请求帮忙作文英语怎么说
① 英语作文,请求帮助,
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② 英语学习遇到困难请求某人帮助怎么写 英语作文
你可以背诵一些经典范文,把经典句型记下来,做到举一反三,好句子特别记忆,特别是复杂的句子,还有就是词汇一定要达到一定程度,找一份好英语报纸看,提高自己的阅读能力,那样就可以在阅读中发展语感,可以做一些有水平的句子,个人认为21世纪英语报不错,你可以买来看看,其实写作文关键是句型,只要掌握了好句型,写一些高级句子,书写认真规范,拿高分很简单啦!
③ 请求帮忙写英语作文
Dear Allen,
I'm very glad you will come to China. China is so big, and has so many wonderful places to visit. Since it's your first time visiting China, I recommend you go to Beijing. Because first, it's the capital of China, it's the political and economic center of China. Second, Beijing is a historical city, there are many ancient buildings and places to see, for example the famous Forbiden city, the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, and many more. Third, you can see the traditional Chinese culture in Beijing, like Beijing Opera, the snack of Beijing, the bystreet culture, ect.
hope to see you soon. I wil be your guide.
匆匆写就,还望指正。还望选为满意答案。
④ 请求.帮忙写一道英语作文
你可以把你在四个季节里的干什么,天气情况(最多)的告诉他,另外,你又不会词,也可以查网络词典!
⑤ 英语作文具体怎么写,请求高手帮忙,
一、写作
(一)存在问题
1.不会写
所谓不会写指的是,当考试拿过一篇文章不知如何下手,不知如何提笔进行写作。笔者认为主要是存在以下两个原因:一是考生的确无话可说;二是心里虽然有话,但是拿捏不准该写哪句为妙。于是思前想后、犹豫不决,始终不敢提笔进行写作。
2.写不好
所谓写不好就是,拿过作文题,没有明确的写作思路,不按套路出牌;或是简单汉语逻辑思维写作,不符合英语写作标准,近而没有文采。原因在于:第一是平时没有养成良好的写作习惯;第二对于英语写作的句式特点以及整体文章结构框架不了解。
(二)解决办法
第一,首先必须熟悉英语四级写作具体要求。英语四级考试要求考生在30分钟内写出120字的文章。体材主要有议论文(分为“Topic题型”和 A&B又称“正反观点题”)应用文(主要是书信)、图表文等。针对不同的体裁,写作思路是不同的。比如,以议论文举例来说:
1.议论文写作思路
2.议论文分类:阐述主题型作文(Topic);正反观点型作文(A&B)
3.阐述主题型作文写作:(这类题型作文要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述)
(1)基本写作格式
5. 正反观点型作文(A&B)(这类题型作文通常从正反两方面来分别论述,最后得出你自己的结论。采用论点加论据写作形式。)
(1)基本写作格式
第二,熟悉英语写作的几个重要概念。
1.英语文章段落结构特点
英语文章段落结构一般有三部分构成:主题句+扩展句+结尾句
(1)主题句:所谓主题句,就是英语文章段落的中心思想句。它是英语文章段落的灵魂,在英语文章段落中居于主导地位。我们都知道英语文章一般喜欢开门见山,所以主题句一般位于英语文章段落的句首。其他句子都要围绕它而展开。
(2)扩展句:所谓扩展句就是为主题句起解释说明或论证的句子。通常我们写扩展句所采用的方法是举例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列数据(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。
(3)结尾句:所谓结尾句就是总结句。英语写作也类似于汉语写作,最后再把自己本段落的写作目的陈述一下。但是在英语写作中结尾句毕竟还是少数。
因此我们通常看到英语的文章段落结构 60%-70%都是由主题句+扩展句构成。
2.主旨句
作为主旨句就是英语文章的中心思想句。英语文章一般首先用一句话概括一下作者的写作目的或意图,我们就把这句话称之为主旨句。没有受过写作训练的考生是不会写主旨句的。因此这样的文章就不能够称之为好的英语文章,自然也得不到阅卷人的青睐了。
第三,学会遣词造句
1.遣词:
(1)词汇等级
所谓词汇的等级就是,我们在写作的过程中,如果想出一个基本词汇来之后,能够在这个基本词汇的基础上把它在提升一下,也就是我们一般写作所提倡的用“难词 ”。比如,我们一提到“重要的”,大多数同学首先会想到“important”这个单词,那么提升一下的话就可以想到它的如下同义词:significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc
(2)词汇准确性
所谓词汇的准确性是指,我们在有一个词近而想到它的同义词之后,要结合语境选择恰当的用词。在这里必须指明的是,并不是词汇等级越高越好,必须还要考虑到适合于不同的语境。比如,眼睛大,这个“大的”形容词,我们首先会想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的词就可以了呢?或者说用上enormous等词更能博得阅卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在这里很明显用后面的词来修饰眼睛是不可以,只能用big,因为我们听过一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl, in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可爱的。
2.造句:
(1)词组
很多考生平时写作不太擅长用词组,对于他们而言最习惯的就是想到汉语,然后对应汉语思维写出英语句子,这种写作只能是单词的罗列组合,谈不上什么技巧文采可言,因此,写出来的文章必然就是所谓平淡如流水,没有英语的味道。如果我们能够在单词的基础上,进一步想到与之同义的词组,那么文章就会显得与众不同,更具有英语的味道。比如上面所说的“重要的”这个单词,当我们想到important的时候,如果从语法角度再稍加考虑一下,我们会想到“be of importance”。因为,语法中规定:形容词等于of加这个形容词的名词形式。如果再提升一步,我们还学过一个常用的词组叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同学说自己的文章凑不够字数或是没有文采,那么采用词组进行写作是不是就可以解决以上问题了呢?
(2)句式
除了采用词组,要使文章更具英语的味道,我们还需要变换句式。没有受过正规作文训练的考生,通常采用的句式多为主谓宾、主系表。于是我们看到大多数的文章充斥着这样的形式:I am a good boy, and I am a student. I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.这样流水帐式的文章显然不能得到高分。
写作中阅卷人喜欢的句式有以下两种:一是插入语;二是倒装。
第一,插入语。
所谓插入语,英语中有两种形式。一种是有两个逗号之间引起的成分称之为插入语;第二种是有两个半破折号引起的成分称之为插入语。如下所示(黑体划线处):
Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.
Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid, material resources, and needed services—that reces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.
插入语的作用主要有两个,一个是突出主语,比如说:He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.
第二个作用是解释说明,比如说:People, especially students, should work hard.
第二,倒装
倒装是我们写作中需要用到的。虽然略显俗套,但是却是很能满足阅卷人的主观感受的。常用的倒装形式有以下几种:
Only + 时间状语
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.
Only + 介词词组
Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.
Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.
否定词位于句首(hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom)
在我一生当中很难遇到这样的人
Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.
地点方位名词位于句首
In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.
(3)修辞
无论是汉语写作还是英语写作,修辞其实非常的重要。它是作者写作功底具体事例地展现。所谓修辞包括比喻、拟人、排比等等。英语写作中的修辞问题我已经专门写过一篇文章(见《英语写作几种修辞手法》)。这里仅举一个比喻例子,还是拿“重要的”来举例。当你用完词组之后,如果你用上下面比如句子,则文章就会显得神采飞扬,试比较:
The bicycle is important for us.
The bicycle is of importance for us.
The bicycle plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.
那么很明显,最后一个句子是我们最终拿到考场上去搏击高分的句子。
第四,平时要注意积累
很多考生为了写好作文也作了好多工作,课下也付出了很多,包括背诵大量的文章等等,但是提笔写作时候,仍不见的有所改观。问题在哪里呢?
我认为,很多考生虽然也背诵文章,但却只是死记硬背。如果合上书本让他复述,他们就会卡壳。就是茶壶里煮饺子,倒不出来。我们说背诵是个输入的过程,而说和写则是输出的过程。我们真正需要的是把平时积累的随时随地用在我们的写作中。因此,我们在注重积累的同时,一定在平时练习的时候,把他们多家运用。只有多练多用,才能真正达到学以致用,才能真正提高写作水平。(济南新东方学校 赵晓栋)
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⑥ 请求帮忙!!英语作文
我就随便帮你写几句吧,其他的自己凑两句就可以了。
On the one hand,doing homework is a way to review the knowledge what you have learned.But if you them,you will not learn anything.
On the other hand,if you always do it,you will develope a bad habit.And in this way,you will not change it easily.So,if you have some questions, I'll help you to solve it .And I wish we can be good friends i n the future .
我也不知道你哪些学过,我不读初三了版~就尽量写了些权简单的~
⑦ 关于请求别人帮助的英语作文
首先自我介绍
说明问题
请求帮助,希望对方做什么
先感谢,希望得到尽快的回复
⑧ 在线等!急需……请求帮忙写英语作文
题目写在100字左右的组成,根据
在给定的情况。您需要包含的所有信息。写上你的答案
答卷。 (25分)
hi,friend,i'm cindy.now i'm fifteen,i think young people should be energetic and enjoy life.we have many nice friends ,they teaches me what should i do when i face the touble,it's to hard if only meface the touble ,so my friend give me so much encourage and
pleasure.and it's time to ours to hard to study,you konw,Time didn't wait anyone,we should Treasure the time,if you have any Problems,you can Ask for the teacher this questions ,then
you want be more knowledge,so ,then next you read article,
.you will konw young is so beautiful as you Treasure!
这篇文章比较活泼易懂,楼主选我把!
我自己写的啊!
⑨ 请求帮忙写一篇简单的英语作文】
Dear Mr.Wang,
How are you?
I'm LiHua who used to be your junior school student.I can't repress my excitmentness to share a good news with you.I was admitted by ZheJiang University in advance.When I knew that I couldn't help crying because of happiness in remind of those tough study days.
I really thank you for helping me so much in the past junior school life.I remember that I didn't learn English well,however I became fond of it for your interesting courses.And my English mark became higher and higher days after days hard study from your course.
In the future I plan to learn my major well and keep on studying English as English is so important in our life.The international world requires much of the fluency of English.Therefore I really wish that our paths can cross again.
Wish you every day happy and good luck!
I am looking forward to hearing your reply.
LiHua
PS.都可以算是大学水平了额。。。不知不觉。。。
⑩ 急~~请求帮忙改一篇作文(英语),给一些意见即可,谢了
在保证不出错误的前提下 尽量多使用复杂句式
1,例如 将I have a naughty brother named Tommy Chen. He is ten years old and he studied in Class one Grade three. 写成I have a ten-year-old naughty brother named Tommy Chen,who studys in Class one Grade three. 介绍人物情况时通常用一般现在时即可 讲述事情时再根据具体情况选择相应时态
2,Tommy hated school and he always planed not to go to school, so his score is not very good. 将so换成as a result, 感觉更好些
3,He spent more time at home than he in school.去掉第二个he
4,One day he came home from school in the middle of the morning. His father was very surprised. 将这两个简单句并成一个非限制性定语从句更好些 改为:
One day he came home from school in the middle of the morning,which made his father very surprise.
5,“Is the school closed?” 是想表示放学的意思吗 如果是的话 通常用school is over;如果不是则无须更正
6,It is very important for you to learn knowledge完善一下 It is of great importance for you to stay at school to learn knowledge 。
7,“What do you say to your teacher, Tommy?” 注意时态 do-did
8,“I told that I had a new baby sister and that I had to come home and help you. That was all!”
或者说成i said that 或者说成i told the teacher that
我觉得将最后一个you改为my father 或my parents更好 因为这些话是他当时对老师说的
9,“But your mother has had twins,”his father said
has-had said改为corrected更好些
10,His father looked at him and felt very hurt.
觉得可以换个方式表达 或者以冷幽默的方式表达会更好 因为整个故事情节都近于一个冷笑话 His father looked at the big smiling on Tommy's face but could say nothing at all.
呵呵 仅供参考哦 改了十个小地方 也希望你的文章能够十全十美哦 如果还有欠托的地方就请您自己更正吧 ^_^