什么是英语情景作文怎么写
『壹』 高考英语作文怎么写高考英语作文如何答高分
一、几点重要原则
1.智者利用押题，傻子依赖押题!
2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达，并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要!
3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强，尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。
4.文似看山不喜平，起承转合一定要有!
5.“见微知著，一叶知秋”，几个亮点足矣：有道是：浓妆淡抹总相宜，作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。
6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。
二、善用万能句以不变应万变
历届高考，书面表达考得最多是提示作文，即提供一定的情景内容，要求考生完成100词左右的短文。
从命题方式看，有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等;体裁以应用文为主，记叙文为辅：题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看，历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文，采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。
备考时，同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下，从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳)，把它们重新记忆，一定记牢。这样，高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。
最后阶段，还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式，比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等，牢记英语的五个基本句式，背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。
考场答题前，应仔细审题，研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点，理顺要点，确立基本的写作思路，不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏，构思好写几个方面，缺一不可。
写作时，尽量用学过的英语句型和词组。少写长句和复杂句以免弄巧成拙、漏洞百出。但目前高考有关书面表达的评分标准要求作文中应有“较多的语法结构和词汇”，因此同学们在书面表达中不能都写小句、短句和单句，还要正确运用高级词汇和复杂结构。恰当运用过渡词，使写出来的文章含金量更高，更具可读性。
三、高分作文六大特性
1.条理性。指的是合理安排文章结构。首先，在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次。根据需要，安排好段落，各段之间要层次分明，也要重视每一段的开头和结尾，开头语往往是总起句，结尾语往往是总结句。
2.准确性。指要求写出语法正确的句子，包括时态、语态、用词和句法等，要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达，避免中式英语，在实践中不断总结中英用法的差异，养成用英语思维写作的习惯。
3.流畅性。指根据整篇文章思想的需要，有效采用不同的连接手段，使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。
4.简洁多样性。简洁性就是语言简洁，不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。这也是新课程标准对写作的评价标准。
5.思想性。新标准对写作的要求，增加了情感因素，在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时，适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。
6.美观性。指的是卷面书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。
四、怎样才能有‘拽”的感觉
1.高考写作的实质——变相考查句型与词汇的灵活应用
英语写作不同于语文作文的写作，如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容，是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是不要老去给这个不变的内容穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让阅卷老师能看到不同，而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。
2.写作的评分标准——怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口
我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右，写作满分25分，15分也就是个及格分，那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是全都是简单句子的堆砌，没有任何亮点。而20多分的作文在句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子穿的'衣服已经不是校服，而是李宁、耐克，或者是阿迪，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉。
3.写作提分的三要素——句型。连词。高级词汇
句子是我们写作文最大的单位。有了漂亮的句子。用好的连词将其连句成段，再加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀，一篇好的高考英语作文就诞生了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子，最难的是高级词汇，限于大家的词汇还比较有限。一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上，因为这个最容易把握。
但是大家又有这样的困惑，学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊，动辄成五十上百句的，大家背得挺多，但是面对考试的时候，发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用，而是它们太干了，就好比一根干骨头，大家嚼起来很没有味。也不知道该把它们往哪里放。
在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行、迅速提高的练习方法，在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来，就一定会有收获。
找出历年真题，一周只需要写两篇。但是要这么来写。
1.把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。
2.逐一地进行翻译，不是用简单句。而是要刻意地去想：
(1)可以用什么样的复杂句;
(2)怎样去避开不会的表达，转义。
例如：
这本书是如此的有趣，以至于我读了一遍又一遍。
1.This book was so interest，ing that l read it again and again，
2.This was such an interest，ing book that l read it again andagain，
3.This was s0 jnteresting abook that l read it again and a—gain
4.So interesting was thisbook that l read it again and a—gain
这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句，因为它用了倒装。
4.如何备考
其实这种思维大家都有。但是没有成为一种思路，让它能在考试中起到作用，那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地，一方面大家要分数。但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说，有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文，所以练习是很重要的，要是现在不练而把高考当练习。那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了，到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平，而应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇。时间都是挤出来的，希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。
『贰』 英语作文,请用至少五句话描述自己去餐厅吃饭的情景。
写作思路及要点：以教师节作文为题，围绕这一主题展开详细描写，接着表达自己的想法以及观点。
正文：
I was there a little late, the restaurant was already full of people.
It was difficult to find a place, fortunately I finally found one.
Twenty minutes after, a server came to me and asked what I wanted.
I told her to serve me a fried rice and a cola, then she went back to the kitchen.
Another twenty minutes passed, there came my lanche.
It was a really a hard experience.
我到那里晚了一点，餐馆里已经挤满了人。
很难找到一个地方，幸运的是我终于找到了一个。
二十分钟后，一个服务员过来问我想要什么。
我告诉她给我一份炒饭和一杯可乐，然后她回到厨房。
又过了二十分钟，我的兰奇来了。
这真是一次艰难的经历。
『叁』 美景的英语怎么写作文
1. 描写景色的英语作文 带翻译
英：Do not know how long the effect, as if the fight was a nervous graally revealing the known, the field from its broad chest in long plume from the atmosphere on the slopes and there is water ongenerally spread at the Qingming, round trees and crops have begun to sway in the breeze, the leaves bee calm and. Dew back in the early morning and evening wetting the ridge, quietly put up the field. Lu Lan also came upquietly afloat, no longer go back to the valley. Although the sun is still bright, but the pain is no longer the backbone of Sunburn people bee, Kiyosumi, as if it was weak, and can not be distilled into a field, it is the field of reconciliation and the like; 。 。 Autumn is here!
中：不知道从多久起，仿佛一场紧张的拼搏终于渐渐地透出了分晓，田野从它宽阔的胸膛里透过来一缕悠悠的气息，斜坡上和坝子上有如水一般的清明在散开，四下里的树木和庄稼也开始在微风里摇曳，树叶变得从容而宽余。露水回来了，在清晨和傍晚润湿了田埂，悄悄地挂上田间。露岚也来到了坝子上，静静地浮着，不再回到山谷里去。阳光虽然依旧明亮，却不再痛炙人的脊梁，变得宽怀、清澄，仿佛它终于乏力了，不能蒸融田野了，也就和田野和解了似的；……秋天来了！
2. 英文作文写景的怎样写
Summer 浪漫夏日
Summer afternoon—summer afternoon; to me those have always been the o most beautiful words.
夏日的下午-喜爱日的下午；对我来说，这几个字一直是英语语言中最美丽的两个字。
Summer is the glorious time of the year when most of us can put on our shorts and short-sleeved shirts and actually feel the air and sunlight on our skin; when we don't have to turn up the heat in the morning when we get up;but also when we lay hot and sweaty in bed, unable to sleep at times (those of us who don't have air conditioning, anyway);when we get the sunburn and the heatstroke and all those wonderful things.
浪漫夏季，这是一年中最灿烂的季节，我们可以穿上短裤，短袖衬衣，尽情地感受着夏日的空气以及播撒在皮肤上的阳光；我们不必要在清晨起床后就去打开暖气；当然我们也会满身是汗，燥热地躺在床上，而无法入眠（那些没有空调设施的人们）；有了一身夏日晒斑，中了暑，这一切都是我们经历着夏日的美妙事情。
Summer is a sailor in a rowboat and ice-cream on your dress when you're four years old.Summer is a man with his coat off, wet sand beeen your toes, the *** ell of a garden an hour before moonrise.Summer is silk itself,a giant geranium and music from a flute far awary!
夏日是一叶小舟上的船夫，是你四岁时不小心沾在裙子上的冰淇琳。夏日是 *** 着上身的男人，是浸入你脚趾间的湿漉漉的沙子，夏日还是朝阳初升前一小时的那花园里的清香味。夏日就是那丝绸段，那盛开的天竺葵，以及从远方飘来的悠悠长笛声！
No matter how we see it, summer has a magic that we can't deny—all four seasons do. Here to those who have addressed that magic:enjoy your summer!
不管我们如何看待它，夏季总有着那么一种我们无法否认的魔力—每个季节独有的魔力。谨以此节目献给那些演绎着夏日 *** 魔力的人们：请尽情享受你们的夏日乐趣！
3. 求一篇关于写乡村美景的英语作文
Last summer vacation, my parents asked me where I wanted to travel. I answered, since I had not see my grandfather and grandmother for long time, how about to see them. My parents *** iled and nodded with admiring.
My grandpa and grandma live in a mountain village. After three hours on the coach, we reached a hill entry. When I get off the coach, I saw a familiar figure, my uncle. Beside him, there was a cow carriage. My uncle told us that he followed my grandpa and
4. 英语作文60字写乡下的美景带翻译
last summer vacation, my parents asked me where i wanted to travel. i answered, since i had not see my grandfather and grandmother for long time, how about to see them. my parents *** iled and nodded with admiring.
my grandpa and grandma live in a mountain village. after three hours on the coach, we reached a hill entry. when i get off the coach, i saw a familiar figure, my uncle. beside him, there was a cow carriage. my uncle told us that he followed my grandpa and
5. 写南通美景的英语作文
Wele to my hometown!Shanghai is my hometown.It is a modern and busy town.It has a long history.There are many big supermarkets,beautiful gardens and good factories here.It is very easy to go shopping.You can see big trees and nice flowers.There are many restaurants in Shanghai.The food tastes very delicious.You can enjoy eyery minutes of it.Many visitors e here to enjoy it。
6. 描写一个地方的景色英语作文 （带翻译）
Beautiful sceneryDuring the summer vacation, my mother took me to the south of the Yangtze River touri *** .The good, the beautiful scenery, I still can not fet.One morning, I watch the sunrise on the Bank of the river, that river deep blue is blue eyes. Not for a moment, Water-day phase transfer line of golden light, the sky aglow. Clouds are red.The sky, the sun seems to carry the burden of a longitudinal vertical upward, finally out of water, with a dazzling light, to open her eyes. At this time, as long as we raised his head can see the birds in the sky fly.Riverside flowers also seems to be in the sun with the bright colors: orange, red, pink, purple·· · · · ·they were open to us *** iling.At this time, the golden Canna will water bearing on the blue river lining up, looks so sweet and charming, is really inlge in pleasures without stop. Look at it from a distance, like a blue ribbon.The scenery is so beautiful, so an inlge in pleasures without stop!
江南美景
暑假里，妈妈带我去江南旅游。
江南可美啦，那美丽的风景至今我还无法忘记。
一天早晨，我在江边观看日出，当时江水深蓝色好是蓝蓝的 眸子。不到一会，水天相接的交接线出现了金色的亮光，天空一片通红。白云也被染红了。
天边，太阳好像负着重担似的一纵一纵往上升，最后终于跳出水面，射出一道道刺眼的光芒，使人睁不开眼睛。此时，只要我们抬起头就可以看见雁群在天上自由的飞。
江边的鲜花似乎也被太阳染上了鲜艳的色彩：橘黄的、红的、粉红的、紫红的······它们竟相开放向我们露出灿烂的笑容。
这时，那金黄的美人蕉将的江水承托起蓝蓝的江水衬托起，显得那么甜静迷人，真令人流连忘返。从远处看它，好似一条蓝蓝的绸带。
江南景色是那么美，那么令人流连忘返！
7. 写丽水的美景英语作文
My hometown is the Zhejiang Lishui, is a very beautiful city,throughout the year as beautiful as a painting. Spring, on themountain the bird sounds, the hundred flowers open, the sunlightscatters down from the leaf beeen, according to on the place, treebeeen on the forest also has each kind of bird. In the autumn, thehometown also has very many delicacies the fruit, I love hometownLishui.。
8. 写景的英语作文
Autumn of Beijing （北京的秋天：）
Beijing in Autumn is more beautiful than other seasons. Red leaves in Xiang Moutain, the Great Wall,the Summer Place and so on .
Actually Autumn is not the best time since the temperature is still too high. And the real time that red leaves full fille the Fragrant Hill (xiang shan should be translated in this way) is in October, around the golden week on October 1st.
the symbol of Beijing as well as of China; Tiananmen Square, the largest city square in the world; the former Imperial Palace (the "Forbidden City"), the largest and best-preserved ancient architectural plex in the world; and the Great Wall at Badaling, one of the "seven wonders of the world." Of these, the former Imperial Palace, the Great Wall, the site of Peking Man at Zhoukoudian, the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven are on the UNESCO World Cultural
I live in Chineae Shandong AProvince,I love my hometown very much.
我住在 中国 山东 省 ，我非常爱我的家乡.
Shandong is a beautiful local.Here,in spring birdie clustering,fragrance of a flower are cheerful person,is
山东 是一个美丽的地方.这里，在 春天 小鸟 成群 ，花香怡人 ，美
extremely beautiful;Cicada sound is in summer extremely rise from all directions,boisterous;The fallen
丽极了 ；夏天蝉声四起 ，热闹极了 .秋天，
leaf flies about in profution in autumn,big and ripe fruits is heaps of,the peasant city finishes getting good
落叶纷飞 ，硕果累累 ，农民都会得到好丰收
harvest;White snow is pure white in einter,a silvery world,is very beautiful.Come my homgtown to be a
；冬天白雪皑皑 ，一片银白色的世界，非常美丽 .欢迎大家来我的家乡做客.
guest on weling everybody.
按照你的水平写的，你也就这水平了，能写出这也不错了.我没学过写景作文，你将就着看
『肆』 写一篇介绍早晨公园情景的英语作文 要翻译的 谢谢 通过给分
The park are full of people in the morning.Everyone knows doing exercise is good for health.Look!There are a group of old men under the big tree.They are doing Taiji.There are lots of young men playing table tennis.The old women are near the table.They are dancing.Some young children are walking with their parents in the park.早晨公园里满是人.人人都知道锻炼有益健康.看,在大树下有一群老年人,他们在打太极拳.有许多年轻人在打乒乓球.在球台附近有些老大娘在跳舞.一些小孩子在父母的陪伴下在公园里散步.
『伍』 小学生写景的英语作文
优美景色，很多人都喜欢。小学生写景英语作文也比较好写，写出具体的景色以及景色诱人的地方，需要有一定的单词积累、语法储备以及语言组织能力，结合自身的英语知识储备情况，我为大家准备了以下三篇关于写景的英语作文，从简到难，单词字数由少到多，希望帮到大家哦~
【三】🌸🌸🌸案例来咯
英语作文：
Beijing in Autumn is more beautiful than other seasons.Red leaves in Xiang Moutain,the Great Wall,the Summer Place and so on .
Actually Autumn is not the best time since the temperature is still too high.And the real time that red leaves full fille the Fragrant Hill (xiang shan should be translated in this way) is in October,around the golden week on October 1st.
the symbol of Beijing as well as of China; Tiananmen Square,the largest city square in the world; the former Imperial Palace (the "Forbidden City"),the largest and best-preserved ancient architectural complex in the world; and the Great Wall at Badaling,one of the "seven wonders of the world." Of these,the former Imperial Palace,the Great Wall,the site of Peking Man at Zhoukoudian,the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven are on the UNESCO World Cultural Heritage List.
翻译：
北京的秋天比其他季节更美丽。红叶在香山，长城，避暑山庄等。事实上，秋天不是最好的时间，因为温度仍然太高。而红叶真正满满香山(香山应该这么翻译)的时间是在10月，在10月1日黄金周前后。它是北京和中国的象征;天安门广场，世界上最大的城市广场;前故宫(“紫禁城”)，世界上最大、保存最完好的古建筑群;八达岭长城是“世界七大奇迹”之一。其中，故宫、长城、周口店北京人遗址、颐和园和天坛被列入联合国教科文组织世界文化遗产名录。
『陆』 《放学时教室里的情景,英语作文不少于5句话》
《放学时教室里的情景,英语作文不少于5句话》
After school, there are lots of boys playing basketball on it. I think they are happy. There are a lot of flowers and trees in my school. They are beautiful. I like my school. In my school, I have many friends. All my friends are polite and helpful. My friends are all nice to me. They can make me happy. So I like playing with them
写放学时教室里的情景用英文怎么写不少于5句, 写一写放学时教室里的情景,不少虚蚂与5句话。用英文
School was over.Some students who had little interest in the subjects or had something urgent to do went out without delay,part of other students were busy tidying up their stationery,and part of other students cleaned the classroom,such as sweeping the floor,brushing the blackboard ,making the desks and chairs in order.The teacher looked around the classroom at the platform,wondering whether some students had a few questions to ask him.He seated himself on the chair and a bit of *** ile came to his face at last, for a student came up to him with some questions.Teaching and helping students settle down problems of the subject is a great fun to the teacher.He was so learned and so patient that the student was very satisfied with him when the questions were settled down.The student had the feeling that he gained a lot of knowledge from the teacher.After a while,the teacher realized that there would be no other students asked him anything and left.The remaining students finished cleaning the classroom and left one by one,leaving the classroom empty which seemed a little tranquil.
放学了。一些对科目没什么兴趣或有急事要做的学生毫不犹豫地离去。其他的学生部分忙着收拾自己的文具，部分忙着打扫教室，譬如扫地、刷黑板、将桌椅摆整齐。教师在讲台上环视教室，想知道是否有学生有问题要问他。他坐在椅子上，最后，脸上露出了一丝微笑，因为有个学生带着问题朝他走了上来。教学和帮助学生们解决本科目问题对他而言是件极大的乐事。他学识如此渊博并且有耐心，以至于当问题得到解答时那个学生对他很满意。那个学生有种从老师那里获得很多知识的感觉。过了一会儿，老师意识到不差缓埋再有任何学生问他什么就离开了。剩下的学生打扫完后逐个走了，剩下空空的教室哪哪，显得有点宁静。
翻译一下放学时教室里的情景英语
翻译一下放学时教室里的情景英语
The scene which happened in the classroom when school was over.
The scene of the classroom while the schoo was over
The scene of the classroom at the time of di *** issing school.
The scene of the classroom after school.
写，放学后，教室的前景，英语作文，不少于五句话
Let me introce the teaching building to you .Teaching building is in the middle of the school which has six floors.The third floor have a large reading room ,o puter rooms and three science labs.We have puter lessons in puter rooms and we all like this lesson You can read books in the reading room because there are a lot of books in it .In front of the teaching building,there is a beautiful garden.We ofen read English there in the morning.And sound lab is on the second floor
教室里的幸福作文不少于600字
以前的教室里面什么现代化仪器也没有，就是桌子、椅子和黑板，学习起来非常烦。除了看书就是看黑板，一点也不好玩。很多时候单靠老师的一张嘴、一支粉笔和一块黑板是远远不能让我们更深刻的了解课文。后来学校给每个年级配置了二、三台投影仪。可之后的新麻烦又出现了，有时候会四、五个班级同时需要学习，经常会发生抢投影仪的事。为了我们的学习，学校重新给每个班级安装了投影仪，现在的课堂每天都播放动听的音乐、有趣的影片、优美的图画，每天都带给我们不一样的感觉。
以前喝水可是个难题。早晨上学时我们在家灌一瓶水带到学校，即使节省著但也总也不够喝，到了下午我们的小嘴总会干干的。爸爸妈妈都很无奈。为了我们祖国的花朵，学校决定给我们每个班级安了一个饮水机，现在我们随时能喝到冷热适宜、干净卫生的饮用水。
我还听说以后学校还会给我们每个班安装一台空调------这真是一天更比一天幸福！
党和人民 *** 给我们这么多，在越来越好的学习环境下，我们没有理由不认真学习。我们只有努力学习，奋发向上，以优异的成绩为党争光，为党添彩！
放学后教室里场景英语作文
放学了，同学们陆陆续续走出了校门，校园里剩下孤独的教室和看管学校的保安。天色已晚，天空逐渐翻红，几丝彩霞慢悠悠地漂染着白云。这时，保安叔叔也骑上摩托车飞奔而去，只留下几缕白烟在校门口徘徊。教室的门窗紧闭着，不留半点缝隙。孤独的教室啊！
教室里的空气，慢慢的不新鲜了，不怎么流动了，就连粘在墙角边上的蜘蛛网也不再被风吹得晃动了。教室里的粉笔、黑板和讲台也失去了原有的色彩，“灰色”占据了整个教室！粉笔灰洒落在地上，没有飞舞，安静地休息了。课桌椅正被那种孤独所包围起来，闷得慌。教室里听不见一点声响，就连小虫子也睡了！窗帘不再像早晨那样轻舞飞扬了，它一动不动地站在那儿，坚定地守护着玻璃窗，而那些白天明亮的玻璃窗，到了这时候，也被黑夜“染”得漆黑，就算站在窗子旁边，也不再透明了！教室上方的吊灯，不会亮了，犹如长眠了一样。地板不再光滑了，它，无故地失去了光彩，甚至说得上是粗糙，它就那样默默地哭泣，但没哭成声来。书本，它被孤独抢走了作为一本书的荣耀，拿不回来了！教室里死气沉沉，没有一点生气。
用英语写一写放学时的情景,不少于5句话,用现在进行时
We are very excited to hear the bell ringing. Class is over!
Some of the students are cleaning the class room. Five boys are playing basketall on the playground, and few girls are dacing. Kate and Xiaoming are sitting on the bench. And I am walking to the teacher's office with John, because we have some questions to ask for her. Every one is doing their own things after school.
英语作文初夕不少于5句话
The Spring Festival is ing. It is my favourite festival. During the festival, I want to play with my cousins happily. We both grew up together since childhood, has been to primary school, we have not seen for many years
This summer I'm going to take the exam, I wanted to test the Tsinghua University, so I need to learn as well, I would have to exercise to stay healthy. I have developed a good exercise program. 6:00 exercise, running 11:00, 19:00 jump Square Dance.
I plan to visit my friends and read books together. We’ll watch fireworks.
I’ll visit my relatives with my family. We gather together, watching the Spring Festival evening party, enjoy delicious food， I would like to eat mplings.
The most exciting thing ring the festival is getting red pockets. I hope I would get a lot of money this year. I’m looking forward to the festival.
【英语作文】A trip to a park 不少于5句话
A Trip To A Park
Yesterday，my family and I went to ZhongShan Park. It was great！ I saw many trees and flowers. The trees were green and strong. I can climbed it. The flowers were red and *** all. They were beautiful，too. Do you think so？ Then we went to the river.The river is big clean and blue. Suddenly， I felt everything is colourful and beautiful. Maybe it was cause of the river. I felt ererything is lovely， too. We rode boats. First， I felt afraid. Then， I sat in the boat. We can pick balloons. I think it was fun， too. And we were happy. After thirty minutes. We went to the bank. At last， we walked and took a lot of photos. We saw Linzexu. He is strong and he is handsome.I took photos in front of him. It was beautiful. I think Linzexu is very great！ He is my example！ Then， the sky was getting dark. And wo took car and went home. It was a lovely and great trip！ Isn't it？