四級簡單話題英語作文
高中生寫的文章居然被引用到四六級,不害臊,我給上面文章的評價是,第一個分論點與觀點矛盾,詞彙量小,句式變化不多。下面是一篇談旅遊業發展與傳統文化沖突的文章,自己比較下吧。
The booming tourist trade has brought about mass exchange of population between different nations. At first glance, this bridges the understanding and communication between different cultures. In my opinion, however, this fast-growing instry has proced tension between people from different cultural background.
The first barrier for curious tourists from all over the world is the problem of language. The most attractive destinations of tourism are, ironically, less developed areas where the world language --- English, has not been prevalent. Therefore, the direct contact between tourists and local residents has been cut down. The tour guide, normally interpreter too, becomes the only link of communication. But unfortunately, as indicated in any guide-training handbook, the responsibility of a tour guide is to arouse the tourists』 interest and passion rather than present a lecture on cultural difference. Thus, tourists, beyond their expectations, cannot fully understand the cultures which appears to be exotic.
Another obstacle is from the local government. As I argue before, in most of case, the 『local』 refers to the less developed regions. In order to attract foreign investment and maintain the local tourism instry, the officials, deliberately or not, only hope to show outsiders the positive side of the area, hence, the part of local living. As a result, concted tours are carefully censored. The tourists, or 『prisoners』 to some extent, are allowed to see only what the organizers want them to see and no more. A window-shop schele gives no opportunity to wander off on one』s own. In this way, even for a knowledgeable traveler with practical experience can only 『see』 the superficial of the local culture. If so, an instant misunderstanding will be falsely shaped.
All things considered, the international tourism contributes absolutely nothing to increasing understanding. Instead, in its way as it is today, a hideous prejudice and misinterpretation will be established.
利與弊:
……(用一個從句引出的話題) graally becomes a pressing/hot-button/controversial/heated issue/opinion . In my point of view , trere are some advantages/strenthens/merits and disadvantages/weakens/shortcommings . In this essay , I want to compare them in several aspects and suggest some actions to take to solve its bad parts .
接下來講這個問題的幾點缺點。(兩三個即可)
然後再講解決方法,要注意有針對性。
最後再結尾,提出一些設想和對未來的展望就可以了。
其實什麼模板套句都是沒有什麼用的,關鍵是怎麼樣讓作文更有表現力,這是要長期訓練的結果。
我可以舉個很簡單的例子:
非洲國家有很多人正在遭受飢餓、痛苦和貧窮。
高中生可以這樣寫:
Many people in African coutries are very poor , pain and hungry .(詞彙貧乏句式簡單,pain用詞不恰當)
一般的大學生可以這樣寫:
Africans are suffering from stavation , misery and poor life .(雖然有一定的詞彙,但是沒有表現力,很乏味,相信改卷老師看了太多這樣的句子了,已經是睡眼惺忪了。)
英語專業的學生就不一樣拉,他們尋求表現力:
Stavation , misery and poverty(貧窮) are embracing tens of thousands of residents(居民) living in African coutries .(不簡單,不用人做主語,形象生動,句式有些復雜,用現在分詞做定語,詞彙量大,表現力強。)
所以寫作的時候要絞盡腦汁(rack your brain)來想出一些辦法增強表現力,但是這是一個長期的過程,不可能一蹴而就的!
Ⅱ 英語作文,四級水平
My Idol
Everyone has his idols,and they differ from people to people.My
idol is Zhou Enlai,who was the first premier of new China.
Zhou Enlai was a great revolutionary who had devoted all his life to the cause of liberation of China.He took part in the War Against Japan and the War for Liberation of China.He fighted bravely against the enemies in order to save the people in great sorrow.After the foundation of new China,Zhou Enlai was elected premier.
Zhou Enlai was such a man who cared much more about the people than himself.He put all the people in his heart except himself.I admired him so much though he has been away from us for a long time.I like him best and believe that he will alway be alive on the minds of Chinese people.
Ⅲ 話題為四級考試的英語作文
Today we visited Red Star Farm. Early in the morning, we met at the gate and went there together. About two hours later, we arrived. On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm. We were very glad to see the crops and vegetables growing so well. At noon, we had a picnic happily. After the picnic, we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine. We listened to music, dancing and singing. Some were talking happily and even two of our classmates played chess. How time flies! It was time for us to leave though we didn't want to. It was really an unforgettable visit for us. 講參觀紅星農場的,比較長,我覺得這篇不錯的.你可以刪掉點的.
Ⅳ 大家幫忙我寫一篇英語作文,四級水平就可以
Pay More Attention to the Spelling
As we know,spelling is an important part of English learning.Only when we spell an word correctly,can we remember it clearly.Hower,many students attach little importance to spelling.The cause is that they don't think spelling is important.What's more,spelling is hard work,and they don't it.
In my view,we should pay great attention to our spelling.It's a good way to remember words.We should spend more time on spelling so that we can remember the new words clearly.
Ⅳ 求一篇120字的英語作文,四級水平
College English Learing
As English is the most useful tool of communication in the world and one of the most important subjects in school,we go on learning it after entering college.But in a way college English learing is different from that of middle school.That lies in the flowlling aspects.First of all,we learn the phonetic symbols,pronunciations ,as is known as the base of a language learning in junior school.Then we begin to learn new words and expressions and grammar when we enter a senior grade.And grammar is one of the most important part in this period.All teachers and students concentrate on it.
College English learing differs a lot.In college we don't focus on those that are taught in middle school but to attach importance to speaking,listening and comprehension.We'll spend much time pratising our speaking and listening,such as talking with a foreigner constantly.Meanwhile,to enlarge our vocabuary is another important thing in college.We are supposed to grasp as many words as possible in order to meet the great demands of our future work.
To sum up,our English learning never comes to an end.Remember,Never too old to learn.
Ⅵ 四級英語作文字數問題
一般來說,字數要來多於源要求的字數為宜,但也不能超過太多。
要求120字,你寫多20字也正常,但以150為上限。
用句子的數量來衡量的話,一般控制在10到十五句左右。如果能長短句結合運用的話 12句就很理想
(平均每句單詞數為10個左右)