大学四级英语作文健康
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② 大学4级英语作文
Dear Sir,
I am a student called Li Qiang. First, I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you as the library offers great help to us. I am writing this letter in purpose of rendering some suggestions to improve the quality of your service.
Firstly, the amount of books can hardly meet our demands. The books you owned are out of date.It is not for us to ackonwledge the academic development all over the world.Secondly, the lights in the reading room are not bright and air-conditioned. Lastly, you'd better improve the electric lending system,which we can not find the books by this system. So, I suggest our library will be able to make efforts to collect more popular and famous books. Besides,some outdated air-conditioners should be updated in time so as to bring new fresh air to us.
Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I hope you will find the proposals practical. Your prompt attention to my advice would be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Qiang
③ 四级英语作文
高中生写的文章居然被引用到四六级，不害臊，我给上面文章的评价是，第一个分论点与观点矛盾，词汇量小，句式变化不多。下面是一篇谈旅游业发展与传统文化冲突的文章，自己比较下吧。
The booming tourist trade has brought about mass exchange of population between different nations. At first glance, this bridges the understanding and communication between different cultures. In my opinion, however, this fast-growing instry has proced tension between people from different cultural background.
The first barrier for curious tourists from all over the world is the problem of language. The most attractive destinations of tourism are, ironically, less developed areas where the world language --- English, has not been prevalent. Therefore, the direct contact between tourists and local residents has been cut down. The tour guide, normally interpreter too, becomes the only link of communication. But unfortunately, as indicated in any guide-training handbook, the responsibility of a tour guide is to arouse the tourists’ interest and passion rather than present a lecture on cultural difference. Thus, tourists, beyond their expectations, cannot fully understand the cultures which appears to be exotic.
Another obstacle is from the local government. As I argue before, in most of case, the ‘local’ refers to the less developed regions. In order to attract foreign investment and maintain the local tourism instry, the officials, deliberately or not, only hope to show outsiders the positive side of the area, hence, the part of local living. As a result, concted tours are carefully censored. The tourists, or ‘prisoners’ to some extent, are allowed to see only what the organizers want them to see and no more. A window-shop schele gives no opportunity to wander off on one’s own. In this way, even for a knowledgeable traveler with practical experience can only ‘see’ the superficial of the local culture. If so, an instant misunderstanding will be falsely shaped.
All things considered, the international tourism contributes absolutely nothing to increasing understanding. Instead, in its way as it is today, a hideous prejudice and misinterpretation will be established.
利与弊：
……(用一个从句引出的话题) graally becomes a pressing/hot-button/controversial/heated issue/opinion . In my point of view , trere are some advantages/strenthens/merits and disadvantages/weakens/shortcommings . In this essay , I want to compare them in several aspects and suggest some actions to take to solve its bad parts .
接下来讲这个问题的几点缺点。（两三个即可）
然后再讲解决方法，要注意有针对性。
最后再结尾，提出一些设想和对未来的展望就可以了。
其实什么模板套句都是没有什么用的，关键是怎么样让作文更有表现力，这是要长期训练的结果。
我可以举个很简单的例子：
非洲国家有很多人正在遭受饥饿、痛苦和贫穷。
高中生可以这样写：
Many people in African coutries are very poor , pain and hungry .（词汇贫乏句式简单，pain用词不恰当）
一般的大学生可以这样写：
Africans are suffering from stavation , misery and poor life .（虽然有一定的词汇，但是没有表现力，很乏味，相信改卷老师看了太多这样的句子了，已经是睡眼惺忪了。）
英语专业的学生就不一样拉，他们寻求表现力：
Stavation , misery and poverty(贫穷) are embracing tens of thousands of residents(居民) living in African coutries .（不简单，不用人做主语，形象生动，句式有些复杂，用现在分词做定语，词汇量大，表现力强。）
所以写作的时候要绞尽脑汁（rack your brain）来想出一些办法增强表现力，但是这是一个长期的过程，不可能一蹴而就的！
④ 帮我写一篇关于大学校园的英语作文(四级水准！)
my university---Fudan
The first time I entered the campus as a freshman, I was deeply attracted by her cultural atmosphere and historical connotation. Fudan is a graceful lady who is accustomed to serenity but meanwhile each action of hers outpours her innermost tern perament. Apparently it is worth every effort to probe into her world for the sake of both physical and mental enrichment. Her humanistic spirit inspires me to care for everything around, even the most trivial one.
On the other hand, catching up with the times, Fudan is modern and smart. You see, the many age-old buildings here are actually great libraries and labs. Scientific and technological developrnent is easily smelt in the air,because she never lags behind the world.
Our university has first-level equipment and the most experienced teachers as well as the best students. My campus activities are rich and colorful.I consider it to be a honor that I've got a chance to study here and I sincerely hope that we can live wonderful lives in our campus!
⑤ 大学四级英语作文怎么评分
1、本题满分为15分。
2、阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。
3、阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为所阅文章与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为所阅文章稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。
4、评分标准
2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分—基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
11分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分—切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。
(5)大学四级英语作文健康扩展阅读：
英语四级如何准备
记单词：单词是英语四级的核心与关键。记单词是一切的基础，可以通过各种手机APP来记单词，如扇贝单词、百词斩、不背单词、墨墨单词等等，选择一个适合自己的软件，随时随地记忆。
记单词：也可以买一本单词书记单词，这种方式需要边记边写，使记忆更加持久。同时也可以把单词带入句子或者文章中记忆，会更加深刻。
听力：听力需要每天听，可听BBC英语，熟悉语感，也可用VOC慢速英语，循序渐进的听懂每个单词。适当听英语四级的各种真题听力，加以练习，以提高听力水平。
阅读：阅读需多读多看，看不同的英语文章，做不同的英语真题，提高自己的英语阅读水平。阅读是建立在单词基础上的，所以需要单词量的丰富。
作文：作文可以寻找一些作文模板记下来，也记忆一些名言名句，典型的句子，提高自己作文的档次。
翻译：找真题进行翻译练习，或练习翻译一篇文章，与标准翻译对应，看自己的翻译出现的问题在哪里，是不认识单词还是语法不对，或者有些翻译会根据语境改变单词的意思。要学会灵活运用。
参考资料来源：西安邮电大学-全国大学英语四级作文评分标准
⑥ 四级英语作文字数问题
一般来说，字数要来多于源要求的字数为宜，但也不能超过太多。
要求120字，你写多20字也正常，但以150为上限。
用句子的数量来衡量的话，一般控制在10到十五句左右。如果能长短句结合运用的话 12句就很理想
（平均每句单词数为10个左右）
⑦ 帮我写一篇关于大学校园的英语作文(四级水准！、)
my university---Fudan
The first time I entered the campus as a freshman, I was deeply attracted by her cultural atmosphere and historical connotation. Fudan is a graceful lady who is accustomed to serenity but meanwhile each action of hers outpours her innermost tern perament. Apparently it is worth every effort to probe into her world for the sake of both physical and mental enrichment. Her humanistic spirit inspires me to care for everything around, even the most trivial one.
On the other hand, catching up with the times, Fudan is modern and smart. You see, the many age-old buildings here are actually great libraries and labs. Scientific and technological developrnent is easily smelt in the air,because she never lags behind the world.
Our university has first-level equipment and the most experienced teachers as well as the best students. My campus activities are rich and colorful.I consider it to be a honor that I've got a chance to study here and I sincerely hope that we can live wonderful lives in our campus!
⑧ 评大学公共四级英语作文！急～
The Tortoise And The Hare
The classic tale of the tortoise and the hare reminds us that different people take life at different speeds and that one way is not necessarily superior to another. In fact, in the story it is the slower animal that ends up arriving at the destination first. In the same way, some of us seem to move very quickly through the issues and obstacles we all face in our lives. Others need long periods of time to process their feelings and move into new states of awareness. For those of us who perceive ourselves as moving quickly, it can be painful and exasperating to deal with someone else's slower pace. Yet, just like the tortoise and the hare, we all arrive at the same destination, together, eventually.
People who take their time with things are probably in the minority in most of the world today. We live in a time when speed and proctivity are valued above almost anything else. Therefore, people who flow at a slower pace are out of sync with the world and are often pestered and prodded to go faster and do more. This can be not only frustrating but also counterproctive because the stress of being pushed to move faster than one is able to move actually slows progress. On the other hand, if a person's style is honored and supported, they will find their way in their own time and, just like the tortoise, they might just beat the speedier, more easily distracted person to the finish line.
It's important to remember that we are not actually in a race to get somewhere ahead of someone else, and it is difficult to judge by appearances whether one person has made more progress than another. Whether you count yourself among the fast movers or as one of the slower folks, we can all benefit from respecting the pace that those around us choose for themselves. This way, we can keep our eyes on our own journey, knowing that we will all end up together in the end.
⑨ 英语作文《健康的生活方式》
自己改动一下就行了
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⑩ 大学四级英语作文写作攻略
首先，审题，条理清楚
保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就回是要做到条理清楚。答对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。
写主题句
主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。
问题阐述
适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。
一句话用不同的句式来表达
为了加强同学们对语法知识在写作中的灵活应用
尽量复杂作文中的句式
长句采用的特殊语法包括：宾语从句+分词结构做插入语+分词作后置定语(issued)+被动语态+原因短语+定语从句。
保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法
作文120-150个字，考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。