雅思英语作文怎么批改

A. 一直说新奇雅思有写作批改的 具体怎么弄啊

100块钱4偏，不过好像只卖给老生。我推荐你去上他们写作老师LEO的课，上几个小时VIP的话，效果会更好的。

B. 求批改英语作文，雅思的，语法什么的

我记到新奇雅思有一个写作批改卡，就是可以改作文的。我在那边上完课之后买过，挺好用的。你可以去看一下，找专业老师改的比较好。你在网上搜一下吧。

C. 如何用正确的姿势批改雅思作文

STEP 1

通读全文，利用word文档的自动更正功能搜索最简单的语法、拼写、标点错误。这一项，依赖于自己的英文学习水平，更依赖于字典。

使用高亮标注自己欠缺的输出性表达（所有自己一秒想不出来的都应该记忆），使用批注功能做一些拓展，尤其关注具体用法、同义替换等。

STEP 5

确认该题目隶属的话题范围。如果说，这个题目问的是在线购物，那么它和现代科技相关，所以，接下来的任务应该是搜索和现代科技相关的题目、话题需要的语料。比如，electronic devices；advanced equipment；time-saving；express delivery......这样的储备会让你再次遇到类似话题的时候可以轻松应对。

D. 求雅思作文批改 我没分。。

As technology develops, more shopping and business is done through the internet while communication face to face becomes less frequent. Is this a positive or a negative development

Nowadays, more shopping and business can /be done by /the use /of the internet, then the opportunity/加上这个反而不好,意义有问题,且这个词和become frequent搭配不妥 of communication face to face becomes less frequent. Some people think that /it is a positive development, but also/删 many user??? it has some negative elements/effects.
Of caurse/course/这个口语化,少用,/the internet bring/s plenty of convenients/conveniences to us.First of all, shopping or do many other things through the internet that/删 /has save/d our time, we needn’t spend 1 hour even more on transportation, from another side???,for insitense/instance, if you /are shopping through the internet, you can browse all you want quickly, stead/instead of to/删 go/ing to those/删 shops /one by one/删,it makes us become more efficiency/efficient.Secondly,that may leave/keep us from dangerours/danger, we just stay at home, (without the traffic/traffic and other accident. )Chinglish
It also has some bad point/disadvantages. People construct this world, we have to communicate with other/s, that we just use keyboard/s to tape/type is not enough, even though sometimes we can hear the voice or see the image, but those cannot take the place of face to face communication.Then,there/删 may/many things are not real in that world, cheating and lying become easier.
In addition, everything have/has good points and bad point/two sides/advantages and disadvantages, even the internet is the case, that is a/删 common sense. But how to use it better is important, and it is /what we have to do.

你好,帮你简单改了下,语法小错比较多,如果注意不犯这些错误,这篇文章可以有4分左右.你现在的英语作文基本上处于将中文意思用你知道的英语单词生搬硬凑胡乱组装起来的阶段,建议你现阶段可以先背一些模板句型,写作时按葫芦画瓢用到自己的文章中去,练习多次后你的作文定会有进步.

还有问题,网络hi我.希望我的回答对你有所帮助.

E. 雅思 作文 批改

雅思作文要求：
1. 准确：用词选择，时间描述等，这是语言的基本要求，所需要的基本功是对于议论文审题的准确把握，其实是个思维水平的问题，要求观察生活，理解生活！
2. 连贯，流畅，通顺：关联词，句，甚至关联段的应用（文连）和内容的连贯，呼应（意连）。
3. 新颖，生动，地道：主从句的应用（尤其是定语从句），经典句式的表达。
4. 精炼：非谓语动词，with的复合结构，独立主格结构，倒装，虚拟语气的应用。这一点最难能可贵，目前现行的雅思教材和培训很少涉及这一要求，以为文章长难句多，得分就高，其实文章的老练成熟主要就体现在言简意赅，微言大意之上！语言最大的特点是朴实自然，恰到好处，决不浪费笔墨！

我觉得你用词太生硬了吧，好像是硬拼在一起的。我觉得用词自然就好，不要总是找那些晦涩词儿。以下供参考，不妥之处自己在修改一下吧。

The specification of happiness differs with one's perspective. Some indivials just deem managing to help the people around who are in need as their lofty pleasure. By contrast, some others assert that minor affairs are not able to generate the happiness that one longs for pursuing while business success, academic prestige, or political reputation may probably be regarded as their biggest passion in life.
but for me,there are only 3things come into my mind.Happiness: a good bank account, a good cook, and a good digestion.Someone said that the ideal life is to live in an English country home, engage a Chinese cook, marry a
Japanese wife, and take a French mistress..Most of the happiness in this world consists of possessing what others can’t get.
Happiness is not a goal, it is a by-proct.so,if ur aim is to be a happy person like me ,i think u just need to do the two steps.
Happiness is good health plus a bad memory.Everyday is a gift.I feel happy. I have only two hands, but I have two pairs of gloves.How beautifully everything is arranged by Nature; as soon as a child enters the world,it finds a mother
ready to take care of it.I felt sorry for myself because I had no shoes --- until I met a man who had no feet.To sum it up,u have to optimistic.
but it's not enough,you guys have to enjoy the life.Yse. Don’t postpone joy.No man is a failure who is enjoying life.Enjoy life, this is not a dress rehearsal.The most precious thing we have is life. Yet it has absolutely no trade-in value.We should hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. The worst result is that we can’t get out of the
world alive.
If you get my point,your life will find is not hard to get a happy and easy life.

F. 求批改英语作文(IELTS)

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?

Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.

First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.

Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.

In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person’ indivial ability is far more important than their gender.

G. 雅思考官怎样批改写作

雅思作文这样批，系列一 在执教雅思写作的这些年中，我会发现，很多时候学生会从某某老师那里获取种种所谓的“黄金模板”，又或者是高举考前必备一本，视若雅思界的圣经。而不去管什么“碰文”。而最最难过的却是分数不给力，才知天道难酬勤!换个方式学吧，看看隔壁的“他”的作文中那些错误的背后是否隐藏了写作的某些玄机。

H. 英语作文修改 雅思

一个最明显的错误是，时间的正确书写方式是：6:00am, 10:00pm
你的时间书写是错的 请你注意

I. 怎么找雅思考官批改作文

1.现役的雅思考官是不允许在任何培训机构就职的，如有机构和你说他们有考官，请不要相信！
2.如果你的写作分数已经达到6.5分，你可以找外教老师给你做作文批改。但如果还没达到，建议你还是找中教老师！
如果你是雅思小白，对自己听说读写四项的能力没有明确的认知，则可以进行一次雅思在线测试：https://peixun.liuxue315.cn/exam/?ozs=86834-2709。

J. 雅思作文批改

看起来是典型的辩论型题目。写得还是不错的，不过也许就像你说的那样，毕竟是第一次写这种文章，所以技巧性可能还有点欠缺。如果条理再清晰一些的话，就更好了。

个人认为，辩论型题目，以这个题目为例吧，考官最想看到的就是你自己的意见，尽量不要出现模棱两可的观点，尤其不要说“It's all depends”之类的话...洋人很反感这个的，尽可能使你的观点明确。这究竟是积极还是消极的发展，一定要有一个明确的立场，即一边倒。在文章的第一段，先写两句作为背景，实在写不好的话，就改写题目，确保不会跑题。然后亮明自己的观点，最后可以过渡一下，为第二段做准备。一般情况下第一段不要太长，三四句即可。

第二段就是重点了。这也就是你需要重点下功夫的地方。我在前面说了，这部分可能条理不是很清晰。我读了下你的第二段，其实你有表述自己的理由，但是看起来是不是很没有头绪呢？这里就需要用一些词来连接，比如“First of all”，“next”，“last but not the least”这类的词，可以让人很明确地看到你的每一条理由。实际上，每条理由后面加上一两句，来扩展你的理由，也就是支撑观点。尽量，不要举例子，一两句是说不清的，如果举也尽量不要举具体例子。我记得有一个题是关于战争的，我看到的一篇范文的观点是战争摧残人们家园，但是这个考生的高明之处就在于他没有明确地说就是美国攻打伊拉克。这一点一定要注意，英联邦的国家很反感别人说他们不好的。

第三段，也就是结尾段了。对于辩论型题目，三段足够了，但是解释性题目，即要求提出解决方案的，则需要写四段。所以可以考虑把你的二三段重新整合一下。结尾段需要再次亮明观点，这一点你做得很好呢，第一次写就可以做到这个很不容易的，好多学生最后都草草总结了事了。但是一定要和开头照应，实际上简单的做法就是再次改写题目，或者改写开头段。

最后再说一下，你很有心呢，格式做得非常好。但是第一段出现了缩写，这个在正规的雅思考试里是绝对不允许的，改正就可以了。

我是今年4月，在北京，参加的雅思考试，我的写作拿了6.5分，我的雅思写作老师和我一起参加了考试，他拿了7分，所以还是个OK的成绩。同学加油吧，也祝你早日通过雅思考试，拿到理想的分数。