插叙英语作文怎么写

㈠ 英语作文怎么提升，想说的话不知道怎么用英语表达出来

平常记忆单词时来，源同时也要记它们的用法，即词法，如enjoy，动词，后接名/代/动名词。英语中有许多词的固定用法，固定短语你都得把它记下来，写作的时候就按你记得他们的用法来写那个句子就行了。另外，英语中有许多固定的句式结构，这些固定的句式，你也得把它记下来，写作时同样套用这些固定的句式，不能自己创造句子。你写出的英文，必须符合英语的那五大基本句型。用英语的思维去写英语作文，决不能写成汉语式的英语。平常多背诵一些课本中的范文，还有英语中的一些特殊句型，名言、警句等。读书破万卷，下笔如有神，背的多了，记得多了，看的多了，自然而然拿起笔你就会写了！

㈡ 介绍自己家庭的英语作文70字~80字

写作思路：

正文：

I have a happy and warm family. There are: hardworking mother, able father, smart sister, and lovely me.

我有一个幸福、温馨的家庭。有：勤劳的妈妈、能干的爸爸、聪明的姐姐，还有可爱的我。

My father is a worker. He gets up early and works late every day. Sometimes I came back at 12:00 p.m. my father worked so hard every day for my sister and I to study hard. Dad, I will study hard! My mother is a qualified housewife. Every day, my sister and I have to escape my mother's nagging.

我的爸爸是一名工人，每天起早贪黑的工作。有时到了晚上12：00才回来，爸爸每天这么辛苦的工作，都是为了我和姐姐能够好好学习。爸爸我一定会努力学习的!我的妈妈是一个合格的家庭主妇，每天，我和姐姐都要逃避妈妈的唠叨。

When she comes back from work every day, I almost recite the words: have you finished your homework? Let your sister check and check when it is finished, eat quickly, read some books after dinner, go to bed early, get up early tomorrow, don't be late for school Well, if my mother doesn't nag at night, she's going to nag my sister and me out of the cocoon.

她每天下班回来唠叨的话，我都快背下来了：作业写完了没有?写完了让你姐姐检查检查，快点吃饭，一会儿吃完饭再看会儿书，早点睡觉，明天好得早起呢，上学别迟到了……唉，妈妈如果不唠叨晚上都不着觉，都快把我和姐姐的耳朵唠叨出茧子了。

My sister is a smart girl. She was admitted to high school last year. But my sister is very fat. You see, she is only 18 years old and has more than 120 kg. Well, no one can help it. However, my sister has designed a weight loss table for herself, such as: getting up in the morning, turning hula hoops for an hour, and not eating meat at noon.

我的姐姐是个聪明的女孩，这不去年考高中，她就被录取了。不过我姐姐很胖你看才18岁就120多斤，唉，谁也没办法，不过我姐姐给自己设计了一个减肥表，比如：早上起床转一个小时的呼啦圈，中午不吃荤之类的。

However, my sister couldn't hold on to it for a few days. That night, my sister ate the refrigerator empty and gained a lot of weight. Alas, who will help her? I am the happy fruit of the family. If I am not here, the home will be deserted. Only I am at home will be full of laughter and happiness. Therefore, my father will not let me go out. Alas, I am bored at home all day It's a way! I run out to play quietly. Sometimes I run out when my father is taking a nap. Sometimes when my father is not at home, he doesn't know, ha ha.

可是这样还没几天，我姐姐就坚持不住了，那天晚上我姐姐就把冰箱吃了个空，这不体重又增重了不少，唉，谁来救救她啊!我，是家里的开心果，如果我不在，家里就冷清清的，只有我在家里才会充满欢笑与快乐，所以我爸爸就不让我出门，唉，整天闷在家里也不是个办法呀!我就悄悄的跑出去玩，有时候趁爸爸午睡的时候跑出去，有时候趁爸爸不在家的时候，反正他也不知道，哈哈。

This is my family, a family full of happiness. Welcome to my house.

这就是我的家庭，一个充满幸福的滋味的'家庭。欢迎不你来我家做客。

㈢ 邀请别人植树节一起植树英语作文

写作思路：言之有序，条理要清楚。根据所述时间选择合理的顺序来安排材料。一般叙事顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种。详略得当，突出重点。一般事件的材料有主次之分，能体现文章中心的材料是主要材料，这部分要详写，次要内容可略写或不写，主次分明，给读者以深刻的印象。

Today is planting day。Our class have a meaningful activity。All of our classmates go to plant flowers outside the school gate。We got the flower seeding from others。We first cleaned the weeds and then g small pits。

After we put the seeds in the pits，we watering them。Because of this activity，we realize that working is tired but happy。We decided to take care these flower seeds regularly。And we hope we can see the beautiful flowers quickly。

今天是植树节。我们班举行了一次有意义的活动。我们全班到校门口外种花。我们从别人那里得到花的种子。我们首先清除杂草，然后挖小坑。

我们把种子放到坑里就给它们浇水。因为这次活动，我们意识到劳动虽然累但也开心。我们决定有规律地照顾这些花苗。我们也希望可以快点看到美丽的花朵。

㈣ 英语作文：大家帮我看下作文有没有什么语法问题，或者用词不恰当，谢了。 内容是感谢邻居帮忙照看小狗

1.he has become one of the member 可以写成：he has been a member of our family
2.on vacation着重于度假中吧，感觉不大好，你可以这样写：when our family decieded to go to Rome for a vacation.或者你直接把后面的on vacation去掉也行，它和前面的have a trip 存在意义上的重复了（Roman是罗马人，罗马是Rome ）
3.you propsed that you were willing to attend him, at heart.这句话我没看懂你要写什么propsed应该是一个错误的单词吧，我查字典都没找到，如果你要写建议的话应该是proposed，承诺应该是promised
4.感觉你第二段全部用逗号，这样不大好。一句话说完了该用句号就要用句号。不然的话就变成一句非常长的长句，这时的谓语动词都要小心。还有你的内容链接不上。前面“when we got home ”下面却没与之对应的句子，插叙写了些后，把原意给忘了，这也是要注意到。最后要注意连词的运用，你这篇没用什么连词，其实连词用的好的话，经常可以增加文章亮点，你第二段用了那么多逗号却只用了一个and,而且说实在的，这个and放在这里我都觉得没什么必要，“ but,to my relief, ”倒是用的不错，可以记些语句间的连词，看看它们的用法，这样你的作文会更漂亮。
我写作一般都靠语感，所以说的也不准，还是看看其他人的意见，综合一下比较好。