初中生怎么写英语作文

Ⅰ 我是一名初中生 英文不太好 写了篇 英语作文 哪位高手帮我改改 初学者见谅

I was born in Luoyang, a beautiful city which is also known as the ancient capital of China. But today I’ll tell you some special things about it.
As we all know that Luoyang is located in north of Luo river and it has a profound history. The history of Luoyang has five thousand years. Some people called Luoyang as the origin of Chinese culture. It’s the first country which was entirely designed by people. Luoyang is the first place that used the imperial examination system. On the other way Luoyang is a place that the Silk Road and the Grande Canal intersection of Sui and Tang Dynasties. Luoyang also has many historical interests such as Longmen Grottoes. At the same time, Luoyang was regarded as the peony’s hometown. Every year in the spring, when the peony blooms, people from all over the world will come here to see it. It let people feel fragrant when peony is opened.
Not only Chinese people, foreign visitors are deeply fond of Luoyang as well. The American city planner said Luoyang was the best place for people to live in the ancient years.
For many young ladies Luoyang is a good place to taste some delicious food. Shuixi is the most famous traditional food in Luoyang. It includes more than one hundred dishes. Every dish has their own characteristic.
I think you know a lot about my hometown according to my words. So if you have some free time, you are welcomed to come and we will display you the divine diversity of culture features of my beautiful homeland!

LS的明显没改干净，according to my worlds 明显不对， 应该是Words才对，world是世界地球的意思啊，我缭乱了

Ⅱ 鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辫浣滄枃

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1.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辫浣滄枃

銆銆The spring of the recovery of all things came. We took off our heavy cotton padded jacket, put on spring clothes and came to the grass. Cao'er's clothes have also been changed, new green, light green, dark green, green

銆銆Spring is coming and another semester is about to begin. Of course, there are new plans for the new semester. This semester I am going to design a form with a total of 30 points. I do wrong, be criticized - 1, do good, be praised + 1. See how many points you have at the end of the semester. I don't just rely on this form. I have to work hard in all subjects, especially careless me. I should finish the homework assigned by the teacher carefully. I should listen carefully in class. I should be careful and careful in the exam.

銆銆I hope I can abide by every plan and make myself better.

2.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辫浣滄枃

銆銆Time flies. After two months, life comes to an end. We return to the most familiar and tight school and start a new course. Think about it carefully. I should study hard, cherish every minute and don't let my time waste. Here is my study plan.

銆銆1銆 Finish reading a book in half a month. After reading it, extract your own feelings, beautiful sentences and words.

銆銆2銆 Actively answer questions in class, listen carefully, study carefully, do homework carefully, and take exams carefully.

銆銆3銆 Preview the teacher's content in advance every day, and be able to read the text and recite the words.

銆銆4銆 Ten English words a day, can recite words, can silently solve oral problems, 25, must be all right, this is a must task every day.

3.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辫浣滄枃

銆銆Today, the teacher asked us to go home and think about our new semester plan. Now I'll tell you my new semester plan.

銆銆The first point is to read more good books and take good reading notes; The second point is to exercise more and strengthen your physique.

銆銆This semester, I mainly read several good books, such as the water margin, which is one of the four famous works in China. It is particularly interesting. It vividly tells the tragic experiences of 108 heroes in Liangshan and some earth shaking events they were forced to do in Liangshan, including timely rain Song Jiang, leopard head Lin Chong, flower monk Lu Zhishen and "jade Qilin" Lu Junyi Among them, I like Hua monk Lu Zhishen best. He hates evil as hatred and likes to fight against injustice. He is a hero

銆銆I found a saying in the Chinese book that makes sense. Health is the foundation of life. With a healthy body, he has the capital to seek happiness, so I want to exercise more. This is my learning plan.

4.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辫浣滄枃

銆銆In the twinkling of an eye, the winter vacation is coming to an end, ushering in a new semester. When the new semester comes, I plan my study in advance, clarify the new semester plan, and find the way forward,

銆銆Looking back on the winter vacation and new year, set off firecrackers, make mplings and have a reunion dinner. Pick up shells and play with sand on the beach. Sleep late at home, play with computers and watch TV.

銆銆In the new semester, I hope the teacher can choose a good seat for me without being disturbed by others. Good grades in each course won honor for the class and parents. I also wish my parents a smooth job, my grandparents good health and a long life.

銆銆In the new semester, in order to improve my grades, I designed a new semester plan for myself:

銆銆1. Listen carefully in class, raise your hands actively, and don't talk to your deskmate.

銆銆2. Do your homework carefully and write well.

銆銆3. After class, read more extracurricular books.

5.鍒濅腑鐢熸柊瀛︽湡璁″垝鑻辫浣滄枃

銆銆Happy days always pass too fast. In the twinkling of an eye, the winter vacation has passed and school has begun again. We have to gather up our scattered mood and start to slowly enter the state of learning. I recall that I had many shortcomings or problems in the last semester, such as poor writing, careless homework and careless examination. As a result, in the final math exam last semester, I didn't, and only got 87 points. I'm really regretful and ashamed. I'm really sorry for the teacher's hard teaching and training.

銆銆This semester, I must get rid of these shortcomings and problems, listen carefully in class, actively answer questions, help students more, carefully complete my homework at home, read an article and make a reading card every day to improve my writing ability, and I also often read some scientific knowledge and stories such as astronomy and geography. To read widely and master the knowledge, find the "Golden House" in the book.

銆銆In this semester, I will try my best to keep the test score above 95 points, and I hope I can maintain my honor of "three good students" and live up to the ardent expectations of my parents.

Ⅲ 初中生写好英语作文的三个W

写作在英语学习中是培养和提高语言能力的有效手段，它有助于巩固和掌握所学词汇、语法等语言知识，有助于训练直接用所学语言进行思维，有利于提高驾驭语言的能力。中学生该如何写好英语作文呢？ 一、写作步骤要写好一篇英语作文，掌握一定的写作技巧，应把握以下几个步骤： 1．认真审题立意，定文章之灵魂对命题作文必须认真审题，对自由作文必须立好意。文章要有明确的主题，必须具备4个条件：准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。以命题作文“The English teacher I Admire Most”为例,文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位英语老师,因而就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。 2．草拟提纲，打造文章之骨架审好题，立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句，还要从提示句的关键词出发，围绕关键词开拓思路，发挥联想，记录下联想到的东西，可以是句子或单词词组，可以是英语或汉语。仍以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，提纲可以这样写： 1）Who is the English teacher I admire most 2)My reasons 3)What can I learn from the teacher 3．写出段落主题句，理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要，是作者思维的起点，切题的准绳，阐述的对象。看到段落主题句，读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头，可使文章结构更清晰，有说服力。 4．参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成各段落，充文章之血肉 有了段落主题句后，还需要顺着段落主题句的方向，参照提纲中的思路，从而完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣，为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法，和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，主题段中就能用到举例法、说明法、因果法等。 进行这一步骤还需注意三方面问题： 1）确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题，不跑题。 2）要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。 3）用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间，段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。 二、增加文采小窍门如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思，第三、四步骤则是真正地“写”了，用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平，但也有些窍门，以下这几点可以供你参考。 1．在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式，要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。 2．使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 3．改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词短语等。 4．学会使用过渡词。如： 1）递进：furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition 2）转折：however,but,nevertheless,after all 3）总结：finally,at last,in brief,to conclude 4）强调：really,indeed,certainly,surely,above all 5）对比：in the same way, just as, on the other hand, 5．避免重复使用同一单词或词组。 6．注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思，以增加文采。 三、把好检查最后一关 1．是否切题分三点看：一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求；二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致；三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题，应该尽可能弥补，删除那些多余的或不切题的地方，但切忌动“大手术”。 2．是否连贯检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适。 3．是否有语法错误主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，根据此标题，文章肯定用第一人称“I”写，一般性的描述用现在时，举过去的事例用过去时。 4．是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误，注意卷面整洁要提高写作水平，最根本是要大量实践，必须多读多写，注意博览和精读相结合，甚至可以适当背诵一些名句名篇。另外，还可选些范文，悉心领悟，多加模仿，以逐步达到运用自如

Ⅳ 初中英语作文拿高分有什么方法 如何提高写作能力

很多初中生英语作文总是拿不了高分，下面就和我一起来看看有什么方法，供大家参考。

初中英语作文拿高分有什么方法

细心审题，明确要求。对初中英语作文题目的信息加以分析、整理，为开始动笔做好准备工作，还要搞清英语作文题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文章。

抓住重点，理顺要点。打草稿是写英语作文的一个重要步骤。审题之后要拟好提纲，使文章有一个明确的逻辑和层次，然后根据提纲进行延伸。

连句成篇，修改润色。写完之后不要忘记要仔细检查一遍，是否有语句不通顺的地方，该用关联词的地方有没有用。注意一定要做到卷面整洁。

要加强练词造句的训练。词句对英语作文相当于造房的材料，无好材料就造不出好房子。平时在学习阅读时要注意收集积累，把好的词语、短语、句型做好笔记。平时在练习中的错误也要做好记录，再对照正确句子，使地道的英语句子如同条件反射，落笔就对。

如何提高英语作文写作能力

积极、大量、用心地阅读，在阅读中体验鲜活词汇的用法，看多了，自然就在脑海中留下了“痕迹”，到写作时，这些词汇就会“信手拈来”。阅读和写作是互相促进、相辅相成的。

写周记、日记，学生不受内容和经验的限制，可就熟悉的题材，充分发挥自己的想象力，自由表达。但是写日记、周记要有事可记、有话可写。总之，要提高自己的英语写作能力，首先要有积累；其次要自主、自觉地长期练习；还要读写结合，多渠道地努力。

Ⅳ 初中英语作文写作实用方法和技巧盘点

初中英语作文写作技巧有哪些?

初中英语作文实用方法汇总，作文是中考考试的最后一个部分，占的分值也比较高。综合对比起来，英语写作是初中英语学习的难点，主要考察大家对英语的输出能力，那么初中生应该怎么提高英语写作水平呢?

下面我给大家分享一些非常实用的方法， 希望能帮助到大家。

1.掌握基本的词汇和语法。

此时的学习者对英语的基本用法还未掌握，因此尚处于学习语言的基础阶段。

这种练习一般说来内容都非常简单，强调的是学习者所使用的词汇和语法必须正确。

2.语言和内容并举。

此时的学习者已经掌握了英语的一些基本的词汇和语法，可以用英语表达自己的简单的思想。

这时的英语作文练习可以达到两个目的：继续增强对语言的掌握;用英语表达一定的思想。

在具体的英语作文学习实践中，这两者实际上是不可分的。

有许多初三的学生开始用英语记，其实他们就正处于英语作文写作这一阶段。

3.主要强调内容。

当学习者对英语的词汇和语法有了一定的掌握，可以用它来表达相对复杂的思想时，就基本进入了第三阶段。

此时的语言已经不是最大的障碍，如何写出好的英语作文成了头等大事。这一阶段的学习者所注重的是如何选材、如何组织文章之类的问题。

另外还要注意语言的积累，留意常用词和句型的用法。

另外，适当做一些翻译练习也可以帮助你提高运用语言的能力，从而为提高写作能力做好准备。

除此之外，多做一些，培养对语言的感觉也能为提高写作能力做一些准备。当然也可以看一些经典的英语作文范文。

另外还有些技巧：

是要多听,也就是多听一听磁带,看看他们是怎么构思的,给你介绍个节目:中央10套,每天12;15分的希望英语.

然后,要多学语法,要想写好作文,不会语法跟打仗没有枪一样,所以,多补语法,才可以写对句子.

接着,要积累词汇,词汇量越大,你写的东西水平就会更高.

以上就是初中英语作文的写作技巧，大家按照自己的情况来借鉴和学习。