fit英语四级作文
Although honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor are all worthwhile characteristics, I feel the most important one in life to have is sensitivity. A sensitive person is aware of him/herself and the way their actions affect others. A sensitive person knows the place of honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor.
Honesty is not always the best policy. There is such a thing as a white lie. You don’ want to insult someone by saying that their new dress doesn’t fit properly or that you wouldn’t live in their new house if they paid you. You must be sensitive to when it is necessary to tell the truth and when it is better to tell a white lie.
Intelligence is a wonderful thing to have, but not all intelligent people use their intelligence sensitively. You don’t want to show off and make others feel stupid. You must be sensitive to the reactions of the people around you. It might be appropriate for you to admit that you have the right answer, but in some cases, you might have to say, “I think this is the answer, but we might want to check it.” A sensitive person would not make someone else look mb.
A sense of humor is always valued. Different people, however, laugh at different things. You don’t want to make someone feel uncomfortable by laughing at his /her mistakes. A sensitive person would understand whether a person could be teased or whether a person would appreciate a certain joke.
A sensitive person would make everyone feel comfortable. A sensitive person understands that people are different and that the values of honesty, intelligence and humor can be applied differently.
㈡ 请英语高手帮我点评这篇四级作文，万分感谢！
[ . . . ]里面的是增加的单词、句子
( . . . )里面是更改过的单词、句子（语法或拼写错误）
< . . . > 里面是要删掉的单词、句子
【···】需要的时候，中文评论、解释
我把1-2句话隔成了一个段落是为了我修改方便（眼睛看的不会太累），而并不是因为要分段的。
Talent Show(s) on TV
Nowadays, with the developing economy,more and more people [are] pay(ing) their attention to the entertainment [instry].
In this situation, all kinds of talent shows (have) appeared on TV. There are two reasons why talent shows (are becoming) so popular <in the following>.【明白你是想说“以下···”，可是写英文文章的时候，如果要很舒服，很漂亮的，最好避开“请看以下几点”这样的句子】
First(ly), people (have became) richer so they have (enough) money [for] not only <to the eat> [food] and [shelter] <warmth>, but also [for] <to the> entertainment.
In the (modern) world, <the person> [people] work so hard to earn money that they need to relax themselves sometimes. The (recent) appearance of <the> [various] talent shows fit their need(s)【如果光是“the appearance of...”的话，会以为是talent show的长相呢！所以我加了“recent”在前面，这样就表达清楚“（最近）talent show的出现···”的意思了！】.
Moreover, <the> teens <in this time> [today] are more interest(ed) in <the> talent shows. They <are so active that they> spend a lot of time on all kinds of shows.【不是很明白你说的“they are so active that they...”是想说他们很活跃吗？我觉得直接就说重点，“他们放很多时间看不通的节目”】
More and more teens are absorbed in [watching these] talent shows, <so> [as a result,] (these) shows [are] becom(ing) <more and more> [increasingly] popular. 【最好写作的时候不要重复同样的词好几遍，适当的时候要换词用噢！这样给人感觉你词汇量很大～】
<As far as I'm concerned> [Admittingly], I like to watch <the> talent shows on TV [too]. <I think it is very comfortable.>【很舒服？什么很舒服？这句话语法没错，可是完全有点凑字数的感觉，还是不要为好】
[In my opinion,] talent shows are good for <the> teens <in my mind>. The shows [are] always <hold on> [aired ring] summer or winter <days> [vacations] so the students can [also] play a part on [the show itself.] <because they also have a long holiday at the same time.>
<They can entertain themselves after a long time study and also can learn a lot of things through the shows.> [After studying for hours at ends, they are able to entertain and relax themselves through the participation of these shows while learning a lot about themselves and everything else.]【嗯，最后一句我基本上全改了，主要是句子太中国英语，词汇量有限】
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总结：
总的来说还是可以的。我觉得LZ主要的问题在于词汇量不够，所以经常会重复一样的称述句形，实际上还有很多不同的说法来表达同样的意思噢。
语法方面要注意时态的表示。the有点用的过多，很多在没有一个特定的“物品”或“人物”的前提下不需要用the（比如说“teens”，如果硬要加the的话，那就是 the teen，指的是一个单独的青少年）。拼写的话，如果我没记错一共有两处，可能是打字的手误吧。
Cheers!
㈢ 英语(chirstamas)作文
[英语四级作文Dancing(跳舞)]
Dancing-谈谈跳舞
Dancing
Dancing is a popular pastime to many people all over the world. Way back to past centuries, and even today, tribal
people engage in dancing as a form of worship or as a part of a
ceremony in a celebration. On such occasions, dancing can be
very solemn. In modern times, dancing appeals to different
people for different reasons.
Young people often include dancing in parties or at other
social gatherings.
It seems to be an incentive for them to
gather. They look forward to dancing into the night ring
parties without feeling fatigue.
To the elderly, the steps in dancing are reced with a
slower tempo in the music. They gather in community centers
to learn folk dance and, at the same time, to know one another
in such informal interactions.
Personally, I doubt the effectiveness of dancing as a major
role in keeping one's body healthy and in good shape. Activi-ties such as jogging, swimming and playing games are more
effective for attaining good health. They can burn off calories
in our bodies and develop our muscles. To me, there are more meaningful and effective ways to keep fit.
㈣ 2011年12月英语四级作文
Where There Is a Will There Is a Way
1．坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。
2．意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命，
3．学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才。
One of the most important things to succcss is a firm.reso1ution. A great man is al ways one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit. One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory.
As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will. For example, Dr. Sun Yatsen set the Cbinese people free from the rule of the Qing Dynasty through a long pcriod of hard struggle. Many of his attempts failed and many of bis followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and sticked to his cause. Finally, he made the revo lution of 1911 a success.
A student who has no resolution will never succeed in his studies. The same is true of men in all walks of life. We must have a firm resolution first, if we wish to succeed. We must always remember thc old saying that where there is a will there is a way
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㈦ 英语四级写作要背作文模板吗背作文还是模板
什么都不用，关键是理解、会写。
下面给你一些模板。
一、主题作文及图画作文的模板：
These days 现象 often hits the headlines of newspapers and has been brought into focus of the public. Just as the picture shown that… (如果是图画作文可以写出具体的现象或问题，也可以一句话描述图画：As is vividly illustrated above, in the +地方 +动词(be, come, run, walk, jump, sit, stand, lie, crouch, float等)+主题词，非谓语动词/非限制性定语从句，独立主格/非限制性定语从句。) Indeed, it is widely accepted / acknowledged that it has gained increasing popularity among people in all walks of life/ college students.
Those who are in favor of 现象 maintain that 描述观点1. In their view, 阐释观点1. On the contrary, those who are against 现象 hold/ point out that 描述观点2. Besides, 阐释证实观点2 . (第二段可以根据文章来分析原因，影响，优点或缺点等。)
It is high time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of… (虚拟语气的句子) 然后再分条来说明措施。On the one hand, … on the other hand, … I believe we humans can overcome this difficulty and we will have a brighter future.
改革之后，图画作文考的比较多，无论是图画作文还是主题作文，上面的结构是可以通用的，考生可以重点记下图画作文与主题作文的句型。
二、图表作文各段的通用模板：
As is seen from the graph/chart, we can draw a conclusion that the number of …….decreased. Of these, the number of …….decreased the most, from …. in 1985 to ….. in 2000(根据图表写年代). On the contrary, the number of …….increased.
There are numerous reasons accounting for the phenomenon and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. Above all (To begin with), …….. In addition (What is more), ………
In my personal sense, it is imperative for us to take steps to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the charts. First and foremost,…….Last but not least,………Owing to +主题, not only can we accumulate wealth, but also establish our career, fit into society and even attain social status.
对于图表作文，考生也要了解并熟悉其结构和句型。我们在准备时一定要充分，不放弃任何一种题型。
㈧ 4级英语作文
205字，原创，太长的话请追问哦~
As William Allin once said, "Ecation is not the answer to the question. Ecation is the means to the answer to all questions." Curiosity is the mother of advancement, and ecation is crucial in our search for answers. Attending school opens many doors, both in terms of employment and in terms of more intellectual endeavors.
Schools change us with the unique sets of people they each contain. For example, as Henry Brooks Adams once said, "A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops." I've known many inspiring teachers, whose words and actions I will remember forever, and even pass on to my children. Another influence is the curious, energetic friends we make, who challenge us with friendly competition and make school life more engaging. These people become an indispensable part of our identity.
What is most important about ecation is not simply learning to read and memorize, but also to use the information for critical analysis, as well as to form relationships with others. Every day, I walk into school excited about the new things I will be able to explore! Through ecation, I have learned to think, and I know that I have become a more useful person to society.
大意：为什么教育如此重要？因为它能帮我们找到解决问题的方式，不止带来更好的工作，也帮我们打开世界。学校有很多很特别的老师，他们的所作所为我永生不忘，学校结识了很多好朋友，活泼且好学，激励了我。学校并非只教我死记硬背，而也教了我如何思考。）
㈨ 谁可以给我篇有关[环境保护]的优秀英语四级作文！
Nowadays, the biggest problem in our world is the environment is broken. The environment around us gets worse and worse, and the environment pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. Many lakes and rivers are seriously polluted and much water is polluted by factories. Many trees are cut down, and the animals don’ have home to go. The earth is our home and it is our ty to take care of it for ourselves and our future generations. Good environment can make people feel happy and fit. And the bad environment will bring illness to people. To protect the environment means to improve our life. As a middle school student, we must do our bit towards protecting the environment. It is our ty to do that. But what can we do for our Mother Earth?
In my opinion, I think protecting the environment should from ourselves. We shouldn’t throw the rubbish everywhere. And we should also tell others not to do that. We should put the trash into their own houses—trash bins. Whenever and wherever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into trash bins. Never spit in public. And don’t draw on public walls. As we know, water is the limited resources, and it is very important for human beings, we can’t live without water. But some people don’t care about it, and many cities need water now. So we shouldn’t waste the water. How to save the water? I have some my own idea. First, we can use some water which we have used again. For example, we can use the water we wash rice to water the flowers. Second, we should turn off the tap when we leave. We should try to protect the water resource. To protect trees, we can go to plan as many trees as we can. We can use cloth bag instead of plastic bag while we are shopping.
And I think we should tell others to protect environment, too. We should stop the people who throw the trash on the ground, and tell them it’s wrong to do this. We can also write to the boss of factories which discharge the pollutant. We can call our friends to plant more flowers and trees together. We should let people realize the seriousness of the environment pollution.
“There is only one earth,” I hope everyone will protect the environment. If everyone makes their contribution to protect the environment, our earth will be more and more beautiful!
我自己写的用来比赛的，会不会有些长了？