夹叙夹议的英语作文怎么写

⑴ 中考英语作文写作方法

英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢?

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、习作点评

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生习作A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生习作B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into stbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

⑵ 英语作文议论文怎么写

议论文的写作要注意三个要素：1.提出论点；2.组织论据,进行论证；3.得出结论.
常用的论证方法包括夹叙夹议法、例举法、比较对照法、因果法、逻辑推理法（包括归纳法和演绎法）.可以从正面论证,也可以从反面进行反驳.
常规整体构建模式
在一篇文章中,各自然段,各句子都为文章的中心思想服务,各段落之间,句子与句子之间存在着某种逻辑关系.文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成,在修辞中称为启、承、转、合.“启”就是开头,“承”是承接,“转”是转折,“合”是综合或总结,一篇文章
与一段文章一样都有“启、承、转、合”关系.
常规段落构建模式
考研英语写作的文章一般包括一个开头段、若干扩展段和一个结尾段.开头段和结尾段
一般比扩展段短.在这里,主要给同学们分析开头段的写作模式.
开头段一定要语言精练,并且直接切入主题.开头段一般不对主题进行深入的探讨,具体的论证或叙述应该在扩展段进行.一般在开头段写四或五句即可.考生应注意以下若干要点：
1） 开头段的作用
概括陈述主题,提出观点或论点,表明写作意图.
2） 写开头段时考生应该避免的若干问题
① 开头偏离主题太远；
② 使用抱歉或埋怨之词句；
③ 内容不具体,言之无物；
④ 使用不言自明的陈述.
3） 开头段的使用方法
① 使用引语
使用一段名人名言,或人们常用的谚语,习语,以确定文章的写作和方
向；
② 使用具体详实的数字或数据
引用一些具体详实的数字或数据,然后做出概括性分析,指明问题的症
结所在；
③ 提出问题
提出有争议或探讨性的具体问题,然后加以简要回答或展开引导性简短
讨论；
④ 给出背景
描述具体事件的时间、地点和发生背景等；
⑤ 定义法
针对讨论的主题或问题加以定义,然后进行深入探讨；
⑥ 主题句法
文章一开始就以主题句点明全文主题,然后围绕主题内容进行发展

⑶ 英语作文 this time next year

写作思路：写出自己希望的明年的此时想要成为的样子，表达出对自己的期许。

正文：

I think my life will be wonderful at this time next year.

我想，明年此时，我的生活会是美好的。

At this time next year,I will be a senior high student,and I will make a lot of new friends.

明年的这个时候，我将成为一名高中生，我将结交很多新朋友。

l hope to be more independent so that I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English.

我希望能更加独立，这样我就可以参加国外的夏令营来提高我的英语口语。

Also,I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.

另外，我会帮助我的父母做家务，以便知道如何照顾自己。

Life will be totally different,but I'm really looking forward to it.

生活会完全不同，但我真的很期待。

⑷ 宁泽涛英语作文。夹叙夹议。

NingZetao was born in ZhengZhou,HeNanprovince on March 6 ,1993. He is the Chinese navy’s swimming athlete, and he
has 1.91 meters tall . This benefits of swimming a lot . What’s more ,he isChina’s power
pop idol .
The
Asian games in incheon ,2014 ,he has win the four gold medals . He has such a
big achievement from his efforts in normals times . Due to the weak ,he was
learn to swim . In the end , He became a good swimmer . However , “My
parents regart that allowed me to be a swimmer .” He said .
“They think that as a athelet is very hard.” But he proved that he is a
man of great to us .

⑸ 求历年各地高考英语作文范文，要有题目与范文，要有书信。日记。通知。看图。夹叙夹议。食物介绍。记叙类

《5年高考英语满分作文》这本书就不错，不仅仅有各地最新五年（当然包括2010年）考高满分作文，还有范文。我高考的时候用的就是这本书！如果我没有记错你说的内容上面都有，真的不错！新华书店就有的卖！

⑹ 求夹叙夹议英语作文120字

Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools.
Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas ecation is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.
After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the ecational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?
We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.

⑺ 如何写高考英语记叙类作文

嘿嘿，我们老师的经典原则，用起来很好用，就是用简单的句子写简单的话，但是高考一定版得高分。因为阅权卷老师在短时间改大量的文章，肯定无暇去欣赏你的优美文风，最多就是挑错，如果没有错，当然就是高分了（他每年都要去改高考作文哈。） 至于具体的东西，你可以背个两三篇范文（信啊，事啊），这样写的时候就有一个良好的格式，而且开头几句大都雷同，你只要改一点就可以了。呵呵，剩下的，就是想怎么简单怎么写了。先把简单句想好，再写，卷面一好，成绩也大大提高。 我高考英文作文大概23哈，还算不错，差不多就是怎么简单怎么写了。希望你加油哈。