一模英语作文怎么叙事

① 2016中考松江一模英语作文influenced me most

作文如下：

My father is the person who has had a great influence on me. He is a farmer, and he has the virtures that every farmer has. For example, hardworking, hardships, honesty, wisdom and so on.

我父亲是对我有很大影响的人。他是一个农民，他有着每个农民都有的美德。例如，勤奋、艰辛、诚实、智慧等等。

When I was young, he always told me that people should enjoy their lives, work hard and create better life by our own hands. I remembered the most impression words that he told me, that is No.

当我年轻的时候，他总是告诉我，人们应该享受生活，努力工作，用自己的双手创造更好的生活。我记得他告诉我的印象最深刻的一句话，那就是“不”。