如何用英语评价自己的作文怎么写
自己的姓名 年龄 职业 兴趣爱好等
❷ 关于写自己的英文作文怎么写
先做简短的自我介绍名字，年龄，班级等。在着重写自己的性格特征最好跟上一些实例，写自己的爱好等，最后结尾写这就是我，一个真实的我。
❸ 写介绍自己的英语作文怎么写
以下是英语作文写作范文，望采纳！
参考网络文库：http://wenku..com/view/39926b9e240c844768eaee40.html
http://wenku..com/view/d088d924e2bd960590c6776b.html
摘要：
Talking about myself
My name is Liu Fang. I’m a Chinese girl. I live in Yanji, a city in Jilin Province(吉林省). I’m eleven years old and my birthday is in June. I’m in No.1 Primary School（第一小学）. I can speak a little English. English is my favorite subject. It’s very interesting. But I don’t like math. It’s too difficult.I like playing basketball （like doing something喜欢做某事） with friends after school. I have a happy family. My mother is a nurse （护士）and my father is a policeman（警察）. I love them very much.
自我介绍
我的名字叫刘芳，是一个中国女孩。我住在延吉，吉林省的一个小城市。我今年十一岁，出生于六月。我在第一小学上学。我能说一点英语，英语很有趣，是我最喜欢的科目。但是我不喜欢数学，它太难了。我喜欢在放学后和朋友打篮球。我有一个快乐的家。我妈妈是护士，我爸爸是警察。我十分爱他们
❹ 有关介绍自己的英语作文怎么写
Hello ,everybody.My name's ***,I'm from ***.It's really a fantacy place,people there are very friendly and helpful.There're also some places of interests in my hometown,I love it and hope that you can visite it someday.I was graated from ** School/University,it's also a nice school.There're 3 people in my family,you know,my parents and I.We love each other and live a happy life.I usually play ballgames in my spare time,and I think I'm good at basketball.My dream is to play a basketball game with my idol--Kobe one day. :) So,you see,I'm really an easygoing guy(如果是女的就说gal).That's all,thank you.
❺ 《介绍自己》英语作文怎么写
Hello! My name is Chen Danqing. My English name is Joy. I'm 14 years old. I'm a happy girl. I have a happy family. My father and my mother are both office workers. They're busy. But at weekends, they always cook nice food for me. I'm happy in the family. I love my parents and they love me very much.
I'm a student at Dongzhou Middle School. It is very big and beautiful. There are many classroom buildings and office buildings. Besides the buildings, there is a big playground. After school, there are lots of boys playing basketball on it. I think they are happy. There are a lot of flowers and trees in my school. They are beautiful. I like my school. In my school, I have many friends. All my friends are polite and helpful. My friends are all nice to me. They can make me happy. So I like playing with them.
My hobbies are listening to music and reading. I like pop music very much. I dislike sports because I'm not strong. It's hard for me.
I have a happy family, a beautiful school and many nice friends. I enjoy every day.
❻ 谈如何写好英语作文评语
运用英语写作的能力，作为四项基本语言技能之一，其重要性是为英语教学界所公认的。然而，在当前的英语教学实践中，存在这样一种现状：教师重视英语写作训练，但却忽视对学生作文的反馈，未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色。翻开学生的作业本，看到的多是简单的对、错符号或分数或等级，几乎没有评语，至多是千篇一律的Good / Not bad / All right / Ok或Perfect。以致许多学生对教师的这些简单评语感到莫名其妙，无法正确认识自己的写作水平。以下是本人结合自己的教学实践和亲身体会，就如何写好英语作文评语，及时向学生反馈指导性的意见，浅谈一下自己的几点看法。 一、评语中的语法修改不仅要让学生知其然，更要知其所以然。 中学生在学习英语的过程中，最大的难题就是动词及其用法。由于汉语中动词没有时态变化，英汉的这一差别往往会干扰学生正确使用英语时态。如在表达“我差点忘了。”此意思时，学生在作文中写成“I almost forget.”。其实，此例句独立表意，不受上下文的限制。在评语中，教师应引导学生进行这样的逻辑思维：The action "forget" just now happened, so we should use the Past Tense。Its use is something like the verbs--know / think / recognize…. Do you still remember the sentence--- “Sorry, I didn't recognize you." 学生写记叙文时常混用时态。如，When my cousin was a child, he likes sports and reading. He played volleyball, basketball and so on. He is reading many books about scientists such as Einstein, Madam Curie, Edision etc. And he wants to be a scientist after he graates the university. 这段文字虽时态混乱，但内容不错，简单地否定或肯定都是不对的，轻则使学生茫然失措，重则挫伤他们的学习兴趣和积极性，比较好的方法是先表扬做得对的地方后纠正错误的地方。我们可以批上：How lovely your cousin is. So are you. In your composition, you meant well, but try to make the tense correct. If you take your story as a past event, use the Past Tense all the way; if you make your story seem to take place now, use the Present Tense. You cant't use tenses at randam! 又如我们教师在批改上面的例文时，如果仅仅在 graate后添上 from，其结果是接受能力稍差的学生会不知道它为什么这样算正确。但我们教师若再画龙点睛地在旁边批上： “graate”是不及物动词，其后与from搭配才能接宾语。Remember! 这样，学生就会一目了然。 二、评语要从语篇层次上指导学生如何谋篇布局。 在作文批改中，只是订正学生所犯的语法错误是不够的。在学生习作中常常会出现一些句子，本身并没有错，却是一些涉及到语义整体中有关逻辑纽带、语法纽带和词汇纽带的问题，即是语篇质量方面的失误。对于这些失误，不能简单地以非对即错来论处，无法用语法去解释，而是要靠形成语篇时所应遵循的原则去处理，即要分析语篇的有效性、表达的得体性，并讨论遣词造句是否合乎所用语言的习惯性。例如，在笔者所任教的高三毕业生的习作中有这样的一个句子：“Teachers' Day is coming. I'm going to see my middle-school English teacher next week. 从句子平面看，既无语法错误，亦无书写错误。但从深层上分析，不难看出句子受到严重的母语干扰，且选词不当，造成意义模糊，影响了交流的有效性。批改时，笔者不仅在 English teacher 下划一条横线以示错误，并在此句旁边写道： Enjoy yourself with your teacher on the coming Teachers' Day. But I wonder who you are going to visit next week, a teacher from England or a teacher who teaches you English. 后来该学生修改后交上来：“I'm going to visit my teacher who taught me English in the middle school. 又如在学生写作中发现一个精彩的句子，我们教师应及时给予表扬，可批上：oh, what a nice sentence! / It's very clever of you to end(begin) your work with this beautiful sentence. …… 三、作文评语要以情导知，注意师生间的情感沟通。 前苏联著名教育家霍姆林斯基认为：“情感如同肥沃的土壤，知识的种子就播种在这片土壤上。”教学过程一旦触及学生的情感和意志领域，触及学生的精神需要，这种教学就能发挥高度有效的作用。 长期以来，有的学校一味地抓应试教育，以分数论英雄。于是很多教师只注重对作文本身进行评价，评语中批评多于表扬，纠错多于激励，结果容易使学生在写作时产生急躁、焦急、恐惧、恼怒等负情感体验，从而对培养学生写作能力产生干扰作用。笔者认为，现在的中学生大多数为独生子女，过多的要求甚至批评难以凑效。“愉快教育”才能适应现代化教育发展的需要。我们教师可在评语中给以学生恰如其分的评价，并表达对他们的希望。只要这些希望是真诚的、适时的和有内容的，学生就会从中理解老师对他们的信任、关心和爱心，从而转化为学习的动力。 学期伊始，给差生的评语中要批评但更要多几分鼓励。例如： John, don't you think you were a little lazy in the last term? Now, a new term begins and I hope you can work harder just from the beginning. Cheer up! You know, a good beginning makes a good ending. To tell you a secret, I like your handwriting very much. 给中等生的评语中最好要多一些督促，因为这一类学生往往就缺少那么一点“推动力”，推一推就上去了，松一松便下来了。例如： Mark, you made much progress last term. However, you can do best of all if you study harder. I'm waiting for your good news. 给优等生的评语表扬中要有指正，向他们提出更高的要求。可以批上： You've done best of all in your class, but try to make your handwriting nicer. Cora, you always did well in English last term. But I'm sorry you sometimes made some silly spelling mistakes. You see, little by little one goes far. 如知道某个学生家里最近发生不愉快事情，我们教师可在评语中说些安慰的话： Andy, I'm sorry to know what happened to you. Your class and I hope you won't be sad any more. Remember: if you need help, please come to me. 又如发现一位学生抄袭作业，可在评语中委婉地提出劝戒：Why not believe yourself? I'm sure you can do better if you try to do it by yourself. 这些充满温馨的鼓励或提醒的话语，相信每个学生都乐于接受，都喜欢这种与教师在作业本上的交流。做得好的，会期待着下一次的表扬；做得不够的，会仔细分析自己的错误，不辜负教师的期望。 “积土成山，积水成渊。”给学生写一、两次评语，就会发挥其应有的功效，这是不可能的。我们教师应在平时的写作训练中充分运用激励机制。例如：书法规范和漂亮者优；标点符号正确者优；会正确使用连词、分词、从句者优；会用主题句、支撑句者优；典型句使用恰当者优。总之，教师只有把评价学生的写作自始至终放在发现学生字、词、句、段、文方面的优秀之处和可取之处，并时而通过评语与他们促膝谈心，表达特别的关注和爱护，学生才能从遭遇失败到尝试成功，从惧怕写到乐于并善于写，进而全面提高自身的英语写作能力。（注：此论文荣获台山市教育学会第二十届年会提交论文二等奖）
❼ 介绍自己的英语作文怎么写带翻译
Hello everyone. My name is Zhou Yan, I am fifteen years old. I am 1.6 meters tall. I am very fond of painting, dancing ballet, reading, swimming and playing piano in my spare time. I like eating breads, vegetables and fruits. My mother is a math teacher and my father is an engineer, and I have a little sister. I love them very much. I started playing piano since I was five, my dream is to be a pianist.
大家好。我的名字叫周延，我15岁了。我身高米6。我非常喜欢在空闲时间里画画、跳芭蕾舞、读书、游泳还有弹钢琴。我喜欢吃面包、蔬菜和水果。我的妈妈是一名数学老师，我爸爸是工程师，我还有一个妹妹。我非常爱他们。我从5岁的时候就开始弹钢琴了，我的梦想是成为一名钢琴家。
❽ 英语作文介绍自己怎么写
hi!Everybody
is
good!My
name
is
Andy.I
come
from
Shanghai.I
am
a
girl.I
like
the
piano
and
ballet,
because
they
can
cultivate
girls
elegant
temperament.I
love
my
family.I
am
now
in
xx
school.
I
am
now
very
hard.Because
I
want
to
make
love
me
the
person
I
love
happiness.I
will
make
myself
better
and
better.My
dream
is
to
be
one
of
the
most
famous
designer,
and
I
will
work
on.The
above
is
my
introction
to
myself,
I
hope
you
can
like
me.
嗨！大家好！我的名字叫安迪。我来自上海。我是一个女孩。我喜欢钢琴和芭蕾舞,因为它们可以培养女生的优雅气质。我爱我的家人。我现在在XX中学。我现在很努力。因为我想让爱我的人我爱的人都幸福。我会让自己越来越好。我的梦想是成为一个最著名的设计师并且我会为之努力。以上是我的介绍我自己,我希望你们能喜欢我。
希望你能喜欢O(∩_∩)O~
❾ 《介绍自己》英语作文怎么写
大家好, Hello,everybody. 我叫XXX, My name is XXX. 今年十岁, I'm ten. 在五年级五班就读, I'm in Class 5, Grade 5. 我喜欢草莓味道的冰淇淋, I like strawberry ice cream. 我在专学习方面较认真, I study very hard. 喜欢看各种各属样的课外书籍, And I like reading books, all kind of books. 运动方面也不错, I'm good at sports. 其中以跳绳最为突出, I like rope skipping best. 今年冬季运动会还准备夺冠. I want to take the crown in the winter games this year. 非常感谢大家的倾听．Thanks a lot for listening.
❿ 怎样用英语描写自己的老师一篇作文
My teacher is very nice, my favourite teacher is my Chinese teacher, Miss Huang. She has a small mouth and big eyes. She is very kind. She likes weraing red dress. She has a smart daughter. Miss Huang is not ominous. She is very gentle. Moreover good s intention. But when we are not obedient, Miss Huang will be angry. I like my teacher, and my classmete; My teacher likes me, all her other students! Miss huang is my favourite teacher!