大学英语四级评析范文
为帮助同学们更好地练习写英语四级作文，下面为大家送上一些精囊妙计。
1.不会表达，须另辟蹊径
大学英语四级作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，所以不要太过追求文采，适当的文采会给作文加分，但是若遇到不会表达的情况时，还是以写简单句为宜，不会加分，但最起码不会因句子错误而被扣分。以下几点可以帮大家化难为易，化繁为简。
(1) 迂回而行
当某一个词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与该词义相似的几种词义，扩展思路，然后找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。
(2) 小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。虽是小词，但用途很广泛。
(3) 借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。
2. 锦上添花，须量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：
(1) 句型要多样化，不要I(We)……到底，使人觉得乏味。
(2) 适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句，但是一定要有把握，不要出错。
(3) 进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。
(4) 适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词，这样还会使句型多样化。
(5) 偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。
(6) 适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。
(7) 上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。
3.卷面须整洁，书写须工整
字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。因为是有卷面分的，卷面不整洁，给阅卷老师留下不好的印象，文章再好，也会被酌情扣除1—2分。
4. 写完之后，勿忘检查
由于考试时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。因此，大家花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
(1) 格式是否有错。
(2) 拼写有无错误。
(3) 语言是否得体。
『贰』 求观点论述型英语四级作文范文
范文来自《2010年6月英语四级作文考前预测范文》
预测作文（一）
My View on Double BA Degree
1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见
2. 我对这一现象的看法
【范文】
Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graate from the university several years later.
Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.
Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.
【点评】
首段直接点题，说明现象；第二段分述三个优点，其中首句为让步状语从句，意思是“虽然可能带来负面的后果，但总体上是有益的”；第三段呼应第二段，得出结论。
范文首段提出大学生读双学位这一普遍现象；第二段分三点进行论述，其中前两点是优点，即学生会更加勤奋，并且有利于他们在激烈的求职市场中找到工作，最后一点是解释可能带来的学费问题并不严重；第三段下结论，呼应第二段。
第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”；第三段末句中的compel sb．to do sth．表示“迫使某人做某事”。
『叁』 求现象分析型英语四级作文范文
范文来自《2010年6月英语四级作文考前预测范文》
预测作文（四）
Teenagers' Studying Abroad
1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学
2. 有些人认为这种做法是有益的
3. 我认为这种观点是不对的
【范文】
Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas ecation is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.
After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the ecational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?
We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.
【点评】
第一段指出当前某种普遍的做法，之后分两点阐述人们支持这种做法的原因；第二段首句鲜明地指出自己反驳的意见，然后分两点来阐述理由；最后一段进行总结，并请当事人在做出决定前多加斟酌。
范文首句点题，指出青少年留学这一现象，并给出支持者的理由，即独立的生活会教会他们自信和坚持不懈，而且国外的教学水平会让学生进入更好的大学、找到更好的工作。第二段给出反对理由。首先，早期独立不一定是件好事。另外，太多的国外学校的目标是挣钱，所以它们的教学质量是令人质疑的。末段总结说青少年留学可能会带来好处，但令人担忧的问题也很多。
第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示“有更好的机会做某事”。第二段首句中的biased表示“偏激的，存有偏见的”；第三句中的aim at表示“目的在于”；第四句中的guarantee表示“保证”，adapt to表示“适应”，fierce表示“激烈的”，修饰competition(竞争)。
『肆』 历年大学英语四级作文真题及范文汇总
英语四级作文的备考，就是多看多记忆往年的真题以及范文，这样能够更好的把握作文的要求，在考试的时候才能够写出不错的文章。今天我们为大家整理了历年大学英语四级作文真题及范文汇总，了解一下吧。
2009年6月四级真题作文范文
【试题】
(1)现在越来越多的博物馆向公众开放
(2)有人认为会带来很多问题。
(3)我认为…
【范文】
There are an increasing number of museums which are open to the public for free in our daily life nowadays. However, no consensus is reached among the public on the influence it brings about on the museums and the visitors involved.
Some people hold the opinion that free admission to museums will contribute to numerous problems ranging from the spoiling of the environment to the damage to the facilities of the museums.
It is known that some visitors will throw away the garbage here and there, which will do great damage to the surroundings of the museums. Worse, it will take a lot of time and effort for the museums to fix the facilities destroyed by the little kids who come to the museum without company of their parents. However, there are different opinions on whether visitors should enjoy free admission or not. Some people maintain that visitors can acquire new knowledge and enrich their lives by visiting various museums.
As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the above phenomenon. Therefore we are expected to take measures to ecate the public to observe the rules and regulations when visiting the museums. Thus, more and more indivials will enjoy a favorable environment.
2010年12月四级真题作文范文
【试题】
Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2. 为了让孩子独立， 父母应该……
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
【范文】
Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work, marriage. Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy children''s independence thoroughly.
For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent. The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood. Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.
The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator. And only with parents'' trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.
2011年6月大学英语四级写作范文
My views on Online Shopping
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚
2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3. 我的建议
At present, on-line shopping has gain popularity in the society. Almost every young man has practiced buying stuffs via the Internet; more importantly, some are so addicted to on-line consumption that they even purchase private cars at virtual 4S stores.
On one hand, daily procts sold on line are usually much cheaper than those displayed in the shelves. Also, it is convenient for consumers, especially commuters, to obtain what they need in this way. On the other hand, buyers cannot check their intended on-line procts. Thus, what they shall receive are probably not in accordance with those introced in the webpage.
In my opinion, on-line shopping creates both merchants and consumers an efficient and economical way of selling or buying commodities, so it should be encouraged. And related agencies need to improve the supervision, ensuring that the consumer benefits will not be damaged.
『伍』 大学英语四级成绩分析
综合挺好的 我四级综合才30分 但是你听力太差了 四级听力上180是很容易的 我四级听力考了200多。而且听力是最容易提高的 所以你把注意放在听力上吧 写作上80分争取 阅读163还是不错的
我四级分为536 听力200多 阅读180多 综合30多 写作109.。
你可以比照下
『陆』 大学英语四级英语 语句分析
主-系-表结构：any research is controversial.
that suggests that abilities to perform certain behavious are based in biology 定语从句中套了一有宾语从句。更多可咨询版 李蹊教研权室。
『柒』 大学英语四级作文优秀模板总结
【导读】在大学英语考试中，有阅读题，有匹配题，有完型填空题，有作文题等等，这些都是万年不变的题目，所以在进行大学英语备考的时候，我们最好进行针对性的训练和学习，这样才能有效抓住重点，大学英语四级作文备考的时候，考生需要提前准备一些模板，下面给大家总结了大学英语四级作文优秀模板，一起来看看吧。
模板：解决问题
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and
more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with
the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another
-------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident
that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
模板：预示后果
1、Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that... will
lead us in danger. 很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险。
"the chances are that"替代了"may"，果然说话拐弯的生物不止是中国人。
2、No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that...
毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则很可能会……
3、It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。
以上就是大学英语四级作文优秀模板总结，希望大家在做阅读的时候可以有效利用起来，当然，不同类型答题技巧有所差异，所以大家还是要学会总结，另外，如果大家还想要只得到一些英语四级作文开头万能句型，那么可以前来进行交流，相信一定会有所收获。
『捌』 评大学公共四级英语作文！急～
The Tortoise And The Hare
The classic tale of the tortoise and the hare reminds us that different people take life at different speeds and that one way is not necessarily superior to another. In fact, in the story it is the slower animal that ends up arriving at the destination first. In the same way, some of us seem to move very quickly through the issues and obstacles we all face in our lives. Others need long periods of time to process their feelings and move into new states of awareness. For those of us who perceive ourselves as moving quickly, it can be painful and exasperating to deal with someone else's slower pace. Yet, just like the tortoise and the hare, we all arrive at the same destination, together, eventually.
People who take their time with things are probably in the minority in most of the world today. We live in a time when speed and proctivity are valued above almost anything else. Therefore, people who flow at a slower pace are out of sync with the world and are often pestered and prodded to go faster and do more. This can be not only frustrating but also counterproctive because the stress of being pushed to move faster than one is able to move actually slows progress. On the other hand, if a person's style is honored and supported, they will find their way in their own time and, just like the tortoise, they might just beat the speedier, more easily distracted person to the finish line.
It's important to remember that we are not actually in a race to get somewhere ahead of someone else, and it is difficult to judge by appearances whether one person has made more progress than another. Whether you count yourself among the fast movers or as one of the slower folks, we can all benefit from respecting the pace that those around us choose for themselves. This way, we can keep our eyes on our own journey, knowing that we will all end up together in the end.
『玖』 四级 作文 刚写的 请高手们给点评一下 感激不尽！！ 谢谢！！
编者结合最新的《大学英语教学大纲》和《大学英语考试大纲》参阅国内外多种写作教材，总结十多年的教学经验，针对中国学生英语写作中常见的失误，编写了这本应试指导书。以期帮助学生掌握基本的英语写作技能，提高英语写作水平和应试能力。
本书具有如下特点：
1. 汇集了大学英语四级考试大纲对作文的要求、评分原则、评分标准、样卷实例及1990-2006年的写作真题和参考范文，使读者接触到最新、最全的考试信息，更有针对性地准备考试。
2. 针对四级考试的作文常见的五种题型，在第1章的后面编写了一些仿真作文题，并附有参考范文，供学生沙场练兵时使用，以利于考试上更好发挥。
3. 收集了多篇与四级写作相关的范文，给出详尽的解释，省却考生翻查字典之苦。
4. 考虑到近年来大学英语四级考试作文部分应用文写作越来越多，“应试篇”部分加大了这方面的讲解与示范，针对性更强，对考生帮助更大。
5. 考虑到非英语专业每个班级学生众多，英语教师无法就每个学生的写作作业，给以悉心的指导，本书选了一些学生按照四级作文题型要求所写的作文，从格式、语言、结构、内容几个方面，给以详细的点评。
6. 结合新大纲对写作技能的要求，系统讲解了英语写作的步骤及写作过程中构思、选词、造句、组段、润色等方面的技能，使学生对此有个全面的了解。
[编辑本段]编辑推荐
本书是编者结合最新的《大学英语教学大纲》和《大学英语考试大纲》，参阅国内外多种写作教材，总结十多年的教学经验，针对中国学生英语写作中常见的失误编写而成的。全书共分应试篇和基础篇两部分，汇集了大学英语四级考试大纲对作文的要求、评分原则、评分标准、样卷实例及1990～2006年的写作真题和参考范文，使读者接触到最新、最全的考试信息，更有针对性地准备考试。此外，本书还系统讲解了英语写作的步骤及写作过程中构思、选词、造句、组段、谋篇、润色等方面的技能，使学生对此有个全面的了解。本书题型丰富，讲解深入浅出，具有很强的实用性。
[编辑本段]目录
应试篇
前言
第1章 四级作文：信息全接触
1.1 《大学英语考试大纲》对四级作文的要求
1.2 四级考试作文评分原则、评分标准、样卷实例
1.3 《大学英语教学大纲》（修订本）对四级写作技能的要求
1.4 四级考试作文题型
1.5 四级考试作文现场应试技巧
1.6 阅卷老师给作文评分的标准
1.7 学生作文讲评
1.8 练习与参考答案
第2章 四级作文：范例－网打
2.1 1996-2006年大学英语四级考试作文全真题与参考范文
2.2 四级写作常用句型
2.3 格言精选
2.4 范文选粹
基础篇
第1章 选词诀窍及常见用词错误分析
1.1 选词原则
1.2 常见用词错误分析
1.3 练习与参考答案
第2章 组句原则及常见错误分析
2.1 写出正确的句子
2.2 写出有效的句子
2.3 常见错误及分析
2.4 练习与参考答案
第3章 段落写作策略
3.1 段落与整篇文章的关系
3.2 段落的基本特征
3.3 如何达到段落的一致性
3.4 如何获得段落的连贯性
3.5 如何展开段落
3.6 特殊段落的写作技巧
3.7 练习与参考答案
第4章 篇章写作技巧
4.1 文章的组成
4.2 说明文的写作
4.3 议论文的写作
4.4 练习与参考答案