雅思英語作文怎麼批改

A. 一直說新奇雅思有寫作批改的 具體怎麼弄啊

100塊錢4偏，不過好像只賣給老生。我推薦你去上他們寫作老師LEO的課，上幾個小時VIP的話，效果會更好的。

B. 求批改英語作文，雅思的，語法什麼的

我記到新奇雅思有一個寫作批改卡，就是可以改作文的。我在那邊上完課之後買過，挺好用的。你可以去看一下，找專業老師改的比較好。你在網上搜一下吧。

C. 如何用正確的姿勢批改雅思作文

STEP 1

通讀全文，利用word文檔的自動更正功能搜索最簡單的語法、拼寫、標點錯誤。這一項，依賴於自己的英文學習水平，更依賴於字典。

使用高亮標注自己欠缺的輸出性表達（所有自己一秒想不出來的都應該記憶），使用批註功能做一些拓展，尤其關注具體用法、同義替換等。

STEP 5

確認該題目隸屬的話題范圍。如果說，這個題目問的是在線購物，那麼它和現代科技相關，所以，接下來的任務應該是搜索和現代科技相關的題目、話題需要的語料。比如，electronic devices；advanced equipment；time-saving；express delivery......這樣的儲備會讓你再次遇到類似話題的時候可以輕松應對。

D. 求雅思作文批改 我沒分。。

As technology develops, more shopping and business is done through the internet while communication face to face becomes less frequent. Is this a positive or a negative development

Nowadays, more shopping and business can /be done by /the use /of the internet, then the opportunity/加上這個反而不好,意義有問題,且這個詞和become frequent搭配不妥 of communication face to face becomes less frequent. Some people think that /it is a positive development, but also/刪 many user??? it has some negative elements/effects.
Of caurse/course/這個口語化,少用,/the internet bring/s plenty of convenients/conveniences to us.First of all, shopping or do many other things through the internet that/刪 /has save/d our time, we needn』t spend 1 hour even more on transportation, from another side???,for insitense/instance, if you /are shopping through the internet, you can browse all you want quickly, stead/instead of to/刪 go/ing to those/刪 shops /one by one/刪,it makes us become more efficiency/efficient.Secondly,that may leave/keep us from dangerours/danger, we just stay at home, (without the traffic/traffic and other accident. )Chinglish
It also has some bad point/disadvantages. People construct this world, we have to communicate with other/s, that we just use keyboard/s to tape/type is not enough, even though sometimes we can hear the voice or see the image, but those cannot take the place of face to face communication.Then,there/刪 may/many things are not real in that world, cheating and lying become easier.
In addition, everything have/has good points and bad point/two sides/advantages and disadvantages, even the internet is the case, that is a/刪 common sense. But how to use it better is important, and it is /what we have to do.

你好,幫你簡單改了下,語法小錯比較多,如果注意不犯這些錯誤,這篇文章可以有4分左右.你現在的英語作文基本上處於將中文意思用你知道的英語單詞生搬硬湊胡亂組裝起來的階段,建議你現階段可以先背一些模板句型,寫作時按葫蘆畫瓢用到自己的文章中去,練習多次後你的作文定會有進步.

還有問題,網路hi我.希望我的回答對你有所幫助.

E. 雅思 作文 批改

雅思作文要求：
1. 准確：用詞選擇，時間描述等，這是語言的基本要求，所需要的基本功是對於議論文審題的准確把握，其實是個思維水平的問題，要求觀察生活，理解生活！
2. 連貫，流暢，通順：關聯詞，句，甚至關聯段的應用（文連）和內容的連貫，呼應（意連）。
3. 新穎，生動，地道：主從句的應用（尤其是定語從句），經典句式的表達。
4. 精煉：非謂語動詞，with的復合結構，獨立主格結構，倒裝，虛擬語氣的應用。這一點最難能可貴，目前現行的雅思教材和培訓很少涉及這一要求，以為文章長難句多，得分就高，其實文章的老練成熟主要就體現在言簡意賅，微言大意之上！語言最大的特點是朴實自然，恰到好處，決不浪費筆墨！

我覺得你用詞太生硬了吧，好像是硬拼在一起的。我覺得用詞自然就好，不要總是找那些晦澀詞兒。以下供參考，不妥之處自己在修改一下吧。

The specification of happiness differs with one's perspective. Some indivials just deem managing to help the people around who are in need as their lofty pleasure. By contrast, some others assert that minor affairs are not able to generate the happiness that one longs for pursuing while business success, academic prestige, or political reputation may probably be regarded as their biggest passion in life.
but for me,there are only 3things come into my mind.Happiness: a good bank account, a good cook, and a good digestion.Someone said that the ideal life is to live in an English country home, engage a Chinese cook, marry a
Japanese wife, and take a French mistress..Most of the happiness in this world consists of possessing what others can』t get.
Happiness is not a goal, it is a by-proct.so,if ur aim is to be a happy person like me ,i think u just need to do the two steps.
Happiness is good health plus a bad memory.Everyday is a gift.I feel happy. I have only two hands, but I have two pairs of gloves.How beautifully everything is arranged by Nature; as soon as a child enters the world,it finds a mother
ready to take care of it.I felt sorry for myself because I had no shoes --- until I met a man who had no feet.To sum it up,u have to optimistic.
but it's not enough,you guys have to enjoy the life.Yse. Don』t postpone joy.No man is a failure who is enjoying life.Enjoy life, this is not a dress rehearsal.The most precious thing we have is life. Yet it has absolutely no trade-in value.We should hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. The worst result is that we can』t get out of the
world alive.
If you get my point,your life will find is not hard to get a happy and easy life.

F. 求批改英語作文(IELTS)

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?

Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.

First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.

Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.

In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person』 indivial ability is far more important than their gender.

G. 雅思考官怎樣批改寫作

雅思作文這樣批，系列一 在執教雅思寫作的這些年中，我會發現，很多時候學生會從某某老師那裡獲取種種所謂的「黃金模板」，又或者是高舉考前必備一本，視若雅思界的聖經。而不去管什麼「碰文」。而最最難過的卻是分數不給力，才知天道難酬勤!換個方式學吧，看看隔壁的「他」的作文中那些錯誤的背後是否隱藏了寫作的某些玄機。

H. 英語作文修改 雅思

一個最明顯的錯誤是，時間的正確書寫方式是：6:00am, 10:00pm
你的時間書寫是錯的 請你注意

I. 怎麼找雅思考官批改作文

1.現役的雅思考官是不允許在任何培訓機構就職的，如有機構和你說他們有考官，請不要相信！
2.如果你的寫作分數已經達到6.5分，你可以找外教老師給你做作文批改。但如果還沒達到，建議你還是找中教老師！
如果你是雅思小白，對自己聽說讀寫四項的能力沒有明確的認知，則可以進行一次雅思在線測試：https://peixun.liuxue315.cn/exam/?ozs=86834-2709。

J. 雅思作文批改

看起來是典型的辯論型題目。寫得還是不錯的，不過也許就像你說的那樣，畢竟是第一次寫這種文章，所以技巧性可能還有點欠缺。如果條理再清晰一些的話，就更好了。

個人認為，辯論型題目，以這個題目為例吧，考官最想看到的就是你自己的意見，盡量不要出現模稜兩可的觀點，尤其不要說「It's all depends」之類的話...洋人很反感這個的，盡可能使你的觀點明確。這究竟是積極還是消極的發展，一定要有一個明確的立場，即一邊倒。在文章的第一段，先寫兩句作為背景，實在寫不好的話，就改寫題目，確保不會跑題。然後亮明自己的觀點，最後可以過渡一下，為第二段做准備。一般情況下第一段不要太長，三四句即可。

第二段就是重點了。這也就是你需要重點下功夫的地方。我在前面說了，這部分可能條理不是很清晰。我讀了下你的第二段，其實你有表述自己的理由，但是看起來是不是很沒有頭緒呢？這里就需要用一些詞來連接，比如「First of all」，「next」，「last but not the least」這類的詞，可以讓人很明確地看到你的每一條理由。實際上，每條理由後面加上一兩句，來擴展你的理由，也就是支撐觀點。盡量，不要舉例子，一兩句是說不清的，如果舉也盡量不要舉具體例子。我記得有一個題是關於戰爭的，我看到的一篇範文的觀點是戰爭摧殘人們家園，但是這個考生的高明之處就在於他沒有明確地說就是美國攻打伊拉克。這一點一定要注意，英聯邦的國家很反感別人說他們不好的。

第三段，也就是結尾段了。對於辯論型題目，三段足夠了，但是解釋性題目，即要求提出解決方案的，則需要寫四段。所以可以考慮把你的二三段重新整合一下。結尾段需要再次亮明觀點，這一點你做得很好呢，第一次寫就可以做到這個很不容易的，好多學生最後都草草總結了事了。但是一定要和開頭照應，實際上簡單的做法就是再次改寫題目，或者改寫開頭段。

最後再說一下，你很有心呢，格式做得非常好。但是第一段出現了縮寫，這個在正規的雅思考試里是絕對不允許的，改正就可以了。

我是今年4月，在北京，參加的雅思考試，我的寫作拿了6.5分，我的雅思寫作老師和我一起參加了考試，他拿了7分，所以還是個OK的成績。同學加油吧，也祝你早日通過雅思考試，拿到理想的分數。