大学英语四级写作心得并举例
一、审题立意
大学英语四六级作文的题型一般是标题作文、主题句作文或情景、图表作文等等，去年四级作文考试有书信和记叙文，但基本都属于命题作文范畴。对于命题作文，审题立意是写好作文至关重要的一步。所谓审题，就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想和主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。也就是通过分析作文题给出的标题、主题旬或情景，找出关键词或中心词，明确写作要求，是写哪方面的内容，既包括题材上的要求，也包括体裁上的要求如果不审题就随便下笔，想一句写一句，内容离题，即使再好的再华丽的再精心构思的词句表达也无济于事.另一方面，四六级写作的目的是测试学生用英语书面表达思想的初步能力，并不是测试你母语创作能力，而且为了便于作文评卷有一尽量统一的标准，出题方式无论怎样变化，四六级作文都可以归纳为三段式，有的甚至给出三段的段首句。其目的就是让学生们在统一主题下的写作要点、思维和方式尽可能地同一化和统一化。鉴于此，我们应清楚四六级写作没有太大的自由发挥空间。在构思段落之前一定要仔细斟酌标题、主题句和段首字，找出关键词从而确定写作的方向和范围，而且还应记住要尽量缩小这个范围，不能脱离要求任意展开，那样属于跑题。
二、段落构思
文章的段落，是文章的基本组成部分，一篇好的文章需要精心的段落构思和合理的段落安排，根据不同的题材确定不同的段落写作顺序.四六级作文从结构上看，一般由三部分组成∶引言部分;结尾部分，而且每段往往只有一个主题，段中各支持句围绕明确的主题，层层展开论证并服务于主题句。整篇文章也是层层推进，环环相扣，条理分明，完整统一。下面进一步说明每一部分的具体写作技巧与要求∶首先，引言部分Introctory Part文章开头很重要，关系到全篇文章，一定要认真考虑好如何写好第一句。一般紧扣主题，开门见山，直接入题。如果已给出段首句，则要考虑如何跟开头连接好.在实际写作中，主要有以下几种开头方式。定义法。即用一句话或几句话来解放说明题中的关键词，给出关键词的定义。多用于给出一简单题目的标题作文。直接切入主题。也就是直截了当地揭示文章的主题或写作原由，如已给出每一段的中文提示，可直接翻译提示中每一段的中心思想，作为开头.
提问法。用疑问句或设问句开头，紧接着提出自己对这个问题的看法或直接点明主题，这种方法如果使用得当，能够激起读者往下读的兴趣，以便找出答案.以故事背景开头，交待时间、地点、人物及背景，然后在这个背景下引出正文.这种方法多用于记叙文，使读者一开始就产生鲜明视觉形象。
引用法.即引用名人名言或谚语等作为文章的开头，指出阅读的内容范围。
其次，主题部分Body Part篇章写作不仅应层次清楚，而且主次也要分明I任何文章都有主体部分，即文章的精华部分。学生在这部分的写作错误五花八门，或者段落内容缺乏统一性，或者句与句之间缺少连贯性 ，层次混乱，信息的表达经常是跳跃式的想到什么写什么，内容空洞，言之无物，缺乏严密的逻辑性。针对这些错误，写主体段应注意以下几点要求。要紧扣开头段提出的主题思想，突出中心.围绕主题句用一组意思连贯而且完整的句子展开文章，切记各展开句是能起到说明、支持或阐述主题的句子并服务于主题，全文保持统一性，也就是我们通常所说的"切题"。主体段取材必须精练典型，系统而完整。根据内容需要和字数的规定，确定要点的详与略后，选择正确的、典型的、具有说服力的事实、例子、数据和论据等说明解释并扩充主题主体段要与开头段和结尾段有内在的必然归宿，要顺其自然地过渡，使用好承上启下的连接词或句子，防止突然转折.另外，主体段的句与句之间也要逐步展开，通顺连贯 ，符合一定的逻辑关系。
最后，结尾部分Ending Part
文章如何结尾关系到写作的成败。好的结尾不仅在形式上起到面龙点睛的效果，而且在内容上读者明其宗旨，解其寓意.一般结尾段的写法有以下几种;
总结式，即在上文所述事实和论据的基础上，对全文进行归纳、总结得出结论，使读者对文章的主题或作者的观点有个更完整而清晰的理解.首尾呼应式，即对引言段所提出的同题给出解决方案，作到首尾呼应，主题突出，结构匀称，使读者对提出的问题有了明确的答案.提问式，这种结尾形式可以引起读者的思考。并起到强调主题的作用.展望式，也就是要提出作者的希望、号召或表示信心和决- C-，使读者受鼓舞.引语式，引用名人名言，谚语俗语做文章的结尾，使文章更具说服力.
三、语言表达
四六级作文评分的原则之一就是要从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判，内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。因此这项测试不仅考察学生所学的英语语言知识，更是考察学生综合运用所学语言知识来正确地表达思想。许多学生词汇、句型知道的确实不少，但却不能熟练自如地运用到写作中，特别是让其在规定的时间里写出一篇象样的文章，不是难以行笔，就是落笔错误百出.分析其原因主要体现在以下三个方面∶
词法层次
英语词汇一词多义和同义词现象非常普遍，外延相同而内涵不同的词数量很多.许多学生只知其表面意思，不了解词语的深层的文化以及感情色彩等，出现用词不当的错误.比如∶"1 was grieved to hear that your father kicked thebucket".这个句子中的"kick the bucket"虽然指死亡，但它是一个贬义词 ，用在此旬不合适，应改为。pass away"。单词拼写错误较多，漏用词语以及搭配有误现象比比皆是。如一学生想要表达这样一句话∶一流的旅馆对旅游者不可抗拒的吸引力。他这样写到∶
The first--rate hotels give people an irresistible attraction. The first—rate hotels have an irresistible attraction fortourists.句法层次
句子中语法错误太多，包括时态、语态、语气以及主谓一致等，如果这些成份的一致关系弄错会使句子逻辑混乱 ，意义含糊不清.例如∶
In college,students should learn tO analyze and solveproblems on their own.Try to help them to acquire this ability.应改为∶In college，students should learn to analyze andsolve problems on their own.The teacher should help themto acquire this ability.
句式单一不变.这是目前一般大学生写作中出现的普遍问题，整篇文章都是一连串简单句的罗列，句型没有变化.如果能恰如其分地变化旬式，长短句交错使用，互相补充会增加语言的表现力。比较下面两个句子，就会发现改过的B句式不仅仅句式复杂，而且表达要生动有力得多。
A)Many liberal arts graates are unwilling to acceptwork outside their majorinterest.If SO they will have diffi—culty finding employment.
B)Unless they are willing to accept work outside theirmajor interest,many liberal arts graates will have difficul—ty finding employment.
语言的连贯性。
文字连贯，语言流畅是写好作文的基本要求，会给人以美的享受而内容充实，意思完整是文章连贯流畅的基础，达到这一目标要求学生有较强的语感和语言功底，需要一个长期积累和大量实践的过程通过对以上写作方法与技巧的探讨，我们不仅了解到其重要性，更应付诸实践。尤其是教师在实际教学中，要加强学生的语言基本功的训练，将阅读教学与写作培养相结合.因为写作是一种语言的输出，阅读是一种输入，只有大量的输入才会有输出。同时也要强调写作技能的训练和实践，采用多种方法调动学生的写作积极性。
B. 如何写好大学英语四级作文
!在此，祝愿大家都顺利通过大学英语四级考试!一、段落发展的几种手段1. 列举法(details)作者运用列举法，是通过列举一系列的论据对topic sentence中摆出的论点进行广泛、全面地陈述或解释，列举的顺序可以按照所列各点内容的相对重要性、时间、空间等进行。Yesterday was one of those awful days for me when everything I did went wrong. First, I didn't hear my alarm clock and arrived late for work. Then, I didn't read my diary properly and forgot to get to an important meeting with my boss. During the coffee break, I dropped my coffee cup and spoilt my new skirt. At lunch time, I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that was in it. After lunch, my boss was angry because I hadn't gone to the meeting. Then I didn't notice a sign on a door that said "Wet Paint" and so I spoilt my jacket too. When I got home I couldn't get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window to get in-and cut my hand.根据本段主题句中的关键词组everything I did went wrong，作者列举了8点内容，分别由first, then, ring the coffee break, after lunch time等连接词语引出，使得该文条理清楚、脉络分明、内容连贯。常用于列举法的过渡连接词有：for one thing , for another, finally, besides, moreover, one another , still another, first, second, also等。2. 举例法(example)作者通过举出具体事例来阐述、说明主题句的内容，严格地讲，举例法也是列举法的一种，它们的区别在于：列举法侧重罗列事实，所列事实力求全面;而举例法侧重通过举出典型事例来解释作者观点，且事例可多可少。我们来看下面这个用举例法展开的段落。There are many different forms of exercises to suit different tastes. For example, those who enjoy competitive sports may take up ball games. For another example, if they prefer to exercise alone, they can have a run or take a walk in the morning or in the evening. Besides, people can go swimming in the summer and go skating in the winter. In short, no matter what their interests are, people can always find more than one sports that are suitable to them.本段采用了三个事例来说明主题句中的关键词组different forms of exercises，这三个例子分别由连接词for example, for another example 和besides引出，最后由引导的结尾句总结全段内容。举例法中常用的连接词有：for example(instance), one example is, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition等。3. 叙述法(narration)叙述法发展段落主要是按照事物本身的时间或空间的排列顺序，通过对一些特有过渡连接词的使用，有层次分步骤地表达主题句的一种写作手段。用这种方法展开段落，作者能够清楚连贯地交待事物的本末，从而可以使读者可以清晰、完整地理解文章的含义，例如：In the flat opposite, a woman heard the noise outside. When she looked out through the window, she discovered that her neighbour was threatened by someone. She immediately called the police station. In answer to the call, a patrol police car arrived at the scene of the crime quickly. Three policemen went inside the flat at once, and others guarded outside the building to prevent anyone from escaping.这段是按照事物发展的先后顺序，叙述从发现案情、报警、到警察赶到、包围现场的过程。全文脉络清晰，叙述的层次感强，结构紧凑。常用于叙述法中的过渡连接词有：first, an the beginning, to start with, after that, later, then, afterwards, in the end, finally等。4. 对比法或比较法(comparison & contrast)将同类的事物按照某种特定的规则进行比较分析是一种常用的思维方法。通过对比，更容易阐述所述对象之间的异同和优缺点，例如：The heart of an electronic computer lies in its vacuum tubes, or transistors. Its electronic circuits work a thousand times faster than the nicer cells in the human brain. A problem that might take a human being a long time to solve can be solved by a computer in one minute.在这段文字上， 作者为了突出电子计算机运行速度之快，首先将它与人脑进行了比较， "---a thousand times faster than ---" ;而后，又将这一概念具体到了 "a problem"上，通过对比使读者从 "---a long time ---in one minute"上有更加直观的认识。常用于对本法或比较法上的过渡连接词有：than, compared with等。5. 分类法(classification)在阐述某一概念的段落中，常用分类法。通过对概念中所包括的事物进行分门别类，分别加以叙述，使读者有更为清晰的认识，如：Ever since humans have lived on the earth, they have made use of various forms of communication. Generally, this expression of thoughts and feelings has been in the form of oral speech. When there is a language barrier, communication is accomplished through sign language in which motions stand for letters, words and ideas. Tourists and the people unable to hear or speak have had to resort to this form of expression. Many of these symbols of whole words are very vivid and exact and can be used internationally; spelling, however, cannot. Body language transmits ideas or thoughts by certain actions, either intentionally or unintentionally. A nod signifies approval, while shaking the head indicates a negative reaction. Other forms of nonlinguistic language can be found in signal flags, Morse code, and picture signs.在该段中为了说明topic sentence中的 "various forms of communication"，作者将其分为oral speech, sign language, body language及other forms of nonlinguistic language，并逐加阐述。采用这种方法的段落并没有标志突出的连接词，所述各项均为平行并列关系，所以没有明显的主次之分。6. 因果分析法(cause and effect )在阐述某一现象的段落中，常采用因果分析法。例如：The role of women in today's society is changing. One reason is that women have begun to assert themselves as independent people through the women's movement. Also, women are aware of the alternatives to staying at home. Another reason is that increasing numbers of women who enter new fields and interests serve as role models for other women. Moreover, men are becoming more conscious of the abilities of women and have begun to view their independence positively.本段中，主题句提出了一种社会现象，推展句则对产生这种现象的原因作出各种解释。 常用于因果分析法的连接词有：because, so, as a result等。7. 定义法(definition)在科普文章的写作中，定义法是必不可少的。通过下定义，可以使读者对该事物有一个更直接的认识。Automation refers to the introction of electronic control and automation operation of proctive machinery. It reces the human factors, mental and physical, in proction, and is designed to make possible the manufacture of more goods with fewer workers. The development of automation in American instry has been called the "Second Instrial Revolution".这一段文字使我们了解了 "automation" 和 "Second Instrial Revolution" 两个概念，分别由 "refers to" 和"been called" 引出。常出现在定义法中的词语有：refer to , mean, call等。8. 重复法(repetition)句子的一部分反复出现在段落中，这就是重复法。它往往造成一种步步紧逼的气氛，使文章结构紧凑，有感染力。比如：Since that time, which is far enough away from now, I have often thought that few people know what secrecy there is in the young, under terror. I was in mortal terror of the young man who wanted my heart and liver; I was in mortal terror of my interlocutor with the iron leg; I was in mortal terror of myself, from whom an awful promise had been extracted;---该段中反复应用了I was in motal terror of …我经常处于恐怖之中。以上， 我们结合具体文章讨论了展开段落的几种方法。在实际写作中，我们往往不必拘泥于一种写作方法，而是将若干方法穿插在一起，使文章有声有色。二、结尾段我们知道文章的开头很重要，因为好的开头可以吸引读者、抓住读者的注意力。同样，文章的结尾也很重要，好的结尾会使读者对全文的中心思想留下深刻的印象，可以增添文章的效果和说服力，让人深思，回味无穷。确切地说，结尾的作用就是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使读者加深印象;有时也用于展望未来，提出今后方向或令人深思的问题给读者留下回味和思考的余地。但是，如何才能写好英文短文的结尾呢?下面就介绍几种写结尾段最常用的方法：1.重复中心思想 回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。(例1)A sense of humor is really one of the keys to happiness. It gives zest to life to makeit worth living.(例2)With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now becomemore popular with people than ever.2.作出结论 文章最后用几句话概括全文内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的观点。(例1)In conclusion, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial. The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.(例2)On the whole there are more advantages than disadvantages in the use of TV. Yet different people may have different attitude toward TV. But we must realize that television in itself is neither good nor bad. Its value to people and society depends on how we look at it.3.应用引语 用格言、谚语或习语总结全文，既言简意赅又有更强的说服力。(例1) If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way topermanent success. Remember the famous saying. "Heaven helps those who help themselves."(例2)If we stick to studies day after day, there is nothing that can't be achieved. As an old saying goes: "Constant dropping of water wears away a stone."4.用反问结尾 虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，具有明显的强调作用，引起读者思考。(例1)Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved. Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why should we not develop this ability as far as possible?(例2)So，what can we benefit from wealth if we do not have health?5.提出展望或期望 表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。(例1)I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century. As China will open further to the outside world the language is sure to be spread world widely.(例2) If everyone has developed good manners, people will form a more harmonious relation. If everyone behaves considerately towards others and social ethics people will live in a better world. With the general mood of society improved, there will be a progress of civilization.以上介绍了几种写结尾段最常用的方法，但到底选择何种方法结尾还得根据文体来决定。平铺直叙的记叙文，往往在故事或事实情节讲完时文章也就自然结束了，而说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文都应有一个正式的结尾。希望以上介绍的几种方法能对大家写好结尾有所帮助。
C. 大学英语四级优秀作文范文（3篇）
【篇一】How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人开中蔽嫌始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3. 你对网络依赖症的看法
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便卖手利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。
【范文一并埋】
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.
◇第一段思路点评：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。
◇语言点提示：
has drawn…, realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。
◇第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。
◇语言点提示：
resort to借助、诉诸、求助于
◇第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用
（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者
（3）fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界
（4）pornography色 情表演、色 情作品
（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗
【篇二】Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员
2. 引起此现象的原因
3. 你的看法
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。第一段，主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈你对此的观点。
【范文】
Craze for Civil Service Examinations
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams concted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.
◇第一段思路点评：第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。
◇语言点提示：
liberal arts majors文科专业学生
◇第二段思路点评：先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。
◇语言点提示：
（1）On the one hand…On the other起到衔接上文作用
（2）is attributable to归因于
（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济
◇第三段思路点评：重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。
◇语言点提示：beyond reproach无可厚非
【篇三】Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班
2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要
3. 你的观点
● 审题概述●
这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段，概述各种各样培训班的状况。第二段，论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。
【范文】
Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.
Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head.
As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-proctive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overe vacation.
◇第一段思路点评：第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起，第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。
◇语言点提示：
（1）a great diversity of各种各样的
（2）mushrooming迅速扩散、增加
（3）language crash courses语言速成课程
◇第二段思路点评：先用一句对比式地摆出两种不同的观点，再分别详述他们的看法。
◇语言点提示：注意连接词语while，The former，They，The latter group of people等的使用，强化了上下文之间的连贯性。
◇第三段思路点评：辩证地论述你对参加各类培训班的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）as far as I am concerned我认为，就我而言
（2）counter-proctive适得其反的、事与愿违的
D. 全国大学生英语四级考试写作技巧分享
英语四级考试作文的评分依据是：文章切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求。要在30分钟的时间内，达到这些要求，没有一套行之有效的方法显然是不行的。
2020上半年大学英语四级写作常用技巧：
1.审题
1)审体裁
审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什么样的体裁就会用什么样的题材去写。那么体裁包括那些呢?它包括议论文，说明文和描述文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的糅合体。
2)确定相应的写作方法
我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。
2.确定主题句
审完题后，接下来就是如何写的问题。第一步就是确定主题句，主题句既能保证你不跑题，又能帮助你制定写作思路。而写主题句最保险的方法就是直接翻译中文提纲。
3.组织段落
确定主题句后，接下来的工作就是展开论述。许多考生真正犯难的也是这一步。最基本的解决办法是扩大词汇量，丰富自己的语法存储。在写作时，语法和词汇都是最基本的。行文时，不只是提供一些information,还要学会运用一些examples, personal experiences, comparisons, descriptions等等，只有这样，才不会觉得无话可“写”。
以上就是关于大学生英语四级考试写作技巧的相关分享，希望各位考生从现在开始多多练习，争取在今年的英语四六级考试中取得好成绩。
E. 英语四级作文怎么写 写作的技巧有哪些
英语四六级是大学中重要的考试之一，那么英语四级的作文有哪些写作技巧?下面是由我为大家整理的“英语四级作文怎么写 写作的技巧有哪些”，仅供参考，欢迎大家阅读本文。
英语四级作文技巧
根据不同体裁确定写作方法
我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的写作方式：
议论文：要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。
说明文：可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就作文而言，可以从方面(德智体)来说明合格大学生的必要性。
描述文：一“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与第二段相互应进行描述。
确定主题句
通过审题，我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。
保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法
考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。
我们知道，四级作文都是三段式。我们算一下，如果我们在每一段中写上四句，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右，每一句十多个词，就又120-150个字。大家可以试图找一些作文题练一练。
拓展阅读:英语四级评分标准
大学英语四级考试的原始分数在经过加权、等值处理后，参照常模转换为均值为500、标准差为70的常模正态分数。同时，四级考试不设及格线，考试合格证书改为成绩报告单。
英语四级考试单项分的报道分为四个部分，这四个部分以及各部分所占的分值比例分别为：
英语四级各档的分数分布是：听力(35%)248.5分、阅读(35%)248.5分、写作和翻译(30%)212分。
英语四级的单项报道分也是常模正态分数，但参照的常模是相应的单项常模。因此，单项报道分能够报道考生在各单项常模群体中所处的百分位置。
F. 四级英语作文怎么写拿高分
四级英语作文怎么写，写作高分技巧是什么？不清楚的小伙伴看过来，下面由我为你精心准备了“四级英语作文怎么写拿高分”仅供参考，持续关注本站将可以持续获取更多的内容!
四级英语作文怎么写拿高分
①英语基础薄弱，不会用语法，建议练真题，在真题语境中补语法。
②词汇量太小，词写不出来，建议记重点单词，背诵+按时复习同步。
③作文结构不完整，总是乱序，建议你多看看真题范文，自己平常也多练练，熟悉下四级英语作文的大体框架。
英语四级作文怎么审题
我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，第三段为描述体。而各种文体又有不同的写作方式：议论文：要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是：做合格大学生，会怎么样(这是从正面论述);不能做合格的大学生，又会怎么样(从反面论述);所以我们要做合格的大学生(结论)。说明文：可以从几方面来说明一个问题，可以从德智体三方面来说明合格大学生的必要性。描述文：以“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与第二段相呼应进行描述。
拓展阅读：英语四级如何自学
首先我们要拿出三个月左右的时间备考英语四级，最少也不能低于两个月。第一、背单词。单词的重要性不再过多的陈述，如果单词量太低，对考试题目的理解就会差，影响做题。一个月的时间背完英语四级词汇。全部掌握英语四级词汇的话，需要每天花两个小时左右记单词。
第二、听力。每天坚持听两个小时左右，可以是历年的真题、模拟试题、练习题等等，累了就听听BBC、VOA类的内容，实在枯燥的话就听听英文歌曲，时刻把自己置身于英文的环境中。
第三、阅读。刚开始做阅读的时候正确率肯定是不会太高，阅读的备考只能是通过长期的大量的练习，慢慢的就会掌握一些做题技巧。每天至少要做二至三篇的练习题，然后找一些阅读的做题技巧提高正确率。
第四、作文和翻译。这两部分放在一起说。前一个月的备考可以不重视作文和翻译，在平时练习阅读和背单词的同时看到好的句子顺便一起背。好的句式、好的谚语等等要进行背诵。然后多看一些作文的格式，多读一些经典范文，可以拿历年真题的作文范文当素材。翻译同理。翻译和作文都是需要连词的，连词用的好会得高分，所以还需要掌握一些连词的用法。
G. 四级英语作文总结句子精选
【 #英语资源# 导语】随着大学生英语入学水平的提高,加上来自各种渠道的铺天盖地的 范文、模板、经典词语乎拦、句式 等帮忙,对一般学生来说,按照大学英语四级要求在30分钟内写出至少120字的短文也不是大问题。以下是由 精心收集了四级英语作文总结句子，供大家欣赏学习!【篇一】四级英语作文总结句子精选
1、Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....
随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。
2、As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.
然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。
(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
3、As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....
随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............
4、People are attaching more and more importance to the interview ring job hunting
求职的程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
5、As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.
关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
6、In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.
在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。
7、Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....
最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。
8、The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.
岁衡胡人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度拦消不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。
9、...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?"
_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是："我们该如何抉择?"
10、Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,
现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。
11、People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.
不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
12、The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.
这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。
13、When asked ..., some people think..... while some prefer...
说到______，有人认为________，而另一些人则认为__________。
14、Just as the saying goes: "so many people, so many minds". It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.
俗话说，""。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。
15、To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.
对于这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。
16、There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...
万事万物都有其两面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。
17、When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but other people regard ...as ....
提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.
18、When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., but other people think as...
提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。
19、There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of .... There who criticize ...argue that ...., they believe that ...,but people who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...
目前，_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______，他们认为_______，不过，另一方面，赞同_______的人则认为_________。
20、Some people are of the opinion that..
有些人认为_____________。
【篇二】四级英语作文总结句子精选
1. 实践这些，……
By putting them (the above) into practice, ...
例：实践这些，在智育方面我一直能不断进步。
By putting them (the above) into practice, I have been able to make constant progress in intellectual ecation.
2. (A) 唯有符合此三项要求，我们才能……
Only by living up to the three requirements, can we ...
(B) 唯有通力合作，我们才能……
Only with combined efforts, can we ...
例：唯有通力合作，我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。
Only with combined efforts, can we expect Taiwan to take a new face in e course.
3. 最后，但并非最不重要，……
Last but no least, ....
例：最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。
Last but no least, the shortcoming in ecation is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.
4. 这证据显示……的重要性在怎么强调都不为过
This evidence shows that the importance of ... cannot be overemphasized.
例：这证据显示交通安全的重要性再怎么强调都不为过。
This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.
5. 由于这些理由，我……
For these reasons, I....
例：由于这些理由，我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。
For these reasons, I think that receiving college ecation in Taiwan is wise.
6. 总而言之，……
In conclusion, ...
= To sum up, ...
例：总而言之，好国民应该遵守交通规则。
In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations.
7. 因此，我们能下个结论，那就是……
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that) 子句
例：因此，我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。
We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.
8. 如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地，……
If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt (that) 子句
例：如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问地，我们就能精通英语。
If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English.
9. 因此，这就是……的原因
Thus, this is the reason why ...
例：因此，这就是我患重感冒的原因。
Thus, this is the reason why I caught a bad cold.
10. 所以，我们应该了解……
Therefore, we should realize (that) 子句
例：所以，我们应该了解学英文不能没有字典。
Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we cannot do without a dictionary.
11. 因此，由上述的讨论我们可以明了……
We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion (that) 子句
例：因此，由上述的讨论我们可以明了毅力可以克服任何困难。
We, therefore, can make clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty.
12. ① 从……观点来看，…… From ... point of view, ....
② 根据……的看法，…… According to ... point of view, ....
例：从政治的观点来看，这是一个很复杂的问题。
From the political point of view, this issue is quite complicated.
【篇三】四级英语作文总结句子精选
1) From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusion that …从以上的讨论我们可以肯定地得出结论，即…
2) Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that…把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…
3) Overall， there is compelling evidence that …， and it follows that in this respect …总的说来，令人信服的证据是…，而且在这方面随之而来的是…
4) The analysis we have made leads to a sound idea that …由我们的分析得出一个正确的见解，即…
5) Taking into account all these factors， we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论…
6) Therefore， we can reach the following conclusion … 因此，我们可以得出这样的结论…
7) The evidence upon all sides leads to a just conclusion that …基于各方面证据，就产生这样一个公正的结论。
8) All the analysis justifies an unshakable view that …所有分析证实了一个不可动摇的观点，即…
9) All reliable evidence points to the fact that …所有可靠的证据都表明这一事实…
10) All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that …所有的证据都支持一个毫无疑问的结论…
H. 如何写好英语四级作文
一个原则就是书面整洁，三段式写作，不要用太长的句子，最好120Words中出长短交错，句式不要太单一，意思表达清楚即可，不过不要跑题！一段，点明问题；二段，分析问题；三段，表达自己观点
一 认真审题，确保文章内容正确。
当考生看到一个文章题目的时候，首先要保证审题正确。审题并不是简单指看懂作文题目的含义，更重要的是需要我们掌握题目所列提纲中的内容。在此，建议我们考生在考试的过程中将提纲中的关键词划出来，作为思路打开的依据。所以，读懂考题，划出考题关键词是我们解决内容的第一步，也是很重要的一步。这是我们的文章“写的对”的一个重要保证。第二步是依据要点，打开思路。所谓要点就是我们在审题的过程中划出的关键词。这是保证文章“写的多”。最后一步是筛选出最佳写作思路从而达到文章“写得好”的目的。
二 多读范文，确保文章内容充实。
许多考生面临的问题并不是英文表达的问题，甚至会发现这样的情况：即使要求考生用中文作文都会出现无从下笔的尴尬情况。如何能够打开我们的思路让我们看到文章题目就可以做到有的说，有的写呢？行之有效的方式就是去阅读一些文字材料，扩充自己的文化背景知识。我认为，很多考生虽然也背诵文章，但却只是死记硬背，不知道如何将自己背下来的内容应用于自己的文章当中使其成为自己文章的内容。我们真正需要的是把平时积累的随时随地用在我们的写作中。因此，我们在注重积累的同时，一定在平时练习的时候，把他们多家运用。只有多练多用，才能真正达到学以致用，才能真正提高写作水平。
关于语言质量：
一、选词的正确性和多变性
所谓词汇的正确性是指，我们在有一个词近而想到它的同义词之后，要结合语境选择恰当的用词。在这里必须指明的是，并不是词汇等级越高越好，必须还要考虑到适合于不同的语境。我们在写作的时候首先要保证选择词语的正确性。在英文当中有很多单词的中文意思是相同的，但是具体的含义并不相同，这是就需要考生判断应该选择哪个单词来表达自己想表达的含义。
另外，词汇一定要多变。写作时尽量不要让相同的单词同时出现在一篇文章当中，我们可以用其他的单词进行替代。在替代的过程中，我们要尽量选择一些有难度的单词进行替代。如“主要的原因”：main reasons. “主要的”可以替代为：primary,essential,crucial,indispensable,Fundamental等。丰富多变的用词是文章的最大亮点。
二 造句
英文写作中一个重要的创作规律就是追求语言的丰富多变，在文章中除了词的多变以外，我们还可以丰富句型句式。在英语中，有很多的特殊句式都可以成功的成为文章的闪光点，如：倒装句，强调句，插入语等。如：Only in this way can we solve this problem.这就是一个很简单的倒装句。
很多考生平时写作不太擅长用词组，对于他们而言最习惯的就是想到汉语，然后对应汉语思维写出英语句子，这种写作只能是单词的罗列组合，谈不上什么技巧文采可言，因此，写出来的文章必然就是所谓平淡无味，并不是地道的英文。如果我们能够在单词的基础上，进一步想到与之同义的词组，那么文章就会显得与众不同，更具有英语的味道。比如下面这样一个简单的例子：
English is important for us.
English is of importance for us.
English plays an important role in our life.
关于最后的冲刺：
这几年的考题全部都是三段式议论文体，所以大家也可以把这次的重点放在议论文上。在剩下一个月的时间里，给自己至少写5-7篇的写作任务。零基础的同学可以从简单的抄写做起，基础弱的同学可以从仿写做起，基础一般的同学可以从句式和模板练起，而基础好的同学则要注意语言的精度和纯度。
I. 大学英语四级优秀作文（3篇）
（一）University Students’ Pursuit of Famous
1. 现在很多大学生都追求穿，用
2. 你对这种现象的看法
● 审题概述●
这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用看法的文章。第一段，详述大学生热衷追求、使用的情形以及人们的看法。第二段，重点谈你对此的看法。
【范文】
University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?” Don’t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the procts they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction – “If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?”
About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.
However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand procts are usually quality procts. As such, they are something beautiful, enrable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn’t it?
◇第一段思路点评：本段分为两个部分，即详细陈述大学生追求和使用的情况，以及人们对此的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物质上比得上周围的人
（2）conviction坚定的信仰、看法
（3）vanity and superficiality虚荣心和面子观（肤浅、表面、浅薄）
◇第二段思路点评：本段应辩证地分析大学生追求、使用的现象，既有对此肯定的看法，也有否定的看法，即大学生在追求和使用中汲取经验教训并学会管理。
◇语言点提示：
（1）abide by the consequences自食其果
（2）ill-advised考虑不周的、不明智的
（3）in moderation适度、不过分
（二）Knowledge and Diploma
1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香
2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识
3. 你的观点
● 审题概述●
这是一篇论述高文凭与知识关系的文章。第一段，概述社会上文凭越高越吃香的看法。第二段，主要论述有些人文凭不等于知识的观点。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。
【范文】
Knowledge and Diploma
It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s ecational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.
So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion.
◇第一段思路点评：先陈述人们对高文凭高能力的看法，再点出这是一种社会现实。
◇语言点提示：
job candidate求职者、应聘者
◇第二段思路点评：详细论述文凭并不等于能力。
◇语言点提示：
Acknowledgment承认、致谢、感谢、答谢
◇第三段思路点评：使用一个长句阐述了你对文凭与知识辩证关系的认识。
◇语言点提示：
（1）equate a diploma with knowledge 把文凭与知识划等号
（2）nothing but a proof of a short-term study只是短期学习的证明
（三）The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
1. 最近兴起了一股“山寨热”
2. 你如何看待山寨现象
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨热。第二段，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点，即山寨产品的非法性。
【范文】
The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
The vast array of knockoff name-brand procts, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic procts to suggest a cat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.
Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai procts often mix imitation with innovation – a similar skin but a different heart. The end procts are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.
However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a cat is a cat. The mockery of the prestige procts not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover, shanzhai procts thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people’s risks.
◇第一段思路点评：综述山寨热现象。
◇语言点提示：
…public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用
◇第二段思路点评：主要阐述山寨产品的优势。
◇语言点提示：
（1）mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新
（2）respond to the market对市场做出反应
◇第三段思路点评：主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）The mockery of the prestige procts拙劣地模仿
（2）thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣
（3）legal loopholes法律漏洞（空子）
（4）Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下
（5）violating intellectual property rights违反知识产权
（6）evading taxes逃税
（7）plagiarism剽窃、抄袭