英语我们怎么写作文
『壹』 我们要去秋游的英文作文怎么写作文
1. 如何写一篇秋游的英语作文改颤枯
We fall camp（我们的秋游）
Last week,we were go to the Laohutan marine
park fall camp.We saws dolphins、洞坦seals、whale sharks and hippocampus…Then
we were go to the happy-theater.The host was very humor,the animals
star was very lovely and very clever.Then we were go to a *** all
garden,we were played very happy.Back home after I very excited.
2. 写一篇秋游的英语作文
仅供参考：如果您还有什核洞么不满意的，请发消息给我，并附上问题的连接，An Autumn Trip to Qianshan-千山秋游Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus.It is about thirty miles from the city.We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.As soon as we got there,we began to climb up the mountains.How great the sight is!We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty,peaeefulness and loveliness.There are hundreds of mountains,one after another.there are magnificent cliffs,one above another.We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily.As the sun was going down,we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill,where we had a big dinner,and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.Before daybreak,we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark.Unaware of the cold wind,we stood motionlessly,with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east.Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky.As the redness deepened,some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky,dividing heaven from the earth.Just at this moment,up from the brightening far east rose the sun.It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes.and a slight applause from us.the amazed spectators,rang through the peak.Up,up it rose,adding to itself strength and glory at every step.It dazzled with vigour,driving away darkness,cold,and misery from the earth,and bring light,warmth,and happiness to men.We were pletely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.千山秋游去年秋天我们乘公共汽车去千山游玩了一次.它距城市大约三十英里.为了第二天早晨看日出，我们计划住在那儿的旅馆里.我们一到那里就开始爬山.那里的景色太美了！我们感到好像进入了另一个世界，一个充满美丽、和平和可爱的世界.那里有数百座山峰鳞次栉比：有壮观的悬崖层出不穷.我们精力充沛地向上攀登，贪婪地呼吸着新鲜空气.当太阳下落时，我们来到山下的一家小旅店，在那里美美地吃了一顿晚饭，然后早早地上床睡觉，以便恢复精力第二天早晨远征.天亮前，我们经过在黑暗中艰难地摸索和爬行到达了最高的山峰.我们一动不动地站在那里，双眼凝视着远处的东方，连寒风也没觉察到.突然间，薄薄的红光在天空中散开，随着红色加深，一些神奇的云朵在天空四散，把天地分开.正在这时，太阳从远处东方的光亮处升起.它是那样红，然而又那么娇嫩以致我们可以用肉眼来观察它.从我们吃惊的观赏者中发出的一阵轻微的欢呼划过山峰，太阳升得越来越高了，每升一步都给它本身增加了力量和光辉.它炫耀着威力，驱走了黑暗、寒冷和大地的苦难，并给人们带来光明、温暖和幸福.这一奇观和大自然的伟大使我们完全惊愕了.我们像天真的孩子一样跳着、喊着，和山峰一起沐浴在太阳的晨曦中，流连忘返.。
3. 一篇关于秋游的英语作文
Unfetable autumn outing I still remember that it is a refreshing autumn weather.All my clas *** ates and teachers came to the People'Park to boat。There is a big lake called WeiYang Lake.Light wind blowed and the surface of the lake microwave shiny.We rented some boats and rowed to the center of the lake,The water is clear with fish swimming in it.On the back,willows danced by wind.
【楼主】纯手写，若觉得满意，望多多支持哈！！！
4. 一篇关于秋游的英语作文
Unfetable autumn outing I still remember that it is a refreshing autumn weather.All my clas *** ates and teachers came to the People'Park to boat。
There is a big lake called WeiYang Lake.Light wind blowed and the surface of the lake microwave shiny.We rented some boats and rowed to the center of the lake,The water is clear with fish swimming in it.On the back,willows danced by wind.【楼主】纯手写，若觉得满意，望多多支持哈！！。
5. 以秋游为主写一篇英语作文
老师正在宣布一件事情，正当说道“秋”字的时候，“轰隆——”教室里顿时人声鼎沸，欢呼着，蹦跳着，犹如地震一般，差点把教学楼都震跨了。这是为什么呢？因为要去秋游！
第二天，我们兴高采烈、精神十足地来到西山山脚，
沿着弯弯曲曲的小路拾级而上。树上的小鸟叽叽喳喳地叫着，似乎在开着森林演唱；树木排成两列，直直地伫立在小道两旁，好像在迎接我们的到来。
一路上说说笑笑，不知不觉中来到了万卷楼，我们进入万卷楼，只见四周画着历史上著名的一些人物，比如诸葛亮、关羽、曹操、刘备……。沿着古典的木质楼梯走到顶楼，鸟瞰山下，是一条不见首尾的江，把南充市从中间分隔开来，那条江一定就是嘉陵江吧！再看城市，犹如在房产公司看到的小区模型，只不过更密集了、更真实了。就在我神游其中之时，“大部队”已经出发赶往下一个目的地——农家乐。
在这途中，有一座石山，上面流淌着的水，冲下来，形成了瀑布。虽说没有黄果山瀑布的秀美，没有赛特凯达斯瀑布宏伟，但这是我第一次看到瀑布，真的很美！水流从石山里泻下，仿佛一台天然的织布机，在石山的环抱中永不停息地转动，纺织出“千丈”白缎，令人觉得心旷神怡。突然，又刮起了一阵风，毛毛“细雨”洒了我们一身，顿觉一股凉意向自己扑来。
继续向上走，就来到了农家乐，我们与那里的人载歌载舞，吃着香喷喷的饭菜，他们的热情好客给我们留下了深刻的印象。吃饱饭，下午我们翻过了两座山，艰苦的完成了“二万五千里长征”，累得我们腰酸背痛腿还麻，但我们坚持下来了。这让我明白了一个道理：“秋游不仅在于吃喝玩乐，更重要的还是锻炼我们的体能与意志。”
6. 英语作文《秋游》
Have taken off a shoes , have galloped to ocean , tide water pour up, have submerged my bound feet fork, water withdraws from down soon , seems to be scratching an itch woollen cloth for me! Be beach upper shell everywhere after ebbing,they are ocean's gift to us , have yellow, having is white , having is blue , having is silvery white, 。
Be really colourful. The fan that shell's form great variety of fantasies , some image handful open , some hand , some images like Guanyin a peacock in his pride, some all kinds of image puppies, are really to be almost lifelike in appearance. I hasten to take up a sack to collect a few moments later, have collected right away once big chockful bags. I feel a little bit tired afterwards, will lie on the sandy beach, be really extremely fortable in feeling the bosom who lies in the mother with regard to the image!。
『贰』 怎么写英语作文
英语作文的基础是句子，句子的基础是单词，熟悉一些常见单词的用法有助于你写英语作文。你可以参考30小时轻松记牢1800单词的秘诀学习一些记忆方法
『叁』 如何写故事英文作文怎么写作文
1. 英文故事和英文作文的格式怎么写
1. 英文作文格式说明：
Title （标题）：写英文作文时，若有标题之要求时，我们就必须物咐书写题目；若无要求则无需书写题目。
Indent （缩排）：英文作文每段开头均须往内空4-5个英文字母。开头英文字母要大写。英文作文每段左方之每一行均须切齐，右方则否，保持「之字形」（zigzag）。
Punctuations （标点符号）：任何标点符号皆不可以至於英文句子的开头。常用英文标点符号分类如下：
. 句号 period
逗号 ma
； 分号 semicolon
： 冒号 colon
问号 question mark
！ 惊叹号 exclamation point
“ ” 双引号 double quotation mark
' ' 单引号 single quotation mark
– 连字号 hyphen
–– 破折号 dash
（ ) 括号 parenthesis
[ ] 方括号 square bracket
. . . 删节号 ellipsis
2. 段落结构
Introction （导论）：文章的引言，吸引读者，阐明文意，导入正题。英文作文的引言必须包含Thesis Statement （论点），是整篇文章的灵魂所在。Thesis Statement常是在引言导论的最后一句。它就像是罗盘一般，有两个主要功能：告诉读著作者的想法思路；作者以它为指引，以免自己写偏。
Body （内文）：把论点加以细项分类，并支持论点，深入讨论。Body 必须包含Topic Sentence （主题句）。一般说来，主题句必须置於每一个Supporting Paragraph（支持段落）开始的第一句。主题句的用意在於说明整个段落的大意，是段落的摘要，也是段落内容的基础。简言之，Thesis Statement之於整篇文章的重要性，犹如Supporting Paragraph之於Body。
Conclusion （结论）：总结文章，重申论点。可再简述文章要点，有时可提出引人省思的问题，但不宜再发展其它论点。
Order （次序）：次序指的是文章内容在文章中的组织、安排、或是组成序列。虚蚂衡常用次序如下：
1. Chronological Order / Time Order （时间次序）：故事的发展需以时间为基础，按时间的推移来发展。以事件或人物出现的先后次序来展开故事。
2. Spatial Order （空间次序）：作者根据空间的细节所做描述顺序之安排。以一个物理位置为基础，作者描述了可从该一位置所看到的景象、物体。描述顺序有其联贯性。ㄧ般由左到右，从前到后，或从上到下。
3. Ascending Order / Emphatic Order （递增顺序）：递增顺序有时被称为「把最重要的留到最后」。这个方法把重点，也就是把文章最有趣、或重要的细节，放置在文章的最后一个支持的段落。最后的位置在一篇文章中，往往是最有力的位置。因为读者最有可能记得最后提及的事情。最典型的用语有 “last of all,” “the most important reason, part. . . ”等。
4. Descending Order （递减顺序）：相对於递增顺序，递减顺序把重点摆在文章的第一个支持论点的段落。也就是把文章最有趣、或重要的细节，放置在文章的开端。作者当然认为其他的论点也是重要的，只是他先提及相对而言最重要的部分。
2. 英语作文怎么写
英语作文的基本要求： 首先，一个段落必须有一个中心，即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。
整个段落必须紧扣这个主题（stick or hold to the topic），这就是段落的统一性（unity）。其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性（pleteness or adequateness）。
再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子差做到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅（ *** ooth），这就是连贯性（coherence）。根据文章题目以及你所想要表示的意思下手，下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例： Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。
文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。
再看一个例子： My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh o hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought o new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting enty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought o new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。 从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。
卷面上如果这种句子多了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严重了。2、完整性 正象我们前面说得那样，一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。
同样，虽然有推展句，但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待，给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。
例如： Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression. 本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。
什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平静）Physical work又如何能改变这种情况？为什么它能起therapy的作用？读者得不到明确的答案。因此，要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。
例如： It is not always true that a g筏攻摧纪诋慌搓苇掸俩ood picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it. 段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法，必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释，整个段落内容空洞，简而不明。
如果用一两个具体的例子的话，就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段： It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?3、连贯性（coherence） 连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内在的逻辑性，后者指的是使用转换词语。
当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系；反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。
1）、意连 段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。
下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。 A.按时间先后排列4、有损连贯性的几种情况： 考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误： 1、不必要的改变时态，比如： In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with 。
3. 【一次难忘的经历英文作文怎么写】
An unfettable experience Usually,the first time you did something is unfettable,although it couldn't be always wonderful.As for me,an unfettable experience of mine is the first time I joined the Red Cross.We took boxes,and walked on the street.We found some people on the street,then asked them to raise some money for Red Cross.At first,we were so surprised that just a few people would raise some money for Red Cross,and some people even thought we were cheat!But we weren't upset.We went on and worked for the whole day.During that day,we all felt tired but happy,because we raised much money.We looked at the boxes and *** iled.It's really an unfettable experience!。
4. 英文作文怎么写
英语作文怎么写？ 相对于英语的其它题目，作文的综合要求可能更高一点，那么我们就以这次考试的作文为例子来讲讲英语作文怎么写. 首先我先说说同学们在做作文的时候常常遇到的问题，然后我再给出一个大概的解决方法，最后呢，我们联系这次考试的作文题来实战一番. 从我们题目的要求来看，是一个记事的记叙文，并且是一个看图说话类的，所有的素材都在我们的图片里面了.那么我们就要先把图片仔细的看一下，选好线索，显然图片里面的钟暗示我们选择时间为我们的叙事线索.其次要选择好一个时态的问题，我们可以以晚上回忆的方式来叙述这个事情。那么都是过去时。 那么开头是一个比较困难的事情，大家也许不知道从何说起.这里我给出了一个例子. Our class had already planned to go to Handian Nursing Home to visit those old people living there . We were all eager to go there as soon as we can. And today this time really came, so you could image how happy we were. At about 8:00 in the morning , with tools in hands, we went out of our school towards the Handian Nursing Home 下面我们不必过多的描述在路上的情形，我们重点将描述在敬老院里面的情形. It was about 9:00 when we arrived there. Though we were a little tired, none of us wanted to have a rest. As some of those old people seldom came out, so some of us helped them walk around to breathe the fresh air. Some help them to wash their clothes, and the others swept the ground. Most of us never do such things at home, so we maybe didn't do these well, but we all tried our best. At about 11:55,we had lunch with them, and our monitor stood for us to bless them devoutly. During the lunch time, we were all very happy. After lunch, we had a party with those old people. Before we came here, we had already prepared some songs for them. As we expected, they all felt great pleased with our programs. Though maybe we didn't performed well, the *** ile on their faces made us very happy. 该到说再见的时候了，一定要注意收尾工作. Happy time always goes fast. Though we didn't notice that we had stayed here for a long time, the clock on the wall informed us clearly that it was time for us to go home. So we had to say good bye to those old people. On the way home, we all said this was really a significant day, and we decided to e back again whenever we had time.
5. 怎样写英文故事
英文故事属中学英语书面表达重要教学内容，也是高考英语书面表达重要考点，写作时应注意下列几点：请看一则书面表达实例：阅读下表内容，写一则英文故事字数：120左右。
参考答案：On May12,2008,a terrible earthquakehit Wenchun County,Sichuan Province.In aflash,buildings fell down and cities were al-most leveled.Tens of thousands of peoplewere killed and the rest lost their homes.A Junior1girl from a nearby middleschool was buried under a school building.She was cold and hungry,but she wasn'tafraid,because she believed she would besaved.She even took out her flashlight ans。
6. 一篇英文作文怎么写
The Harry Potter books are a series of fantasy novels by British writer J. K. Rowling. Since the release of the first novel, Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (retitled Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone in the United States) in 1997, the books have gained immense popularity and mercial success worldwide, spawning films, video games, and a wealth of other items. The six books to date have collectively sold more than 300 million copies "J. K. Rowling". Accessed 23 March 2006. and have been translated into more than 63 languages. The first volume has been translated into Latin and even Ancient Greek, HP in Ancient Greek. Accessed 25 November 2006. making it the longest work in that language since the novels of Heliodorus of Emesa in the 3rd century AD. Greek Harry Accessed 25 November 2006. Due to the tremendous success of the novels, Rowling has bee the richest writer in literary history. Watson, Julie and Kellner, Tomas. "J.K. Rowling And The Billion-Dollar Empire". Forbes, 26 February 2004. Accessed 19 March 2006. English language versions of the books are published by Bloom *** ury in the United Kingdom and internationally, and Scholastic Press in the United States, Allen & Unwin in Australia and Raincoast Books in Canada. A large portion of the narrative takes place in Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and focuses on Harry Potter's struggles against the dark wizard Lord Voldemort. At the same time, the books explore the themes of friendship, ambition, choice, prejudice, courage, growing up, love, moral responsibility, and the plexities of death, and are set against the expansive backdrop of a hidden magical world with its own plex history, diverse inhabitants, unique culture, and parallel societies. Six of the seven planned boo
7. 写一个你最喜爱的故事英语作文加翻译
My Favourite Book
I enjoy reading different kinds of books, but "Harry Porter" is my favorite one. The story is very long but I am interested in it. Harry was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful enemies. His Z-shaped scar and magic stick brought me into a magical world. In fact, the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it. I think it's the best book I've ever read.
我最喜欢的书
我喜欢阅读各种书籍，但“哈利·波特”是我最喜欢的。这个故事很长，但我很感兴趣。哈利这样勇敢而聪明的孩子，他敢于对抗强大的敌人战斗。他Z形的伤疤和魔术棒把我带进一个神奇的世界。事实上，小说的故事是如此有意义的，我可以从中学到很多东西。我认为这是最好的书我读过。
『肆』 我们如何节约用水 英语作文
你是不是对英语作文感到特别苦恼，挠破脑袋都写不出几个字呢？哈哈哈哈，其实英语作文这只拦路虎并没有你想象的那么困难。只要你会说话就会写作，所以没必要对它感到畏惧。
下面我将为你提供三篇关于节约用水的英语作文，希望能帮助你打开思路，让你文思泉涌！
作文三
70% of everyone's body is water. If people don't drink water for a long time, they will die of water shortage. Water is so important to us, but with the advancement of instrialization, there is less and less fresh water on the earth, and water, the source of human life, is going to die out, so we need to save water and protect water resources. So how can we save water in our daily life?
First of all, when washing clothes, don't just pour out the soapy water. It's better to pour it into a bucket and use it when it is left to mop the floor.
Second, when cleaning bicycles and family cars, you can use a wet cloth instead of flushing. If it is too dirty, you can use the resial water after washing.
Third, do not always turn on the tap when washing your face. When rubbing facial milk or rubbing your face, turn off the tap in time.
翻译
每个人身体的70%都是水，如果人们长时间不喝水，就会因缺水而死。水对我们如此重要，但是随着工业化的推进，地球上的淡水越来越少，人类生命的源泉——水就要消亡，所以我们需要节约用水和保护水资源。那么我们该怎么在日常生活中节约用水呢？
首先，当洗衣服时，不要随便把肥皂水倒掉，最好倒在一个桶里，留着拖地时使用。
第二，自行车、家用小轿车清洁时，可以不用水冲，改用湿布擦，太脏的地方，就用洗衣物过后的余水冲洗。
第三，洗脸时不要一直开着水龙头，当搓洗面奶或揉脸时，应该及时关上水龙头。
『伍』 英语作文题目是:在课堂上,我们应该怎么做怎么写
In classes, what should we do?
When we in the classes,we should the classes rules.This,We have a good classroom discipline.We listen the classes carefully.
We shouldn't talk with classmates,or the class noisy.And we shouldn't drink anythings .
We shouldn't did other subject's work.
We work together, build a good class!
This way , I am sure we'll do better in the classes.Let's do our best!
『陆』 怎么写英语作文怎么写英语作文
英语作文要想写得好，离不开平时的积累，高分作文一般胜在行文清晰、准确、简洁三点，这就是公认的英语满分作文“黄金三定律”，为保证所写文章清晰明了，一是越确切具体越好，二是组织结构富有逻辑性。
姐姐现在就为你们提供三篇与英语作文题目有关的范文，记得好好参考哦，如果对你有帮助记得点个赞再走。
【一】🌸🌸🌸旁答案例来咯
英语作文：
Li Hua is my good friend. We are classmates. He is tallest in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. We have many in common， so that we have many things to talk. For example， we both like playing basketball and we like the same basketball playerKobe. Besides， we both like cartoon very much. We always watch cartoon program together. At weekends， weplay basketball often. The more important， he studies hard.So do I. We can make progress together. He is a good friend.
翻译：
李华是我的好朋友，我们是同学。他是我们班上最高的。他很善良，总是随时帮助其他人。我们有很多共同点，因此我们有很多事情可以交谈。比如说，我们都喜欢打篮球，我们都喜欢同一个球星——科比。除此之外，我们都很喜欢卡通。我们经常一起看卡通节目。周末的时候，我们经常一起打篮球。更重要的是，他学习很努力，我也一样。我们可以相互进步。他是一位好朋友。
【二】🌸🌸🌸案例来咯
英语作文：
Hello !My name is Mike/Amy .good fried is Han Meimei .She is fourteen years old .She has asmall family .There are three people in har family .She like black and white .Her favourite food is eggs.She like playing basketball .We go to school together every day .This is my fried .do you like her.My friend Vivi is a lively and smart girl,she has long black hair and she is a tallest girl in our class.She is warm-hearted and good- looking so that everyone loves her.I'm so glad to make friend with her.I'm out-going too,so we have been good friends for long time.But sometimes I like quiet but she doesn't.And her marks are not good as me.So,i suggested her that she should work-hard in her study so that we can go to the same university.
This person is my best friend Vivi who i can tell everything to.Like my deeply feelings and thoughts.
翻译：
我的朋友VIVI是一个活泼聪明的女孩子。她有着长黑发，而且她是班上最高的女孩子。她是个热心肠的人，而且她很漂亮，以至于大家运弯慧都很喜欢她。我非常的高闹前兴能和她做到朋友。我也是一个开朗的人，所以和她做了很久的朋友。但是有时候我喜欢安静但她不会。她的成绩也没我的好，所以我建议她应该多努力学习这样我们才能一起去同一个大学。
这个人就是我的好朋友VIVI,一个能够让我告诉她一切，推心置腹的人。
【三】🌸🌸🌸案例来咯
英语作文：
Hello !My name is Mike/Amy .good fried is Han Meimei .She is fourteen
years old .She has asmall family .There are three people in har family
.She like black and white .Her favourite food is eggs.She like playing
basketball .We go to school together every day .This is my fried .do you
like her.
翻译：
“你好吧！”我叫迈克/艾米。好油炸的是韩美美。她已经十四岁了。她的家庭。哈尔家有三个人。她喜欢黑白的。她最喜欢的食物是鸡蛋。她 就像打篮球一样。我们每天都在一起去上学。这是我的油炸，你喜欢她吗。
『柒』 高中英语作文怎么写分数高
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.
Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
四、短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）
有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。
举例：This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：
When to go, Why he goes away…
附加（多此一举）
如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
排比（排山倒海句）
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. （气势恢宏）
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！
『捌』 应该如何写英语作文呢
写作是本人的老本行，高中一般都是21-23这个级别，大学英语作文被老师在班上推介为范文！！
对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！
要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）
首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！
其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！
再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。