英语四级作文论创新
一、“功能段落”突破CET写作。
“To be or not to be: that is a question.”莎士比亚如是说。冲刺阶段，背模板还是不背？我的答案：背，但绝不是盲目的背。
整篇背诵模板不是最有效的方法，因为模板的写作思路是固定的，然而很多时候试题的命题思路可能与所背模板思路不同。因此，可能导致“所背非所考”，甚至导致文不对题，生搬硬套。
但是，无论英语四六级写作话题如何变化，一般都对应三个或两个汉语提纲。只要按提纲要求去写相应的内容段落，就做到了紧扣主题。历年写作提纲可以总结为六种功能段落：现象描述、危害分析（弊）、原因分析、建议措施、观点阐述（观点的本质为利弊：支持方观点等于分析“利”，反方观点等于分析“弊”）、意义阐述（利）。
下面，本人结合近年真题展示功能段落内容：
2011-06：Online Shopping
1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3．我的建议
解析：本次英语四级对应四个段落分别是：现象、观点（利、弊）和建议。该类作文可以被称之为：观点对比型作文，对比的内容重点在利弊分析上。
2010-12：How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
解析：该题目只有两个提纲：现象和建议，可以添加一个功能段落：原因。这样这篇作文就是“三段论”的形式：提出问题（负面现象描述）、分析问题（原因）、建议措施段。2010年6月CET也属于该种那类型。
2009-12：Creating a Green Campus
1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……
解析：该段对应提纲如下：意义阐述（即分析：利或好处）、现象描述（解释绿色校园环境之外的因素）、建议措施段。
综合以上分析，六种功能段落已经涵盖住了以上考试的所有提纲。因此，如果能够掌握住六种功能段落的写作实际就掌握了四六级考试写作考题的最本质特征。那样的话，无论题目如何变化，我们准备都是有的放矢的。反观，死背模板容易导致生搬硬套，甚至文不对题。
二、写作短期提分方略
在了解了英语四级考试在命题特点的基础上，考生在冲刺阶段最需要准备的是两个内容：思路和表达。思路解决怎么写的问题，表达解决写什么的问题。如果拿到一个作文题目，你知道应该按照什么思路去写，又知道应该写什么表达，这篇作文就已经成功了一半。
思路点拨：在本人所讲授的基础班、强化班、精品班等不同班型上都曾讲授到现象、原因、建议、利弊、观点分析时的逻辑：“一个中心，四个基本点”。具体内容：“以孩子（学生、事件）为中心，以家长（老师、相关人员）、家庭（学校、管理机构）、社会、法规（道德意识）为基本点”
试举例说明：以2010年12月真题为例，主题为子女教育话题。谈到子女，必然涉及到家长，孩子和家长组成家庭，千千万万的家庭组成社会，是什么在维护着社会稳定？法规和道德意识。这样我们就找到了可以入手去分析的五个方面：孩子、家长、家庭、社会、法规道德意识。如何使用这五个方面？如分析家长溺爱孩子原因时至少可以从家长意识、家庭结构变化、社会背景角度去分析。
同理，2010年6月话题为学生英语学习，可从学生自身、教师教学、学校教学政策角度去分析。那么，如果主题不是孩子也不是学生，怎么分析？2011年6月主题为网络购物，分析时就以该事件为中心，可以想到相关人或物（买方：customers/ clients /shoppers;卖方：online shops/ stores;中间方：支付宝、淘宝等），其管理机构（政府）、社会背景，相关法规是否健全等。
“一个中心，四个基本点”的分析逻辑形成一种立体化网状结构，考生运用该思维模式，只要能想到其中两到三点，思路问题即可迎刃而解。建议所有有缘相识与北京新东方课堂、四级写作模板班、四级翻译突破班的童鞋们首先将该思路背诵下来，以备将来可以在考场上灵活应用。
表达积累：表达分为四个层次：词句段篇。
其中篇章层面只要按照提纲要求去组织文章即可，因此篇章方面不足为虑。段落方面按照“功能段落”的六种形式去识别，也小菜一碟。
词和句是表达的基本元素，也是语言质量的根本体现。在新东方教书的这四年中和三次参加四六级考试阅卷的经历中，看过无数学生的作文，深感学生词句方面能力的薄弱。同时结合过往教学中的成功案例，提出冲刺阶段表达积累的高效途径。
1. 背写：思路+表达。
很多同学考前也在背，背的滚瓜烂熟，脱口而出，觉得自己水平很牛！上了考场也顺利将文章写了出来，却得了一个很低的分数，为什么？因为单词都拼错了。冲刺阶段，请牢记：口头背诵的再好不等于能够写对。背写是提高写作和翻译唯一，也是最有效的方法。
那么背写什么内容哪？答案是思路和表达。思路上文中已有论述，遣词和造句的表达方面应该紧密结合功能段落来背诵有效句式和用词。考生不必刻意追求适用难词，但可以将常见词汇稍作替换：如，
exceedingly, extremely, intensely替换very；an army of/a great many/a host of替换a lot of；advancement替换development; positive, favorable, promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior替换good; give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替换cause; harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,替think; beneficial, rewarding替换helpful; bear in mind that替换remember; enjoy, possess替换have; shopper, client, consumer, purchaser,替换customer
表达精彩体现在三个方面：遣词、造句、连贯。大家可以结合以下例文感受这三个方面：（声明：试题命制、范文均为笔者原创，谢绝转载！）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of To Help or Not to Help?. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
1. 帮助别人是一种美德
2. 但是帮助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻烦
3. 我的看法
首段阐述意义：In contemporary society, it should be a virtue for indivials to offer help to those who are in need. Without this morality, it is impossible for the society to be named “Harmony”. Apparently enough, it is of great importance/ significance/ value/ benefits for people to help each other, especially in difficulties.
二段描述负面现象：However, a host of people find it hard or troublesome to offer helps to strangers. We have been frequently informed that（A typical example is that）a warmhearted man --who lends a hand to an old lady—gets himself in trouble. Since helping others may trigger trouble, a few people refuse to offer help timely. And if we let/allow this situation to continue as it is now, we would not know where civilized society will be in the forthcoming future.
尾段我的看法(或建议)：As college students, we should bear in mind this virtue. However, it is essential that regulations should be worked out to support this virtue. In addition, it is suggested that we should offer aid to strangers in a safe way, such as dialing 12o or110 for help. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our society/ civilization will be promising, hopeful and rosy.(以上范文字数为202词，请自己酌情删减即可)
三、冲刺复习安排建议。
总体原则：先背再写、阶段总结、适当模拟。
先背再写：基础较差同学一定要先背一些东西，然后模仿该作文的思路和表达去写。可以背诵的内容有：本人上课时讲义上要求大家背诵的功能句式和教材相关范文。背写的目的是积累语言表达实力，同时练习书写的公正和优美。建议书写较差的考生买本英语字帖练一下书写，也许你会有意外的惊喜。
阶段总结：每过一周就要问自己几个问题：所背诵的表达可以用来写什么类型的文章？该类文章的相关词汇或表达有什么？关键词如何避免重复？如果解决不了，请参照讲义上给大家总结的各类功能段落的功能句式和表达。请记住：没有复习，没有巩固。
适当模拟：在熟练掌握背写了六种功能段落的思路和表达之后，可以结合适当题目在写作中运用所讲所背所总结提分词汇、句式。建议大家能够灵活运用，做到一例多用。如我在多个班上讲过的关于英语学习的话题作文，可以写13次四级考试的作文。
题目：On English Learning
提纲：1.英语学习很重要；2.英语者所面临的困难；3.如何学好英语
In contemporary world, English learning has gained great popularity and it is of great significance. (主题句) Firstly, based on a survey, a majority of tourists acknowledge that they prefer to speak English when traveling around the world. (调查法表述)Secondly, compared with the poor English speakers, good English-speakers are superior in many ways. (比较模板句式)
However, English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in their learning.(主题句) For example, it can be noticed that a large number of students have difficulty memorizing words. Sometimes, it is difficult for them to understand the rules of grammar. In addition, though some are good at reading or writing, they can not express themselves freely in English.
Then, how to get a good command of (学好) this language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice can enable one to speak and write fluently. And it is also through practice that one can master the rules of grammar and remember words, and there is no other way. (强调句式）
Ⅱ 寻问英语四级作文
学会放弃英语四级作文范文 Learn to give up wisely
Never give up has been accepted by many people as a positive life attitude. Admittly persistence often plays an important role in one success. However,in many cases to give up might be wiser than to persist blindly. The following reasons can support this argument.
Firstly,sometimes our goal may be unrealistic. If we insist on it blindly, it will finally bring us nothing but failure. At this time,what we should do is give up the orignal goal and reset a more pratical one.
Secondly,not all persistence can bring deserving results. For a very simple example if we keep waiting in line for hours, only to have a luncheon restaurant may be it is unwise.
Finally, to give up wisely does not mean admitting failure. Instead,it does mean a new hope of success.
Considering the above mentioned, we can come to the conclusion that to give up wisely is a kind of more mature life attitude. Though giving up sometimes is painful and costly,in the long run what we gain will definitely far out weight what we lose.
关于理想的英语四级作文 Young People Should Have Ideals
What are you going to do when you grow up? When I was a child, people often asked me this question about the ideal. Undoubtedly, every indivial, especially a young person, should have an ideal. Hardly can we find any great people we know ideal when they were young.
An ideal is a vital importance to one's growth and success. On the one hand, an ideal is the target of one's life. Once you decide what your ideal is, you know where to go, and which way to take. Otherwise, you might become puzzled in many things in your life. On the other hand, an ideal is like the engine of vehicles. Only when we have our own ideals, can we find the origin of energy and enthusiasm in life, and become active and perseverant. Whatever your ideal is, careful plan and preparation is vital to its realization. Of course, the path from where you are to where you want to get is not always smooth and straight. Therefore, an optimistic, positive mind is indispensable in the process of your persevering your ideal.
In a word, only if you have an ideal, you will have the chance of realizing it.
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Advantages of Trying New Things
It is widely accepted that one is more likely to succeed at things he already knows how to do well.However,to limit ourselves to doing only those things we are good at will make us miss many opportunities to develop other interests and skills.Therefore,sometimes it is necessary for us to try some new things and take some rests.Though we have the risk of failure when trying new things,we can get many advantages from it.
Firstly,the process of trying a new thing is a rewarding experience,from which we may feel a different world.Secondly,even if we fail,we can still absorb experience and lessons from the trying process and our failure.Thirdly,if it turns out that we succeed at this new try,we'll get great pleasure and confidence.Finally,it is impossible for us to never fail even if we do only what we are familiar with.We don't know when we'll meet the situation we can't control.With experience of trying new things,when facing unexpected situations,we can deal with them better.
Condidering the above mentioned,we needn't be afraid of new things but should bravely try them.But it is worth noting that trying new things bravely does not mean acting rashly and blindly.We should take full account before we are ready to try new things.
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Ⅲ 英语四级作文，关于创新能力的。求大神出手，急急！！
勇敢地向陈规陋习宣战，敢于幻想、敢于追求，不断进取，不断开拓，创造更辉煌的未来！
Ⅳ 英语四级作文:如何提高我们的日常生活中的创新能力
As is known to all of us , innovation has become an essential part in this world which changes every second . So , how to improve our ability to innovate must catch full attention.
In my opinion , firstly, life is the origin of miracle , innovations in respond to what true life needs should be good ones . Secondly , it's vital that we act to test our thoughts which could be potential wonders , in that case , deligence will speak loudly for itself . Thirdly , as the saying goes ,"Perseverance is falling nineteen times and succeeding the twenties ." We must hold on .
All the mentioned above may not be the best answers , however, as far as I'm concerned improving the ability to innovate is sure to need them .
Ⅳ 求创新英语四级作文范例
Dear Friends, Fellow classmates,
The exciting moment, I am convinced, must remain vivid in our mind, when Beijing, the Capital of China, was proclaimed the final winner to host the Olympic Games in 2008 by Chairman of the International Olympic Committee. Time flies, and the new Olympics is coming very soon!
Olympic Games, held every four years, boast a long history and offer rare opportunities for different nations to get together, which are far more than sports contests participated by professional athletes. Through Olympics, new world records are set, resilient sportsmanship is highlighted, sport-related instries spring up and international goodwill and exchange get greatly enhanced.
As college students, we ought to contribute our share to the imminent Olympic Games with responsibility of citizenship as well as focused knowledge. For instance, it is advisable to give voluntary lectures to popularize Olympic knowledge and environmental awareness in some residential areas. And we are looking forward to your suggestions and participation
Ⅵ 英语四级作文150字最佳6篇
距离2015年12月的大学英语四级考试越来越近，新东方在线为大家整理了英语四级作文预测：希望可以为大家带来帮助。
1、晕屏症—Cybersickness
随着智能时代的到来，越来越多的人不自觉的成为了新科技的奴隶，智能手机的使用尤能说明这一点。无论是上下班的路上，还是赋闲在家，无论是休闲娱乐，还是聊天购物，智能手机总是与我们形影不离，对于智能手机带给人们的便利之处我们不可否认，但是其弊端也日益显现，看看“低头族”“僵尸族”这些网络热词吧，从中我们不难发现无时无刻使用智能手机给我们造成的危害，但这些危害常常为沉迷于智能手机的人们所忽略。分析利弊，是英语四级作文的关键，只知其利，不知其弊，也不是一篇完美的作文。下面我们就来分享一篇文章——刷屏刷到吐你得“晕屏症”了(Do you suffer from cybersickness It causes nausea while scrolling on phones)，认识到智能手机可能会带给我们的危害，希望它能警醒我们，让我们能够更加合理的使用智能手机。
Do you suffer from cybersickness It causes nausea while scrolling on phones
The rise of mobile phones has been blamed for a number of social ills, but your smart phone may also be making you physically sick as well. Scientists have identified a condition called “cybersickness”, which they say is the digital version of motion sickness. The phenomenon, which affects up to 80 percent of the population who own smartphones or tablets, leads to feelings of nausea and unsteadiness. It is caused by seeing fast motion on a screen and covers anything from a car chase in a film to scrolling through web pages on your phone. The more realistic the visual content is, the higher your chances of getting cybersickness. The condition was identified in a piece in the New York Times in which British and US experts said that it needed addressing. Cyriel Diels, a cognitive psychologist and human factors researcher at Coventry University’s centre for Mobility and Transport, said: “It’s a fundamental problem that’s kind of been swept under the carpet in the tech instry.” “It’s a natural response to an unnatural environment.” Motion sickness leaves sufferers feeling ill because they feel movement in your muscles and your inner ear but do not see it. The mismatch in digital sickness is the opposite—you see movement on the screen but do not feel it. The effect is the same and the symptoms include a headache, wanting to throw up, confusion and the need to sit down. Often cybersickness manifests itself in a subtle way and sufferers put it down to stress or eyestrain.Steven Rauch, a professor of otolaryngology at Harvard Medical School, said: “Your sense of balance is different than other senses in that it has lots of inputs.” When those inputs don’t agree, that’s when you feel dizziness and nausea “Some studies that have been carried out into cybersickness found that women are more susceptible than men, the New York Times reported. Those who have Type A’ personalities—meaning they are confident and assertive—are more likely to suffer from cybersickness as well. Among those who have reported experiencing the condition have been video gamers who spend hours playing fast paced games. Cinema-goers have struggled with some scenes in action movies which have quick cuts and fast editing—and virtual reality has made the problem even worse. Jonathan Weinstein, a professor at the Kanbar Institute for Film and Television at New York University’s Tisch School of the Arts, said: “The idea is to get audiences to feel like participants in the action rather than outside observers of the action. Engineers at Oculus VR, the virtual headset manufacturer, have admitted that digital motion sickness is one of their biggest problems.
【词汇积累】
cybersickness 晕屏症
scrolling on phone 刷屏
smartphones 智能手机
tablets 平板
nausea 眩晕，恶心
sweep sth. Under the carpet 掩盖错误
susceptible 易受影响的
【译文】
移动电话的广泛使用被指引发了诸多社会弊端，不仅如此，手中的智能机也会让你觉得身体不适。科学家们把这种状态称为“晕屏”，是晕车的电子版。80%的手机和平板用户会晕屏，他们会有恶心、眩晕的感觉。造成晕屏的原因是浏览了含移动内容的屏幕，可能是看了有追车镜头的电影，也可能是浏览了手机上滚动的内容页。视觉内容越真实，晕屏的发生率就越高。《纽约时报》的一篇文章报道了这种症状。英美专家在文章中称，这个问题需要着手解决。认知心理学家、考文垂大学移动运输中心的人为因素研究员西里尔·蒂尔斯表示：“对弊端置之不理算得上是科技产业一个最根本的问题了。”“这是对非自然环境作出的自然反应。”晕动症会令患者感到肌肉和内耳在移动，但实际上并没有看到它们在移动。而晕屏症恰恰相反——你看到屏幕在移动，实际上却感受不到。二者的影响却是相同的，其症状为头疼、想吐、思绪混乱，需要静坐下来。晕屏症状通常不易察觉，患者会以为是因为压力大或者视觉疲劳引起的。哈佛医学院耳鼻喉科教授史蒂芬·劳奇表示：“与其他感官不同，当有大量信息输入时，人的平衡感会发生改变。”“当这些信息输入没有被感官接受，你就会觉得头晕、恶心。”《纽约时报》称，一些有关晕屏的研究发现，女性比男性更容易晕屏。A型人格，即果断自信的人，也更容易晕屏。“有晕屏症状的通常是连续几小时玩快节奏视频游戏的玩家。看动作片的观众在看到快速剪辑和切换的镜头时会不舒服，这是因为虚拟实境会加重晕屏。纽约大学提斯克艺术学院康贝尔影视研究所的教授乔纳森·温斯坦说：“动作片就是想让观众身临其境，而不是当一个局外人。”虚拟实境游戏头盔制造商“欧酷拉”公司的工程师们坦言，晕屏也是他们面临的最大问题之一。
Ⅶ 一篇英语作文啊。。要创新
首先句意：爸妈别担心，我保证只犯你们没犯过的错误。
可以理解为，他会听爸爸妈妈的话，遇到困难或者问题时会及时和他们沟通，听从他们的建议，毕竟爸爸妈妈是过来人，也许会有类似的经历，但是每个人都会遇到不同的事情，也需要在自己的错误中成长，或许也有一层一语双关的意思：
1. 告诉爸爸妈妈他会听取他们的意见；
2. 他也是会犯错误的
还有一种意思就是孩子要出远门的时候，因为担心所以会特别能唠叨，临走的时候还要嘱咐一大堆，最后孩子听烦了，就来了句“爸妈别担心了，我保证不会犯你们犯过的错误！”
寓意，父母们应该让孩子们自己成长，不能总是让他们生活在自己襁褓之下，孩子长大了就应该放他们去飞翔，让他们自己去磨练，在错误中成长。
对话如果是我的话，我会这样写
Parents: Look after your things on the train, and don't sleep ring the journey.
Boy: OK.（语境，父母唠叨了一路了，领走时还在说，孩子听的耳朵都起茧了，就直说了就OK应付下。）
Parents: Study hard，follow your teachers‘ advice，get high marks in the exam，don't fight with your classmates，。。。。。。（父母话还没说完）
Boy: Don't worry, Mom and Dad. I promise to only make mistakes you never made.（孩子是在是忍受不了了，处于礼貌，所以在语言上只能说别担心了，其实是说“别唠叨了，我都知道了，你们说的我都会做到，就是犯错误也是你们没有说到的！”）
够创新不？
Ⅷ 求英语四级作文，所用的句子词语要有创新的，别太土了！
Yesterday was my birthday and I received a lot of presents. These presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me. My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big and round. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock. The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said my present is lying in your bedroom. When I got to my bedroom, I found a laptop. Oh!Great! I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me to study hard and not to waste time. I would never forget this birthday. 昨天是我的生日，我收到了许多生日礼物，并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着。其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣，给我留下了很深的印象。 我姐姐送给我一个包，这包又大又圆。我认为是足球，可打开一看是个闹钟。另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的，他给我留了一张纸条，上面写着：“我的礼物放在你的卧室里。”当我进入卧室时，我看到了一台笔记本电脑。噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-。我明白他们想让我努力学习，不要浪费时间。 我将永远不会忘记昨天
Ⅸ 关于提高大学生创新能力的英语作文
In recent years, the creativity of college students is always mentioned because of the fact that it is generally accepted that college students are largely deficient of the creative abilities. It seems that an increasing amount of the students are merely satisfied with comprehending or even ing others' thinkings, ideas or achivements rather than developing something new of their own.
The main reason that gives rise to the issue refered above, in my view, is that colleges have not fully fulfilled their responsibilities to cultivate general, creative and qualified stuents. All of these colleges' attention are on the basis of the tests, which force the students study more for their grades than for their synchronized qualities. As a result, most students have no enough time and energy to practise their creative abilities.
Owing to the serious issues we have to confront with, the whole society should take measures to solve it. For example, colleges may pay more attention on the quality ecation, the corporations can establish wider evaluation system, and so forth.
Ⅹ 英语四级作文范文—关于观点类的
这网上找的，挺多的，不过我劝你还是多做阅读和听力，这两你做好了，其他跟着就上去了，作文你到考试前集中背两三个经典的你能记住的就行，看多了背多了会晕的。。还是一句话，多做听力和阅读~
英语四级作文万能句
（一）段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很