四級英語範文話題富有卻不開心

㈠ 求一篇範文，寫給學長的，用英語，表達自己通過四級的迫切心情，介紹學習中的困難，希望給予幫助

你有什麼困難？你不說怎麼幫你寫啊？

還有，什麼學長非要用鳥語跟他寫啊？

建議樓主自己對著糍粑寫下來，大家都是這么過來的。有困難的話，請把情況說清楚，再至少寫篇中文的，這樣別人才能幫你啊

PS：要是寫的太好的話，那豈不是告訴對方「我是找人代寫的」么？

㈡ 英語四級作文寫的有點偏題，但是擦邊，用最簡單單詞語句寫的還算流暢的。錯誤不會太多。大概能得多少分

不清楚你實際答題情況不能判斷英語作文是否偏題、「擦邊」程度，特整理英語四級考試作文部分的評分原則，可以根據自己的實際情況進行評估。
1.英語四級作文題採用總體評分方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分，而不是按語言點的錯誤數目扣分。
2.從內容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判。內容和語言是一個統一體。作文應表達題目所規定的內容，而內容要通過語言來表達。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而適切的表達思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。
3.寫作的標准
閱卷標准分為5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。
2分(14)——條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數為嚴重錯誤。
5分(35)——基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴重錯誤。
8分(56)——基本切題，有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫，語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。
11分(78)——切題，表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。
14分(99）——切題，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫較好，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。
另外，字數不足會酌情扣分：
110——119詞：扣1分；100——109詞：扣2分；90——99詞：扣3分；80——89詞：扣4分；70——79詞：扣5分；60——69詞：扣6分；50——59詞：扣7分；50字以下， 扣9分。
只寫一段者：0-4分，只寫兩段者：0-9分（指規定三段的作文）。
白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的簡單單詞而無法表達思想的，判為0分。

㈢ 大學英語四級作文範文：過度依靠網路好還是不好

生活中有無數件瑣碎的小事,正是這些小事串起我們豐富多彩的生活.隨著時間的流逝,許多小事已經漸漸消失在記憶的星空中.然而,這件事雖然過去很久了,可是現在想起來,依舊是歷歷在目.
記得那是一個陽光明媚的清晨,我和媽媽出去騎車兜風.
正當我春風得意哼著小曲一路暢通的時候,「咔嚓」一聲——自行車「罷工」了.我下車一看,原來是車鏈子掉了.「哎呀,這可怎麼辦才好啊!」我和媽媽試圖把鏈子安上去,可它就是不聽使喚,無論我們怎樣努力,還是沒有將它「降服」.後來,我徹底地對這輛「破」自行車失去了耐心,又急又氣,真恨不得把它揍扁,然後再踹上幾腳以發泄我心中的煩躁.
「怎麼了?小姑娘,車壞了?」我抬頭一看,只見路邊一位衣衫襤褸的老頭和我們搭訕.我心想：和老頭穿的衣服真破,他會不會跟我要錢?「修車啊?我以前干過,肯定能修好!」我和媽媽將信將疑地把自行車交給了老爺爺.他把自行車推到路旁,修整好掉下來的鐵鏈,再一節一節掛上去.但鐵鏈像個頑皮的孩子,掛了這頭,又掉了那頭.十分鍾過去了車一樣沒有修好.
此時,老爺爺一邊擦著汗,一邊嘟囔,「咦?奇怪了,今天是咋了?鐵鏈咋不聽使喚了?這種新式自行車就是不好使.」說著,老爺爺一用力,卻不小心把手夾在齒輪和鐵鏈中間.這時,殷紅的鮮血不斷地從他的手指上滲出來.我嚇得不知所措地大叫：「老爺爺,您的手!」他不慌不忙地把手指放在嘴裡吮去了鮮血,用大拇指摁著傷口,說：「不怕,孩子,咱農村人,這種事多了,不算啥!」我忐忑不安地看著老爺爺說：「算了,別修了,我把他推到修車攤上去好了!」「沒事!」老爺爺頭也不抬,仍舊與自行車努力「奮戰」.終於,自行車修好了!老爺爺長吁了一口氣,想站起來,卻一個踉蹌坐在地上.我趕忙過去扶他,他擺擺手,說：「沒事!」.不知怎麼的,我的淚水不停地在眼眶裡打轉.是因為修好了自行車而開心?是因為老爺爺助人為樂的精神讓我動容?還是因為剛才醜陋的想法讓我羞愧?我心裡頓時五味混雜……
至今,我還是忘不了哪佝僂的身影和那雙粗糙的滲著鮮血的雙手!

㈣ 英語四級話題作文範文：失敗是件壞事嗎

Is Failure a Bad Thing?
It is quite usual that one meets failures, for one's life can never be plain sailing. However, diffhrent people hold diffhrent attitudes towards failure. Some people think it a heavy blow to fail in achieving something and they can not enre failure. When they meet failure, they will be seriously dejected and can never pluck up their courage to try again. However, others think it natural to meet failures in one's career. Therefore, they are psychologically prepared. When they meet failures, they will not be frustrated. Instead, they will continue to meet new challenges. As to me, I'm in favor of the latter view. Failure is really a terrible thing but it is also the mother of success. If one draws lessons from failures, in most cases he will get success in the future. Furthermore, one's life can never be smooth sailing; it must be full of difficuhies and setbacks. If one is daunted by difficuhies and frustrations

㈤ 這12月份的英語四級作文題目最有可能考什麼類型的，最有可能是什麼話題。

英語四級考試最有可能考的作文話題是：現象、建議、意義和原因、次之為危害和觀點對比。無論考何種形式作文。
最簡易的處理方式是：有漢語提綱則按照漢語提綱寫相應的功能段落，若無漢語提綱則按照話題和內容要求直接寫相應的功能表達或自己列出基本提綱再寫相應功能表達，圖表和圖畫、書信亦可如此。
圖畫、話語評論和圖表作文可按照相同模式來處理：首段引出話語，圖畫和圖表，並對其內容描述評論；二段寫對應現象、意義或危害，尾段寫看法和建議並展望，背誦功能表達組合完成作文。
話題1：老年人孤獨生活
Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at "herself" in the mirror and saying to herself, "I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school."
首句功能為：引出圖畫;之後為圖畫內容描述，主要是四要素：人、物、動作、文字和環境，寫出四要素中的兩三點即可。
Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children』s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is alt children』s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.
二段首句：圖畫聯系主題；之後if句為圖畫簡單評論；in contemporary society一句為圖畫所暗含的社會現象；meanwhile一句為相關人+具體感受；however之後為強調句式，論述意義；尾句是萬能總結。
As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should ecate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances tolove, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words)
尾段首句：觀點；二句建議；尾句展望未來。

㈥ 英語作文 為什麼人們越富有越不快樂

在北京，我的一些很富有的朋友希望跟我一起去紐約，看看那裡的「成功人士」如何生活。尚未成行，我先給他們講起美國富商格蘭的故事。
格蘭曾請我去他家度周末，那是位於紐約郊區的一座從洛克·菲勒後人手中買下的庄園，有山川、湖泊、網球場，養著馬、百年老龜和大塊頭的火雞，一派寧靜素樸的田園牧歌。他為客人准備的獨棟別墅溫馨而舒適，古老的木頭房子，屋外有大片綠地和游泳池，空氣里彌漫著青草香。
他們追求自然，注重環保，不穿PRADA，也不戴勞力士。興致好的時候，他們會買幾頭牛，從阿根廷運過來，讓它們在庄園里閑散地走一走，然後打電話呼朋引伴說，「我們家的牛到了！」大家都來欣賞這道「移動的風景」。
可惜我所接觸到的大部分新富起來的中國人都還停留在對奢侈品頂禮膜拜的階段，豪宅豪車，一擲萬金。財富為他們帶來了體面，同時也給他們套上了枷鎖。
我有一位老大哥是很有錢的商人，長期焦慮失眠，看見床就恐懼，後來只好去印度一家瑜伽學院學睡覺。為他送行時我還開玩笑說，如果你開悟了，決定留在那裡不回來，別忘了把你的紅木傢具分我幾件。英文中用「嬰兒般的睡眠」形容一個人睡得香，折騰了半生事業，反而還不如嬰兒時期睡得好，這是人生的悖論。
年輕姑娘們也早早地給自己套上了枷鎖，目標是嫁給有錢人。譬如港台地區那些「女藝術家」，不嫁入豪門便沒法向公眾交代，更沒法向自己交代。實在進不了豪門，就嫁給外國人。
對外國人的評價要納入另一套體系——城市戶口還是農村戶口，處級幹部還是科級幹部，住的是別墅還是公寓，做的是上市公司還是小本買賣——好像都不那麼重要，因此不失為一條很體面的退路。
我見過這個世界上最有錢的人，他們用錢買不到快樂。飛機、遊艇、豪車、別墅、雪茄……不過如此。有一個經濟學術語叫做「邊際效應」，通俗地解釋就是吃第一塊紅燒肉感覺特別香，到第二塊、第三塊時「還行」，吃到第五塊就膩了。

㈦ 盡管她很富裕,但她的生活並不開心翻譯為英語

你好，

盡管她很富裕,但她的生活並不開心

英文翻譯如下：

Although she is very rich, her life is not happy

重點詞彙：

• 盡管despite;although;feel free to;not hesitate to

• 富裕prosperous;affluence;well-off;well-to-do;a heavy purse

• 她的her;hers

• 並不not;no;not at all;by no means;in no sense

• 開心feel happy;rejoice;joyful;be delighted

㈧ 歷年大學英語四級作文真題及範文匯總

英語四級作文的備考，就是多看多記憶往年的真題以及範文，這樣能夠更好的把握作文的要求，在考試的時候才能夠寫出不錯的文章。今天我們為大家整理了歷年大學英語四級作文真題及範文匯總，了解一下吧。

2009年6月四級真題作文範文

【試題】

(1)現在越來越多的博物館向公眾開放

(2)有人認為會帶來很多問題。

(3)我認為…

【範文】

There are an increasing number of museums which are open to the public for free in our daily life nowadays. However, no consensus is reached among the public on the influence it brings about on the museums and the visitors involved.

Some people hold the opinion that free admission to museums will contribute to numerous problems ranging from the spoiling of the environment to the damage to the facilities of the museums.

It is known that some visitors will throw away the garbage here and there, which will do great damage to the surroundings of the museums. Worse, it will take a lot of time and effort for the museums to fix the facilities destroyed by the little kids who come to the museum without company of their parents. However, there are different opinions on whether visitors should enjoy free admission or not. Some people maintain that visitors can acquire new knowledge and enrich their lives by visiting various museums.

As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the above phenomenon. Therefore we are expected to take measures to ecate the public to observe the rules and regulations when visiting the museums. Thus, more and more indivials will enjoy a favorable environment.

2010年12月四級真題作文範文

【試題】

Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1. 目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切

2. 為了讓孩子獨立， 父母應該……

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?

【範文】

Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work, marriage. Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy children''s independence thoroughly.

For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent. The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood. Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.

The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator. And only with parents'' trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.

2011年6月大學英語四級寫作範文

My views on Online Shopping

1. 現在網購已經成為一種時尚

2. 網上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題

3. 我的建議

At present, on-line shopping has gain popularity in the society. Almost every young man has practiced buying stuffs via the Internet; more importantly, some are so addicted to on-line consumption that they even purchase private cars at virtual 4S stores.

On one hand, daily procts sold on line are usually much cheaper than those displayed in the shelves. Also, it is convenient for consumers, especially commuters, to obtain what they need in this way. On the other hand, buyers cannot check their intended on-line procts. Thus, what they shall receive are probably not in accordance with those introced in the webpage.

In my opinion, on-line shopping creates both merchants and consumers an efficient and economical way of selling or buying commodities, so it should be encouraged. And related agencies need to improve the supervision, ensuring that the consumer benefits will not be damaged.

㈨ 英語四級翻譯真題及範文答案(2017-12)

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