四級英語作文批改
一、be different from 改為be different for（我覺得你想表達的是「因為工作學習的領域不同而不同」而版be different from是和什麼不同），權二、has two side改為two sides，三、on appropriate time改為at appropriate time（「在合適的時間」介詞應為at）至於格式考試要求的！還有幾處不太確定，就沒提出來！以上答案僅代表個人意見，希望對你有幫助！
B. 急！！！四級快到了！求幫忙修改一篇四級英語作文吧！感激不盡！！！
我的意見是這樣的：
一種時尚潮流直接就 a fashion就行了
1.第二段最後一句 Therefore, it is urgent for us to attach great importance to this phenomenon.個人認為更好
貌似我沒看出什麼問題了。 不過我看出你在表達某些東西的時候過分追求高級詞彙。
C. 跪求批改英語作文，CET-4
I was so excited when Iwas admitted to XX College that I picked up my package at once and booked aticket to school immediately.
College is quitedifferent from my middle school which area is the largest I ever seen.
There are so manysorts of courses provide me interests, such as Advanced Mathematics, the Theoryof Chinese Growth, and so on. All of these courses were taught so vividly thatI have to express my thanks to our lovely teachers. Among them, the ComputerProgram Design, an optional course, impressed me the most which I took part inwith full confidence.
What』s depressed mewas the result that I failed to design my program through all kinds ofknowledge learned from class with good combination. Despite of this, it』s mylucky to take part in the class since from which I got the most precious giftfor my future: Combining the knowledge is necessary to learn something truly well.
D. 怎樣批改英語作文
從教二十年，每天改作業，最怕的就是該學生的英語作文。寫錯單詞的，用錯句型的，存在語法錯誤的，毛病皆是。有的同學的作文如要一一幫他改正錯誤，等於老師重新幫他寫了一篇作文。這樣勢必造成批閱時間過長，影響其他環節的工作。如果粗略批閱則會阻滯學生英語寫作能力的提高。針對這一問題，我摸索出一套自認為行得通的方法。 根據不同情況採用不同的批改方法。如果是在課堂上進行的寫作（每個單元拓展部分都有寫的能力的活動）。採取大家批。具體操作是抽兩名同學在黑板上寫，其他同學在練習本上寫。寫完之後，和同學們一起當老師，找黑板上兩位同學寫的文章的錯誤。讓有類似錯誤的同學改正。指出文章的不足之處，有哪些地方需要改進。同時也要指出優點有哪些地方可供同學們學習.效仿。通過大家當老師一起改作文的方法既調動了學生的學習氣氛又加深了犯錯同學的印象，讓他們不再犯同樣的錯誤。 如果是課後作文，則採用收上來祥批和略批方式交叉進行。要確保每個同學在一期的英語寫作中有幾次祥批的機會。祥批時改出學生寫作中詞彙.句法.章法的錯誤。甚至包括單詞拼寫，大小寫，標點符號和其他語法錯誤。指出學生存在的問題指明其努力方向。略批則只畫圈圈點點，打分分等級。啟發學生自己去找錯誤。培養其自發學習的能力。 如果是自習課上的課文，則採取互相批改的方法。先由老師講解批改要點，指出批改方法和原則，注意要指出批改的具體注意點。如：大小寫，單詞拼寫，標點，時態，語態，人稱，句子結構，句子順序等等。讓學生心中有數，從而批改更詳細。 當然，經過不同方法的寫作批改後，有的同學可能寫作水平任是濤聲依舊。這時則需要找空閑時間面對面的批改了。就是當著學生面對面地批改。當面指出其存在的錯誤，讓學生自己改正錯誤以加深印像。改完之後，讓學生再體會一下。以便更好的整理思緒。 以上這些就是我在批改英語作文中找到的一些方法。希望同行多提意見，幫助我更好的搞好教學工作。
E. 幫忙修改英語作文（四級）
in my opinon ,Job Interview is very impotant when you seek for jobs.(find是找到的意思，不能表示尋找的過程）Firstly,Interview Jage ？ can help you to know about your knowledge、confidence and so on;Secondly,you can know your own weakness.
Job Interview include many elements（如果用consist of 我認為寫成the success of job interview consist of。。。,比較符合邏輯），such as （for example 後面要加句子的）appearence、ability、knowledge、confidence and so on.I think knowledge is the most important element in Job Interview.It is the basic of our do any jobs.（我認為應該是it is the sc requirement of every job) And confidence is very impotant too.Only when we have confidence, can we do good jobs.At last,we must trust other people.Because if you have trust them,everyone will appreicate you,then you will（can比較好） have good jobs
我認為第二段最好是講自己的觀點的時候，有自己的依據。希望能幫到你
F. 英語好的進！【請】修改 我的【四級作文】~~高分哦
Children's crimes is becoming a serious social problem. Almost every school has different
degree of school violence. Should their parents have no responsibility for the children's
crimes? Of course not. Parents must ecate their children except feeding them.
There are several reasons why parents are responsible for children's crimes.First, they don't give their children a lesson
about law. It would be their whole life shame and dirty pot if they crime. Secondly, there
are no efficient way of communication (缺乏有效的溝通，好像太中國英語了，不地道) Most of the time youngsters must
be very(可以換什麼成熟的漂亮又不做作的詞兒) nervers when they first crime.
Unfortunately， their parents don't realize this. Third, there is a special situation that is
parents are not good models(好榜樣). Wagering,lying and using violence are usually acted on
their children.
The solution to solve the problem is start with parents. Their responsibilities are not just
feed children up, what's more,are to make their children become lawful and justice
people.(這段最後寫的亂著急的 整體不好 但現在也想不出別的了！)
G. 我的英語四級英語作文格式寫錯了！內容還可以，請問能得分嗎
應該是能得分的，畢竟有內容嘛，況且老師批改的時間很短，不會看太仔細，四級神馬的還是聽力和閱讀是大頭。
H. 英語作文批改
第一段引入話題，闡述和你相反的觀點，第二段用一個轉折引入你的觀點，並找觀點支撐你的觀點
第三段總結
In recent years,many college students have some part-time jobs. some people consider that they should not get any (否定句裡面不用some)part-time job，（不用句號，because鏈接兩個句子）because their majoy ty is still study hard in order to pass the exams. if they take(不是用do吧，太中國化） part time jobs,their time will be shared and their study may be degraded.
In my opinion, 加你的觀點 空閑時間多，避免浪費 用於看電視玩游戲， 提高學生能力，處理事情，合作精神，有利於接觸社會，掙錢減輕家庭負擔 等等
As far as I concerned, taking part-time jobs have many benefits,for example,例舉一些。。。。for those reasons,we should encourage the students to take part-time jobs
剩下的自己修飾哈 套路就是這樣的 這樣更清晰明了，每段開頭都要yoga那些老師教的套語 加分
I. 我自己寫了一篇四級英語作文，希望大神給我修改一下,或對我的思路提出一些建議
The disposable plastic bags have widely applied because（ 去掉OF語法錯誤） it's convinience.Neveretheless,it( result in plenty of可改高級片語) issues owing to this condition （as well.可改）
First and foremost,this plastic bags will damage our health if we frequently use it,because it contains various of materials that was capable of doing harm to our body.Additionally,the disposable plastic bags is easily broken down and might destroy we just bought. (去掉the）Last but not least,(it would result in the pollution of environment and the most painful to us is that witness plenty of disposable plastic bags in street.)可改強調，更高級片語
By and largre, I am strongly convinced that cannot emphasized（ too mush of 可改）limiting （the use of ）可改disposable plastic bags.Not only can benefit our healthy,but it would defend nature and make the society more harmonious.
修改的不多，但是分數能提高四分左右
你的文章基本定型，只能通過改一些邊邊角角。多用些高級單詞和高級句式吧，看起來真的很像高一的學生作文。
J. 哪位英語達人幫我修改一下英語作文（按四級水平要求修改）
With the time passing by, I have got accustomed to the university life, I find life in university is different from that in high school.
Firstly, we have more choices. It』s up to us ourselves to choose optional course that we are interested in, and no one around us will force us to do what we dislike. Secondly, we have more freedom. Since we don』t have so many classes each day as we did in high school, we can take part in countless activities after class. Meanwhile, life in the university brings plenty of challenges. On the one hand, we have to obtain knowledge mainly by ourselves, since we can hardly meet our teachers out of class. On the other hand, we have to spend a lot of time washing clothes, buying food, etc. Thus, what we care about are not just studying and playing.
Considering the transformation from a teenager to an alt, the changes in this life stage are crucial. Only when we overcome the difficulties and get used to the changes can we grow up to a real man who can enter and stay in the society successfully. And I believe I』ll do better and better in the next four years.
寫的不錯，第三段基本沒什麼錯，倒裝句也用的正確。