请人修改作文英语怎么说
㈠ 修改作文用英语怎么说
modify an essay/article
correct an essay/article
或者说improve the essay/article 也可以，指改进，提高的意思
祝好运和进步~
㈡ 求人帮忙批改英语作文
在我看来你的作文层次清晰，内容全面，但是美中不足的是你的主语不应该由谓语动词充当，这是英语作文的大忌，同时也暴露出你对于英语句子细节的疏忽，通篇好几处help others这是明显的动词短语，下次记得一定不要用错了。第二点是你的文章缺乏一定的连贯性，尤其是句子之间First, help others can make us feel happy. When we help others, they will say “thanks”to you 感觉没说完，所以今后也要在句子上在细节上下功夫啊。总体不错，所以我认为应该得11-12分，继续努力啊，come on!
㈢ 请修改英语作文~
a---your 1
necessarily----necessary 4
buying去掉 8
总体来说不错，继续加油吧！
后面的数字是所在行数
㈣ 请人帮忙改写英语作文
Dear Peter,
I remember you informed me about you were interested in teaching in China. Our school is now looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to the senior high students. If you are able to come, you will be given options to choose the following four courses: Speaking, writing, Britain Today and America Today. Your working time will be 12 hours a week. The students who are attending these courses will have at least three years of English learning experience. Besides teaching, you will also be working as an advisor for our school's English club or the English magazine editorial.
Please let me know if you are interested in and please be free to ask any other questions, I am certainly happy to be able to help you.
㈤ 请英语高手修改英语作文，麻烦了，谢谢！
Everything Has Two Sides.
In recent years,schools in China began to focus on student's practice ability. I think this is good for some students to accumulate experience, which is of great importance for them in the future.
However, it won't work for every school or every student.In my school,I have to go to so-called social practice and write a three thousand--word in every summer vacation and winter vacation. This is interpreted as a practice.But,how do you interprete the time we waste? In that time, we do not have anything to do without staying there.If we can make full use of the time to practice reading, writing or learning, our ability will be more greatly improved. At the same time,how do you write your paper when you have done nothing expcept something meaningless?
In my point of view,the major basic of school is what the function is starting for and how much time will be spent on the function. Regardless of these, please do not assign the students something like internship.
㈥ 求人修改英语作文
直接在原文中修改了~而且换用了一些词组和词语，用来提升英语的地道感~望采纳
In the story of “Ulysses and Circe” ,Ulysses has an excellent characteristic that we should learn from him--he is wisely clever.To begin with, his cleverness gave expression to dividing his sailors as two groups.This decision made him explore easily on an unknown island without wasting too much time.What is more,as Ulysses went back to Circe’s palace for rescuing his sailors,he intended to confuse Circe while Circe was trying to turn him into a pig by using her magical wand.He wisely pretended that Circle’s tricks were useful on his body even though he had already drunk the drug from Hermes which could protect himself from Circe’s magic.Then he caught the chance to give Circe a fatal strike when her attention had been distracted. Lastly,the best idea made me to be delighted was that he did a smart thing for not killing Circe whether she was wittingly or not turned his sailors into animals because Circe helped him a lot as soon as Ulysses supposed to sail out the sea of Sirens afterwards.Besides,Ulysses and his men all had accompanied with Circe for a year and let Circe never felt along again as she once were.In a word,Ulysses is a clever man who can always come up with good plans to fix problems properly and have a smart brain.
㈦ 请人修改下英语作文(很重要的.求你们了!)
（ahistoryof2000years）..(.)(thevarietyof)cultures.Thefamousshoppingviews(places)----(theformer)oneisamodernshoppingcentre,the(laterone).Theyarequitedifferent.InTeemall,,forexample,.Ifyouwanttodosomeshopping,youcangointosomeshops,()Therearefulloflatestfashions,..Whenyoufeelhungry,.However,,itisabigcultureshockforyou.Walkingpass(thestreet)andyouwell(will)seemanyoldbuildingsonbothside(sides)ofthestreets.Thesebuildingswerebuildedin(the)1930s.Theyshowyouwhatwas(the)oldGuangzhoulike.Thereareman(many)..Andyoucantrysomedim-sum----.Youwilllikeit.
㈧ 请人修改下英语作文
1.the Southern China大写 2.Liubei's and Sunquan's armies应用复数，否则have 就用has，但根据你的together应选第一种选择。 3.two men very clever 不对，应为two clever men或two men who were very clever 4.one...the other...应把the others中的s去掉 5.stop Cao Cao'sarmy from capture the ...中capture应用capturing 6.Jiang Nan前不能加the 7.最后一句的“，”应改为that
㈨ 请人修改一篇英语作文.明天晚上要
Daar Anne,
i am very glad that i can get throught(是through) to(with) you,you know i haven't been able to see you for so long ,so i miss you very much.
i know your feelings and thoughts .i can understand what you are going through ,and i also remember the deep blue sky.the war (has)changed our lives.but i thing(think) everybody want to go back to the past. but in fact we can't.we must face to(to去掉) the fact.
we haven't got the power to chang the 现状(situation)，so we must wait and never give up.ring that time,we can set down everything we suffered and ourselves feelings.i think them(it) will help the(the去了)people remrember the history,never forget it!
we are 永远(forever) friends! 我会永远记住你的，要相信，明天会更好！ I will never forget the day which we spend together!You can trust me that tomorrow will be better!
YOURS
MEAT
括号里的为改正的