检查作文用英语怎么说

1. 作文用英语怎么说

composition

2. “作文”用英语怎么说

作文：composition n.
How to write the composition “ My weekend “ ?
如何写” 我的周末” 这篇作文？

3. |英语高手进| 帮忙检查英语作文

In any Chinese cities, no slum exists, also no so many begger problems.是否太绝对了些呢？而且语法拼写都有错。
参考： most chinese cities, there are no as many slums and beggar problms as that of india.

In China,food and clothing, minimum housing are no longer problems for anybody, but India still has those problems. 好绝对。
参考：food,clothing and mimimum housing are no longer big problems for most chinese,but not for the majority of indians.

Air-conditioner, computer, motorcycle, cell phones..., these items any Chinese can afford to buy绝对了。语法错误。
参考：air-conditioners,computers,motorcycles,cell phones...nearly any of chinese can afford these items ,at least one of them.

Car is no longer a luxury any more, most of people are able to buy it.
参考：cars are no longer luxurious purchases, for more and more chinese are able to buy one or more.

And cell-phone is very popular with all the teenagers.
参考：and cell phones are popular among all ages of chinese ,especially the teenagers.

But for many Indians, those are still dreams.
参考：but for many indians, having those things is still a dream.

I suppose it is very important for children to have a good environment to study and live.确定点儿。
参考：i am sure it is very important for children to have a goog environment to study and live in .

But in fact,India provides children with a dirty environment. 语法。
参考：but in fact ,indian children are just provided with a dirty and noisy one.

India’s ecation is called ‘rote learning’,few schools pay attention to students’ creative development.
参考：what's worse,india's ecation is called “rote learning”,and many schools don't pay enough atention to students' ceativity development.

A serious problem is that some students can’t go to school,because they are poor,their families aren’t able to do that.语法。...to do that ...is do what?
参考：the most serious problem should be that some students even cannot go to school, because their poor family are not able afford the expenses,

In China most students can have a nice environment to learn knowledges.
参考：while in china ,the government is trying hard to make sure that every child
has a perfect environment to learn konwledge and other things.

India is also an oriental country with a long history. Ancient Indians created a splendid ancient civilization.最好删掉。

Indians never be scared about death,they have hopes and confidence for the future.
与主题无关，删。

From my point of view,Indianness is colourful as Chinese culture.
But there are also some differences between them.第三点你是要讲中印文化上的差别，那么你就应该举几个列子如服装，食物，宗教信仰等，而不是这么笼统地带过
参考：china and india are also different in cultures.chinese usually eat meals with chopsticks while indians with hands；...

India is a unique country.India and China are at different levels.And I believe India will develope fast in the future.
主题是将中印的差异，怎么到最后变成对印度的祝愿了？
参考：generally speaking ,as two old countries ,chian and indian are so different in many aspects like social life and plitical institution.

4. 作文 用英语怎么说

composition

祝你学习进步，更上一层楼！请记得采纳，谢谢！(*^__^*)

5. 写完作文后必须检查一遍用英语怎么说

写完作文后必须检查一遍
After writing the composition, you must check it again

6. 一篇五百字的作文用英语怎么说

a five-hunred-word paper/essay

7. 写作文，用英语怎么说

write a composition

8. 检查一篇英语作文,谢谢!!!!

以下是我的修改,请楼主比照一下.因为写出具体原因太耗时耗力,敬请原谅.如有疑问,请给我发消息.
If I were Jane, would I leave Mr. Rochester?

I can’t understand why Jane left Mr. Rochester after she knew Mr. Rochester had a wife. And I think she was just refusing to enter the heaven.
So if I were Jane, I wouldn't leave Mr. Rochester.
Firstly, I believe that Mr. Rochester loves me, which is a very important reason for me not to leave him.
Next, I think that Mr. Rochester can deal with these things well, because he has so much ability.
Thirdly, if I left him, he would be lonely, very lonely. So I will live with him, and let the time prove that he really loves me .
Last, it's just a imagination that, if Jane didn’t leave Mr. Rochester, maybe the end of this story will be more perfect with less hurt and less pity.

9. 求高手检查英语作文语病

老师们好！我是上海的11年的高考考生，因为觉得作文薄弱所以自己试着写了10年的上海作文题。
写好之后自己感觉还不错，但是似乎缺少一些有文化气息的事例，文笔也不够优美。。。
想请各位老师耐着性子看一下（有点长），估计一下大概可以得多少分（满分70），并且指出还有什么地方应该改进的，谢谢！！

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作文题目：
根据以下材料，选取一个角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章(不要写成诗歌)。
丹麦人去钓鱼会随身带一把尺子，钓到鱼，常常用尺子量一量，将不够尺寸的小鱼放回河里。他们说：“让小鱼长大不更好吗?”两千多年前，我国孟子曾说过：“数罟不入洿池，鱼鳖不可胜食也；”意思是，不要用细密的渔网在池塘里捕捞小鱼，这样才会有更多的鱼。
实际上，其中的道理也贯穿在我们现实生活中的许多方面。

作文全文：
“留下余地”的智慧

曾经，我总喜欢掐着时间办事：在最后一刻起床、在最后一刻叫作业、在最后一刻写完考场作文…曾经，我为自己这种“精确”洋洋自得。直到，一次在外地旅游时因为不小心迷路而错过了回家的火车——哎呀当时那真叫叫天天不应叫地地不灵——眼睁睁看着火车开走，我看看空空的钱包只好无奈地打电话向老爸求援，最后耗时费钱不说还误了之后的安排。从此我开始反思：我是不是办事该给自己留点余地呢？
其实，给自己留下余地是一种正确的生活态度。人在生活中每天都要处理数不清的事情，说不定哪天其中一两件就会因突发因素打乱安排。如果做事总之做得太绝，不留有一点回旋、应变的余地，不可避免地就会产生问题。君不见股票交易的广告、信息都会提醒股民：股市有风险，入市需谨慎？就是因为轻易把重金押在某一支股票上，一旦亏损就是万劫不复。类似的，保健品广告总嘱咐消费者“本品不能替代药物”，也是给自己留下了解释的余地。可见给自己留下余地就能让我们在处理生活中的事情时都有一条后路，使自己得以更轻松顺畅，不至于一有问题就满盘皆输。
在我给自己试着留下余地之后，我渐渐发现有时做人也需要给别人留下余地。这是一种对他人的尊重，也是人和人之间能顺畅交往的基石。就比如说学校里组织一个活动，参与者每个人都有自己的任务。那么我若是作为一个组织者，当有人忙于其他事情而疏忽工作时我是该硬逼他一定要“按时交货”呢，还是根据他的情况调整计划呢？甚至在有人对我心生不满向我提出意见时，我是该针锋相对大吵一架呢，还是心平静气讨论问题呢？答案不言而喻。显然，给别人留有余地，其实就体现在包容别人的错误和意见。退一步才往往是海阔天空，理智、和平的沟通才能发挥效果，让人与人的交流体现出它的价值。
事实上，生活中处处都有“余地”的存在。我们在给别人留下余地的同时，也在接受别人对我们的“余地”。甚至往大里说，生活本身乃至“命运”，都会时刻给我们留下回旋的余地。因此，如何学会利用，进而学会寻找自己的“余地”，就显得很重要了。犯错后接受别人给予的余地，那就要心存感激的同时努力上进、知错就改，这是知耻而后勇的上进心。遭遇困难或失败时不放弃，相信自己、相信生命，积极寻找出路或困难的解决办法，那是信念和毅力。至于如何在找到“余地”后重新开始，最终成功，这又是如何“抓住机遇”的课题了。可见，“余地”是人生中的一门大智慧，值得我们用心去学习。
关于“余地”的思考，以自身为起点、以他人为路线，最终千千万万个“个人”就绘制成了一幅“余地”的巨幅彩绘，融入到了社会的大环境中，和我们每个人息息相关。要让自己被“受压迫”的“余地”牵着鼻子走，还是要踩着厚实的“余地”一路前行？至少我已经得出了自己的答案。
问题补充：最主要是想得到估分和改进意见。。。谢谢各位老师了！
还有补充下，有没有哪位老师愿意留一下QQ或者网上联系方式？