檢查作文用英語怎麼說
1. 作文用英語怎麼說
composition
2. 「作文」用英語怎麼說
作文:composition n.
How to write the composition 「 My weekend 「 ?
如何寫」 我的周末」 這篇作文?
3. |英語高手進| 幫忙檢查英語作文
In any Chinese cities, no slum exists, also no so many begger problems.是否太絕對了些呢?而且語法拼寫都有錯。
參考: most chinese cities, there are no as many slums and beggar problms as that of india.
In China,food and clothing, minimum housing are no longer problems for anybody, but India still has those problems. 好絕對。
參考:food,clothing and mimimum housing are no longer big problems for most chinese,but not for the majority of indians.
Air-conditioner, computer, motorcycle, cell phones..., these items any Chinese can afford to buy絕對了。語法錯誤。
參考:air-conditioners,computers,motorcycles,cell phones...nearly any of chinese can afford these items ,at least one of them.
Car is no longer a luxury any more, most of people are able to buy it.
參考:cars are no longer luxurious purchases, for more and more chinese are able to buy one or more.
And cell-phone is very popular with all the teenagers.
參考:and cell phones are popular among all ages of chinese ,especially the teenagers.
But for many Indians, those are still dreams.
參考:but for many indians, having those things is still a dream.
I suppose it is very important for children to have a good environment to study and live.確定點兒。
參考:i am sure it is very important for children to have a goog environment to study and live in .
But in fact,India provides children with a dirty environment. 語法。
參考:but in fact ,indian children are just provided with a dirty and noisy one.
India』s ecation is called 『rote learning』,few schools pay attention to students』 creative development.
參考:what's worse,india's ecation is called 「rote learning」,and many schools don't pay enough atention to students' ceativity development.
A serious problem is that some students can』t go to school,because they are poor,their families aren』t able to do that.語法。...to do that ...is do what?
參考:the most serious problem should be that some students even cannot go to school, because their poor family are not able afford the expenses,
In China most students can have a nice environment to learn knowledges.
參考:while in china ,the government is trying hard to make sure that every child
has a perfect environment to learn konwledge and other things.
India is also an oriental country with a long history. Ancient Indians created a splendid ancient civilization.最好刪掉。
Indians never be scared about death,they have hopes and confidence for the future.
與主題無關,刪。
From my point of view,Indianness is colourful as Chinese culture.
But there are also some differences between them.第三點你是要講中印文化上的差別,那麼你就應該舉幾個列子如服裝,食物,宗教信仰等,而不是這么籠統地帶過
參考:china and india are also different in cultures.chinese usually eat meals with chopsticks while indians with hands;...
India is a unique country.India and China are at different levels.And I believe India will develope fast in the future.
主題是將中印的差異,怎麼到最後變成對印度的祝願了?
參考:generally speaking ,as two old countries ,chian and indian are so different in many aspects like social life and plitical institution.
4. 作文 用英語怎麼說
composition
祝你學習進步,更上一層樓!請記得採納,謝謝!(*^__^*)
5. 寫完作文後必須檢查一遍用英語怎麼說
寫完作文後必須檢查一遍
After writing the composition, you must check it again
6. 一篇五百字的作文用英語怎麼說
a five-hunred-word paper/essay
7. 寫作文,用英語怎麼說
write a composition
8. 檢查一篇英語作文,謝謝!!!!
以下是我的修改,請樓主比照一下.因為寫出具體原因太耗時耗力,敬請原諒.如有疑問,請給我發消息.
If I were Jane, would I leave Mr. Rochester?
I can』t understand why Jane left Mr. Rochester after she knew Mr. Rochester had a wife. And I think she was just refusing to enter the heaven.
So if I were Jane, I wouldn't leave Mr. Rochester.
Firstly, I believe that Mr. Rochester loves me, which is a very important reason for me not to leave him.
Next, I think that Mr. Rochester can deal with these things well, because he has so much ability.
Thirdly, if I left him, he would be lonely, very lonely. So I will live with him, and let the time prove that he really loves me .
Last, it's just a imagination that, if Jane didn』t leave Mr. Rochester, maybe the end of this story will be more perfect with less hurt and less pity.
9. 求高手檢查英語作文語病
老師們好!我是上海的11年的高考考生,因為覺得作文薄弱所以自己試著寫了10年的上海作文題。
寫好之後自己感覺還不錯,但是似乎缺少一些有文化氣息的事例,文筆也不夠優美。。。
想請各位老師耐著性子看一下(有點長),估計一下大概可以得多少分(滿分70),並且指出還有什麼地方應該改進的,謝謝!!
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作文題目:
根據以下材料,選取一個角度,自擬題目,寫一篇不少於800字的文章(不要寫成詩歌)。
丹麥人去釣魚會隨身帶一把尺子,釣到魚,常常用尺子量一量,將不夠尺寸的小魚放回河裡。他們說:「讓小魚長大不更好嗎?」兩千多年前,我國孟子曾說過:「數罟不入洿池,魚鱉不可勝食也;」意思是,不要用細密的漁網在池塘里捕撈小魚,這樣才會有更多的魚。
實際上,其中的道理也貫穿在我們現實生活中的許多方面。
作文全文:
「留下餘地」的智慧
曾經,我總喜歡掐著時間辦事:在最後一刻起床、在最後一刻叫作業、在最後一刻寫完考場作文…曾經,我為自己這種「精確」洋洋自得。直到,一次在外地旅遊時因為不小心迷路而錯過了回家的火車——哎呀當時那真叫叫天天不應叫地地不靈——眼睜睜看著火車開走,我看看空空的錢包只好無奈地打電話向老爸求援,最後耗時費錢不說還誤了之後的安排。從此我開始反思:我是不是辦事該給自己留點餘地呢?
其實,給自己留下餘地是一種正確的生活態度。人在生活中每天都要處理數不清的事情,說不定哪天其中一兩件就會因突發因素打亂安排。如果做事總之做得太絕,不留有一點迴旋、應變的餘地,不可避免地就會產生問題。君不見股票交易的廣告、信息都會提醒股民:股市有風險,入市需謹慎?就是因為輕易把重金押在某一支股票上,一旦虧損就是萬劫不復。類似的,保健品廣告總囑咐消費者「本品不能替代葯物」,也是給自己留下了解釋的餘地。可見給自己留下餘地就能讓我們在處理生活中的事情時都有一條後路,使自己得以更輕松順暢,不至於一有問題就滿盤皆輸。
在我給自己試著留下餘地之後,我漸漸發現有時做人也需要給別人留下餘地。這是一種對他人的尊重,也是人和人之間能順暢交往的基石。就比如說學校里組織一個活動,參與者每個人都有自己的任務。那麼我若是作為一個組織者,當有人忙於其他事情而疏忽工作時我是該硬逼他一定要「按時交貨」呢,還是根據他的情況調整計劃呢?甚至在有人對我心生不滿向我提出意見時,我是該針鋒相對大吵一架呢,還是心平靜氣討論問題呢?答案不言而喻。顯然,給別人留有餘地,其實就體現在包容別人的錯誤和意見。退一步才往往是海闊天空,理智、和平的溝通才能發揮效果,讓人與人的交流體現出它的價值。
事實上,生活中處處都有「餘地」的存在。我們在給別人留下餘地的同時,也在接受別人對我們的「餘地」。甚至往大里說,生活本身乃至「命運」,都會時刻給我們留下迴旋的餘地。因此,如何學會利用,進而學會尋找自己的「餘地」,就顯得很重要了。犯錯後接受別人給予的餘地,那就要心存感激的同時努力上進、知錯就改,這是知恥而後勇的上進心。遭遇困難或失敗時不放棄,相信自己、相信生命,積極尋找出路或困難的解決辦法,那是信念和毅力。至於如何在找到「餘地」後重新開始,最終成功,這又是如何「抓住機遇」的課題了。可見,「餘地」是人生中的一門大智慧,值得我們用心去學習。
關於「餘地」的思考,以自身為起點、以他人為路線,最終千千萬萬個「個人」就繪製成了一幅「餘地」的巨幅彩繪,融入到了社會的大環境中,和我們每個人息息相關。要讓自己被「受壓迫」的「餘地」牽著鼻子走,還是要踩著厚實的「餘地」一路前行?至少我已經得出了自己的答案。
問題補充:最主要是想得到估分和改進意見。。。謝謝各位老師了!
還有補充下,有沒有哪位老師願意留一下QQ或者網上聯系方式?