怎么评论一篇作文英语作文

⑴ 请大家帮我找一篇关于对餐厅评论的英语作文30字

写作思路：写作时从大处着手，尽量阐述自己的看法或者思想，全面详细的解答问题，并且紧扣问题的中心，把要表达的内容完整表述出来。

i am li ming, a second year student in the ecation department of ouf university. i"m writing to inform you of the true conditions of our canteen service.

i don"t know how to begin my account because the service is really bad. please read my letter patiently and do something about it. we would be grateful for whatever you do for us students.

firstly, the quality of the food is bad. for instance, the rice is too hard. what"s more, some dishes are not fresh sometimes. as a matter of fact, the poor food has already caused some stomach problems among the students.

secondly, the service is not good enough. some staff members give us short measure when they are in a bad mood. now and then they behave like robbers, robbing you of your appetite. worst of alit they never smile.

thirdly, the price is too high. a small cake made from rice and dates cost as much as 0.6 yuan! it will cost us a good 6 yuan to fill our stomach with such cakes. after all we are poor students.

i wish my opinion would call your attention to the canteen service on campus. we are badly in need of your help.

looking forward to an early reply.

我是李明，一个二年级的学生在教育部门ouf大学。我写信是想告诉你我们的餐厅服务的真实条件。

我不知道如何开始我的帐户，因为服务是非常糟糕的。请耐心阅读我的信，请做点什么。我们会感激你为我们做的学生。

首先，食物的质量是不好的。例如，米饭太硬。更重要的是，有时一些菜不新鲜。事实上，穷人食品已经导致一些胃病在学生中。

其次，服务不够好。一些工作人员给我们短测量时心情不好。然后他们像强盗，抢劫你的食欲。最糟糕的下车他们从不微笑。

第三，价格太高了。一个小蛋糕由大米和日期成本高达0.6元！它将花费我们一个好的6元填填肚子吧这样的蛋糕。毕竟我们是贫困学生。

我希望我的意见能提醒您注意校园的食堂服务。我们急需你的帮助。

期待早日答复。

⑵ 如何用英语评论英语作文

先写一下文章总体内容，说说哪里好哪里不好，然后说说文章的现实意义。

⑶ 关于评论电影的英语作文

第1篇 英文：
Although Lei Feng left in a hurry, but leave us precious wealth. -- "
Lei Feng, the shock of universal name! When it comes to Lei Feng, my heart is always filled with respect and gratitude, especially after watching the movie "Lei Feng", this move is particularly strong.
No smoke of the battlefield on the screen, but each picture was so touching story; no extraordinary, plot twists and turns, but every detail was so exciting......
The movie "Lei Feng" tells the story of Uncle Lei Feng put one's heart and soul into serving the people's story. Was this a seemingly ordinary things, make Lei Feng in the hearts of the people to establish a very tall figure.
"No matter what position, I will do everything in my power, tried in every way to serve the people." This, Lei Feng -- a good son of the people! Outstanding member of the Communist party!
Each plot in the film is deeply moved me, however, the most let me unforgettable is Lei Feng for the victims.
Once, Lei Feng and his comrades driving transporting flood control materials to the disaster areas, to unload supplies, Lei Feng do not eat rice will return. Before he left, he took the opportunity to sneak an envelope was ready on the table, the envelope marked "with one hundred yuan donated to the disaster areas the people's Liberation Army soldiers". Beam director of the flood control headquarters after know, hurried to catch up, want to put the money back to Lei Feng, Lei Feng would take? Then, the beam director to see Lei Feng fall down an old pair of socks have mixed feelings, said: "you, you're wearing the socks, has donated one hundred dollars!?" He turned, the presence of people said: "comrades, this is not the one hundred dollars and a pair of thousands of joint million patch socks, this is a tremendous spiritual wealth!"
As you can imagine, this "one hundred yuan" was how huge amount! This can not but let us ponder: with only six yuan monthly allowance, save one hundred yuan of money is how not easy! However, who knows, Lei Feng's life is very simple: thirsty, refused to drink a bottle of that only five cents of soda; heat, even a sweat towel also did not carry...... But put those old socks, fill fill...... However, the people in the disaster areas have a difficult time, but he had no scruples, loosen one's purse strings generously, this is such a huge contrast!
At this time, the screen where everyone was excited; now, I had tears off screen. Who is not for Lei Feng's noble deeds and moved?
What is this spirit? This is work hard and perseveringly, thrift revolutionary spirit. Lei Feng's good qualities of this selfless dedication, sacrifice oneself to protect others is proud of the Chinese nation, is the pride of the Chinese people!
"A man's life is limited, but service to the people is limitless. I will dedicate my limited life to infinite serve for the people."
The film ended, Lei Feng's voice still echoes in my ears, my heart is not quiet for a long time -- although Lei Feng left us too early, however, he has left us with a very great wealth. This wealth, for you, I, he, the benefit of the whole society. I believe, this precious wealth will forever be handed down from age to age!
翻译中文：
雷锋虽然匆匆地离开了，然而却给我们留下了宝贵的财富。——题记

雷锋，这个震撼环宇的名字！每当提起雷锋，我的内心总会充盈着崇敬与感激，特别是在观看了电影《雷锋》之后，这种感动尤为强烈。

银幕上没有硝烟弥漫的战场，可是每个画面竟那么感人至深；故事里没有离奇、曲折的情节，可是每个细节竟那么扣人心弦……

电影《雷锋》讲述的是雷锋叔叔全心全意为人民服务的故事。竟是这一件件看似平凡的小事，使雷锋在人们的心中树立起无比高大的形象。

“不管在什么岗位上，我都要尽一切力量、想一切办法去为人民服务。”这，就是雷锋——人民的好儿子！优秀的共产党员！

影片中的每个情节都深深地感动了我，然而，最让我难以忘怀的是雷锋为灾区捐款的事。

一次，雷锋和他的战友驾车给灾区运送防洪物资，卸下物资后，雷锋饭也不吃就要返回。临行前，他趁机偷偷地把早就准备好的一个信封放在桌子上，信封上面写着“内有一百元捐给灾区人民解放军一战士”。防汛指挥部的梁主任知道后，急忙追出来，想把钱还给雷锋，雷锋怎肯收下呢？这时，梁主任见到雷锋落下的一双旧袜子，百感交集地说：“你，你就穿着这样的袜子，却捐出来一百块钱！？”他转过身，对在场的人说：“同志们，这不是一百块钱和一双千缝万补的袜子，这是一笔巨大的精神财富！”

可以想象，这“一百元”在当时是多么庞大的数额！这不能不让我们深思：凭着每月仅仅六元钱的津贴费，积攒下一百元钱是多么不容易啊！然而，又有谁知道，雷锋的生活是多么俭朴：渴了，不肯喝一瓶当时仅仅一毛五分钱的汽水；热了，就连一条擦汗的毛巾也不曾携带……却把那双年久的袜子，补了又补……然而，在灾区人民有难的时候，他却毫不顾忌，慷慨解囊，这是多么巨大的反差啊！

此时，银幕里在场的人都激动万分；此刻，银幕外的我早已热泪盈眶。谁不为雷锋的高尚行为而感动呢？

这是什么精神？这是艰苦奋斗、勤俭节约的革命精神。雷锋的这种无私奉献、舍己为人的优秀品质是中华民族的自豪，是中国人民的骄傲！

“人的生命是有限的，可是为人民服务是无限的。我要把有限的生命投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”

影片放映结束了，雷锋的声音却一直在我的耳畔回响，我的心更是久久不能平静——雷锋虽然过早地离开了我们，但是，他却给我们留下了无比巨大的财富。这财富，惠及着你、我、他，惠及着全社会。我相信，这宝贵的财富将世世代代相传下去！

⑷ 写一篇观看电影的评论的英语作文

My favorite movie ( 我最喜爱的电影)
I like to go to a movie. My favorite actor is Jackie Chen. He is a great actor. He has a new movie--- Rush Hour. I really like this movie. It is an action movie. And it’内s a successful movie. The movie is very exciting. Do you like it? Let’s go to see it!容

⑸ 电子产品的评论 英语作文

C omputer is an useful thing for our human.And it has many interesting task,such as surfing the Internet.Now,computer is more and more important in our life,you can buy something you like with the computer,and you also can play games with it.How useful it is!

我三脚猫的蹩脚介绍，哈哈。
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翻译：电脑对我们人类来说是很有用的东西，而且它有很多有趣的功能，比如上网。现在，电脑在我们的生活中越来越重要，你可以用电脑买你自己喜欢的东西，而且你同样可以用它来玩电脑。电脑多么有用啊！