初中生怎麼寫英語作文
Ⅰ 我是一名初中生 英文不太好 寫了篇 英語作文 哪位高手幫我改改 初學者見諒
I was born in Luoyang, a beautiful city which is also known as the ancient capital of China. But today I』ll tell you some special things about it.
As we all know that Luoyang is located in north of Luo river and it has a profound history. The history of Luoyang has five thousand years. Some people called Luoyang as the origin of Chinese culture. It』s the first country which was entirely designed by people. Luoyang is the first place that used the imperial examination system. On the other way Luoyang is a place that the Silk Road and the Grande Canal intersection of Sui and Tang Dynasties. Luoyang also has many historical interests such as Longmen Grottoes. At the same time, Luoyang was regarded as the peony』s hometown. Every year in the spring, when the peony blooms, people from all over the world will come here to see it. It let people feel fragrant when peony is opened.
Not only Chinese people, foreign visitors are deeply fond of Luoyang as well. The American city planner said Luoyang was the best place for people to live in the ancient years.
For many young ladies Luoyang is a good place to taste some delicious food. Shuixi is the most famous traditional food in Luoyang. It includes more than one hundred dishes. Every dish has their own characteristic.
I think you know a lot about my hometown according to my words. So if you have some free time, you are welcomed to come and we will display you the divine diversity of culture features of my beautiful homeland!
LS的明顯沒改干凈,according to my worlds 明顯不對, 應該是Words才對,world是世界地球的意思啊,我繚亂了
Ⅱ 鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辮浣滄枃
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銆銆The spring of the recovery of all things came. We took off our heavy cotton padded jacket, put on spring clothes and came to the grass. Cao'er's clothes have also been changed, new green, light green, dark green, green
銆銆Spring is coming and another semester is about to begin. Of course, there are new plans for the new semester. This semester I am going to design a form with a total of 30 points. I do wrong, be criticized - 1, do good, be praised + 1. See how many points you have at the end of the semester. I don't just rely on this form. I have to work hard in all subjects, especially careless me. I should finish the homework assigned by the teacher carefully. I should listen carefully in class. I should be careful and careful in the exam.
銆銆I hope I can abide by every plan and make myself better.
2.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辮浣滄枃
銆銆Time flies. After two months, life comes to an end. We return to the most familiar and tight school and start a new course. Think about it carefully. I should study hard, cherish every minute and don't let my time waste. Here is my study plan.
銆銆1銆 Finish reading a book in half a month. After reading it, extract your own feelings, beautiful sentences and words.
銆銆2銆 Actively answer questions in class, listen carefully, study carefully, do homework carefully, and take exams carefully.
銆銆3銆 Preview the teacher's content in advance every day, and be able to read the text and recite the words.
銆銆4銆 Ten English words a day, can recite words, can silently solve oral problems, 25, must be all right, this is a must task every day.
3.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辮浣滄枃
銆銆Today, the teacher asked us to go home and think about our new semester plan. Now I'll tell you my new semester plan.
銆銆The first point is to read more good books and take good reading notes; The second point is to exercise more and strengthen your physique.
銆銆This semester, I mainly read several good books, such as the water margin, which is one of the four famous works in China. It is particularly interesting. It vividly tells the tragic experiences of 108 heroes in Liangshan and some earth shaking events they were forced to do in Liangshan, including timely rain Song Jiang, leopard head Lin Chong, flower monk Lu Zhishen and "jade Qilin" Lu Junyi Among them, I like Hua monk Lu Zhishen best. He hates evil as hatred and likes to fight against injustice. He is a hero
銆銆I found a saying in the Chinese book that makes sense. Health is the foundation of life. With a healthy body, he has the capital to seek happiness, so I want to exercise more. This is my learning plan.
4.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辮浣滄枃
銆銆In the twinkling of an eye, the winter vacation is coming to an end, ushering in a new semester. When the new semester comes, I plan my study in advance, clarify the new semester plan, and find the way forward,
銆銆Looking back on the winter vacation and new year, set off firecrackers, make mplings and have a reunion dinner. Pick up shells and play with sand on the beach. Sleep late at home, play with computers and watch TV.
銆銆In the new semester, I hope the teacher can choose a good seat for me without being disturbed by others. Good grades in each course won honor for the class and parents. I also wish my parents a smooth job, my grandparents good health and a long life.
銆銆In the new semester, in order to improve my grades, I designed a new semester plan for myself:
銆銆1. Listen carefully in class, raise your hands actively, and don't talk to your deskmate.
銆銆2. Do your homework carefully and write well.
銆銆3. After class, read more extracurricular books.
5.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辮浣滄枃
銆銆Happy days always pass too fast. In the twinkling of an eye, the winter vacation has passed and school has begun again. We have to gather up our scattered mood and start to slowly enter the state of learning. I recall that I had many shortcomings or problems in the last semester, such as poor writing, careless homework and careless examination. As a result, in the final math exam last semester, I didn't, and only got 87 points. I'm really regretful and ashamed. I'm really sorry for the teacher's hard teaching and training.
銆銆This semester, I must get rid of these shortcomings and problems, listen carefully in class, actively answer questions, help students more, carefully complete my homework at home, read an article and make a reading card every day to improve my writing ability, and I also often read some scientific knowledge and stories such as astronomy and geography. To read widely and master the knowledge, find the "Golden House" in the book.
銆銆In this semester, I will try my best to keep the test score above 95 points, and I hope I can maintain my honor of "three good students" and live up to the ardent expectations of my parents.
Ⅲ 初中生寫好英語作文的三個W
寫作在英語學習中是培養和提高語言能力的有效手段,它有助於鞏固和掌握所學詞彙、語法等語言知識,有助於訓練直接用所學語言進行思維,有利於提高駕馭語言的能力。中學生該如何寫好英語作文呢? 一、寫作步驟要寫好一篇英語作文,掌握一定的寫作技巧,應把握以下幾個步驟: 1.認真審題立意,定文章之靈魂對命題作文必須認真審題,對自由作文必須立好意。文章要有明確的主題,必須具備4個條件:准確、鮮明、深刻、集中。以命題作文「The English teacher I Admire Most」為例,文章的主題是關於記敘我最欣賞的一位英語老師,因而就不能泛泛談論老師這一職業或自己的幾位老師。 2.草擬提綱,打造文章之骨架審好題,立好意後,就要寫提綱,打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事:安排好層次段落,鋪設好過渡,處理好開頭和結尾。如命題作文中有提示句,還要從提示句的關鍵詞出發,圍繞關鍵詞開拓思路,發揮聯想,記錄下聯想到的東西,可以是句子或單詞片語,可以是英語或漢語。仍以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例,提綱可以這樣寫: 1)Who is the English teacher I admire most 2)My reasons 3)What can I learn from the teacher 3.寫出段落主題句,理文章之脈絡一篇短文的段落一般分為引導段、主題段和結尾段。每段的主題句非常重要,是作者思維的起點,切題的准繩,闡述的對象。看到段落主題句,讀者大致了解段落要闡述的內容。段落主題句通常是一個語法結構完整、內容概括、用詞簡潔明了的單句。通常將段落主題句置於段落的開頭,可使文章結構更清晰,有說服力。 4.參照提綱,緊扣主題句,完成各段落,充文章之血肉 有了段落主題句後,還需要順著段落主題句的方向,參照提綱中的思路,從而完成各個段落。引導段要能引起讀者的注意和興趣,為主題段鋪路架橋。主題段應圍繞文章和該段的主題來展開。展開的方式包括:順序法、舉例法、比較法、對比法、說明法、因果法、推導法、歸納法,和下定義等。可以根據需要任選一種或幾種方式。還是以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例,主題段中就能用到舉例法、說明法、因果法等。 進行這一步驟還需注意三方面問題: 1)確保提綱中段落結構的思路與各段主題句的一致性。只有這樣,才能保證所寫段落不偏題,不跑題。 2)要綜合考慮各個段落的內容安排,避免段落內容的交叉。 3)用好連接詞,注意段落間、句子間的連貫性。要做到所寫文章層次分明,思路清晰,文字連貫,就需要在句與句之間,段與段之間架起一座座橋梁,而連接詞起的正是橋梁作用。 二、增加文采小竅門如果說第一、二步是對文章的構思,第三、四步驟則是真正地「寫」了,用詞是否貼切,文法是否正確,句式是否多變,文采是否有生氣,關繫到寫作者的語言功底和水平,但也有些竅門,以下這幾點可以供你參考。 1.在整篇文章中,避免只是用一兩個句式,要靈活運用各種句式。如倒裝句、強調句、省略句、主從復合句、對比句、分詞短語、介詞短語等。 2.使用不同長度的句子,通過分句和合句,增強句子的連貫性和表現力。 3.改變句子的開頭方式,不要一味以主、謂、賓、狀的次序。可以把狀語置於句首,或用分詞短語等。 4.學會使用過渡詞。如: 1)遞進:furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition 2)轉折:however,but,nevertheless,after all 3)總結:finally,at last,in brief,to conclude 4)強調:really,indeed,certainly,surely,above all 5)對比:in the same way, just as, on the other hand, 5.避免重復使用同一單詞或片語。 6.注意運用固定片語、習語、諺語來代替一些詞表達意思,以增加文采。 三、把好檢查最後一關 1.是否切題分三點看:一是整篇文章內容是否切合文章標題要求;二是段落主題句的內容是否與各段落提示句內容相一致;三是段落內部的內容是否與段落主題句的表達相一致。如果發現任何一個層面不切題,應該盡可能彌補,刪除那些多餘的或不切題的地方,但切忌動「大手術」。 2.是否連貫檢查上下文是否連貫,句子銜接是否自然流暢,檢驗的標准主要是句子是否通暢,該用連詞的地方用了沒有,所用的連詞是否合適。 3.是否有語法錯誤主謂是否一致,動詞的時態、語態、語氣的使用是否正確,片語的搭配是否合乎習慣。還是以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例,根據此標題,文章肯定用第一人稱「I」寫,一般性的描述用現在時,舉過去的事例用過去時。 4.是否有大小寫、拼寫、標點錯誤,注意卷面整潔要提高寫作水平,最根本是要大量實踐,必須多讀多寫,注意博覽和精讀相結合,甚至可以適當背誦一些名句名篇。另外,還可選些範文,悉心領悟,多加模仿,以逐步達到運用自如
Ⅳ 初中英語作文拿高分有什麼方法 如何提高寫作能力
很多初中生英語作文總是拿不了高分,下面就和我一起來看看有什麼方法,供大家參考。
初中英語作文拿高分有什麼方法
細心審題,明確要求。對初中英語作文題目的信息加以分析、整理,為開始動筆做好准備工作,還要搞清英語作文題目的要求,以便根據不同的題材、體裁,寫出不同格式,風格各異的文章。
抓住重點,理順要點。打草稿是寫英語作文的一個重要步驟。審題之後要擬好提綱,使文章有一個明確的邏輯和層次,然後根據提綱進行延伸。
連句成篇,修改潤色。寫完之後不要忘記要仔細檢查一遍,是否有語句不通順的地方,該用關聯詞的地方有沒有用。注意一定要做到卷面整潔。
要加強練詞造句的訓練。詞句對英語作文相當於造房的材料,無好材料就造不出好房子。平時在學習閱讀時要注意收集積累,把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記。平時在練習中的錯誤也要做好記錄,再對照正確句子,使地道的英語句子如同條件反射,落筆就對。
如何提高英語作文寫作能力
積極、大量、用心地閱讀,在閱讀中體驗鮮活詞彙的用法,看多了,自然就在腦海中留下了「痕跡」,到寫作時,這些詞彙就會「信手拈來」。閱讀和寫作是互相促進、相輔相成的。
寫周記、日記,學生不受內容和經驗的限制,可就熟悉的題材,充分發揮自己的想像力,自由表達。但是寫日記、周記要有事可記、有話可寫。總之,要提高自己的英語寫作能力,首先要有積累;其次要自主、自覺地長期練習;還要讀寫結合,多渠道地努力。
Ⅳ 初中英語作文寫作實用方法和技巧盤點
初中英語作文寫作技巧有哪些?
初中英語作文實用方法匯總,作文是中考考試的最後一個部分,占的分值也比較高。綜合對比起來,英語寫作是初中英語學習的難點,主要考察大家對英語的輸出能力,那麼初中生應該怎麼提高英語寫作水平呢?
下面我給大家分享一些非常實用的方法, 希望能幫助到大家。
1.掌握基本的詞彙和語法。
此時的學習者對英語的基本用法還未掌握,因此尚處於學習語言的基礎階段。
這種練習一般說來內容都非常簡單,強調的是學習者所使用的詞彙和語法必須正確。
2.語言和內容並舉。
此時的學習者已經掌握了英語的一些基本的詞彙和語法,可以用英語表達自己的簡單的思想。
這時的英語作文練習可以達到兩個目的:繼續增強對語言的掌握;用英語表達一定的思想。
在具體的英語作文學習實踐中,這兩者實際上是不可分的。
有許多初三的學生開始用英語記,其實他們就正處於英語作文寫作這一階段。
3.主要強調內容。
當學習者對英語的詞彙和語法有了一定的掌握,可以用它來表達相對復雜的思想時,就基本進入了第三階段。
此時的語言已經不是最大的障礙,如何寫出好的英語作文成了頭等大事。這一階段的學習者所注重的是如何選材、如何組織文章之類的問題。
另外還要注意語言的積累,留意常用詞和句型的用法。
另外,適當做一些翻譯練習也可以幫助你提高運用語言的能力,從而為提高寫作能力做好准備。
除此之外,多做一些,培養對語言的感覺也能為提高寫作能力做一些准備。當然也可以看一些經典的英語作文範文。
另外還有些技巧:
是要多聽,也就是多聽一聽磁帶,看看他們是怎麼構思的,給你介紹個節目:中央10套,每天12;15分的希望英語.
然後,要多學語法,要想寫好作文,不會語法跟打仗沒有槍一樣,所以,多補語法,才可以寫對句子.
接著,要積累詞彙,詞彙量越大,你寫的東西水平就會更高.
以上就是初中英語作文的寫作技巧,大家按照自己的情況來借鑒和學習。