英语评教作文怎么写

『壹』 一篇英语作文怎么写

我来帮你。（我在澳大利亚5年了，英语可以的）是关于关爱儿童的，我觉得对你的水平已经很棒了。 The Caring of Children

Do we care about children today? No, people today don’t really care about children because we get
pushed about by alts. Children are also getting abused by alts at
home.

We children go into shops on our own and we get thrown out, or
followed around the shop. The shop owners think that we are going to
steal there goods of the shelves without paying for them. The shop
owners are having to put up more security cameras and prices of there
stock because we are stealing from them. They are putting up the
security cameras to watch where and what we are doing in the shop,
they are even following us to see what we are doing if the cameras
can’t see us, and they act as they are putting up new stock on the
shelves. If we have bags on our back the shop owner will sometimes ask
you to open your bag, so they can see weather you have anything,
showing that they don’t trust us.

Surveys show that one in six children today are getting severely hurt
at home by there parents. Only some parents are admitting to hitting
there children, and who do get hurt by there parents are to afraid to
tell someone about it. Research shows that a few parents put their
children’s heads under water and held it there, others have poured hot
water over them. A few mothers admit to pinching, scratching and
biting there children. Some children’s parents make them wash there
mouths out with salt and/or soap, and if they refuse to eat there
supper they are made to eat mustard sandwiches. In recent surveys it
is showed that mothers are more likely to hit their children than
fathers are, even when the care of the child or children are shared
evenly. Half of children in a survey said it was right for there
parents to smack them and are going to hit there children when they
are alts.

Some children who have jobs are working illegally in factories. The
children who work in factories don’t get paid fairly, an example of
this is in a carrot factory in England. In this factory there is
children working from the age of ten years old to fourteen years old,
who are getting paid thirty pence [IMAGE]a crate of carrots they fill.
Some of them are getting paid nine pounds for eighteen thousand
carrots. They are working for four hours each night, starting from
three thirty in the afternoon till seven o’clock in the evening. Two
million children are getting used as slave labour each year in
Britain. In the carrot factory the workers are working in terrible
conditions, they are working in a big shed which is run by a parish
councillor, on the floor there is wet carrots that have been dropped
and when the children are walking with the crates they can’t see very
well and may slip. The machines that they work on have very sharp
blades which are slicing the carrots, this is also where the children
are putting their hands to get the carrots out. Their hands are just
millimetres away from the blades and could end in a fatal accident.
Children should only work for two hours on a school day and no later
than seven o’clock in the evening. Since that report mothers and
fathers said that they were not going to send there children back.

Parks are now being designed by architects for younger children
between the age of two to nine years old, children over that age have
no place to go so they hang around the streets. When they hang around
the streets and get into bad habits like drug tacking and smocking at
young ages. Children from the age of ten and above want to explore new
things than be locked in a cage with swings and slides. We want to be
heard and seen by alt but they just ignore us all the time. We
children want a place where we can go to where there is only a couple
of alts. The government have just spent approximately four hundred
million pounds on the new parliament buildings in Edinburgh where they
could have spent some of that on us children. This year it is all
about the play station, micro scooter and gadgets. Children are now
into technology and want to see more of it. If a child had a choice
of either whether to play in a park for an half hour or to play a play
station for an half hour the child would definitely go for the play
station.

『贰』 请教英语作文怎么写

首先审题，一看就知道，对比选择型作文题，所以分四个段落写作
1，引出话题：一谈到对大学专生是否应该给与属跟多的自由，大家的观点都不一致
2，观点1：有些人认为应该给大学生更多人自由
原因1：……原因2：…… 所以：……
3，观点2：但是另一些人则认为应该给与大学生更少自由
原因1：……原因2：……所以：……
4，总结全文：
大家的观点都是正确的，但是我认为：……因为：……
所以我觉得：……

这是上周才在新东方英语课上学的应试技巧= =还有问题你直接追问我= =也可以直接Hi我，框架都给好了，你就往里面填充省略号的内容就行了~~还有问题欢迎追问~~~

『叁』 评论性英语作文怎么写

评论复性的作文最重要莫过于制两点，1观点，你要对自己的观点，或者说立场一定要明确，无论是从反面评价一个事物或是以正面评价一个事物，你可以通过反向或正向推理来佐证你的观点。2则是总结自己的感想，这也是很重要的，这是你文章的一个可以使你的文章凝聚升华的部分，其重要性不言而喻，我建议你你可以通过举例来证明自己的感想，比如要写关于善良的文章，你就可以举一些历史上很善良的人物。希望我的一些经验可以帮到你。

『肆』 英语作文怎么写

躲在灌木丛中的一朵紫色小花，悄悄地弹出脑袋，欣赏着这里的美妙；长在土地边上的小黄版花，抬起头来，傻傻地观望着碧空如洗的天空；生长在黄土高原上的的山丹丹，用它美丽的容颜，来装饰原本就很艳丽的大自然；生长在湖塘里的荷花，用它优雅高贵的姿态来迷惑众人的心；生长在悬崖间的雪莲，用它坚持不屈的精神来传扬我们……
高山上，无论是哪里，都盛开着各式各样的花朵。野菊，是山花之王，它拥有着诱人的清香，颇有个性的外表以及纯洁的品质。有许许多多赞扬菊花的诗句，比如元稹的《菊花》：“秋丛绕舍似陶家，遍绕篱边日渐斜。不是花中偏爱菊，此花开尽更无花。”或者白居易的《重阳夕上赋白菊》：“满园花菊郁金黄，中有孤丛色似霜。还似今朝歌酒席，白头翁入少年场。”
悬崖间的雪莲，也是一种坚强的花朵，它禁得起风吹雨打、寒风呼啸，同时也拥有着似如荷花的外表，这是一种坚强而有志气的美权。它代表着不屈的精神斗志，是我们无数人心中的好榜样，它甚至比菊花更胜一筹！“其地有天山，冬夏积雪，雪中有

『伍』 英语作文怎么写

在莱曼英语所倡导的五种英语语言能力中，写作被认为是必修的重要课题之一。它既是英语学习短期目标——考试所要求的内容之一；又是英语学习的长期目标——交流所必需的能力之一。毋庸置疑，英语写作是集基础知识，基本能力和课外信息于一身的综合体现，同时，又要兼顾到写作者高超的写作技巧。因而，没有扎实的英语语法知识；没有长期不懈的训练；没有科学的方法指导；没有广博的课本以外的知识和信息，写好一篇优秀的英语作文是非常困难的。

要知道，英语写作对于培养一个人的英语思维方式是至关重要的。在没有任何外界压力的情况下，学习者可以充分思考句子结构；反复推敲所要表达的内容。经过长期的训练，就可达到量变到质变的目的。所以说，英语写作往往不在于写作本身，而是可以帮助学习者复习，活用和创新所学的知识，更为重要的是，写作能力的培养可以直接影响学习者英语口语能力的形成。这是广大业界有识人士，特别是部分英语教师的共识。

大部分中国在校生，由于教材对作文的要求不十分强烈，教师的要求也不十分明确，作文的训练也就自然不十分充分，造成考试时的作文成绩不能尽人愿。而大部分的社会上的英语培训机构更是忽略了英语作文在英语学习中的重要意义，他们更加强调英语能力的外在表现，诸如，口语和听力等。而莱曼英语教学理念则非常重视英语写作，并为此专门撰写了莱曼英语写作系列教程，目的在于提高学生的语言创作力。

莱曼英语在多年的教学实践中总结出了一系列的有关英语写作的实战经验，并参阅了大量不同地区的英语试卷，特别是作文课题，认为下列英语作文的目标和要求是学生在写作文时首要要达到的：

1.首段引人：

尽自己最大的可能使得第一自然段引人入胜，做到“语不惊人誓不休”。要想做到这一点，就要求学生要大量地阅读课外书籍，包括中文和英文，做到知识面宽泛，观点灵活，写技高超。

2.词组句型：

在英语作文中，词组和句型的运用可帮助呈现写作者的英语水平。这就要求学生要在基础知识方面进行系统的学习。现举例说明：

prefer doing>enjoy doing>like doing 由此可以看出，不同类型和不同水平的词组句型可表现出写作者不同的观点及英语水平。

3.复合句:

在英语写作中,对于主从复合句的运用也是必不可少的。小学英语作文中可以没有主从复合句，但从初中开始，必须在写作中运用主从复合句（至少1——2个）。因为，只有主从复合句才能表达更为复杂的观点；只有主从复合句才能是阅卷者看出写作者真实的英语水平高度。

4.转联词:

所谓的转联词是指那些用于承上启下的副词，连词以及大量的介词词组等。英语作文中转联词的必要使用，可以使得句子与句子之间更加流畅，避免了各个句子的分割独立，使得文章顺理成章，一气呵成。中国学生在学习中，掌握了大量的此类单词和词组，但除了but,because,等，很少主动使用，使得所写文章颇显干巴和唐突。

5.时态：

毋庸置疑，时态是英语基础知识的重要范畴之一，也是区别于汉语的重要特点之一。而英语作文又是对学生综合能力的考核。因而，在作文中，必须加入时态的准确运用，才能使自己的观点和所叙述的情节更加精准。因为中文中没有时态的概念，中国学生极易在英语时态方面出现失误或忽略事态的运用，这将是所写的英语作文大打折扣。

6.汉译英：

在莱曼英语教学理念中，我们更加强调翻译训练的重要性。无论是英译汉，还是汉译英都是英语学习着必备的基本能力，或者说，都是顶尖级能力。所以，在英语作文中，汉译英技巧的运用，毫无疑问地会帮助写作者更加充分地表达自己的观点。而这种翻译的训练又是大部分教学资料和英语课堂所极为缺乏的。莱曼英语总结了一些特效直观的汉译英技巧，将安排在后续的讲座中进行讲解。

7.书写排版：

尽人皆知，书写排版是人的第二张脸。一篇作文的书写和排版直接影响到阅卷人的情绪，不可避免地会影响到作文的最后成绩。

8.课外阅读和长期训练

课外要广泛地涉猎不同种书籍，特别是对一些精品文章的阅读，以增加自己的信息量。同时，还要通过日记，周记，书信，便条，通知，短信以及命题写作等方式进行长期不断地训练，才能逐渐地提高英语写作水平。

综上所述，英语作文是一种基础知识的输出，是一种综合能力的体现。是一个大量信息积攒的过程，是一个不断修炼的过程。

『陆』 英语作文怎么写啊！

相对于英语的其它题目,作文的综合要求可能更高一点,那么我们就以这次考试的作文为例子来讲讲英语作文怎么写.
首先我先说说同学们在做作文的时候常常遇到的问题,然后我再给出一个大概的解决方法,最后呢,我们联系这次考试的作文题来实战一番.
从我们题目的要求来看,是一个记事的记叙文,并且是一个看图说话类的,所有的素材都在我们的图片里面了.那么我们就要先把图片仔细的看一下,选好线索,显然图片里面的钟暗示我们选择时间为我们的叙事线索.其次要选择好一个时态的问题，我们可以以晚上回忆的方式来叙述这个事情。那么都是过去时。
那么开头是一个比较困难的事情,大家也许不知道从何说起.这里我给出了一个例子.
Our
class
had
already
planned
to
go
to
Handian
Nursing
Home
to
visit
those
old
people
living
there
.
We
were
all
eager
to
go
there
as
soon
as
we
can.
And
today
this
time
really
came,
so
you
could
image
how
happy
we
were.
At
about
8:00
in
the
morning
,
with
tools
in
hands,
we
went
out
of
our
school
towards
the
Handian
Nursing
Home
下面我们不必过多的描述在路上的情形,我们重点将描述在敬老院里面的情形.
It
was
about
9:00
when
we
arrived
there.
Though
we
were
a
little
tired,
none
of
us
wanted
to
have
a
rest.
As
some
of
those
old
people
seldom
came
out,
so
some
of
us
helped
them
walk
around
to
breathe
the
fresh
air.
Some
help
them
to
wash
their
clothes,
and
the
others
swept
the
ground.
Most
of
us
never
do
such
things
at
home,
so
we
maybe
didn’t
do
these
well,
but
we
all
tried
our
best.
At
about
11:55,we
had
lunch
with
them,
and
our
monitor
stood
for
us
to
bless
them
devoutly.
During
the
lunch
time,
we
were
all
very
happy.
After
lunch,
we
had
a
party
with
those
old
people.
Before
we
came
here,
we
had
already
prepared
some
songs
for
them.
As
we
expected,
they
all
felt
great
pleased
with
our
programs.
Though
maybe
we
didn’t
performed
well,
the
smile
on
their
faces
made
us
very
happy.
该到说再见的时候了,一定要注意收尾工作.
Happy
time
always
goes
fast.
Though
we
didn’t
notice
that
we
had
stayed
here
for
a
long
time,
the
clock
on
the
wall
informed
us
clearly
that
it
was
time
for
us
to
go
home.
So
we
had
to
say
good
bye
to
those
old
people.
On
the
way
home,
we
all
said
this
was
really
a
significant
day,
and
we
decided
to
come
back
again
whenever
we
had
time.

『柒』 英语小作文怎么写

Today is very interestsd. I went to the New World
Zoo. There are many anmils in it. First, I went
to saw the tighters. Next, I feed the kanganroos for
leavels. Fnally, I went to road the hourse. Today I
was very busy and funnly. I hope tomorrow will niceness.
1. My Family And My House
My family is small, they are my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. My mother is tall and thin but my father is fat very much. My younger brother is naught and I am well-beavd. My house is big, there are three bedrooms, a bathrooom, a kichen and a livingroom.
I love my family and my house.
2. I like sprots very much. I allways get to school
sprots center doing sprots everyday. Because there are
many sprot equipment, like basketball, football, table tennis
baseball, tennis, volleyball. There is very beautiful,and very big. I like there very much. I hope you jion it,
it's interesting very much.
2. I have a good friend, he is Tom. Last week, he was very busy.
On the Sateday , he rerised. And then ,he played the football. On
Sunday, he cleaned his room. I often do my homework on Saterday morning, and watch TV in the afternoon. On Sunny, I usually read
books and go to the cinma.

原装日记，绝无语法错误。
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『捌』 英语作文怎么写才能到500字

1、充分准备。打好基础。
为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，看一些自己感兴趣的人物传记或者新闻记事，可以背诵一些句型、段落甚至短文。语言的学习其实都是相通的，“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟”。只要读得多了、背得多了，自然可以出口成章，下笔成文。平时用英文写信、记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法。
2、仔细审题，明确要求。
对题目所提供的信息要认真分析，明确要求，做到心中有数。要对所提供的信息加以分析、整理，使之更加具体化、条理化，为开始动笔做好准备工作，还要搞清题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文章，此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。
3、抓住重点。寻求思路。
根据题目所提供的信息，草拟提纲，寻求逻辑次序，确定如何下手，否则，语无伦次的文章将不会被人接受，也不可能得到高分。
4、遣词造句，表达规范。
用词要适当，不可逐句把提示汉译英，亦不可生拼硬凑，不要硬拿英语单词到中文句子里去对号，否则写出中文式英语，闹出笑话。一般来讲，写作时，应尽量选出你有把握的词，尽量使用短句。如果有的单词不会写，有的思想不会用英语表达，你可以设法绕开，最好找一个同义词、同义句，或近义词、词组短语来代替。在关联词是使用上，要切题意，最好准备几个不是很常用的关联词，可以起到增强新鲜感的作用。
5、修改润色，锦上添花。
作文写完之后，一定要检查修改，修改时必须从全局修改。首先要检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当，接下来检查所写内容是否切题，该交待的内容是否交待了，最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求，最后是否一致。

『玖』 英语作文怎么写啊

开头段，开头段是非常重要的，一定要语言简练，切记一定要直接切入主题（有些同学在写开头段时迟迟不切入主题，会影响改卷老师对这篇作文的印象，或许还会认为你写的跑题），而且开头段一般不进行具体的论述。而且开头段一定要引起读者的注意，比如你可以将一句谚语放在开头段。（As an old saying gose"No pains,no gains."So.......)这样的开头往往让改卷老师眼前一亮。也可以使用提问，或者将问题概括进行开头，总而言之开头段一定要直接切入主题让改卷老师了解文章的话题和风格，并且要引起读者的兴趣，吸引老师的注意力。而且开头一定要注意与文章其余部分相呼应。这样的一篇开头是英语写作高分的基础。

中间段，中间段是文章的主体部分，在中间段一定要将文章要求写的东西涉及到（如果要求的东西有漏掉的话扣分是很严重的，如果漏掉的过多甚至会视为跑题），同时这一段要使用一些可以给自己提分的句型，让改卷老师明白你的水平，比如你可以使用一些倒装句、强调句、或者你可以使用一些固定搭配像There is no doubt that.......(毫无疑问的是...），I firmly belive that......(我坚信...)都是很好的提分句式，像这类句式平时要多积累。如果你的单词量比较大的话，就将简单的词汇换成高级词汇，这也可以让改卷老师眼前一亮。同时这一段的过渡关系一定要处理好，熟练的运用一些过渡词语例如:as far as I am concerned,in a word,what is more,in my opinion 只有恰当的使用过渡词才能让文章显得流利通顺而且句与句之间的衔接更加紧密，文章也会更加紧凑，而且要使用一些长句也就是复合句（同位语从句，宾语从句，主语从句等等），但不可全部都使用长句，否则读起来会有一种费力之感，所以要长短句合理的搭配使用. 内容也要按着一定的顺序来描写，不能给人一种很乱的感觉。

『拾』 这篇英语作文怎么写

你好，很高兴为你解答！
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think that middle school students have too much pressure from school.And I agree that there is no need for them to get so much homework to do.And I think it is unfair for children to stay up doing their homework late .In addition,I think children should have the enough rights to study and relax because only in this way can make them live happily without any pressure.But they should also pay some attention to spending the time on schoolwork in order to keep their grades at a good level.For example, they should do some homework first and after finishing,they can relax for couple of hours and then continue their homework.Because the more homework they have to do,the more pressure they will have,so it is beneficial for them to relax a little.And these are my suggestions.
Yours truly,Mike

亲爱的先生或女士，
我认为中学学生从学校的压力太大了。我认为，他们不需要太多的作业要做。我认为孩子们熬夜做作业是不公平的。另外，我认为孩子应该和放松，因为只有这样才能让他们没有任何压力，生活快乐学习足够的权利。但是他们也应该注意花时间学习以保持他们的成绩在良好水平。例如，他们应该做一些功课首先完成后，他们可以放松几个小时，然后继续他们的作业。因为他们必须做更多的功课，他们将有更多的压力，所以这对他们是有益的放松了一点。这是我的建议。
你真诚的，麦克
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