以直接把提綱變為中心句,這些中心句就是每段的開頭句。後面接入標志邏輯的詞彙,如first...;second...;third...;等分支觀點。也就是說,審題就是考慮文章的合理結構是什麼,中心句是什麼。二、置於思考分支觀點,請一定記住,外語考試的作文,考查的目標不是考生的思維水平或邏輯分析能力,而是考核語言表達能力。所以建議採取的措施是,簡化自己的思維和分析。也就是,如何降低自己的思維水平,來迎合自己有限的語言狀況。比如:這個東西不貴,it is inexpensive,當然也可以說:it is cheap,或者說,it does not cost me much money。等這些相關但簡單的表達也是合理的。最後,作文是應用類考試。所以光看不寫是不行的。培根說過,“writing makes an exact man.”只有多寫才能活化思想,固定句型和找到適合自己的“萬能句”。
英語四級寫作常見問題答疑(二)的內容小編就說到這里了,更多關於大學英語四級備考技巧,備考干貨,新聞資訊,成績查詢,英語四級准考證列印入口,准考證列印時間等內容,小編會持續更新。祝願各位考生都能取得滿意的成績。
G. 常見英語寫作錯誤
1.結構不平行例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯接起來的時候,應當使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。
2.不知所雲例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
3.段落過長,不分段主語與動詞一致問題She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主語和動詞在數方面不一致。
4.句子別扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過長或不清。換言之,句子顯得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用縮寫在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式(can't,don't,it's,we'll,they've等等),而應當使用單詞的完整形式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
6.關聯詞語重復Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在該句的主要主語和主要動詞前使用連詞。
7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.句子沒有主要主語或主要動詞,因為其實它應是一個從句。這是一個非常常見的錯誤,修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。
8.不要使用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get太不正式,意思也過於含糊,不適合用在正式的場合。應將get改為一個更加具體的單詞,如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。
9.書寫難以辨認信息不正確I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.傳的信息不正確,或者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確(如果確實是正確的,應當解釋為什麼這樣,因為讀者不認為是正確的)。上述例句中,all的意思是百分之百;我們不能絕對地說每一件新東西都是從美國誕生的。為保險起見,應當使用many或most。非英語單詞Computers are very helpful and advantageable.盡管看起來象個單詞,其實不是,至少不是個英文單詞。使用這個單詞的另一種形式。
10.介詞多餘I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me ring yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示這種意思時此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見於downtown,home,there,here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞,因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
11.跑題或不相關There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.這個意思與文章的主題無關。
12.陳詞濫調It is okay for children to fail sometimes.所表達的意思很普通大多數人都已經知道到了,因而就沒有必要再說出來。
13.標點問題I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.這是一個非常普遍的問題!許多學生在句子中使用了太多的句號,尤其是當他們用手寫的時候。
14.重復冗餘Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一種意思的表述不止一次,或者某個詞語不必要。
15.單數/復數Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.單詞需要從單數變為復數,或者由復數變成單數。單數可數名詞單數可數名詞不能單獨使用,應該將其變為復數形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary's, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
16.拼寫錯誤主語、動詞或賓語有問題I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本結構有問題缺少主語、動詞或賓語,或者這些成分重復。
17.語氣與文章不符I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.語氣與文章其他部分不相符可能是過於正式或者太不正式。
18.代詞指代不明If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。
19.過於籠統We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.句子或它所表達的意思過於籠統,不能提供多少信息。
20.動詞時態錯誤Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.動詞時態不正確檢查一下是應該用現在時、過去時、將來時還是完成時等等。
21.選詞不恰當I was late getting home because I lost my way.在這種情況下不應該使用該詞可選擇更好的詞語或者所使用的詞語與文章的總體語氣不符。
22.單詞形式不當I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所使用的單詞的形式不正確檢查一下應該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。
23.用詞錯誤Even I don't speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds ring vacation.用詞錯誤或在此種情況下該詞不是最佳用詞。
H. 請問英語四級中,作文方面文體格式錯誤要扣幾分,就是沒有按要求以書
主要看內容。
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評分標准
13-15分
切題。表達思想清楚,文字通順、連貫,內基本上無語容言錯誤,僅有個別小錯。
10-12分
切題。表達思想清楚,文字較連貫,但有少量語言錯誤。
7-9分
基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚,文字勉強連貫;語言錯誤相當多,其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。
4-6分
基本切題。表達思想不清楚,連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。
1-3分
條理不清,思路紊亂,語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤,且多數為嚴重錯誤。
0分
未作答,或只有幾個孤立的詞,或作文與主題毫不相關。