英語我們怎麼寫作文
『壹』 我們要去秋遊的英文作文怎麼寫作文
1. 如何寫一篇秋遊的英語作文改顫枯
We fall camp（我們的秋遊）
Last week,we were go to the Laohutan marine
park fall camp.We saws dolphins、洞坦seals、whale sharks and hippocampus…Then
we were go to the happy-theater.The host was very humor,the animals
star was very lovely and very clever.Then we were go to a *** all
garden,we were played very happy.Back home after I very excited.
2. 寫一篇秋遊的英語作文
僅供參考：如果您還有什核洞么不滿意的，請發消息給我，並附上問題的連接，An Autumn Trip to Qianshan-千山秋遊Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus.It is about thirty miles from the city.We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.As soon as we got there,we began to climb up the mountains.How great the sight is!We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty,peaeefulness and loveliness.There are hundreds of mountains,one after another.there are magnificent cliffs,one above another.We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily.As the sun was going down,we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill,where we had a big dinner,and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.Before daybreak,we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark.Unaware of the cold wind,we stood motionlessly,with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east.Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky.As the redness deepened,some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky,dividing heaven from the earth.Just at this moment,up from the brightening far east rose the sun.It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes.and a slight applause from us.the amazed spectators,rang through the peak.Up,up it rose,adding to itself strength and glory at every step.It dazzled with vigour,driving away darkness,cold,and misery from the earth,and bring light,warmth,and happiness to men.We were pletely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.千山秋遊去年秋天我們乘公共汽車去千山遊玩了一次.它距城市大約三十英里.為了第二天早晨看日出，我們計劃住在那兒的旅館里.我們一到那裡就開始爬山.那裡的景色太美了！我們感到好像進入了另一個世界，一個充滿美麗、和平和可愛的世界.那裡有數百座山峰鱗次櫛比：有壯觀的懸崖層出不窮.我們精力充沛地向上攀登，貪婪地呼吸著新鮮空氣.當太陽下落時，我們來到山下的一家小旅店，在那裡美美地吃了一頓晚飯，然後早早地上床睡覺，以便恢復精力第二天早晨遠征.天亮前，我們經過在黑暗中艱難地摸索和爬行到達了最高的山峰.我們一動不動地站在那裡，雙眼凝視著遠處的東方，連寒風也沒覺察到.突然間，薄薄的紅光在天空中散開，隨著紅色加深，一些神奇的雲朵在天空四散，把天地分開.正在這時，太陽從遠處東方的光亮處升起.它是那樣紅，然而又那麼嬌嫩以致我們可以用肉眼來觀察它.從我們吃驚的觀賞者中發出的一陣輕微的歡呼劃過山峰，太陽升得越來越高了，每升一步都給它本身增加了力量和光輝.它炫耀著威力，驅走了黑暗、寒冷和大地的苦難，並給人們帶來光明、溫暖和幸福.這一奇觀和大自然的偉大使我們完全驚愕了.我們像天真的孩子一樣跳著、喊著，和山峰一起沐浴在太陽的晨曦中，流連忘返.。
3. 一篇關於秋遊的英語作文
Unfetable autumn outing I still remember that it is a refreshing autumn weather.All my clas *** ates and teachers came to the People'Park to boat。There is a big lake called WeiYang Lake.Light wind blowed and the surface of the lake microwave shiny.We rented some boats and rowed to the center of the lake,The water is clear with fish swimming in it.On the back,willows danced by wind.
【樓主】純手寫，若覺得滿意，望多多支持哈！！！
4. 一篇關於秋遊的英語作文
Unfetable autumn outing I still remember that it is a refreshing autumn weather.All my clas *** ates and teachers came to the People'Park to boat。
There is a big lake called WeiYang Lake.Light wind blowed and the surface of the lake microwave shiny.We rented some boats and rowed to the center of the lake,The water is clear with fish swimming in it.On the back,willows danced by wind.【樓主】純手寫，若覺得滿意，望多多支持哈！！。
5. 以秋遊為主寫一篇英語作文
老師正在宣布一件事情，正當說道「秋」字的時候，「轟隆——」教室里頓時人聲鼎沸，歡呼著，蹦跳著，猶如地震一般，差點把教學樓都震跨了。這是為什麼呢？因為要去秋遊！
第二天，我們興高采烈、精神十足地來到西山山腳，
沿著彎彎曲曲的小路拾級而上。樹上的小鳥嘰嘰喳喳地叫著，似乎在開著森林演唱；樹木排成兩列，直直地佇立在小道兩旁，好像在迎接我們的到來。
一路上說說笑笑，不知不覺中來到了萬卷樓，我們進入萬卷樓，只見四周畫著歷史上著名的一些人物，比如諸葛亮、關羽、曹操、劉備……。沿著古典的木質樓梯走到頂樓，鳥瞰山下，是一條不見首尾的江，把南充市從中間分隔開來，那條江一定就是嘉陵江吧！再看城市，猶如在房產公司看到的小區模型，只不過更密集了、更真實了。就在我神遊其中之時，「大部隊」已經出發趕往下一個目的地——農家樂。
在這途中，有一座石山，上面流淌著的水，沖下來，形成了瀑布。雖說沒有黃果山瀑布的秀美，沒有賽特凱達斯瀑布宏偉，但這是我第一次看到瀑布，真的很美！水流從石山裡瀉下，彷彿一台天然的織布機，在石山的環抱中永不停息地轉動，紡織出「千丈」白緞，令人覺得心曠神怡。突然，又颳起了一陣風，毛毛「細雨」灑了我們一身，頓覺一股涼意向自己撲來。
繼續向上走，就來到了農家樂，我們與那裡的人載歌載舞，吃著香噴噴的飯菜，他們的熱情好客給我們留下了深刻的印象。吃飽飯，下午我們翻過了兩座山，艱苦的完成了「二萬五千里長征」，累得我們腰酸背痛腿還麻，但我們堅持下來了。這讓我明白了一個道理：「秋遊不僅在於吃喝玩樂，更重要的還是鍛煉我們的體能與意志。」
6. 英語作文《秋遊》
Have taken off a shoes , have galloped to ocean , tide water pour up, have submerged my bound feet fork, water withdraws from down soon , seems to be scratching an itch woollen cloth for me! Be beach upper shell everywhere after ebbing,they are ocean's gift to us , have yellow, having is white , having is blue , having is silvery white, 。
Be really colourful. The fan that shell's form great variety of fantasies , some image handful open , some hand , some images like Guanyin a peacock in his pride, some all kinds of image puppies, are really to be almost lifelike in appearance. I hasten to take up a sack to collect a few moments later, have collected right away once big chockful bags. I feel a little bit tired afterwards, will lie on the sandy beach, be really extremely fortable in feeling the bosom who lies in the mother with regard to the image!。
『貳』 怎麼寫英語作文
英語作文的基礎是句子，句子的基礎是單詞，熟悉一些常見單詞的用法有助於你寫英語作文。你可以參考30小時輕松記牢1800單詞的秘訣學習一些記憶方法
『叄』 如何寫故事英文作文怎麼寫作文
1. 英文故事和英文作文的格式怎麼寫
1. 英文作文格式說明：
Title （標題）：寫英文作文時，若有標題之要求時，我們就必須物咐書寫題目；若無要求則無需書寫題目。
Indent （縮排）：英文作文每段開頭均須往內空4-5個英文字母。開頭英文字母要大寫。英文作文每段左方之每一行均須切齊，右方則否，保持「之字形」（zigzag）。
Punctuations （標點符號）：任何標點符號皆不可以至於英文句子的開頭。常用英文標點符號分類如下：
. 句號 period
逗號 ma
； 分號 semicolon
： 冒號 colon
問號 question mark
！ 驚嘆號 exclamation point
「 」 雙引號 double quotation mark
' ' 單引號 single quotation mark
– 連字型大小 hyphen
–– 破折號 dash
（ ) 括弧 parenthesis
[ ] 方括弧 square bracket
. . . 刪節號 ellipsis
2. 段落結構
Introction （導論）：文章的引言，吸引讀者，闡明文意，導入正題。英文作文的引言必須包含Thesis Statement （論點），是整篇文章的靈魂所在。Thesis Statement常是在引言導論的最後一句。它就像是羅盤一般，有兩個主要功能：告訴讀著作者的想法思路；作者以它為指引，以免自己寫偏。
Body （內文）：把論點加以細項分類，並支持論點，深入討論。Body 必須包含Topic Sentence （主題句）。一般說來，主題句必須置於每一個Supporting Paragraph（支持段落）開始的第一句。主題句的用意在於說明整個段落的大意，是段落的摘要，也是段落內容的基礎。簡言之，Thesis Statement之於整篇文章的重要性，猶如Supporting Paragraph之於Body。
Conclusion （結論）：總結文章，重申論點。可再簡述文章要點，有時可提出引人省思的問題，但不宜再發展其它論點。
Order （次序）：次序指的是文章內容在文章中的組織、安排、或是組成序列。虛螞衡常用次序如下：
1. Chronological Order / Time Order （時間次序）：故事的發展需以時間為基礎，按時間的推移來發展。以事件或人物出現的先後次序來展開故事。
2. Spatial Order （空間次序）：作者根據空間的細節所做描述順序之安排。以一個物理位置為基礎，作者描述了可從該一位置所看到的景象、物體。描述順序有其聯貫性。ㄧ般由左到右，從前到後，或從上到下。
3. Ascending Order / Emphatic Order （遞增順序）：遞增順序有時被稱為「把最重要的留到最後」。這個方法把重點，也就是把文章最有趣、或重要的細節，放置在文章的最後一個支持的段落。最後的位置在一篇文章中，往往是最有力的位置。因為讀者最有可能記得最後提及的事情。最典型的用語有 「last of all,」 「the most important reason, part. . . 」等。
4. Descending Order （遞減順序）：相對於遞增順序，遞減順序把重點擺在文章的第一個支持論點的段落。也就是把文章最有趣、或重要的細節，放置在文章的開端。作者當然認為其他的論點也是重要的，只是他先提及相對而言最重要的部分。
2. 英語作文怎麼寫
英語作文的基本要求： 首先，一個段落必須有一個中心，即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達。
整個段落必須緊扣這個主題（stick or hold to the topic），這就是段落的統一性（unity）。其次，一個段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個完整的感覺，這就是完整性（pleteness or adequateness）。
再者，一個段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個句子差做到另一個句子的過渡必須流暢（ *** ooth），這就是連貫性（coherence）。根據文章題目以及你所想要表示的意思下手，下面我們就對這三個標准分別加以說明。
1、統一性 一個段落內的各個句子必須從屬於一個中心，任何游離於中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請看下例： Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主題句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。
文中出現兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，這一段是講的是Joe and I ，中間出現一個Bella是不合適的。還有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關。
再看一個例子： My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh o hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought o new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting enty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是I bought o new suitcases last week，另一個是My mother was a premature baby。 從上面兩個例子可以看出，native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。
卷面上如果這種句子多了，造成偏題或離題，那問題就更嚴重了。2、完整性 正象我們前面說得那樣，一個段落的主題思想靠推展句來實現，如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進一步交待和充實，就不能構成一個完整的段落。
同樣，雖然有推展句，但主題思想沒有得到相對圓滿的交待，給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。
例如： Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression. 本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。
什麼是「a mind in turmoil」（心境不平靜）Physical work又如何能改變這種情況？為什麼它能起therapy的作用？讀者得不到明確的答案。因此，要達到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。
例如： It is not always true that a g筏攻摧紀詆慌搓葦撣倆ood picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it. 段首句所表達的主題思想是一種看法，必須有具體事例加以驗證。上述兩個推展句只是在文字上對主題作些解釋，整個段落內容空洞，簡而不明。
如果用一兩個具體的例子的話，就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段： It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?3、連貫性（coherence） 連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內在的邏輯性，後者指的是使用轉換詞語。
當然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內在的有機的聯系；反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。
1）、意連 段落中句子的排列應遵循一定的次序，不能想到什麼就寫什麼。如果在下筆之前沒有構思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。
下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。 A.按時間先後排列4、有損連貫性的幾種情況： 考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤： 1、不必要的改變時態，比如： In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with 。
3. 【一次難忘的經歷英文作文怎麼寫】
An unfettable experience Usually,the first time you did something is unfettable,although it couldn't be always wonderful.As for me,an unfettable experience of mine is the first time I joined the Red Cross.We took boxes,and walked on the street.We found some people on the street,then asked them to raise some money for Red Cross.At first,we were so surprised that just a few people would raise some money for Red Cross,and some people even thought we were cheat!But we weren't upset.We went on and worked for the whole day.During that day,we all felt tired but happy,because we raised much money.We looked at the boxes and *** iled.It's really an unfettable experience!。
4. 英文作文怎麼寫
英語作文怎麼寫？ 相對於英語的其它題目，作文的綜合要求可能更高一點，那麼我們就以這次考試的作文為例子來講講英語作文怎麼寫. 首先我先說說同學們在做作文的時候常常遇到的問題，然後我再給出一個大概的解決方法，最後呢，我們聯系這次考試的作文題來實戰一番. 從我們題目的要求來看，是一個記事的記敘文，並且是一個看圖說話類的，所有的素材都在我們的圖片裡面了.那麼我們就要先把圖片仔細的看一下，選好線索，顯然圖片裡面的鍾暗示我們選擇時間為我們的敘事線索.其次要選擇好一個時態的問題，我們可以以晚上回憶的方式來敘述這個事情。那麼都是過去時。 那麼開頭是一個比較困難的事情，大家也許不知道從何說起.這里我給出了一個例子. Our class had already planned to go to Handian Nursing Home to visit those old people living there . We were all eager to go there as soon as we can. And today this time really came, so you could image how happy we were. At about 8:00 in the morning , with tools in hands, we went out of our school towards the Handian Nursing Home 下面我們不必過多的描述在路上的情形，我們重點將描述在敬老院裡面的情形. It was about 9:00 when we arrived there. Though we were a little tired, none of us wanted to have a rest. As some of those old people seldom came out, so some of us helped them walk around to breathe the fresh air. Some help them to wash their clothes, and the others swept the ground. Most of us never do such things at home, so we maybe didn't do these well, but we all tried our best. At about 11:55,we had lunch with them, and our monitor stood for us to bless them devoutly. During the lunch time, we were all very happy. After lunch, we had a party with those old people. Before we came here, we had already prepared some songs for them. As we expected, they all felt great pleased with our programs. Though maybe we didn't performed well, the *** ile on their faces made us very happy. 該到說再見的時候了，一定要注意收尾工作. Happy time always goes fast. Though we didn't notice that we had stayed here for a long time, the clock on the wall informed us clearly that it was time for us to go home. So we had to say good bye to those old people. On the way home, we all said this was really a significant day, and we decided to e back again whenever we had time.
5. 怎樣寫英文故事
英文故事屬中學英語書面表達重要教學內容，也是高考英語書面表達重要考點，寫作時應注意下列幾點：請看一則書面表達實例：閱讀下表內容，寫一則英文故事字數：120左右。
參考答案：On May12,2008,a terrible earthquakehit Wenchun County,Sichuan Province.In aflash,buildings fell down and cities were al-most leveled.Tens of thousands of peoplewere killed and the rest lost their homes.A Junior1girl from a nearby middleschool was buried under a school building.She was cold and hungry,but she wasn'tafraid,because she believed she would besaved.She even took out her flashlight ans。
6. 一篇英文作文怎麼寫
The Harry Potter books are a series of fantasy novels by British writer J. K. Rowling. Since the release of the first novel, Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (retitled Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone in the United States) in 1997, the books have gained immense popularity and mercial success worldwide, spawning films, video games, and a wealth of other items. The six books to date have collectively sold more than 300 million copies "J. K. Rowling". Accessed 23 March 2006. and have been translated into more than 63 languages. The first volume has been translated into Latin and even Ancient Greek, HP in Ancient Greek. Accessed 25 November 2006. making it the longest work in that language since the novels of Heliodorus of Emesa in the 3rd century AD. Greek Harry Accessed 25 November 2006. Due to the tremendous success of the novels, Rowling has bee the richest writer in literary history. Watson, Julie and Kellner, Tomas. "J.K. Rowling And The Billion-Dollar Empire". Forbes, 26 February 2004. Accessed 19 March 2006. English language versions of the books are published by Bloom *** ury in the United Kingdom and internationally, and Scholastic Press in the United States, Allen & Unwin in Australia and Raincoast Books in Canada. A large portion of the narrative takes place in Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and focuses on Harry Potter's struggles against the dark wizard Lord Voldemort. At the same time, the books explore the themes of friendship, ambition, choice, prejudice, courage, growing up, love, moral responsibility, and the plexities of death, and are set against the expansive backdrop of a hidden magical world with its own plex history, diverse inhabitants, unique culture, and parallel societies. Six of the seven planned boo
7. 寫一個你最喜愛的故事英語作文加翻譯
My Favourite Book
I enjoy reading different kinds of books, but "Harry Porter" is my favorite one. The story is very long but I am interested in it. Harry was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful enemies. His Z-shaped scar and magic stick brought me into a magical world. In fact, the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. I think it's the best book I've ever read.
我最喜歡的書
我喜歡閱讀各種書籍，但「哈利·波特」是我最喜歡的。這個故事很長，但我很感興趣。哈利這樣勇敢而聰明的孩子，他敢於對抗強大的敵人戰斗。他Z形的傷疤和魔術棒把我帶進一個神奇的世界。事實上，小說的故事是如此有意義的，我可以從中學到很多東西。我認為這是最好的書我讀過。
『肆』 我們如何節約用水 英語作文
你是不是對英語作文感到特別苦惱，撓破腦袋都寫不出幾個字呢？哈哈哈哈，其實英語作文這只攔路虎並沒有你想像的那麼困難。只要你會說話就會寫作，所以沒必要對它感到畏懼。
下面我將為你提供三篇關於節約用水的英語作文，希望能幫助你打開思路，讓你文思泉湧！
作文三
70% of everyone's body is water. If people don't drink water for a long time, they will die of water shortage. Water is so important to us, but with the advancement of instrialization, there is less and less fresh water on the earth, and water, the source of human life, is going to die out, so we need to save water and protect water resources. So how can we save water in our daily life?
First of all, when washing clothes, don't just pour out the soapy water. It's better to pour it into a bucket and use it when it is left to mop the floor.
Second, when cleaning bicycles and family cars, you can use a wet cloth instead of flushing. If it is too dirty, you can use the resial water after washing.
Third, do not always turn on the tap when washing your face. When rubbing facial milk or rubbing your face, turn off the tap in time.
翻譯
每個人身體的70%都是水，如果人們長時間不喝水，就會因缺水而死。水對我們如此重要，但是隨著工業化的推進，地球上的淡水越來越少，人類生命的源泉——水就要消亡，所以我們需要節約用水和保護水資源。那麼我們該怎麼在日常生活中節約用水呢？
首先，當洗衣服時，不要隨便把肥皂水倒掉，最好倒在一個桶里，留著拖地時使用。
第二，自行車、家用小轎車清潔時，可以不用水沖，改用濕布擦，太臟的地方，就用洗衣物過後的余水沖洗。
第三，洗臉時不要一直開著水龍頭，當搓洗面奶或揉臉時，應該及時關上水龍頭。
『伍』 英語作文題目是:在課堂上,我們應該怎麼做怎麼寫
In classes, what should we do?
When we in the classes,we should the classes rules.This,We have a good classroom discipline.We listen the classes carefully.
We shouldn't talk with classmates,or the class noisy.And we shouldn't drink anythings .
We shouldn't did other subject's work.
We work together, build a good class!
This way , I am sure we'll do better in the classes.Let's do our best!
『陸』 怎麼寫英語作文怎麼寫英語作文
英語作文要想寫得好，離不開平時的積累，高分作文一般勝在行文清晰、准確、簡潔三點，這就是公認的英語滿分作文「黃金三定律」，為保證所寫文章清晰明了，一是越確切具體越好，二是組織結構富有邏輯性。
姐姐現在就為你們提供三篇與英語作文題目有關的範文，記得好好參考哦，如果對你有幫助記得點個贊再走。
【一】🌸🌸🌸旁答案例來咯
英語作文：
Li Hua is my good friend. We are classmates. He is tallest in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. We have many in common， so that we have many things to talk. For example， we both like playing basketball and we like the same basketball playerKobe. Besides， we both like cartoon very much. We always watch cartoon program together. At weekends， weplay basketball often. The more important， he studies hard.So do I. We can make progress together. He is a good friend.
翻譯：
李華是我的好朋友，我們是同學。他是我們班上最高的。他很善良，總是隨時幫助其他人。我們有很多共同點，因此我們有很多事情可以交談。比如說，我們都喜歡打籃球，我們都喜歡同一個球星——科比。除此之外，我們都很喜歡卡通。我們經常一起看卡通節目。周末的時候，我們經常一起打籃球。更重要的是，他學習很努力，我也一樣。我們可以相互進步。他是一位好朋友。
【二】🌸🌸🌸案例來咯
英語作文：
Hello !My name is Mike/Amy .good fried is Han Meimei .She is fourteen years old .She has asmall family .There are three people in har family .She like black and white .Her favourite food is eggs.She like playing basketball .We go to school together every day .This is my fried .do you like her.My friend Vivi is a lively and smart girl,she has long black hair and she is a tallest girl in our class.She is warm-hearted and good- looking so that everyone loves her.I'm so glad to make friend with her.I'm out-going too,so we have been good friends for long time.But sometimes I like quiet but she doesn't.And her marks are not good as me.So,i suggested her that she should work-hard in her study so that we can go to the same university.
This person is my best friend Vivi who i can tell everything to.Like my deeply feelings and thoughts.
翻譯：
我的朋友VIVI是一個活潑聰明的女孩子。她有著長黑發，而且她是班上最高的女孩子。她是個熱心腸的人，而且她很漂亮，以至於大家運彎慧都很喜歡她。我非常的高鬧前興能和她做到朋友。我也是一個開朗的人，所以和她做了很久的朋友。但是有時候我喜歡安靜但她不會。她的成績也沒我的好，所以我建議她應該多努力學習這樣我們才能一起去同一個大學。
這個人就是我的好朋友VIVI,一個能夠讓我告訴她一切，推心置腹的人。
【三】🌸🌸🌸案例來咯
英語作文：
Hello !My name is Mike/Amy .good fried is Han Meimei .She is fourteen
years old .She has asmall family .There are three people in har family
.She like black and white .Her favourite food is eggs.She like playing
basketball .We go to school together every day .This is my fried .do you
like her.
翻譯：
「你好吧！」我叫邁克/艾米。好油炸的是韓美美。她已經十四歲了。她的家庭。哈爾家有三個人。她喜歡黑白的。她最喜歡的食物是雞蛋。她 就像打籃球一樣。我們每天都在一起去上學。這是我的油炸，你喜歡她嗎。
『柒』 高中英語作文怎麼寫分數高
一、長短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精闢的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！
強烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長後短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
二、主題句原則
國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成「群龍無首」之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀里糊塗！不知所雲！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目瞭然，必會平安無事！
特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.
Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、一二三原則
領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點…如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的「標簽」來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用於兩點的情況）
10）for one thing, for another thing（適用於兩點的情況）
建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚！
四、短語優先原則
寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自己不認識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，如果發現亮點—精彩的短語，那麼你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數，怎麼辦？用短語是一個辦法！比如：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短語表達：I am looking forward to it.
五、多實少虛原則
原因很簡單，寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候，不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如：
走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應該說：slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應該說：sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應該說：dance out of the room
老人走出房間應該說：stagger out of the room
所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！
因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩，然後我主動搭訕，然後我們去咖啡廳，然後我們認識了，然後我們成為了朋友…可見，講故事的時候我們總要追求先後順序，先什麼，後什麼，所以然後這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先後或因果關系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）
有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。
舉例：This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分：
When to go, Why he goes away…
附加（多此一舉）
如果有了老婆，總會遇到這樣的情況，當你再講某個人的時候，她會插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話裡面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don』t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其實很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除後不影響整個句子的構成；定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞並且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
排比（排山倒海句）
文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過於此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那麼我希望你引用一個個的排比句，一個個得對偶句，一個個的不定式，一個個地詞，一個個的短語，如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. （氣勢恢宏）
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、挑戰極限原則
既然是挑戰極限，必然是比較難的，但是並非不可攀！
原理：在學生的文章中，很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子，其實也很簡單，只要花上5分鍾的時間看看就可以領會，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語一致，而獨立主格則不然。比如：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！
『捌』 應該如何寫英語作文呢
寫作是本人的老本行，高中一般都是21-23這個級別，大學英語作文被老師在班上推介為範文！！
對於作文，我說的最多的就是：不走尋常路！你不要以為在網上下載那些所謂的優秀作文，拿來背背，你就成為高手了，其實大錯特錯！因為我看了之後也覺得一般，甚至有些拙劣，嘩眾取寵的味道，比如有的所謂優秀作文竟然還用什麼be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 這樣低等的寫作詞彙，說它低等，那是因為這些詞彙已經廣為人知，閱卷老師已經看的麻木不仁了！
要寫出高人一等的作文，我覺得並不難，只要你有一定的語法基礎和一定量的寫作詞彙（越高級越好），寫作句型，就足可以應對常規的高考，四六級考試……（我記得高中25分滿分的作文我可以保持在21-23這個級別，四六級的作文都是110多分）
首先是語法，在你的語法達到一定層次之後，你就可以追求更多的變化了，比如，用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等，這樣可以增加你的語法亮點，讓已經有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮，在你的試卷上多掃射一番！
其次，是詞彙，我覺得，在你的語法達到基本不會出錯的程度上，作文便應該以詞彙取勝，因為在這個層次上，大家的語法都差不多，沒什麼變化，唯一有變化的就是你的詞彙！給你打個比方吧，很多想到「許多」就用many，但是你別忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到「專家」就寫expert，但很少人會想到specialist，很多人在想到「擅長」這詞，就寫be good at ，卻不知還有更高級的表達法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就體現在這些細微的差別上！
再次，是怎麼將文章潤色，從而使你的文章大放異彩！！關於這方面，我覺得我自己使用最多的，也是我自創的------叫做「添油加醋」，包括如下幾個方面：盡可能地在形容詞前使用副詞，在介詞短語中加入適當的形容詞和副詞，在過去分詞前加入副詞，在名詞之前盡可能多用形容詞……，總之就是盡可能地使用形容詞和副詞。我覺得這樣做有一個好處，那就是使原本乾巴巴的句子變得血肉豐滿，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver』s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver『s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
最後，我建議你，平時讀報，或者做題的時候，發現有好的句子好的詞彙，你要抄下來，長期下來，你的作文會有提高的，需要說明的是，這個提高過程可能很緩慢，但是最後能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保證在21-23這個級別，靠的就是對語法的熟練掌握和積累了許多較高級的詞彙，句型，句子。