江西高考英語作文怎麼寫
㈠ 江西高考英語作文
不用那麼麻煩的。你拿一張白紙折疊出等間距的行印。按著行印寫就和虛線差不多了
㈡ 老師,我寫了2010江西高考英語作文,請您批閱
總體上這一片還可以,但不如上次寫的,大概17-18分左右,詞數最好控制在110-120 左右,建議如下
Magic Power of Polite Words
1.Indeed, being polite, especially using polite words in everyday life, has some magic power.
建議:Being polite, especially using polite words in everyday life, indeed has some magic power. 這樣可以讓indeed 用來起強調作用。
2.Not only does it enhance our friendship and better our relationship but it also clears up barriers of communication.
建議:我覺得這個better 用得很好,也可以用以前一片閱讀理解中的句子 smooth up the bumps in our relationship. 另外我覺得把介詞of 改成in 更合適。
3.Let me take my own experience as an example.
建議:take… for example 是固定片語
4.One day last year, I was hurrying up to go to my classroom when suddenly, a girl of another class run out of the room.
建議:可用the other day 代替 one day; when 後面suddenly 去掉,與when 語義重復。
5.She appeared so suddenly that it seemed impossible for me to stop in time.
本句沒有什麼問題,但是寫作要片語之上,建議用turn up 代替 appear
6.Then, as you can imagine, she was knocked over, falling onto the ground.
建議:可加上表示程度的副詞 heavily.
7.Immediately, I said "sorry" to her and showed my guilty sincerely, which made her forgive me and built up friendship between us.
建議:immediately 可換成 Upon seeing this ; guilty 換成 apology; Build up 強調過程,建議改為 start up.
8.It is politeness that plays a vital role in our social relationship.
9. So next time you talk with others, just fill your mouths with those magic words, and you'll surely be welcomed everywhere.
建議: you 的前面加個 when; let those magic words fly through your mouth更形象。
㈢ 求2010年江西高考英語作文範文
One possible version:
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I』m Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. I』m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2;00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic 「Man and Nature」. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes
Li Hua
㈣ 2009至2013歷屆江西省高考英語作文題目
2009:Turning a bad mood into a good one
2010:英語中「please.」 「In you」「sorry」等禮貌用語具有增進友誼,改善關系、化解矛盾神奇的力量,因而被稱為「 Magin Power」。請 「Magin Power of Polite Words」為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語作文
2011:假設你是星光中學的李華,將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿,主要內容包括: 1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題; 2.騎自行車的益處,如節能環保、有利健康等。
2012:某英語報社舉辦以「I like Reading」為主題的徵文活動你打算投稿請根據以下要點寫一篇短文 1.你為什麼喜歡讀書 2.你喜歡讀哪一燈的書例如歷史、科學、文學等請給出至少兩個理由。
2013:星光中學(Xingguang High School)近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學校英語報記者,請寫一篇短文,報道此次活動。內容包括: 1. 時間與地點:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain); 2. 活動的過程; 3. 你對於這次活動的評論
㈤ 高考英語作文該怎麼寫才能得高分
隨著高考臨近,英語寫作,成了幾乎每個同學的軟肋。呵呵,其實,不用擔心,只要不跑題,寫到18分以上很容易的,加一些高級詞彙,句型,框架上22分都是有可能的。英語作文主要分為2類,實用類如書信,通知,便條。議論類,如AB類觀點,等等。
2010高考英語高考作文評分標准
1. 本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然後以該檔次 的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最後給分。
3. 詞數少於 80和多於 120的,從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時,應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面,評分時,應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。
6. 如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個檔次。
7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達,對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確,些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容,寫了一些無關內容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤,影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分:(0分)
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息:內容太少,無法評判;寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
2009年高考英語評分細則
第一檔是極優檔,30分。標准為:書寫規范;覆蓋所有要點,內容充實;詞彙豐富,有修辭意識。
第二檔是優秀,26分至29分。標准為:緊扣主題;覆蓋所有要點,內容充實;語法結構多樣,詞彙豐富,顯示出較強的語言運動能力;語言小錯不超過4個。
第三檔是良好,22 分至25分。標准為:緊扣主題,覆蓋所有要點,內容較充實,語言有少量錯誤,但基本不影響意思表達。
第四檔是一般,18分至21分。標准為:緊扣主題,基本覆蓋所有要點,能夠表達基本內容;語言錯誤已影響了部分意思的表達,但多數句子基本正確。
第五檔是較差,13分至17分。標准為:內容不完成,要點不全,行文不連貫,語言錯誤較多,多數句子基本正確。
第六檔是差,6分至12分。標准為:內容混亂或主要內容偏離主題,能夠寫出少數與內容相關的可讀句。
第七檔是極差,0分至5分。只能寫出與內容相關的詞語,沒有有效信息;抄寫其他文章或只寫出與作文無關的內容。
評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定是否達到及格線。根據百分制計算,英語作文的及格線是18分。
這是評分標准,,然後就要注意框架的使用哦
高考作文萬能模板:圖標作文
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is e to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
書信作文模板
Your addressMonth, Date, yearReceiver's addressDear …,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.
……
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
再有就是詞彙量了,,希望這些可以幫到你。加油!!
㈥ 2013年江西高考英語作文是什麼注意是英語!
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㈦ 急需2011高考江西卷英語作文及範文
假設你是星光中學的李華,將參加主題為「Let』s
Ride
Bicycles」的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿,主要內容包括:
目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞
騎自行車的益處,如節能環保,有利健康
參考詞彙:低碳生活(low-carbon
life)
節能(energy
saving)
注意:1.詞數:120詞左右;
演講稿開頭和結尾已給出,請將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計入總詞數。
Good
morning,
everyone,
I
am
Li
Hua
from
Xingguang
Middle
School.
The
topic
of
my
speech
is
「Let』s
Ride
Bicycles」
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank
you!___________________________________________________________________________________
Good
morning,everyone,
I
am
Li
Hua
from
Xingguang
Middle
School.
The
topic
of
my
speech
is
"Let's
Ride
Bicycles".As
is
known
to
us,
air
pollution
and
heavy
urban
traffic
are
becoming
increasingly
severe
mainly
e
to
the
overuse
of
cars.
Therefore,
it』s
high
time
we
chose
another
better
means
of
transport,
that
is,
cycling.
There
are
many
good
reasons
to
ride
bicycles.
First
of
all,
compared
to
cars,
bicycles
are
much
cheaper
to
buy
and
maintain,
and
you
don't
have
all
the
added
costs
of
fuel,
and
parking.
What's
more,
bicycles
are
more
environmentally
friendly
than
cars,
because
they
hardly
make
noises
and
exhaust.
Cycling
has
become
a
new
trend
around
the
world,
a
good
way
of
energy
saving
and
low-carbon
life.
Last
but
not
least,
cycling
is
an
excellent
way
to
keep
fit
and
live
longer.
By
riding
bicycles,
you
can
cut
down
your
risk
of
heart
attacks,
high
blood
pressure
and
other
illnesses.
So
I
think,
riding
bicycles
actually
has
great
effects
on
us.
Let's
ride
bicycles
from
today
on!
Thank
you
for
listening!
㈧ 您好,我是江西高三考生。我想問下,我看到很多人都說高考英語作文模版可以得滿分這是真的嗎
你好,我也是今年高考的考生。
英語作文並沒有所謂的固定模式的,而且寫作類的東西能夠拿滿分的人當然是少之又少。
1英語寫作最重要的就是字跡整潔,不要塗改,老師的印象分超級重要的。第一眼的感覺就把你的作文定在某個檔次了。比如16—20分與20—25分,完全是不同的了,對吧。
2作文開頭盡量用上短語與復合句,這樣的句子能夠體現出你的水平,讓老師感覺出你是好生。相對分會高些。
3文章不要一段到底,注意分段落。湊在一塊的一大堆字,任誰也不會有好心情看,對吧。
4老師閱讀一篇高考作文的時間只有20至30秒,中間寫不出來可以用簡單句子一筆帶過,開頭和結尾盡量寫好。
這些都是我自己平時考試的經驗,希望採納啦~~
㈨ 高考英語作文題目及範文
下面是2006年的高考英語作文。圖片無法顯示,請到www.yingyufeng.com查看。上面還有100多篇高考英語作文。
2006年高考英語作文,基本上都從實用的角度出發。其中,寫信和寫郵件還是考試的主流。下面是今年的高考英語作文題目。大家可以進行一下對比。
2006高考英語作文全國卷I
假定你是李華。應英國朋友Bob的要求, 寫一封簡訊介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關信息。
注意:
1、字數100左右
2、可以適當增減細節,以使行文連貫
3、開頭語已為你寫好
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.______________________
_________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
(註:上面的小字是:借閱須知:每人每次5本,借期10天。下面的小字是:開放時間:周一至周五,早9:00至晚7:00,周末閉館。)
2006高考英語作文北京卷
第四部分:書面表達(共兩節,35分)
第一節:情景作文(20分)
國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學生參加的「和平,友誼」夏令營活動,要求報名者提前交英文個人簡歷。假設你是王珊,請根據下列信息寫一篇個人簡介。
姓名:王珊
性別:女
年齡:16歲
學校:北京陽光中學
其它:愛好音樂、攝影、善於與人交流,樂於助人,熱愛自然,熱愛和平
參加夏令營的目的:結交朋友,了解外國文化
注意:1、詞數不少於60
2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節,以使行文連貫
第二節 開放作文(15分)
請根據下面提示,寫一篇短文。詞數不少於50。
You and your Australian friend Jim are visiting a city in China where you see the street sculptures as shown below. You and Jim are discussing what the artist is trying to say. Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so.
提示詞:雕塑sculpture 筆記本電腦 laptop
2006高考英語作文廣東卷
Ⅵ.書面表達(滿分25分)
根據以下圖畫,寫一篇英語短文,描述今昔通訊方式的變化,以及這些變化給人們生活帶來的影響。
注意:1.詞數:100左右
2.生詞:通訊:communicate(with sb.)vi.
communication n.
互聯網:the Internet n.
2006高考英語作文浙江卷
第三節:書面表達 (滿分30分)
當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影,有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以「Film or book, which do you prefer?」為題,按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文:
1、 看電影:省時、有趣、易懂
2、 讀原著:細節更多、語言優美
3、 我的看法及理由
注意:1、詞數:100-120 文章題目和開頭已給出(不計入詞數)。
2、參考詞彙: original work 或 book in the original (原著)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
2006高考英語作文重慶卷
加拿大高中生David在互聯網Internet上登出啟事notice,希望結識一位中國朋友,以便學習中國的語言,文化culture。
假設你是李華,請在看到這則啟事後,用英文給David發一封電子郵件,主要內容包括:
你怎樣得知David的願望
你願意成為他的朋友
你打算如何幫助他
你盼望他的回復
注意:
1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好
2、字數:100詞左右
3、在答題卡上作答
2006高考英語作文湖北卷
受某英文報的委託,你最近對高中生的英語閱讀興趣做了一次調查。請根據以下信息,用英語為該報寫一篇100詞左右的短文。短文的標題及首句已為你寫好。
調查內容:在新聞、故事、科普、學習方法四種英文文章中,學生最喜歡哪一種。
調查范圍:湖北省的10所中學
調查對象:高中生
調查人數:1000
調查方式: 訪談
調查結果:見下圖
Reading Interests of Senior School Students
Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
One Possible Version
Reading Interests of Senior School Students
Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles:news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most. Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most inerested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.
2006高考英語作文湖南卷
第二節 寫作(滿分25分)
請根據下面的英文短詩,展開適當的想像,寫一篇短文。
標題為:My Teacher Mr Moore
There's a teacher Mr .Moore.
Who is lovely and therty-four.
Always dncouraging us to try.
He leads us to a world of why.
We all admire him more and more.
注意:
1. 不得照抄短詩原文。
2. 必須結合短詩的內容,發揮想像,適當展開。
3. 必須突出短詩的主題,結構完整,語意連貫。
4. 短文不能寫成詩歌形式。
5. 詞數:120左右。
One possible version:
Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for hes age.And he's one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared with other teachers, Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of tenching .He tries various ways to make his classes lively and interesting .In his opinion,we should not only know what, but also understand why. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourage us to thenk by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help.we've learned how to analyze and settle problem. What a wonderful world of why he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.
2006高考英語作文安徽卷
假設你是李華,作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年,寄住在Mr. Brown家裡,剛回到國內。回國後,你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家,因此給他寫了一封信,請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下:
感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助
一本英語詞典忘記帶回
詞典是美國老師送的,非常珍貴
詞典很可能丟在卧室的書架上
郵資自己付
注意:
1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
2、可適當增加細節,使行文連貫
2、參考詞彙:郵資-postage
Dear Mr. Brown,
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua
One Possible Version
Dear Mr. Brown,
I'm now safely back home. Thank you very much for all the kindness I got from you ring my stay. Hope everything is fine with you there.
Now I wonder whether I could ask you a favour. When I came back, I suddently realizes that I had left my English dictionary behind at your place. It is a precious gift from mu American teacher. Would you please be so kind as to send it back to me?I'll pay for the postage. The dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom. It is the one with a red cover.
Thanks and all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
2006高考英語作文山東卷
請用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文,簡要描述漫畫內容,並結合生活實際,就漫畫的主題發表感想,題目自擬。
說明:該題目,競學網中學英語頻道曾在--競學網友預測2006英語作文二被預測過。大家可以回顧一下。
2006高考英語作文天津卷
假設你是李華,在出國交流學習期間,到當地一家電影院看了一場精彩的電影,但在觀影過程中發現了一些問題。請你根據下列提示用英語給影院經理寫一封信。
1、因廣告過多,影片放映晚點
2、影片播放音量過大
3、安全出口標識不明,存在安全隱患
3、適當結尾
注意:1、詞數:80-120
2、可適當加入細節,以使行文連貫
3、信的開頭已為你寫好(不計入詞數)
參考詞彙:安全出口-exit
安全隱患-potential safety hazard
Dear Manager,
I'm an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but
2006高考英語作文江西卷
第二節 書面表達(滿分25分)
請用中秋節的等待為題,用英語寫一篇短文,描述下圖的內容,並就此發表你的評論。
要求:1.文章必須包括描述和評論兩部分;
2.詞數為100左右。
2006高考英語作文陝西卷
書面表達(滿分30分)
暑假即將來臨。你班同學討論了假期計劃,提出了不同看法,請根據提示寫一篇有關討論的英語短文,並談談你的看法。
優 點 缺 點
呆在家中 花費少、適方便 不能親身了解外界
外出旅遊 增長知識、開闊眼界 花費多、旅途不便
注意:1.短文寫在答題卡上的指定區域,詞數80-120(不含已寫好部分)。
2.短文必須包括表中所列要點,可根據內容分段表述。
3.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
4.參考詞彙:眼界―horizon(或view)
The summer holiday is corning.Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday.
One Possible Version
The summer holiday is corning.Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
㈩ 2011江西高考英語作文及翻譯,謝謝啦。急需
早上好,大家好:我是李華從星光中學。我演講的題目是「讓我們騎自行車」。
眾所周知,隨著人民生活水平的提高,汽車已經成為一個普遍的交通工具,給我們的生活帶來了很大的方便。然而他們也造成了一些問題,如空氣污染和交通堵塞。
我們如何能解決問題嗎?就我而言,騎自行車是一種很好的解決方案。一方面,自行車不需要汽油和他們的節能。另一方面,自行車是環境友好,因為他們不會發出的廢氣。什麼是更多,騎自行車是我們的運動,它對我們的健康有益的好方法。
因此,讓我們把責任騎自行車建立低碳城市。加入我們吧!
謝謝!