帮忙修改作文英语怎么说
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A Letter of Congratulation
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一封祝贺的信
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Dear Li Peng,
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亲爱的李潘,
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Congratulations on your acquiring this year’s scholarship!
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恭喜你获得今年的奖学金!
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I know how hard you have been working,as the saying goes,”God helps those who help themselves.
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我知道如何难的你一直工作, 谚语,"天助自助者。
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The fact that you have obtained the success in the field of learning suggests that it is your more efforts than others that won the honor of the stipend not only your clever.
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事实「你已经获得学问的领域的成功」只意味着它是你的努力更甚于嬴得了薪水的荣誉不的其他你的聪明。
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Your success has given me a lot of inspiration:
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你的成功已经给我许多灵感:
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if one does not exert oneself in youth, one will regret it in the future.
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如果一不在年轻人中发挥自己，他未来将会为它感到遗憾。
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Hence, I will study more hard than before and acquire a satisfactory result as you.
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因此, 我将会学习更难的超过在而且之前获得一个满意的结果当做你。
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Finally, I just can’t tell you how proud I feel of you.
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最后, 我就是不能告诉你如何骄傲的我你感觉。
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Yours sincerely
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你的真诚地
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Li Ming
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李明
㈡ 帮忙修改一篇英语作文
Schools offer a lot of sources for sports.For example,the tracks are set in the playground,together with the basketball courts.Schools specially designe some places for playing badmintom and pingpong.Consequently,the sports of schools are various.
Certainly,we should try to make full use of these free sourses.When you are walking on the playground ,you can see some boys playing basketball and some students are running along the track.Enterong the gymnasium,you will find a couple of students waving the badminton rackets in the air. Obviously,they are playing badmintom.Let us look at the opposite side.The students are playing pingpong intensely.Once you put yourself into the playground ,you will be attracted by the scene in front of your eyes.
It is a very interesting thing that we do sports in the school.So we should take part in the sports activities actively.Not only can we take exercise but we can also have much fun.
㈢ 帮忙修改一篇英语作文
Corrections are made, though some might have been missed out. Question marks indicating that what you were trying to communicate is not very clear so couldn't really do any changes on those.
Part one The school yard
It is an old school with a long history. My first impression of it is that it’s very beautiful and modern. The buildings are in European style. And they are red and white. There is a big library named Yifutang in school. The students can also do their homework there.
Our classroom is amazing and clean. Every classroom has a big screen computer, almost as big as a blackboard. The classroom is very bright because there are many windows and lights.
There is a big dining room in the school. The food is very delicious and hundreds of students have their meals there everyday. And there is a nice fountain in front of the dining room. A wonderful playground is behind the Qinmianlou. Many trees are planted around the playground. We can play basketball, table tennis, football and badminton there after school .
Part two Our teachers
In senior high, we would meet some new classmates, as well as some new teachers. They are all enthusiastic. Let me introce some of them to you!
Our English teacher, Ms Gu, is really capable (experienced?). She can speak English very well. We all admire her very much and want to speak English as well as her. She is full of energy, which doesn’t depend on the age. She explains things clearly and her teaching is well organized. In her class, we speak a lot and never get bored! She will be quite strict if we forget to do the homework. But when we make progress, she is happy and praises us at once. I believe we will improve our English with her help.
We have two head teachers. One is our biology teacher, Mr. Li. And the other is our physics teacher, Mr. Yi. Mr. Li is an experienced teacher. He always gives us some useful suggestions about studying. Mr. Yi often tells us some interesting things about physics. They are both kind and patient. We like them very much.
Our Chinese teacher wears a pair of glasses and he is a little heavy (?). He is kind and always smiles. He knows a lot about Chinese literature. Our math teacher, Mr. Lei, is also knowledgeable. We all admire them.
Part three The famous students
There are always some famous students appearing in my school. In old times, there were many students, who once attended my school, who made many contributions to society. Such as Gao Junyu, the first Communist Party member in Shanxi province; Peng Zhen, a great statesman; Dong Shouping, a famous artist; Ren Zhigong, a famous physicist and so on. Now, there are also some famous students currently studying at school. Our school basketball team and our school orchestra are famous too.
Part four Our feeling
I think my school is a fantastic place to growup in. I’m deeply impressed by some special features of my school, such as its central location, enthusiastic teachers, famous students and so on.
My school is not far from the city center. Thanks to that, it's very comfortable and convenient to live there.
I was a little shy at the start of being taught. But all the teachers made me agree that there was nothing to be embarrassed about. I’m sure I’ll study better with the help of my teachers.
We can also take part in many after school activities, like MUN. I think these activities made study more fun.
I think we live a healthy and fun life.
Our school is “the beginning of the dreams”. We are going to sprinkle our sweat there in the following three years (?). And we believe that we will reach the culmination three years later. We love our school.
㈣ 帮忙修改一篇简单的英语作文
让我冒昧就您这篇作文提几句意见：我认为好的作文并不能仅是把许多单句集合一起。在描述一件事时，句子应该顺畅达意，有连贯性。对同一事物，最好能避免使用千篇一律的文字或语句来表达。您的作文，如果把它翻译成中文，大概会是如下的样子：
这是我们的学校，欢迎您到来。体育馆[我猜您是指体育馆(gym,
gymnasium),
而不是gum
(橡皮糖，或橡胶)]
在花园后面，花园在图书馆旁边，图书馆在课室大楼前面，饭厅在课室大楼旁边，操场在校门和卫生间中间。学校很漂亮。
读起来是否有点“只是把单句集在一起”的感觉?
让我试试把文章改写如下，看您是否觉得比较好一点：
This
is
our
school.
I
would
like
to
welcome
you
to
our
school
by
introcing
to
you
the
facilities
in
our
school.
First,
we
have
a
magnificent
gymnasium
where
sport
events
take
place
throughout
the
school
year.
Next
to
the
gymnasium
is
our
school
garden.
Seasonal
flowers
and
plantations
in
the
garden
always
make
our
school
more
beautiful
and
more
appealing.
Our
library
is
located
next
to
the
garden
and
in
front
of
the
classroom
building.
After
the
classroom
building,
you
will
find
our
dining
hall
where
we
eat
our
lunch
everyday.
Let
me
also
introce
you
to
the
playground
of
our
school.
This
is
the
place
where
we
play
games
and
the
place
for
formal
events.
The
playground
sits
between
the
gate
of
entrance
and
the
lavatory.
So
you
see,
we
have
a
big
and
charming
school
and
we
all
love
it
very
much.
㈤ 帮忙修改一篇英语作文，要表达准确地道
非常地道的汉语。我只是就你的文章进行了语法和部分词法方面的修改。要实现地道的英语，还需要多多地努力。
In the past, when a person said “I am poor”, he meant that he had financial problems. But at present, the word “poor” also expresses the meaning of spiritual poverty. The lack of knowledge causes spiritual poverty, which has become an apparent problem in today’s society, and the lack of input of foreign language words, not often reciting something and listening to information, causes the lack of knowledge. So, what we need is to find a way to avoid such problems.
As everyone knows, what one inputs decides what one outputs. If someone doesn’t like reading books or reads the books short of knowledge, he will not be able to avoid the spiritual poverty. Besides, the lack of information input will also make it difficult to communicate with others; we would not acquire the information from others. So, to avoid the spiritual the poverty, the first step is to read more and listen more.
To read more, people should have a big enough vocabulary, including foreign words. The lack of words is a barrier which makes it hard for many people to read for knowledge from other cultures. The way to solve this problem is to learn more words including English words, because English now is a global language and many scientific articles are written in it. To fulfill this second step, people need patience. We must keep in mind that to enlarge vocabulary is a job which should be done every day.
The third step to solve the problem of spiritual poverty is to recite more. Good essay recitation is important because essays can be a spiritual wealth which can accompany you every day and everywhere. Reciting these essays can also help you learn how to use the words and how to lead a happy life. In a word, it is a good way to solve the spiritual poverty problem.
Remember the three steps --- to read more and listen more, to enlarge your vocabulary, and to recite more. They will make your spirit full. If everyone takes the steps, the spiritual poverty will not be a problem in the future.
㈥ 帮忙修改英语作文，急！！！！！！！！
The Iceland is the first place I want to travel to .there are more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form it's landscape, so people said it is shaped by fire and ice.It is covered with snow and ice which have many hot springs inside.In Iceland, the scenery is so pure and unique which makes people feel relax.
The second place is the Switzerland . This country has the best chocolate proction and watch proction. She has small Land area and population but high quality life .
There are so many places I want to travel include Barcelona,a beautiful Spanish city near the sea, especially to it's splendor building which designed by Antoni Gaudi, a architect with great talent.
可能改的地方太多，主要是你的表达有点冗余，见谅，仅供参考！
㈦ 帮忙修改英语作文
已改好，能否私信交流下？
It was 2012, the time when I had to manage a new Japanese restaurant.
My ex boss decided to open a new Japanese restaurant in XXX city, but he didn’t have any experience of how to open and manage a Japanese restaurant, and he also didn’t had much time (he got to manage a Chinese restaurant). So he assigned me to do it. One reason was that I was already his assistant and the lobby manager of his Chinese restaurant, furthermore, I had learned Japanese food courses from a Japanese sushi master in China for about three months.
It was a really big challenge for me. Obviously, I’ve learned the basic courses of marketing, operation and management, but that was just limited to book knowledge, I didn’t have much practical experience. So at first, I discussed with my ex boss for every detail: who concerned with this project and what did he want exactly. After that I began to look on the internet for the decoration and the design for the restaurant. Once I’ve got the preliminary conception, I started investigating the Japanese restaurants in that city, one by one. I collected all the informations (menus, photos, the flow of customers at the weekends, the service quality etc). By analyzing and comparing all data I got, finally I could determine the style, the customer orientation and the food price.
At the end of this period, I realized that difficulties make you stronger, do not be afraid, just do your best. By the way, the feeling of seeking solutions under pressure, that’s just amazing!
㈧ 英语作文帮忙修改
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies , my hobby is reading books . I think reading books can learn some new knowledge.So i read different kinds of books.There are fable ,science books ,And so on. so,i think i will become cleverer and cleverer.
I reading books every day ,and I often go to the library to lend some books . My father and my mother agree with my hobby. I like reading books very much ,请注意大小写
㈨ 帮忙改英语作文
我主要改些语法时态搭配哦。。
Some people think a name is important to them.
To a company like Coca......., a name...
你有见过a part of people吗？ 没有尽量别用。。错了扣分的
can give
Other people... to them
all human being coming to this world are unique
some customers
go to buy-- purchase
just for its brand
...of goods thus regarding name to be of trivial effect
自己观点稍少了点
...to differentiate the external part of people
...the inner essence so as to gain a full understanding of them (为什么要看本质？)
㈩ 帮忙修改英语作文~~谢谢
注意你的问题是你把你本身写的句子翻成中文都不是很通，第一段精缩，重新排序：It is an honor for me to introce the girl who sits beside me in my English class, Wu xuyan.
第二段，我的第一印象是她 的性格，这话其实逻辑不对，中文勉强过关，英文里是错句。I was impressed by her characteristics at first place(或at the very beginning, 或 initially). 第二句的从句来的莫名其妙，没有必要：She has an extrovert personality and always wears a shining smile, （一个and，就表示了在解释之前的点，不用从句）which attracted me. Naturally, we became friends.(与其交朋友不是一个big deal，还犯不上make your mind)
第三段逻辑有些乱，我不知道她来自上海、学设计跟“我们有共同兴趣爱好”有什么必然联系，如果你是想说我们都来自上海，都学设计，有一样梦想，那就先别说hobby，然后这样写：As knowing her more, I found that we have a lot in common, not only because we are both from Shanghai and were born in the same year, but also because we both major in design and are ambitious in being a successful designer one day.
注意，the British play是特指某一部英剧。应该是 We both love watching British plays, such as "Silk" and "Sense and Sensibility", （注意双引号代替中文的书名号，用于分开不同的作品名，不然非常confusing）and Sherlock series are our favorite. 然后这里别用of course，没有逻辑。We also enjoy watching the same type of movies which include handsome actors. (movies 不能用 who，没有生命的东西要用which)
接下来你要介绍不同，而不是相同，就应该另起一段，否则非常乱。
We both like reading. My taste, however, is a bit of different from hers. She loves romantic books while exciting ones (这样改依然不妥，exciting不是一个类别，写英语文章要在逻辑道理上让西方人认可，你应确定是武侠还是战争类还是什么)are more appealing to me.(appeal to 也对，很不错，你知道这个). She alsos has a wise comment about reading: It's a good way to relax which at the sametime helps me eliminate the confusion in real life.（consider the confusion我不知道是什么意思，没有这个用法，猜你是想说解疑释惑吧。normal这个词不要乱用，这么解释吧，它的反义词，abnormal，是畸形的意思，明白了吗，如果生活中没有动乱、残疾之类的，一般不至于用normal来形容一个事物，“现实生活”用real life）
Moreover,好吧， 对不起没看到这里有what' more, 被我用掉了，就用moreover。we are both so drawn to travelling. She hankers for going up the Northern Europe for seeing the aurora and playing with penguins in the South Pole.这一段有点尴尬，你们都爱旅游，但你不介绍自己喜欢什么样的旅游，只写了她的而没写你的。 你可以加一句但我们向往的目的地不同到中间but we have different dreaming destinations ， 再在后面加上你想去的地方，有关想去，被吸引有很多词组可用，这里给你几个：be drawn to(我刚用了）, ache to do（想死了要做）, desire for doing, have been dreaming of doing, long(不是长，是渴望，动词） for doing 等等。
最后一段第一句没问题。但in the depth of my heart 是心灵深处，很文学，也很“深”，不如用from my truest heart, 然后就是少用forever，典型的中国英语，多用always，可以加上in my lifetime。pray是祈祷，有点过了，就是I wish her dreams come true!
好好学，还不错。