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巨淀湖在英语作文中怎么写

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㈠ 英语作文中如何写新闻报道 主要注意哪几点

1. 新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topic sentence), 因此这个句子中常包含四大元素what(事件), when(时间), where(地点回)和who(人物), 而在下文则要补答充事件的过程和细节, 往往包括why(目的或原因)和how(具体过程)等。
2. 注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语, 如It is reported that..., As is reported..., According to the report...等。

3. 新闻通讯报道在于平实客观的语言, 考生不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。

㈡ 写一篇英语作文(高中水平)

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge. All are welcome! Nowadays, some of us students have formed some bad habits on campus. For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, or let water running after washing. Some leave over much food on the table after eating. Besides, waste paper and spoiled books can be seen everywhere. So it’s high time that we had to deal with the problems. As we all know, these bad habits will have a bad influence on our character and behavior. What’s more, they cannot only increase our cost at school and add financial burden to our parents, but also waste the limited resources. But how to rece the waste? In my opinion, we should start with ourselves to save everything. Here, I’d like to remind my friends to take the lead in recing the waste. Therefore, I’m sure, with everyone doing this bit by bit, we will change the present situation. Students’ Union

㈢ 英语作文

英语作文,是指用英语针对某一内容写出一篇文章;是英语考试最常见的一种题目类型;

在莱曼英语所倡导的五种英语语言能力中,写作被认为是必修的重要课题之一。它既是英语学习短期目标——考试所要求的内容之一,又是英语学习的长期目标——交流所必需的能力之一。毋庸置疑,英语写作是集基础知识,基本能力和课外信息于一身的综合体现,同时,又要兼顾到写作者高超的写作技巧。因而,没有扎实的英语语法知识;没有长期不懈的训练;没有科学的方法指导;没有广博的课本以外的知识和信息,写好一篇优秀的英语作文是非常困难的。首先,一个段落必须有一个中心,即主题思想,该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic),这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次,一个段落必须有若干推展句,使主题思想得到充分展开,从而给读者一个完整的感觉,这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者,一个段落不是杂乱无章的,而是有机的组合,句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑,从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth),这就是连贯性(coherence)。根据文章题目以及你所想要表示的意思下手,下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。

1、统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心,任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例:
Joe and I decided to take the long trip which we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主题句是段首句,controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences(不相干的句子),一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie,这一段是讲的是Joe and I ,中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有,Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。再看一个例子:
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit,但段中有两个irrelevant sentences,一个是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出,native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了,造成偏题或离题,那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性
正象我们前面说得那样,一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现,如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实,就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样,虽然有推展句,但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待,给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如:
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”(心境不平静)Physical work又如何能改变这种情况?为什么它能起therapy的作用?读者得不到明确的答案。因此,要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如:
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法,必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释,整个段落内容空洞,简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话,就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段:
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、连贯性(coherence)
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内在的逻辑性,后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不够流畅。
1)、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序,不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段从“rose”(起床)写起,然后是吃早餐(“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”),然后是“close to noon”,一直写到这一天结束(“By nine——”)。
B. 按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)。例如:
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的写法是由远及近,从远处(“from a distance”)写起,然后“get closer”,再到(“ten feet away”),最后是“inside the pagoda”……当然,按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要,也可以由近及远,由表及里等等。
C. 按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)
a. 按重要性顺序排列(arrangement in order of importance)

这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与职业,身份有关,从“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”,最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness,先给出一个general statement作为主题句,然后通过5个 "perhaps"加以例证。
c. 由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主题句是段首句,它仅提出一个问题:为什么两只猫会被搞混。然后对两者进行比较,末句才下结论。
2)、形连
行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语:
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上启下的词语有两种,一种是转换词语(transitional words or phrases),另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有:first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是:he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有词汇105个,所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词,约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见,掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流(smoothness)有益,而且对于学生在半个小时内写120个词也是不无好处的。
一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 en211ago. Written language is arecent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的"it"之外,没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样,文中出现许多重复的词语,全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话,这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
4、有损连贯性的几种情况:
考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误:
1、不必要的改变时态,比如:
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改变单复数,比如:
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改变人称,比如:
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此写作中,一定要注意时态,人称以及数的变化是否正确,要注意保持一致。
英语作文 - 英语作文的书写格式
英文的书写和移行
英文书写应符合书写规范,英文字母要写清楚、写整齐、写美观,字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称。书写应做到字形秀丽漂亮,通篇匀称和谐。
写英文字母要掌握正确笔顺。如小写字母i ,应该先写下面的部分,然后再打点。有的学生却按写汉字的习惯从上到下写,写快了,就会把点和下面的竖笔连在一起,显得十分别扭。字形t应为两笔。不少人却将两笔合成一笔,看上去不像t,倒像l或是e,难以辨认。另外,把r写成v,把q写成把g,把k写成h等等,都是中学生书写中常见的毛病。
不少人在四线三格的练习纸上书写尚有规矩,能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求书写,但在白纸或横线纸上书写,却显得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下,或一律写成同一高度,占上中两格的字母与占中下两格的字母完全没有高低之别。这些现象都要防止。
另外,书写时还要注意词与词之间要保持一定的距离,不能紧靠在一起。字母之间的连写也应该按照习惯,不能随意乱来。
在一篇字数有限的作文里,我们还要注意尽量不把一个单词拆开移行。万一要移行,则必须以音节为单位进行,如revolution这个词,依照音节移行的原则可以按re-,revo-, revolu-这几种方法移行。在移行时,我们还应特别注意以下几点:
1. 单音节词不能移行,即使是字母较多的单音节词,如through等也不能例外。
2.缩略词如Mr.、Dr.等不能和后面的名字拆开移行。 缩略的专用名词如U.K.(the United Kingdom)、U.S.A(United States of America)等也不能拆开移行。
3.时间、量度及货币单位应视为一个整体;不能分开移行。
如: 11:00 P.M. 应写在一行内,不能将11:00和PM.分开移行;写38℃时,不能将38和℃分开移行。
4.由“年、月、日”表示的日期。如果必须分开移行只能将“月、日”与“年”分开。如January 6,1980不能将January和6分开移行,但可以把January 6,和1980分成两行。
5.含双写辅音字母的单词,在移行时要将辅音字母拆开。如better可拆成better,necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果双写辅音字母属于词根,后面又加了后缀,就不能将两个辅音字母拆开。如drill加上-ing后构成了drilling,就不可以将它拆成dril-ling,而只能拆为drilling。
例文:
1.宠物:

2.人物:
此外,写日记时不一定全用过去时,在表达思想的时候最好用一般现在时。
3,情感
作文格式
1.四边的距离
在书写时,上下左右要留有一定的空白距离。
2. 题目的写法
题目应写在第一行的中间,题目左右两边的空白距离大致相等。
题目的第一个单词的第一个字母必须大写。从第二个单词起,其中每个实义词的第一个字母大写,而冠词、介词和连词的第一个字母则一般小写。如:
A Day to Remember Let's Go in for Sports
写题目不要用括号或引号。题目后除了问号和感叹号之外,不加其它标点符号。
3.文章本体
文章第一段的第一行应与题目隔一行或两行。每段的开头一般应该缩格,即向右缩进约四个字母的间隔;单词与单词之间须留一个字母的间隔,句与句之间须留两个字母的间隔。假若每行的最后一个单词写不下,最好不要轻易拆字移行,可将该单词移到后一行去书写。书写时,不要因为一行末尾还有一点空间就把一个词的前半截硬塞在那里,造成非移行不可的局面。实际上,移行过多是书写、打字或排印质量不高的表现。不必过分地去追求右边的整齐,宁可多空一些,每行长短错落,要比移行过多看上去舒服。另需注意,在英语写作时每句结束语后不能使用“。”而要用“.”如若是英语考试,则每一次这样失误会扣掉1分。
英语作文 - 英语作文写作技巧
英语考试作文试题的一个最大的特点就是时限性,即在有限的时间内(一般分配30分钟)按试题要求完成作文试题。有很多参试者最后交卷时作文题要么没有完成要么质量比较差,这其中当然有很多原因,但不可忽视的一点原因便是写作文时间不够来不及完成作文或来不及仔细思考写一篇合乎题目要求的文章。通过本次培训课程,各位可以学会一些减省写作时间的良方佳策。
英语作文试题一般要求字数在120字左右,段落一般为三段,因而有“三段论”一说。所谓“三段论”即全文分为三个自然段,一般结构为“首段摆事实(现象)、提观点(论点或问题),在这一部分参试者最好将题目要求中的第一个要点(一般为提出问题或观点)作为首段的内容之一;第二段剖析现象、分析论点,这也是全文的主体部分。在这一部分参试者需要将试题要求中的所有要点的内容都加以阐述和扩展,同时注意不要信马由缰的写一些与文章主题无关的内容以免被当作跑题处理;第三段为结论段,这一段的主要任务是为全文做一个结论性的终结,让文章显得完整和连贯。至于开头和结尾有无固定的套路可循,我们后面的讲解中将会接触到。
英语作文 - 英语作文考试时注意的问题
审题最重要
1.认真审题立意
定文章之灵魂对命题作文必须认真审题,对自由作文必须立好意。文章要有明确的主题,必须具备4个条件:准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。
2.草拟提纲
打造文章之骨架审好题,立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事:安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句,还要从提示句的关键词出发,围绕关键词开拓思路,发挥联想,记录下联想到的东西,可以是句子或单词词组,可以是英语或汉语。
3.写出段落主题句
理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要,是作者思维的起点,切题的准绳,阐述的对象。看到段落主题句,读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头,可使文章结构更清晰,有说服力。
4.参照提纲
紧扣主题句,完成各段落,充文章之血肉有了段落主题句后,还需要顺着段落主题句的方向,参照提纲中的思路,从而完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣,为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法,和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。
5.注意
进行这一步骤还需注意四方面问题:
1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样,才能保证所写段落不偏题,不跑题。
2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排,避免段落内容的交叉。
3)用好连接词,注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明,思路清晰,文字连贯,就需要在句与句之间,段与段之间架起一座座桥梁,而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。 增加文采小窍门: 如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思,第三、四步骤则是真正地“写”了,用词是否贴切,文法是否正确,句式是否多变,文采是否有生气,关系到写作者的语言功底和水平,但也有些窍门是需要长时间累积的。
4)平时多注重积累一些高级词汇也是很重要的

㈣ 英语作文,写一篇短文,介绍在假期中一天的生活情况,至少要有10个句子

写作思路:根据自己在暑假里特别的一天进行描写。

I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so.

I would soon be in the last year of my high school ecation and would after graation be up against the college entrance examinations.

Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this.

At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come.

With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.

㈤ 高中英语作文怎么写

这里给出一些实践的建议。

1、书写。

书写真的很重要。

高二第一次月考班里有个同学,英语功底极差,作文错误百出,第一行就写了一个there are some advice for you,得了21分。(也因为那次是请外边老师阅卷——他们并不很负责任。)因为人家写字好看。相对的,你的那张图的书写显然不合格。

写字要注意以下几点,大小一致,倾斜度一致,间距一致。

四线三格的第二格(a这里)大一点,一三格短一点(bpg尾巴短点)。

写印刷体,即g,y,f勾小一点,不要连笔。

倾斜度一致,可以完全不倾斜。

字母间略微留出间距,不要紧密相连。


我的英语老师让每个同学每天练三行字,这导致她所教的班(一个尖班和一个普通班)分别是6个理科班中作文20+人数的前2。最初,你努力的画出每一个字母,很慢,也不好看;但即使慢也要力求最好效果。一周后,你就会熟练很多,也快很多。

2、亮点

如果你真的是李华,你要写一篇书信给你的外教/笔友,你会写这些:

第一,很高兴收到你的信,我了解了你的问题。

第二,关于你的问题,我的建议是:A,B,C。

第三,我希望我的建议能有用。

最后,Looking forward to your reply。

但是你是一名考生,你要写一篇作文给你的老师看,所以你应该(are supposed to)写这些:

第一,我的书写很漂亮。

第二,我会用这些句式:A,B,C。

第三,我会用很多高级词汇。

最后,Looking forward to your 给满分。

所以我们在写作文时,最重要的是说服老师打高分。

我的做法是这样的:

1.平时学习时,准备一个“我的高级词列表”,准备出几个泛用的、很高级的词汇和句式。

2.考试时,尽量多的试着插进去。“这个词还没有用到呢,想办法来一句。”当然没有必要真的全都写到,有几个就够了。

事实上我的词汇量并不大,但我们只需要准备几个高级词,每次考试逐一用 一遍。

例如我会准备这些(就是老师上课讲过的):

hence(所以)

in no way +半倒装(绝不可能)

what does count/matter is that(最重要的是)

enable(允许,使能够)

in spite of the fact that

with复合结构/独立主格

…………

另外,我的老师讲到过一个技巧叫做“主语物化”,就是说你的主语少用I,you,we,多用it,important decisions,great actions之类的。

最后的那句也讲讲: Please tell me in advance, I can prepare for it. 体会一下批改前后对比:Please tell me in advance, so proper arrangement can be made.

初中英语作文怎么写

只要按题目中给出要点翻译便好.
注意:
1.不要漏要点
2.时态要与内容符合
3.语句连贯

㈦ 英语作文具体怎么写,请求高手帮忙,

一、写作

(一)存在问题

1.不会写

所谓不会写指的是,当考试拿过一篇文章不知如何下手,不知如何提笔进行写作。笔者认为主要是存在以下两个原因:一是考生的确无话可说;二是心里虽然有话,但是拿捏不准该写哪句为妙。于是思前想后、犹豫不决,始终不敢提笔进行写作。

2.写不好

所谓写不好就是,拿过作文题,没有明确的写作思路,不按套路出牌;或是简单汉语逻辑思维写作,不符合英语写作标准,近而没有文采。原因在于:第一是平时没有养成良好的写作习惯;第二对于英语写作的句式特点以及整体文章结构框架不了解。

(二)解决办法

第一,首先必须熟悉英语四级写作具体要求。英语四级考试要求考生在30分钟内写出120字的文章。体材主要有议论文(分为“Topic题型”和 A&B又称“正反观点题”)应用文(主要是书信)、图表文等。针对不同的体裁,写作思路是不同的。比如,以议论文举例来说:

1.议论文写作思路

2.议论文分类:阐述主题型作文(Topic);正反观点型作文(A&B)

3.阐述主题型作文写作:(这类题型作文要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述)

(1)基本写作格式

5. 正反观点型作文(A&B)(这类题型作文通常从正反两方面来分别论述,最后得出你自己的结论。采用论点加论据写作形式。)

(1)基本写作格式

第二,熟悉英语写作的几个重要概念。

1.英语文章段落结构特点

英语文章段落结构一般有三部分构成:主题句+扩展句+结尾句

(1)主题句:所谓主题句,就是英语文章段落的中心思想句。它是英语文章段落的灵魂,在英语文章段落中居于主导地位。我们都知道英语文章一般喜欢开门见山,所以主题句一般位于英语文章段落的句首。其他句子都要围绕它而展开。

(2)扩展句:所谓扩展句就是为主题句起解释说明或论证的句子。通常我们写扩展句所采用的方法是举例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列数据(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。

(3)结尾句:所谓结尾句就是总结句。英语写作也类似于汉语写作,最后再把自己本段落的写作目的陈述一下。但是在英语写作中结尾句毕竟还是少数。

因此我们通常看到英语的文章段落结构 60%-70%都是由主题句+扩展句构成。

2.主旨句

作为主旨句就是英语文章的中心思想句。英语文章一般首先用一句话概括一下作者的写作目的或意图,我们就把这句话称之为主旨句。没有受过写作训练的考生是不会写主旨句的。因此这样的文章就不能够称之为好的英语文章,自然也得不到阅卷人的青睐了。

第三,学会遣词造句

1.遣词:

(1)词汇等级

所谓词汇的等级就是,我们在写作的过程中,如果想出一个基本词汇来之后,能够在这个基本词汇的基础上把它在提升一下,也就是我们一般写作所提倡的用“难词 ”。比如,我们一提到“重要的”,大多数同学首先会想到“important”这个单词,那么提升一下的话就可以想到它的如下同义词:significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc

(2)词汇准确性

所谓词汇的准确性是指,我们在有一个词近而想到它的同义词之后,要结合语境选择恰当的用词。在这里必须指明的是,并不是词汇等级越高越好,必须还要考虑到适合于不同的语境。比如,眼睛大,这个“大的”形容词,我们首先会想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的词就可以了呢?或者说用上enormous等词更能博得阅卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在这里很明显用后面的词来修饰眼睛是不可以,只能用big,因为我们听过一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl, in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可爱的。

2.造句:

(1)词组

很多考生平时写作不太擅长用词组,对于他们而言最习惯的就是想到汉语,然后对应汉语思维写出英语句子,这种写作只能是单词的罗列组合,谈不上什么技巧文采可言,因此,写出来的文章必然就是所谓平淡如流水,没有英语的味道。如果我们能够在单词的基础上,进一步想到与之同义的词组,那么文章就会显得与众不同,更具有英语的味道。比如上面所说的“重要的”这个单词,当我们想到important的时候,如果从语法角度再稍加考虑一下,我们会想到“be of importance”。因为,语法中规定:形容词等于of加这个形容词的名词形式。如果再提升一步,我们还学过一个常用的词组叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同学说自己的文章凑不够字数或是没有文采,那么采用词组进行写作是不是就可以解决以上问题了呢?

(2)句式

除了采用词组,要使文章更具英语的味道,我们还需要变换句式。没有受过正规作文训练的考生,通常采用的句式多为主谓宾、主系表。于是我们看到大多数的文章充斥着这样的形式:I am a good boy, and I am a student. I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.这样流水帐式的文章显然不能得到高分。

写作中阅卷人喜欢的句式有以下两种:一是插入语;二是倒装。

第一,插入语。

所谓插入语,英语中有两种形式。一种是有两个逗号之间引起的成分称之为插入语;第二种是有两个半破折号引起的成分称之为插入语。如下所示(黑体划线处):

Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.

Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid, material resources, and needed services—that reces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.

插入语的作用主要有两个,一个是突出主语,比如说:He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.

第二个作用是解释说明,比如说:People, especially students, should work hard.

第二,倒装

倒装是我们写作中需要用到的。虽然略显俗套,但是却是很能满足阅卷人的主观感受的。常用的倒装形式有以下几种:

Only + 时间状语

Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.

Only + 介词词组

Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.

Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.

否定词位于句首(hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom)

在我一生当中很难遇到这样的人

Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.

地点方位名词位于句首

In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.

(3)修辞

无论是汉语写作还是英语写作,修辞其实非常的重要。它是作者写作功底具体事例地展现。所谓修辞包括比喻、拟人、排比等等。英语写作中的修辞问题我已经专门写过一篇文章(见《英语写作几种修辞手法》)。这里仅举一个比喻例子,还是拿“重要的”来举例。当你用完词组之后,如果你用上下面比如句子,则文章就会显得神采飞扬,试比较:

The bicycle is important for us.

The bicycle is of importance for us.

The bicycle plays an important role in our life.

The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.

The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.

那么很明显,最后一个句子是我们最终拿到考场上去搏击高分的句子。

第四,平时要注意积累

很多考生为了写好作文也作了好多工作,课下也付出了很多,包括背诵大量的文章等等,但是提笔写作时候,仍不见的有所改观。问题在哪里呢?

我认为,很多考生虽然也背诵文章,但却只是死记硬背。如果合上书本让他复述,他们就会卡壳。就是茶壶里煮饺子,倒不出来。我们说背诵是个输入的过程,而说和写则是输出的过程。我们真正需要的是把平时积累的随时随地用在我们的写作中。因此,我们在注重积累的同时,一定在平时练习的时候,把他们多家运用。只有多练多用,才能真正达到学以致用,才能真正提高写作水平。(济南新东方学校 赵晓栋)

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㈧ 在英语作文中写介绍某地点在哪个方向时,我们是用高级的还是最高级的形式

该句想要表达的是他想要去最近的港口当水手。越近越好所以用最高级表示最近的。

㈨ 求英语作文,写最近发生在你身上的事,要用到下面5个词中的3个词

i alway believe i was loved by God that day,for i met him luckily. but i suddenly fall down infront him, and sadly heard his laughing at me. unexpectedly, he helped me to stand with my feet. and he surprisingly asked is my fault that you fall down at the first sight seeing me? 倾倒版

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