英語四級作文論創新
一、「功能段落」突破CET寫作。
「To be or not to be: that is a question.」莎士比亞如是說。沖刺階段，背模板還是不背？我的答案：背，但絕不是盲目的背。
整篇背誦模板不是最有效的方法，因為模板的寫作思路是固定的，然而很多時候試題的命題思路可能與所背模板思路不同。因此，可能導致「所背非所考」，甚至導致文不對題，生搬硬套。
但是，無論英語四六級寫作話題如何變化，一般都對應三個或兩個漢語提綱。只要按提綱要求去寫相應的內容段落，就做到了緊扣主題。歷年寫作提綱可以總結為六種功能段落：現象描述、危害分析（弊）、原因分析、建議措施、觀點闡述（觀點的本質為利弊：支持方觀點等於分析「利」，反方觀點等於分析「弊」）、意義闡述（利）。
下面，本人結合近年真題展示功能段落內容：
2011-06：Online Shopping
1．現在網上購物已成為一種時尚
2．網上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題
3．我的建議
解析：本次英語四級對應四個段落分別是：現象、觀點（利、弊）和建議。該類作文可以被稱之為：觀點對比型作文，對比的內容重點在利弊分析上。
2010-12：How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切
2.為了讓孩子獨立,父母應該……
解析：該題目只有兩個提綱：現象和建議，可以添加一個功能段落：原因。這樣這篇作文就是「三段論」的形式：提出問題（負面現象描述）、分析問題（原因）、建議措施段。2010年6月CET也屬於該種那類型。
2009-12：Creating a Green Campus
1.建設綠色校園很重要
2.綠色校園不僅指綠色的環境……
3.為了建設綠色校園，我們應該……
解析：該段對應提綱如下：意義闡述（即分析：利或好處）、現象描述（解釋綠色校園環境之外的因素）、建議措施段。
綜合以上分析，六種功能段落已經涵蓋住了以上考試的所有提綱。因此，如果能夠掌握住六種功能段落的寫作實際就掌握了四六級考試寫作考題的最本質特徵。那樣的話，無論題目如何變化，我們准備都是有的放矢的。反觀，死背模板容易導致生搬硬套，甚至文不對題。
二、寫作短期提分方略
在了解了英語四級考試在命題特點的基礎上，考生在沖刺階段最需要准備的是兩個內容：思路和表達。思路解決怎麼寫的問題，表達解決寫什麼的問題。如果拿到一個作文題目，你知道應該按照什麼思路去寫，又知道應該寫什麼表達，這篇作文就已經成功了一半。
思路點撥：在本人所講授的基礎班、強化班、精品班等不同班型上都曾講授到現象、原因、建議、利弊、觀點分析時的邏輯：「一個中心，四個基本點」。具體內容：「以孩子（學生、事件）為中心，以家長（老師、相關人員）、家庭（學校、管理機構）、社會、法規（道德意識）為基本點」
試舉例說明：以2010年12月真題為例，主題為子女教育話題。談到子女，必然涉及到家長，孩子和家長組成家庭，千千萬萬的家庭組成社會，是什麼在維護著社會穩定？法規和道德意識。這樣我們就找到了可以入手去分析的五個方面：孩子、家長、家庭、社會、法規道德意識。如何使用這五個方面？如分析家長溺愛孩子原因時至少可以從家長意識、家庭結構變化、社會背景角度去分析。
同理，2010年6月話題為學生英語學習，可從學生自身、教師教學、學校教學政策角度去分析。那麼，如果主題不是孩子也不是學生，怎麼分析？2011年6月主題為網路購物，分析時就以該事件為中心，可以想到相關人或物（買方：customers/ clients /shoppers;賣方：online shops/ stores;中間方：支付寶、淘寶等），其管理機構（政府）、社會背景，相關法規是否健全等。
「一個中心，四個基本點」的分析邏輯形成一種立體化網狀結構，考生運用該思維模式，只要能想到其中兩到三點，思路問題即可迎刃而解。建議所有有緣相識與北京新東方課堂、四級寫作模板班、四級翻譯突破班的童鞋們首先將該思路背誦下來，以備將來可以在考場上靈活應用。
表達積累：表達分為四個層次：詞句段篇。
其中篇章層面只要按照提綱要求去組織文章即可，因此篇章方面不足為慮。段落方面按照「功能段落」的六種形式去識別，也小菜一碟。
詞和句是表達的基本元素，也是語言質量的根本體現。在新東方教書的這四年中和三次參加四六級考試閱卷的經歷中，看過無數學生的作文，深感學生詞句方面能力的薄弱。同時結合過往教學中的成功案例，提出沖刺階段表達積累的高效途徑。
1. 背寫：思路+表達。
很多同學考前也在背，背的滾瓜爛熟，脫口而出，覺得自己水平很牛！上了考場也順利將文章寫了出來，卻得了一個很低的分數，為什麼？因為單詞都拼錯了。沖刺階段，請牢記：口頭背誦的再好不等於能夠寫對。背寫是提高寫作和翻譯唯一，也是最有效的方法。
那麼背寫什麼內容哪？答案是思路和表達。思路上文中已有論述，遣詞和造句的表達方面應該緊密結合功能段落來背誦有效句式和用詞。考生不必刻意追求適用難詞，但可以將常見詞彙稍作替換：如，
exceedingly, extremely, intensely替換very；an army of/a great many/a host of替換a lot of；advancement替換development; positive, favorable, promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior替換good; give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger替換cause; harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,替think; beneficial, rewarding替換helpful; bear in mind that替換remember; enjoy, possess替換have; shopper, client, consumer, purchaser,替換customer
表達精彩體現在三個方面：遣詞、造句、連貫。大家可以結合以下例文感受這三個方面：（聲明：試題命制、範文均為筆者原創，謝絕轉載！）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of To Help or Not to Help?. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
1. 幫助別人是一種美德
2. 但是幫助陌生人容易使自己陷入麻煩
3. 我的看法
首段闡述意義：In contemporary society, it should be a virtue for indivials to offer help to those who are in need. Without this morality, it is impossible for the society to be named 「Harmony」. Apparently enough, it is of great importance/ significance/ value/ benefits for people to help each other, especially in difficulties.
二段描述負面現象：However, a host of people find it hard or troublesome to offer helps to strangers. We have been frequently informed that（A typical example is that）a warmhearted man --who lends a hand to an old lady—gets himself in trouble. Since helping others may trigger trouble, a few people refuse to offer help timely. And if we let/allow this situation to continue as it is now, we would not know where civilized society will be in the forthcoming future.
尾段我的看法(或建議)：As college students, we should bear in mind this virtue. However, it is essential that regulations should be worked out to support this virtue. In addition, it is suggested that we should offer aid to strangers in a safe way, such as dialing 12o or110 for help. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our society/ civilization will be promising, hopeful and rosy.(以上範文字數為202詞，請自己酌情刪減即可)
三、沖刺復習安排建議。
總體原則：先背再寫、階段總結、適當模擬。
先背再寫：基礎較差同學一定要先背一些東西，然後模仿該作文的思路和表達去寫。可以背誦的內容有：本人上課時講義上要求大家背誦的功能句式和教材相關範文。背寫的目的是積累語言表達實力，同時練習書寫的公正和優美。建議書寫較差的考生買本英語字帖練一下書寫，也許你會有意外的驚喜。
階段總結：每過一周就要問自己幾個問題：所背誦的表達可以用來寫什麼類型的文章？該類文章的相關詞彙或表達有什麼？關鍵詞如何避免重復？如果解決不了，請參照講義上給大家總結的各類功能段落的功能句式和表達。請記住：沒有復習，沒有鞏固。
適當模擬：在熟練掌握背寫了六種功能段落的思路和表達之後，可以結合適當題目在寫作中運用所講所背所總結提分詞彙、句式。建議大家能夠靈活運用，做到一例多用。如我在多個班上講過的關於英語學習的話題作文，可以寫13次四級考試的作文。
題目：On English Learning
提綱：1.英語學習很重要；2.英語者所面臨的困難；3.如何學好英語
In contemporary world, English learning has gained great popularity and it is of great significance. (主題句) Firstly, based on a survey, a majority of tourists acknowledge that they prefer to speak English when traveling around the world. (調查法表述)Secondly, compared with the poor English speakers, good English-speakers are superior in many ways. (比較模板句式)
However, English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in their learning.(主題句) For example, it can be noticed that a large number of students have difficulty memorizing words. Sometimes, it is difficult for them to understand the rules of grammar. In addition, though some are good at reading or writing, they can not express themselves freely in English.
Then, how to get a good command of (學好) this language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice can enable one to speak and write fluently. And it is also through practice that one can master the rules of grammar and remember words, and there is no other way. (強調句式）
Ⅱ 尋問英語四級作文
學會放棄英語四級作文範文 Learn to give up wisely
Never give up has been accepted by many people as a positive life attitude. Admittly persistence often plays an important role in one success. However,in many cases to give up might be wiser than to persist blindly. The following reasons can support this argument.
Firstly,sometimes our goal may be unrealistic. If we insist on it blindly, it will finally bring us nothing but failure. At this time,what we should do is give up the orignal goal and reset a more pratical one.
Secondly,not all persistence can bring deserving results. For a very simple example if we keep waiting in line for hours, only to have a luncheon restaurant may be it is unwise.
Finally, to give up wisely does not mean admitting failure. Instead,it does mean a new hope of success.
Considering the above mentioned, we can come to the conclusion that to give up wisely is a kind of more mature life attitude. Though giving up sometimes is painful and costly,in the long run what we gain will definitely far out weight what we lose.
關於理想的英語四級作文 Young People Should Have Ideals
What are you going to do when you grow up? When I was a child, people often asked me this question about the ideal. Undoubtedly, every indivial, especially a young person, should have an ideal. Hardly can we find any great people we know ideal when they were young.
An ideal is a vital importance to one's growth and success. On the one hand, an ideal is the target of one's life. Once you decide what your ideal is, you know where to go, and which way to take. Otherwise, you might become puzzled in many things in your life. On the other hand, an ideal is like the engine of vehicles. Only when we have our own ideals, can we find the origin of energy and enthusiasm in life, and become active and perseverant. Whatever your ideal is, careful plan and preparation is vital to its realization. Of course, the path from where you are to where you want to get is not always smooth and straight. Therefore, an optimistic, positive mind is indispensable in the process of your persevering your ideal.
In a word, only if you have an ideal, you will have the chance of realizing it.
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Advantages of Trying New Things
It is widely accepted that one is more likely to succeed at things he already knows how to do well.However,to limit ourselves to doing only those things we are good at will make us miss many opportunities to develop other interests and skills.Therefore,sometimes it is necessary for us to try some new things and take some rests.Though we have the risk of failure when trying new things,we can get many advantages from it.
Firstly,the process of trying a new thing is a rewarding experience,from which we may feel a different world.Secondly,even if we fail,we can still absorb experience and lessons from the trying process and our failure.Thirdly,if it turns out that we succeed at this new try,we'll get great pleasure and confidence.Finally,it is impossible for us to never fail even if we do only what we are familiar with.We don't know when we'll meet the situation we can't control.With experience of trying new things,when facing unexpected situations,we can deal with them better.
Condidering the above mentioned,we needn't be afraid of new things but should bravely try them.But it is worth noting that trying new things bravely does not mean acting rashly and blindly.We should take full account before we are ready to try new things.
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Ⅲ 英語四級作文，關於創新能力的。求大神出手，急急！！
勇敢地向陳規陋習宣戰，敢於幻想、敢於追求，不斷進取，不斷開拓，創造更輝煌的未來！
Ⅳ 英語四級作文:如何提高我們的日常生活中的創新能力
As is known to all of us , innovation has become an essential part in this world which changes every second . So , how to improve our ability to innovate must catch full attention.
In my opinion , firstly, life is the origin of miracle , innovations in respond to what true life needs should be good ones . Secondly , it's vital that we act to test our thoughts which could be potential wonders , in that case , deligence will speak loudly for itself . Thirdly , as the saying goes ,"Perseverance is falling nineteen times and succeeding the twenties ." We must hold on .
All the mentioned above may not be the best answers , however, as far as I'm concerned improving the ability to innovate is sure to need them .
Ⅳ 求創新英語四級作文範例
Dear Friends, Fellow classmates,
The exciting moment, I am convinced, must remain vivid in our mind, when Beijing, the Capital of China, was proclaimed the final winner to host the Olympic Games in 2008 by Chairman of the International Olympic Committee. Time flies, and the new Olympics is coming very soon!
Olympic Games, held every four years, boast a long history and offer rare opportunities for different nations to get together, which are far more than sports contests participated by professional athletes. Through Olympics, new world records are set, resilient sportsmanship is highlighted, sport-related instries spring up and international goodwill and exchange get greatly enhanced.
As college students, we ought to contribute our share to the imminent Olympic Games with responsibility of citizenship as well as focused knowledge. For instance, it is advisable to give voluntary lectures to popularize Olympic knowledge and environmental awareness in some residential areas. And we are looking forward to your suggestions and participation
Ⅵ 英語四級作文150字最佳6篇
距離2015年12月的大學英語四級考試越來越近，新東方在線為大家整理了英語四級作文預測：希望可以為大家帶來幫助。
1、暈屏症—Cybersickness
隨著智能時代的到來，越來越多的人不自覺的成為了新科技的奴隸，智能手機的使用尤能說明這一點。無論是上下班的路上，還是賦閑在家，無論是休閑娛樂，還是聊天購物，智能手機總是與我們形影不離，對於智能手機帶給人們的便利之處我們不可否認，但是其弊端也日益顯現，看看「低頭族」「僵屍族」這些網路熱詞吧，從中我們不難發現無時無刻使用智能手機給我們造成的危害，但這些危害常常為沉迷於智能手機的人們所忽略。分析利弊，是英語四級作文的關鍵，只知其利，不知其弊，也不是一篇完美的作文。下面我們就來分享一篇文章——刷屏刷到吐你得「暈屏症」了(Do you suffer from cybersickness It causes nausea while scrolling on phones)，認識到智能手機可能會帶給我們的危害，希望它能警醒我們，讓我們能夠更加合理的使用智能手機。
Do you suffer from cybersickness It causes nausea while scrolling on phones
The rise of mobile phones has been blamed for a number of social ills, but your smart phone may also be making you physically sick as well. Scientists have identified a condition called 「cybersickness」, which they say is the digital version of motion sickness. The phenomenon, which affects up to 80 percent of the population who own smartphones or tablets, leads to feelings of nausea and unsteadiness. It is caused by seeing fast motion on a screen and covers anything from a car chase in a film to scrolling through web pages on your phone. The more realistic the visual content is, the higher your chances of getting cybersickness. The condition was identified in a piece in the New York Times in which British and US experts said that it needed addressing. Cyriel Diels, a cognitive psychologist and human factors researcher at Coventry University』s centre for Mobility and Transport, said: 「It』s a fundamental problem that』s kind of been swept under the carpet in the tech instry.」 「It』s a natural response to an unnatural environment.」 Motion sickness leaves sufferers feeling ill because they feel movement in your muscles and your inner ear but do not see it. The mismatch in digital sickness is the opposite—you see movement on the screen but do not feel it. The effect is the same and the symptoms include a headache, wanting to throw up, confusion and the need to sit down. Often cybersickness manifests itself in a subtle way and sufferers put it down to stress or eyestrain.Steven Rauch, a professor of otolaryngology at Harvard Medical School, said: 「Your sense of balance is different than other senses in that it has lots of inputs.」 When those inputs don』t agree, that』s when you feel dizziness and nausea 「Some studies that have been carried out into cybersickness found that women are more susceptible than men, the New York Times reported. Those who have Type A』 personalities—meaning they are confident and assertive—are more likely to suffer from cybersickness as well. Among those who have reported experiencing the condition have been video gamers who spend hours playing fast paced games. Cinema-goers have struggled with some scenes in action movies which have quick cuts and fast editing—and virtual reality has made the problem even worse. Jonathan Weinstein, a professor at the Kanbar Institute for Film and Television at New York University』s Tisch School of the Arts, said: 「The idea is to get audiences to feel like participants in the action rather than outside observers of the action. Engineers at Oculus VR, the virtual headset manufacturer, have admitted that digital motion sickness is one of their biggest problems.
【詞彙積累】
cybersickness 暈屏症
scrolling on phone 刷屏
smartphones 智能手機
tablets 平板
nausea 眩暈，惡心
sweep sth. Under the carpet 掩蓋錯誤
susceptible 易受影響的
【譯文】
行動電話的廣泛使用被指引發了諸多社會弊端，不僅如此，手中的智能機也會讓你覺得身體不適。科學家們把這種狀態稱為「暈屏」，是暈車的電子版。80%的手機和平板用戶會暈屏，他們會有惡心、眩暈的感覺。造成暈屏的原因是瀏覽了含移動內容的屏幕，可能是看了有追車鏡頭的電影，也可能是瀏覽了手機上滾動的內容頁。視覺內容越真實，暈屏的發生率就越高。《紐約時報》的一篇文章報道了這種症狀。英美專家在文章中稱，這個問題需要著手解決。認知心理學家、考文垂大學移動運輸中心的人為因素研究員西里爾·蒂爾斯表示：「對弊端置之不理算得上是科技產業一個最根本的問題了。」「這是對非自然環境作出的自然反應。」暈動症會令患者感到肌肉和內耳在移動，但實際上並沒有看到它們在移動。而暈屏症恰恰相反——你看到屏幕在移動，實際上卻感受不到。二者的影響卻是相同的，其症狀為頭疼、想吐、思緒混亂，需要靜坐下來。暈屏症狀通常不易察覺，患者會以為是因為壓力大或者視覺疲勞引起的。哈佛醫學院耳鼻喉科教授史蒂芬·勞奇表示：「與其他感官不同，當有大量信息輸入時，人的平衡感會發生改變。」「當這些信息輸入沒有被感官接受，你就會覺得頭暈、惡心。」《紐約時報》稱，一些有關暈屏的研究發現，女性比男性更容易暈屏。A型人格，即果斷自信的人，也更容易暈屏。「有暈屏症狀的通常是連續幾小時玩快節奏視頻游戲的玩家。看動作片的觀眾在看到快速剪輯和切換的鏡頭時會不舒服，這是因為虛擬實境會加重暈屏。紐約大學提斯克藝術學院康貝爾影視研究所的教授喬納森·溫斯坦說：「動作片就是想讓觀眾身臨其境，而不是當一個局外人。」虛擬實境游戲頭盔製造商「歐酷拉」公司的工程師們坦言，暈屏也是他們面臨的最大問題之一。
Ⅶ 一篇英語作文啊。。要創新
首先句意：爸媽別擔心，我保證只犯你們沒犯過的錯誤。
可以理解為，他會聽爸爸媽媽的話，遇到困難或者問題時會及時和他們溝通，聽從他們的建議，畢竟爸爸媽媽是過來人，也許會有類似的經歷，但是每個人都會遇到不同的事情，也需要在自己的錯誤中成長，或許也有一層一語雙關的意思：
1. 告訴爸爸媽媽他會聽取他們的意見；
2. 他也是會犯錯誤的
還有一種意思就是孩子要出遠門的時候，因為擔心所以會特別能嘮叨，臨走的時候還要囑咐一大堆，最後孩子聽煩了，就來了句「爸媽別擔心了，我保證不會犯你們犯過的錯誤！」
寓意，父母們應該讓孩子們自己成長，不能總是讓他們生活在自己襁褓之下，孩子長大了就應該放他們去飛翔，讓他們自己去磨練，在錯誤中成長。
對話如果是我的話，我會這樣寫
Parents: Look after your things on the train, and don't sleep ring the journey.
Boy: OK.（語境，父母嘮叨了一路了，領走時還在說，孩子聽的耳朵都起繭了，就直說了就OK應付下。）
Parents: Study hard，follow your teachers『 advice，get high marks in the exam，don't fight with your classmates，。。。。。。（父母話還沒說完）
Boy: Don't worry, Mom and Dad. I promise to only make mistakes you never made.（孩子是在是忍受不了了，處於禮貌，所以在語言上只能說別擔心了，其實是說「別嘮叨了，我都知道了，你們說的我都會做到，就是犯錯誤也是你們沒有說到的！」）
夠創新不？
Ⅷ 求英語四級作文，所用的句子詞語要有創新的，別太土了！
Yesterday was my birthday and I received a lot of presents. These presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me. My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big and round. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock. The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said my present is lying in your bedroom. When I got to my bedroom, I found a laptop. Oh!Great! I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me to study hard and not to waste time. I would never forget this birthday. 昨天是我的生日，我收到了許多生日禮物，並且這些禮物都用彩紙包著。其中兩件禮物很好玩很有趣，給我留下了很深的印象。 我姐姐送給我一個包，這包又大又圓。我認為是足球，可打開一看是個鬧鍾。另外一件禮物是我哥哥送給我的，他給我留了一張紙條，上面寫著：「我的禮物放在你的卧室里。」當我進入卧室時，我看到了一台筆記本電腦。噢!真是太棒了!我高興地跳了起來-。我明白他們想讓我努力學習，不要浪費時間。 我將永遠不會忘記昨天
Ⅸ 關於提高大學生創新能力的英語作文
In recent years, the creativity of college students is always mentioned because of the fact that it is generally accepted that college students are largely deficient of the creative abilities. It seems that an increasing amount of the students are merely satisfied with comprehending or even ing others' thinkings, ideas or achivements rather than developing something new of their own.
The main reason that gives rise to the issue refered above, in my view, is that colleges have not fully fulfilled their responsibilities to cultivate general, creative and qualified stuents. All of these colleges' attention are on the basis of the tests, which force the students study more for their grades than for their synchronized qualities. As a result, most students have no enough time and energy to practise their creative abilities.
Owing to the serious issues we have to confront with, the whole society should take measures to solve it. For example, colleges may pay more attention on the quality ecation, the corporations can establish wider evaluation system, and so forth.
Ⅹ 英語四級作文範文—關於觀點類的
這網上找的，挺多的，不過我勸你還是多做閱讀和聽力，這兩你做好了，其他跟著就上去了，作文你到考試前集中背兩三個經典的你能記住的就行，看多了背多了會暈的。。還是一句話，多做聽力和閱讀~
英語四級作文萬能句
（一）段首句
1. 關於……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗話說（常言道）……，它是我們前輩的經歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 現在，……，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更為糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 現在，……很普遍，許多人喜歡……，因為……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有兩面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 關於……人們的觀點各不相同，一些人認為（說）……，在他們看來，……
People』s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題……，這個問題變得越來越嚴重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成為人的關注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用，它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時也引發一些嚴重的問題。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很