四级英语范文话题富有却不开心
㈠ 求一篇范文,写给学长的,用英语,表达自己通过四级的迫切心情,介绍学习中的困难,希望给予帮助
你有什么困难?你不说怎么帮你写啊?
还有,什么学长非要用鸟语跟他写啊?
建议楼主自己对着糍粑写下来,大家都是这么过来的。有困难的话,请把情况说清楚,再至少写篇中文的,这样别人才能帮你啊
PS:要是写的太好的话,那岂不是告诉对方“我是找人代写的”么?
㈡ 英语四级作文写的有点偏题,但是擦边,用最简单单词语句写的还算流畅的。错误不会太多。大概能得多少分
不清楚你实际答题情况不能判断英语作文是否偏题、“擦边”程度,特整理英语四级考试作文部分的评分原则,可以根据自己的实际情况进行评估。
1.英语四级作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切的表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
3.写作的标准
阅卷标准分为5等:2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。
2分(14)——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分(35)——基本切题,表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重错误。
8分(56)——基本切题,有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯,语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
11分(78)——切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分(99)——切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
另外,字数不足会酌情扣分:
110——119词:扣1分;100——109词:扣2分;90——99词:扣3分;80——89词:扣4分;70——79词:扣5分;60——69词:扣6分;50——59词:扣7分;50字以下, 扣9分。
只写一段者:0-4分,只写两段者:0-9分(指规定三段的作文)。
白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的简单单词而无法表达思想的,判为0分。
㈢ 大学英语四级作文范文:过度依靠网络好还是不好
生活中有无数件琐碎的小事,正是这些小事串起我们丰富多彩的生活.随着时间的流逝,许多小事已经渐渐消失在记忆的星空中.然而,这件事虽然过去很久了,可是现在想起来,依旧是历历在目.
记得那是一个阳光明媚的清晨,我和妈妈出去骑车兜风.
正当我春风得意哼着小曲一路畅通的时候,“咔嚓”一声——自行车“罢工”了.我下车一看,原来是车链子掉了.“哎呀,这可怎么办才好啊!”我和妈妈试图把链子安上去,可它就是不听使唤,无论我们怎样努力,还是没有将它“降服”.后来,我彻底地对这辆“破”自行车失去了耐心,又急又气,真恨不得把它揍扁,然后再踹上几脚以发泄我心中的烦躁.
“怎么了?小姑娘,车坏了?”我抬头一看,只见路边一位衣衫褴褛的老头和我们搭讪.我心想:和老头穿的衣服真破,他会不会跟我要钱?“修车啊?我以前干过,肯定能修好!”我和妈妈将信将疑地把自行车交给了老爷爷.他把自行车推到路旁,修整好掉下来的铁链,再一节一节挂上去.但铁链像个顽皮的孩子,挂了这头,又掉了那头.十分钟过去了车一样没有修好.
此时,老爷爷一边擦着汗,一边嘟囔,“咦?奇怪了,今天是咋了?铁链咋不听使唤了?这种新式自行车就是不好使.”说着,老爷爷一用力,却不小心把手夹在齿轮和铁链中间.这时,殷红的鲜血不断地从他的手指上渗出来.我吓得不知所措地大叫:“老爷爷,您的手!”他不慌不忙地把手指放在嘴里吮去了鲜血,用大拇指摁着伤口,说:“不怕,孩子,咱农村人,这种事多了,不算啥!”我忐忑不安地看着老爷爷说:“算了,别修了,我把他推到修车摊上去好了!”“没事!”老爷爷头也不抬,仍旧与自行车努力“奋战”.终于,自行车修好了!老爷爷长吁了一口气,想站起来,却一个踉跄坐在地上.我赶忙过去扶他,他摆摆手,说:“没事!”.不知怎么的,我的泪水不停地在眼眶里打转.是因为修好了自行车而开心?是因为老爷爷助人为乐的精神让我动容?还是因为刚才丑陋的想法让我羞愧?我心里顿时五味混杂……
至今,我还是忘不了哪佝偻的身影和那双粗糙的渗着鲜血的双手!
㈣ 英语四级话题作文范文:失败是件坏事吗
Is Failure a Bad Thing?
It is quite usual that one meets failures, for one's life can never be plain sailing. However, diffhrent people hold diffhrent attitudes towards failure. Some people think it a heavy blow to fail in achieving something and they can not enre failure. When they meet failure, they will be seriously dejected and can never pluck up their courage to try again. However, others think it natural to meet failures in one's career. Therefore, they are psychologically prepared. When they meet failures, they will not be frustrated. Instead, they will continue to meet new challenges. As to me, I'm in favor of the latter view. Failure is really a terrible thing but it is also the mother of success. If one draws lessons from failures, in most cases he will get success in the future. Furthermore, one's life can never be smooth sailing; it must be full of difficuhies and setbacks. If one is daunted by difficuhies and frustrations
㈤ 这12月份的英语四级作文题目最有可能考什么类型的,最有可能是什么话题。
英语四级考试最有可能考的作文话题是:现象、建议、意义和原因、次之为危害和观点对比。无论考何种形式作文。
最简易的处理方式是:有汉语提纲则按照汉语提纲写相应的功能段落,若无汉语提纲则按照话题和内容要求直接写相应的功能表达或自己列出基本提纲再写相应功能表达,图表和图画、书信亦可如此。
图画、话语评论和图表作文可按照相同模式来处理:首段引出话语,图画和图表,并对其内容描述评论;二段写对应现象、意义或危害,尾段写看法和建议并展望,背诵功能表达组合完成作文。
话题1:老年人孤独生活
Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at "herself" in the mirror and saying to herself, "I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school."
首句功能为:引出图画;之后为图画内容描述,主要是四要素:人、物、动作、文字和环境,写出四要素中的两三点即可。
Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is alt children’s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.
二段首句:图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;in contemporary society一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式,论述意义;尾句是万能总结。
As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should ecate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances tolove, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words)
尾段首句:观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。
㈥ 英语作文 为什么人们越富有越不快乐
在北京,我的一些很富有的朋友希望跟我一起去纽约,看看那里的“成功人士”如何生活。尚未成行,我先给他们讲起美国富商格兰的故事。
格兰曾请我去他家度周末,那是位于纽约郊区的一座从洛克·菲勒后人手中买下的庄园,有山川、湖泊、网球场,养着马、百年老龟和大块头的火鸡,一派宁静素朴的田园牧歌。他为客人准备的独栋别墅温馨而舒适,古老的木头房子,屋外有大片绿地和游泳池,空气里弥漫着青草香。
他们追求自然,注重环保,不穿PRADA,也不戴劳力士。兴致好的时候,他们会买几头牛,从阿根廷运过来,让它们在庄园里闲散地走一走,然后打电话呼朋引伴说,“我们家的牛到了!”大家都来欣赏这道“移动的风景”。
可惜我所接触到的大部分新富起来的中国人都还停留在对奢侈品顶礼膜拜的阶段,豪宅豪车,一掷万金。财富为他们带来了体面,同时也给他们套上了枷锁。
我有一位老大哥是很有钱的商人,长期焦虑失眠,看见床就恐惧,后来只好去印度一家瑜伽学院学睡觉。为他送行时我还开玩笑说,如果你开悟了,决定留在那里不回来,别忘了把你的红木家具分我几件。英文中用“婴儿般的睡眠”形容一个人睡得香,折腾了半生事业,反而还不如婴儿时期睡得好,这是人生的悖论。
年轻姑娘们也早早地给自己套上了枷锁,目标是嫁给有钱人。譬如港台地区那些“女艺术家”,不嫁入豪门便没法向公众交代,更没法向自己交代。实在进不了豪门,就嫁给外国人。
对外国人的评价要纳入另一套体系——城市户口还是农村户口,处级干部还是科级干部,住的是别墅还是公寓,做的是上市公司还是小本买卖——好像都不那么重要,因此不失为一条很体面的退路。
我见过这个世界上最有钱的人,他们用钱买不到快乐。飞机、游艇、豪车、别墅、雪茄……不过如此。有一个经济学术语叫做“边际效应”,通俗地解释就是吃第一块红烧肉感觉特别香,到第二块、第三块时“还行”,吃到第五块就腻了。
㈦ 尽管她很富裕,但她的生活并不开心翻译为英语
你好,
尽管她很富裕,但她的生活并不开心
英文翻译如下:
Although she is very rich, her life is not happy
重点词汇:
尽管despite;although;feel free to;not hesitate to
富裕prosperous;affluence;well-off;well-to-do;a heavy purse
她的her;hers
并不not;no;not at all;by no means;in no sense
开心feel happy;rejoice;joyful;be delighted
㈧ 历年大学英语四级作文真题及范文汇总
英语四级作文的备考,就是多看多记忆往年的真题以及范文,这样能够更好的把握作文的要求,在考试的时候才能够写出不错的文章。今天我们为大家整理了历年大学英语四级作文真题及范文汇总,了解一下吧。
2009年6月四级真题作文范文
【试题】
(1)现在越来越多的博物馆向公众开放
(2)有人认为会带来很多问题。
(3)我认为…
【范文】
There are an increasing number of museums which are open to the public for free in our daily life nowadays. However, no consensus is reached among the public on the influence it brings about on the museums and the visitors involved.
Some people hold the opinion that free admission to museums will contribute to numerous problems ranging from the spoiling of the environment to the damage to the facilities of the museums.
It is known that some visitors will throw away the garbage here and there, which will do great damage to the surroundings of the museums. Worse, it will take a lot of time and effort for the museums to fix the facilities destroyed by the little kids who come to the museum without company of their parents. However, there are different opinions on whether visitors should enjoy free admission or not. Some people maintain that visitors can acquire new knowledge and enrich their lives by visiting various museums.
As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the above phenomenon. Therefore we are expected to take measures to ecate the public to observe the rules and regulations when visiting the museums. Thus, more and more indivials will enjoy a favorable environment.
2010年12月四级真题作文范文
【试题】
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2. 为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
【范文】
Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work, marriage. Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy children''s independence thoroughly.
For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent. The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood. Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.
The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator. And only with parents'' trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.
2011年6月大学英语四级写作范文
My views on Online Shopping
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题
3. 我的建议
At present, on-line shopping has gain popularity in the society. Almost every young man has practiced buying stuffs via the Internet; more importantly, some are so addicted to on-line consumption that they even purchase private cars at virtual 4S stores.
On one hand, daily procts sold on line are usually much cheaper than those displayed in the shelves. Also, it is convenient for consumers, especially commuters, to obtain what they need in this way. On the other hand, buyers cannot check their intended on-line procts. Thus, what they shall receive are probably not in accordance with those introced in the webpage.
In my opinion, on-line shopping creates both merchants and consumers an efficient and economical way of selling or buying commodities, so it should be encouraged. And related agencies need to improve the supervision, ensuring that the consumer benefits will not be damaged.
㈨ 英语四级翻译真题及范文答案(2017-12)
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