英語評教作文怎麼寫

『壹』 一篇英語作文怎麼寫

我來幫你。（我在澳大利亞5年了，英語可以的）是關於關愛兒童的，我覺得對你的水平已經很棒了。 The Caring of Children

Do we care about children today? No, people today don』t really care about children because we get
pushed about by alts. Children are also getting abused by alts at
home.

We children go into shops on our own and we get thrown out, or
followed around the shop. The shop owners think that we are going to
steal there goods of the shelves without paying for them. The shop
owners are having to put up more security cameras and prices of there
stock because we are stealing from them. They are putting up the
security cameras to watch where and what we are doing in the shop,
they are even following us to see what we are doing if the cameras
can』t see us, and they act as they are putting up new stock on the
shelves. If we have bags on our back the shop owner will sometimes ask
you to open your bag, so they can see weather you have anything,
showing that they don』t trust us.

Surveys show that one in six children today are getting severely hurt
at home by there parents. Only some parents are admitting to hitting
there children, and who do get hurt by there parents are to afraid to
tell someone about it. Research shows that a few parents put their
children』s heads under water and held it there, others have poured hot
water over them. A few mothers admit to pinching, scratching and
biting there children. Some children』s parents make them wash there
mouths out with salt and/or soap, and if they refuse to eat there
supper they are made to eat mustard sandwiches. In recent surveys it
is showed that mothers are more likely to hit their children than
fathers are, even when the care of the child or children are shared
evenly. Half of children in a survey said it was right for there
parents to smack them and are going to hit there children when they
are alts.

Some children who have jobs are working illegally in factories. The
children who work in factories don』t get paid fairly, an example of
this is in a carrot factory in England. In this factory there is
children working from the age of ten years old to fourteen years old,
who are getting paid thirty pence [IMAGE]a crate of carrots they fill.
Some of them are getting paid nine pounds for eighteen thousand
carrots. They are working for four hours each night, starting from
three thirty in the afternoon till seven o』clock in the evening. Two
million children are getting used as slave labour each year in
Britain. In the carrot factory the workers are working in terrible
conditions, they are working in a big shed which is run by a parish
councillor, on the floor there is wet carrots that have been dropped
and when the children are walking with the crates they can』t see very
well and may slip. The machines that they work on have very sharp
blades which are slicing the carrots, this is also where the children
are putting their hands to get the carrots out. Their hands are just
millimetres away from the blades and could end in a fatal accident.
Children should only work for two hours on a school day and no later
than seven o』clock in the evening. Since that report mothers and
fathers said that they were not going to send there children back.

Parks are now being designed by architects for younger children
between the age of two to nine years old, children over that age have
no place to go so they hang around the streets. When they hang around
the streets and get into bad habits like drug tacking and smocking at
young ages. Children from the age of ten and above want to explore new
things than be locked in a cage with swings and slides. We want to be
heard and seen by alt but they just ignore us all the time. We
children want a place where we can go to where there is only a couple
of alts. The government have just spent approximately four hundred
million pounds on the new parliament buildings in Edinburgh where they
could have spent some of that on us children. This year it is all
about the play station, micro scooter and gadgets. Children are now
into technology and want to see more of it. If a child had a choice
of either whether to play in a park for an half hour or to play a play
station for an half hour the child would definitely go for the play
station.

『貳』 請教英語作文怎麼寫

首先審題，一看就知道，對比選擇型作文題，所以分四個段落寫作
1，引出話題：一談到對大學專生是否應該給與屬跟多的自由，大家的觀點都不一致
2，觀點1：有些人認為應該給大學生更多人自由
原因1：……原因2：…… 所以：……
3，觀點2：但是另一些人則認為應該給與大學生更少自由
原因1：……原因2：……所以：……
4，總結全文：
大家的觀點都是正確的，但是我認為：……因為：……
所以我覺得：……

這是上周才在新東方英語課上學的應試技巧= =還有問題你直接追問我= =也可以直接Hi我，框架都給好了，你就往裡面填充省略號的內容就行了~~還有問題歡迎追問~~~

『叄』 評論性英語作文怎麼寫

評論復性的作文最重要莫過於制兩點，1觀點，你要對自己的觀點，或者說立場一定要明確，無論是從反面評價一個事物或是以正面評價一個事物，你可以通過反向或正向推理來佐證你的觀點。2則是總結自己的感想，這也是很重要的，這是你文章的一個可以使你的文章凝聚升華的部分，其重要性不言而喻，我建議你你可以通過舉例來證明自己的感想，比如要寫關於善良的文章，你就可以舉一些歷史上很善良的人物。希望我的一些經驗可以幫到你。

『肆』 英語作文怎麼寫

躲在灌木叢中的一朵紫色小花，悄悄地彈出腦袋，欣賞著這里的美妙；長在土地邊上的小黃版花，抬起頭來，傻傻地觀望著碧空如洗的天空；生長在黃土高原上的的山丹丹，用它美麗的容顏，來裝飾原本就很艷麗的大自然；生長在湖塘里的荷花，用它優雅高貴的姿態來迷惑眾人的心；生長在懸崖間的雪蓮，用它堅持不屈的精神來傳揚我們……
高山上，無論是哪裡，都盛開著各式各樣的花朵。野菊，是山花之王，它擁有著誘人的清香，頗有個性的外表以及純潔的品質。有許許多多贊揚菊花的詩句，比如元稹的《菊花》：「秋叢繞舍似陶家，遍繞籬邊日漸斜。不是花中偏愛菊，此花開盡更無花。」或者白居易的《重陽夕上賦白菊》：「滿園花菊鬱金黃，中有孤叢色似霜。還似今朝歌酒席，白頭翁入少年場。」
懸崖間的雪蓮，也是一種堅強的花朵，它禁得起風吹雨打、寒風呼嘯，同時也擁有著似如荷花的外表，這是一種堅強而有志氣的美權。它代表著不屈的精神鬥志，是我們無數人心中的好榜樣，它甚至比菊花更勝一籌！「其地有天山，冬夏積雪，雪中有

『伍』 英語作文怎麼寫

在萊曼英語所倡導的五種英語語言能力中，寫作被認為是必修的重要課題之一。它既是英語學習短期目標——考試所要求的內容之一；又是英語學習的長期目標——交流所必需的能力之一。毋庸置疑，英語寫作是集基礎知識，基本能力和課外信息於一身的綜合體現，同時，又要兼顧到寫作者高超的寫作技巧。因而，沒有扎實的英語語法知識；沒有長期不懈的訓練；沒有科學的方法指導；沒有廣博的課本以外的知識和信息，寫好一篇優秀的英語作文是非常困難的。

要知道，英語寫作對於培養一個人的英語思維方式是至關重要的。在沒有任何外界壓力的情況下，學習者可以充分思考句子結構；反復推敲所要表達的內容。經過長期的訓練，就可達到量變到質變的目的。所以說，英語寫作往往不在於寫作本身，而是可以幫助學習者復習，活用和創新所學的知識，更為重要的是，寫作能力的培養可以直接影響學習者英語口語能力的形成。這是廣大業界有識人士，特別是部分英語教師的共識。

大部分中國在校生，由於教材對作文的要求不十分強烈，教師的要求也不十分明確，作文的訓練也就自然不十分充分，造成考試時的作文成績不能盡人願。而大部分的社會上的英語培訓機構更是忽略了英語作文在英語學習中的重要意義，他們更加強調英語能力的外在表現，諸如，口語和聽力等。而萊曼英語教學理念則非常重視英語寫作，並為此專門撰寫了萊曼英語寫作系列教程，目的在於提高學生的語言創作力。

萊曼英語在多年的教學實踐中總結出了一系列的有關英語寫作的實戰經驗，並參閱了大量不同地區的英語試卷，特別是作文課題，認為下列英語作文的目標和要求是學生在寫作文時首要要達到的：

1.首段引人：

盡自己最大的可能使得第一自然段引人入勝，做到「語不驚人誓不休」。要想做到這一點，就要求學生要大量地閱讀課外書籍，包括中文和英文，做到知識面寬泛，觀點靈活，寫技高超。

2.片語句型：

在英語作文中，片語和句型的運用可幫助呈現寫作者的英語水平。這就要求學生要在基礎知識方面進行系統的學習。現舉例說明：

prefer doing>enjoy doing>like doing 由此可以看出，不同類型和不同水平的片語句型可表現出寫作者不同的觀點及英語水平。

3.復合句:

在英語寫作中,對於主從復合句的運用也是必不可少的。小學英語作文中可以沒有主從復合句，但從初中開始，必須在寫作中運用主從復合句（至少1——2個）。因為，只有主從復合句才能表達更為復雜的觀點；只有主從復合句才能是閱卷者看出寫作者真實的英語水平高度。

4.轉聯詞:

所謂的轉聯詞是指那些用於承上啟下的副詞，連詞以及大量的介詞片語等。英語作文中轉聯詞的必要使用，可以使得句子與句子之間更加流暢，避免了各個句子的分割獨立，使得文章順理成章，一氣呵成。中國學生在學習中，掌握了大量的此類單詞和片語，但除了but,because,等，很少主動使用，使得所寫文章頗顯乾巴和唐突。

5.時態：

毋庸置疑，時態是英語基礎知識的重要范疇之一，也是區別於漢語的重要特點之一。而英語作文又是對學生綜合能力的考核。因而，在作文中，必須加入時態的准確運用，才能使自己的觀點和所敘述的情節更加精準。因為中文中沒有時態的概念，中國學生極易在英語時態方面出現失誤或忽略事態的運用，這將是所寫的英語作文大打折扣。

6.漢譯英：

在萊曼英語教學理念中，我們更加強調翻譯訓練的重要性。無論是英譯漢，還是漢譯英都是英語學習著必備的基本能力，或者說，都是頂尖級能力。所以，在英語作文中，漢譯英技巧的運用，毫無疑問地會幫助寫作者更加充分地表達自己的觀點。而這種翻譯的訓練又是大部分教學資料和英語課堂所極為缺乏的。萊曼英語總結了一些特效直觀的漢譯英技巧，將安排在後續的講座中進行講解。

7.書寫排版：

盡人皆知，書寫排版是人的第二張臉。一篇作文的書寫和排版直接影響到閱卷人的情緒，不可避免地會影響到作文的最後成績。

8.課外閱讀和長期訓練

課外要廣泛地涉獵不同種書籍，特別是對一些精品文章的閱讀，以增加自己的信息量。同時，還要通過日記，周記，書信，便條，通知，簡訊以及命題寫作等方式進行長期不斷地訓練，才能逐漸地提高英語寫作水平。

綜上所述，英語作文是一種基礎知識的輸出，是一種綜合能力的體現。是一個大量信息積攢的過程，是一個不斷修煉的過程。

『陸』 英語作文怎麼寫啊！

相對於英語的其它題目,作文的綜合要求可能更高一點,那麼我們就以這次考試的作文為例子來講講英語作文怎麼寫.
首先我先說說同學們在做作文的時候常常遇到的問題,然後我再給出一個大概的解決方法,最後呢,我們聯系這次考試的作文題來實戰一番.
從我們題目的要求來看,是一個記事的記敘文,並且是一個看圖說話類的,所有的素材都在我們的圖片裡面了.那麼我們就要先把圖片仔細的看一下,選好線索,顯然圖片裡面的鍾暗示我們選擇時間為我們的敘事線索.其次要選擇好一個時態的問題，我們可以以晚上回憶的方式來敘述這個事情。那麼都是過去時。
那麼開頭是一個比較困難的事情,大家也許不知道從何說起.這里我給出了一個例子.
Our
class
had
already
planned
to
go
to
Handian
Nursing
Home
to
visit
those
old
people
living
there
.
We
were
all
eager
to
go
there
as
soon
as
we
can.
And
today
this
time
really
came,
so
you
could
image
how
happy
we
were.
At
about
8:00
in
the
morning
,
with
tools
in
hands,
we
went
out
of
our
school
towards
the
Handian
Nursing
Home
下面我們不必過多的描述在路上的情形,我們重點將描述在敬老院裡面的情形.
It
was
about
9:00
when
we
arrived
there.
Though
we
were
a
little
tired,
none
of
us
wanted
to
have
a
rest.
As
some
of
those
old
people
seldom
came
out,
so
some
of
us
helped
them
walk
around
to
breathe
the
fresh
air.
Some
help
them
to
wash
their
clothes,
and
the
others
swept
the
ground.
Most
of
us
never
do
such
things
at
home,
so
we
maybe
didn』t
do
these
well,
but
we
all
tried
our
best.
At
about
11:55,we
had
lunch
with
them,
and
our
monitor
stood
for
us
to
bless
them
devoutly.
During
the
lunch
time,
we
were
all
very
happy.
After
lunch,
we
had
a
party
with
those
old
people.
Before
we
came
here,
we
had
already
prepared
some
songs
for
them.
As
we
expected,
they
all
felt
great
pleased
with
our
programs.
Though
maybe
we
didn』t
performed
well,
the
smile
on
their
faces
made
us
very
happy.
該到說再見的時候了,一定要注意收尾工作.
Happy
time
always
goes
fast.
Though
we
didn』t
notice
that
we
had
stayed
here
for
a
long
time,
the
clock
on
the
wall
informed
us
clearly
that
it
was
time
for
us
to
go
home.
So
we
had
to
say
good
bye
to
those
old
people.
On
the
way
home,
we
all
said
this
was
really
a
significant
day,
and
we
decided
to
come
back
again
whenever
we
had
time.

『柒』 英語小作文怎麼寫

Today is very interestsd. I went to the New World
Zoo. There are many anmils in it. First, I went
to saw the tighters. Next, I feed the kanganroos for
leavels. Fnally, I went to road the hourse. Today I
was very busy and funnly. I hope tomorrow will niceness.
1. My Family And My House
My family is small, they are my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My mother is tall and thin but my father is fat very much. My younger brother is naught and I am well-beavd. My house is big, there are three bedrooms, a bathrooom, a kichen and a livingroom.
I love my family and my house.
2. I like sprots very much. I allways get to school
sprots center doing sprots everyday. Because there are
many sprot equipment, like basketball, football, table tennis
baseball, tennis, volleyball. There is very beautiful,and very big. I like there very much. I hope you jion it,
it's interesting very much.
2. I have a good friend, he is Tom. Last week, he was very busy.
On the Sateday , he rerised. And then ,he played the football. On
Sunday, he cleaned his room. I often do my homework on Saterday morning, and watch TV in the afternoon. On Sunny, I usually read
books and go to the cinma.

原裝日記，絕無語法錯誤。
不懂請追問，(*^__^*) 嘻嘻~~
望採納，祝開心~！！！

『捌』 英語作文怎麼寫才能到500字

1、充分准備。打好基礎。
為了提高書面表達水平，平時應加強閱讀，看一些自己感興趣的人物傳記或者新聞記事，可以背誦一些句型、段落甚至短文。語言的學習其實都是相通的，「熟讀唐詩三百首，不會作詩也會吟」。只要讀得多了、背得多了，自然可以出口成章，下筆成文。平時用英文寫信、記日記等都是學生力所能及且行之有效的練習寫作的好方法。
2、仔細審題，明確要求。
對題目所提供的信息要認真分析，明確要求，做到心中有數。要對所提供的信息加以分析、整理，使之更加具體化、條理化，為開始動筆做好准備工作，還要搞清題目的要求，以便根據不同的題材、體裁，寫出不同格式，風格各異的文章，此外，還要注意人稱、時態、地點等信息，避免出錯。
3、抓住重點。尋求思路。
根據題目所提供的信息，草擬提綱，尋求邏輯次序，確定如何下手，否則，語無倫次的文章將不會被人接受，也不可能得到高分。
4、遣詞造句，表達規范。
用詞要適當，不可逐句把提示漢譯英，亦不可生拼硬湊，不要硬拿英語單詞到中文句子里去對號，否則寫出中文式英語，鬧出笑話。一般來講，寫作時，應盡量選出你有把握的詞，盡量使用短句。如果有的單詞不會寫，有的思想不會用英語表達，你可以設法繞開，最好找一個同義詞、同義句，或近義詞、片語短語來代替。在關聯詞是使用上，要切題意，最好准備幾個不是很常用的關聯詞，可以起到增強新鮮感的作用。
5、修改潤色，錦上添花。
作文寫完之後，一定要檢查修改，修改時必須從全局修改。首先要檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當，接下來檢查所寫內容是否切題，該交待的內容是否交待了，最後檢查所用時態、人稱是否符合要求，最後是否一致。

『玖』 英語作文怎麼寫啊

開頭段，開頭段是非常重要的，一定要語言簡練，切記一定要直接切入主題（有些同學在寫開頭段時遲遲不切入主題，會影響改卷老師對這篇作文的印象，或許還會認為你寫的跑題），而且開頭段一般不進行具體的論述。而且開頭段一定要引起讀者的注意，比如你可以將一句諺語放在開頭段。（As an old saying gose"No pains,no gains."So.......)這樣的開頭往往讓改卷老師眼前一亮。也可以使用提問，或者將問題概括進行開頭，總而言之開頭段一定要直接切入主題讓改卷老師了解文章的話題和風格，並且要引起讀者的興趣，吸引老師的注意力。而且開頭一定要注意與文章其餘部分相呼應。這樣的一篇開頭是英語寫作高分的基礎。

中間段，中間段是文章的主體部分，在中間段一定要將文章要求寫的東西涉及到（如果要求的東西有漏掉的話扣分是很嚴重的，如果漏掉的過多甚至會視為跑題），同時這一段要使用一些可以給自己提分的句型，讓改卷老師明白你的水平，比如你可以使用一些倒裝句、強調句、或者你可以使用一些固定搭配像There is no doubt that.......(毫無疑問的是...），I firmly belive that......(我堅信...)都是很好的提分句式，像這類句式平時要多積累。如果你的單詞量比較大的話，就將簡單的詞彙換成高級詞彙，這也可以讓改卷老師眼前一亮。同時這一段的過渡關系一定要處理好，熟練的運用一些過渡詞語例如:as far as I am concerned,in a word,what is more,in my opinion 只有恰當的使用過渡詞才能讓文章顯得流利通順而且句與句之間的銜接更加緊密，文章也會更加緊湊，而且要使用一些長句也就是復合句（同位語從句，賓語從句，主語從句等等），但不可全部都使用長句，否則讀起來會有一種費力之感，所以要長短句合理的搭配使用. 內容也要按著一定的順序來描寫，不能給人一種很亂的感覺。

『拾』 這篇英語作文怎麼寫

你好，很高興為你解答！
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think that middle school students have too much pressure from school.And I agree that there is no need for them to get so much homework to do.And I think it is unfair for children to stay up doing their homework late .In addition,I think children should have the enough rights to study and relax because only in this way can make them live happily without any pressure.But they should also pay some attention to spending the time on schoolwork in order to keep their grades at a good level.For example, they should do some homework first and after finishing,they can relax for couple of hours and then continue their homework.Because the more homework they have to do,the more pressure they will have,so it is beneficial for them to relax a little.And these are my suggestions.
Yours truly,Mike

親愛的先生或女士，
我認為中學學生從學校的壓力太大了。我認為，他們不需要太多的作業要做。我認為孩子們熬夜做作業是不公平的。另外，我認為孩子應該和放鬆，因為只有這樣才能讓他們沒有任何壓力，生活快樂學習足夠的權利。但是他們也應該注意花時間學習以保持他們的成績在良好水平。例如，他們應該做一些功課首先完成後，他們可以放鬆幾個小時，然後繼續他們的作業。因為他們必須做更多的功課，他們將有更多的壓力，所以這對他們是有益的放鬆了一點。這是我的建議。
你真誠的，麥克
若滿意， 請採納， 謝謝！