学生的英语短文怎么写
初中生如何写好英语作文
写作在英语学习中是培养和提高语言能力的有效手段,它有助于巩固和掌握所学词汇、语法等语言知识,有助于训练直接用所学语言进行思维,有利于提高驾驭语言的能力。那么中学生该如何写好英语作文呢?
一、要写好一篇英语作文,掌握一定的写作技巧,应把握以下几个步骤:
1.认真审题立意,定文章之灵魂对命题作文必须认真审题,对自由作文必须立好意。文章要有明确的主题,必须具备4个条件:准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。以命题作文“The English teacher I Admire Most”为例,文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位英语老师,因而就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。
2.草拟提纲,打造文章之骨架审好题,立好意后,就要写提纲,打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事:安排好层次段落,铺设好过渡,处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句,还要从提示句的关键词出发,围绕关键词开拓思路,发挥联想,记录下联想到的东西,可以是句子或单词词组,可以是英语或汉语。仍以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例,提纲可以这样写:
1)Who is the English teacher I admire most
2)My reasons
3)What can I learn from the teacher
3.写出段落主题句,理文章之脉络一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要,是作者思维的起点,切题的准绳,阐述的对象。看到段落主题句,读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头,可使文章结构更清晰,有说服力。
4.参照提纲,紧扣主题句,完成各段落,充文章之血肉
有了段落主题句后,还需要顺着段落主题句的方向,参照提纲中的思路,从而完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣,为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括:顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法,和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例,主题段中就能用到举例法、说明法、因果法等。
进行这一步骤还需注意三方面问题:
1)确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。只有这样,才能保证所写段落不偏题,不跑题。
2)要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排,避免段落内容的交叉。
3)用好连接词,注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。要做到所写文章层次分明,思路清晰,文字连贯,就需要在句与句之间,段与段之间架起一座座桥梁,而连接词起的正是桥梁作用
二、增加文采小窍门如果说第一、二步是对文章的构思,第三、四步骤则是真正地“写”了,用词是否贴切,文法是否正确,句式是否多变,文采是否有生气,关系到写作者的语言功底和水平,但也有些窍门,以下这几点可以供你参考。
1.在整篇文章中,避免只是用一两个句式,要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。
2.使用不同长度的句子,通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
3.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词短语等。
4.学会使用过渡词。如:
1)递进:furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition
2)转折:however,but,nevertheless,after all
3)总结:finally,at last,in brief,to conclude
4)强调:really,indeed,certainly,surely,above all
5)对比:in the same way, just as, on the other hand,
5.避免重复使用同一单词或词组。
6.注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思,以增加文采。
三、把好检查最后一关
1.是否切题分三点看:一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求;二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致;三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题,应该尽可能弥补,删除那些多余的或不切题的地方,但切忌动“大手术”。
2.是否连贯检查上下文是否连贯,句子衔接是否自然流畅,检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅,该用连词的地方用了没有,所用的连词是否合适。
3.是否有语法错误主谓是否一致,动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确,词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例,根据此标题,文章肯定用第一人称“I”写,一般性的描述用现在时,举过去的事例用过去时。
4.是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误,注意卷面整洁要提高写作水平,最根本是要大量实践,必须多读多写,注意博览和精读相结合,甚至可以适当背诵一些名句名篇。另外,还可选些范文,悉心领悟,多加模仿,以逐步达到运用自如。
『贰』 求一篇英语作文(适合初三学生水平的)
Hello,
everyone!
My
name's
Tom.
As
a
middle
school
student,
I
think
we
should
protect
our
invironment.
We
should
save
energy.
Now
I
am
used
to
enjoying
the
low-carton
life.
I
walk
to
school
every
day.
I
turn
off
the
lights,
fans
and
television
when
I
leave
our
classroom.
I
turn
off
the
taps
when
I
don't
use
it.
I
reuse
water.
I
make
full
use
of
paper
and
don't
use
plastic
bags.
The
earth
is
our
only
home.
Let's
make
it
cleaner!
楼上的你什么素质?刚进来就看到这样的话。。。
『叁』 小学生英语短文
1.Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six. There were cold drinks and refreshments. We ate, talked and laughed. We felt that we were the happiest men in the world
昨天是我生日,所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。有冷饮和点心。我们又吃又谈又笑。我们觉得是世界上最快乐的人。。
2.I like the Chinese new year better than any other festival. This is a time especially for rest and joy. I need not study. I wear good clothes and eat good food. I have a good time from morning till night. I am as happy as a king.
我喜欢中国新年比喜欢其它任何节日更甚。这是一个专为休息和欢乐的时间。我不需要读书。我穿好衣服,吃好东西。我每天从早到晚日子过得轻松愉快。我和上帝一样快乐。
3.No sooner had the witer vacation begun than I returned to my native town. Of course I
must make good use of it;.In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines. In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river. At night I watched television with my family. hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when I went to bed.
寒假刚一开始,我就回故乡了。自然我须好好利用它。 早晨我复习功课并阅读报纸或杂志。下午我和朋友打球,或去河中钓鱼。晚上我就和家人看看电视。墙上的钟刚敲十下,我就去睡觉了。
4.I live very happily today! In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!
今天我过得非常开心!早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融融!
my trip to japan (日本之旅)
Japan was fun. It was very cool and windy. We flew kites in the park. I bought a watch there. I wanted to buy more, but I didn't have money. The gardens there were beautiful. I very liked the gardens . The japan department stores were too big. I couldn't find Mom. The food was delicious. We ate a lot of fish。 I also liked the vegetables and cake there. I hope I can go to Japan one more time.
日本是一个非常有趣的国家.在那里有凉爽的空气和很强的风。我在那里的公园玩风筝。那里的花园很美丽。我十分喜欢那花园。日本的百货商店很大间。我找不到妈妈.食物是美味的。那里的食物很美味。我们在吃了很多的鱼。我也爱吃那里的蛋糕和蔬菜。我希望下次可以再到日本去。
我的家乡(my hometown )
I hometown is at ShenZhen.i born at there.My hometown is a beautiful place.Everyday we can see the farmers wake up early go to farm working , the bird is singing。Every everning i and my brother will playing the toy in front of my home.we can see my student cycle the bicycle go to school when school day. i like my hometown .
我的家乡在四川。我在那里出身。我的家乡是一个很派哦量的地方。我们可以看到农夫们很早就起身到菜园里,小鸟们在歌唱。每个下午我和我弟弟会在我家面前玩玩具。我们可以看到学生们起着脚踏车上学去。我非常的喜欢我的家乡。
visiting the museum(参观博物馆)
I bring Ann visit museum last Sunday . she was surprised to see many old things , and she was interested in the King’s hat . She wanted to buy one. I told her it wasn ’t buy . Ann kept asking me other thinges.
When she saw a thing with three legs and a strange top , she stopped to point at in and asked me , “ What is that ? ” “ It is a cup . ” I told her .
We had a good time in the museum
上个星级日我带Ann 参观博物馆。她惊奇看见许多很老的古董,并且她对国王的帽子很感兴趣。她想要购买一个。我告诉她不能买的。Ann保持向我问其它的古董。当她看见一件东西有三条腿和一奇怪的顶端时,她停下来在问我,“那时什么?”我告诉他那是杯子。
我们在博物馆中度过快乐的时光
Fox and cock
One morning a fox sees a cock.He
think,"This is my breakfast.''
He comes up to the cock and says,"I know
you can sing very well.Can you sing for me?''The
cock is glad.He closes his eyes and begins
to sing.The fox sees that and caches him in his mouth and carries him away.
The people in the field see the fox.They cry,"Look,look!The fox is carrying the cock away.''The cock says to the fox,"Mr Fox,do you understand?The people say you are carrying their cock away.Tell them it is yours.Not theirs.''
The fox opens his mouth ang says,"The cock is mine,not yours.''Just then the cock runs away from the fox and flies into the tree.
狐狸和公鸡
一天早上,一只狐狸看到了一只公鸡。他想:这是我的早餐。
他朝公鸡走来,对他说:“我知道,你能唱得非常好听,你能唱给我听么?”公鸡很高兴。他闭上眼睛开始唱歌。狐狸看到这些抓住它放到自己的嘴里走了。
在田地里的人们看到了狐狸。大喊大叫:“看,看!狐狸抓住公鸡逃走了。”公鸡对狐狸说:“狐狸先生,你能理解么?人们认为你叼走了公鸡。告诉他们这是你的,不是他们的。”
狐狸张开她的嘴说:“公鸡是我的,不是你们的。”就在那时,。公鸡跑到了树底下。
1。Today and friends of foreign travel, outside air is very good, people feel very comfortable. We all appreciate the fine girls bicycles. We enjoyed the beautiful nature brought. We happily spent a happy day. 今天和朋友一起出外交游,外面的空气很好,人感觉很舒服。我们骑着自行车一路欣赏鸟语花香。享受着大自然带给我们的无限美好。大家开开心心地度过了愉快的一天。
2。Today Mailehaoo clothes, and parents take to the streets is happy, the parents have to pay to buy things. Unlike in their street to buy things they like to take a long time but saw the price, Ha-ha, is really very happy. I love my parents, I too thank them for the care and love. `` 今天买了好多衣服,和父母上街就是愉快,买东西有父母帮付钱。不像平时自己上街买东西碰到喜欢的但看了价钱都要考虑好久,呵呵,真的是很开心。我爱我的父母,太感谢他们对我的关心和爱戴了。
『肆』 小学英语作文怎么写
①了解中西文化的差异是写好英语文章的前提
这里的文化差异不仅包括人文地理和民俗风情方面的不同,而且包括了中英文语言运用习惯的诸多不同。首先,在平时的教学中,我们就必须根据教材,适时渗透一些西方文化知识,让学生尝试了解相关的文化背景等。课后也可鼓励他们自己上网查阅相关资料。这样,既开阔了学生语言学习的视野,也为他们日后的写作提供了一些文化素材。
②要灵活变通,合理做好作业批改
在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。期刊文章分类查询,尽在期刊图书馆写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。
③积累词汇和句型是英语写作入门的关键
这一点与初学中文写作有很多相似之处。一篇用中文书写的文章可包括:字﹑词﹑句﹑段。借用行家的话来说,这些都是构成文章血肉的基本元素。同样,英语作文也必须重视单词和句型的运用。所以,在小学高年级,英语教师就尤其要注意“以新带旧”教学手段的运用。在教授新单词和句型的时候,使以前的语言知识点也得到相应的巩固。同时,适当地教学一些教材以外的常用的简单词句,有意识帮助学生扩大词汇量,这对写作是非常有益的。
④模仿范文是英语写作入门的必经阶段
因为小学生所掌握的英语词汇和语法知识有限,他们初涉作文领地,大部分学生都会感觉“无从下笔”或者即使冥思苦想拼凑好一篇短文,也难以避免多处的单词拼写和语法错误。所以,提供一两篇优质的范文供初学者模范学习是相当有必要的。
⑤训练口语是英语写作入门的重要环节
听说读写是语言学习的四大要素。在学习的过程中,这四者是紧密联系,相互促进的。在现阶段的小学英语教学中,略侧重于口语教学,这与学生的年龄结构和语言习得规律的阶段性都有关系。为此,小学高年级的英语教师就必须利用这一点引导学生成功跨越初步写作的障碍。
『伍』 小学生精典简短的英语作文
1.A happy Day
It was sunny and very hot today. I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room. After a short rest I did my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I went swimming in the nearest swimming pool with my friends. It was really cool to swim in such a hot day. I surfed the internet and read a storybook in the evening. I really had a busy and happy day. 今天天气晴朗比较热. 我起得很早,帮父母做早饭.然后我洗碗打扫屋子.休息一会后我上午做作业. 下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳. 在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒. 晚上我上网、看故事书.我今天很忙过得很快乐.
2.给笔友的一封信
Dear Lucy
I am very glad to hear from you. Now let me introce myself to you. My name is Li Lei. I am eleven years old. I am tall with a pair of glasses. Now I am studying at Yuying Primary School. I am in Class One,Grade 5. I like singing and playing the piano very much. I am good at English and Chinese. 很高兴收到你的来信.现在让我介绍我自己.我叫李雷.11岁.我高个子、带眼镜. 我在育英小学.我在五年级一班.我非常喜欢唱歌和弹钢琴.我数学和语文学得都很好.
3.暑假打算
I will have a busy summer vacation. I am going to do my homework every day . I am going to the library to borrow some books and go to the shops to buy some books.I am going to do sports such as playing table tennis, swimming and so on. I am going to visit my grandparents and stay there for a week. I am going to help my parents do some housework. 我暑假会很忙. 我每天要写作业. 我打算去图书馆去借书、去商店买书.我要做运动,如:打乒乓球、游泳等.我要去看爷爷奶奶并在那住一周.我要帮父母做家务.
4.自我介绍
Hello, everyone. My name is Kelly. I am friendly and honest.I am good at English and maths. I like surfing the internet,playing computer games, watching TV and traveling. I also like playing table tennis and I am good at it ,too. I often play table tennis with my friends on weekends. And I want to be a famous table tennis player when I grow up. What I like most is to see the seagulls flying freely in the sky so I often go to the sea in summer. My favourite colour is white because I think white is symbolize purity. 大家好 我的名字叫KELLY .我很友好、诚实.我擅长英语和数学. 我爱上网、玩电脑网络游戏、看电视 和旅游.我也喜欢打乒乓球.我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓球,长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员.最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔,因此在夏天我经常去海边.白色是我的最爱.因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征.
5.A nice Sunday
It is Sunday and it is a fine day today. We come to the People Park with our English teacher who came from Canada. Look ! Tom and other five boys are playing football. Cina and some girl students are flying kites. Alice and I are taking photos near the park. Alice and we are very happy. Alice helps us a lot with our English.
今天是星期天,天气晴朗.我们和来自Canada的英语老师Alice来到人民公园.
瞧,Tom和五个男同学在踢球;Cina和一些女同学在放风筝;我和Alice正在公园附近拍照.Alice和我们都非常高兴.Alice在英语方面帮助了我们很多.
6.The National Day holiday
On National Day holiday, I went to Lake Tai with my family . We played a lot of things and had a lot of delicious food there .
On Monday we went fishing . I fished a big fish . It’s red . Oh , we also rode a horse too . The horse I rode was very strong and handsome . It can run very fast .
On Tuesday we went to a farm . we got some fresh food there and cooked by ourselves . We cooked vegetables, fish and chicken soup . Then we tasted them together . Mmm , how fresh and yummy ! We all had a big meal .
We had a lot of fun and enjoyed our holidays there . I’d like to visit there again .
在国庆假期,我去了太湖和家人在一起.我们玩了很多的东西,而且有很多好吃的食物.星期一,我们去钓鱼.我掏出一条大鱼.它是红色的.哦,我们也骑一匹马.我骑这匹马很健美.它能跑得非常快.星期二我们去一个农场.我们有一些新鲜食品、煮熟的.我们煮蔬菜、鱼、鸡汤.然后我们尝起来.嗯,多么新鲜好吃!我们都有一顿丰盛的大餐.
我们玩得很开心,享受我们的假期.我很想再去那儿.
8. My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.
My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.
Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.
Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we’re getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.
Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school
『陆』 学生应该做家务吗英语作文怎么写
描写思路:首先根据题目,选择其中一种观点,比如学生应该要学着做家务,之后写出之所以这样认为的原因,正文:
I think students should do housework. If they don't do it, they will lack self-care ability.
我认为学生应该做家务,如果不做,就会缺乏自理能力。
In a similar case, there is another one. According to a news report, a graate student died soon after going abroad. The reason is surprising:
而类似的事例,又有一个,据一则新闻讲,一个研究生出国不久后就死了,原因让人吃惊:
It turned out that he was loved by his grandmother since childhood, and he didn't do any work. His dirty clothes were taken back in bags and boxes, and his parents didn't blame him.
原来他自幼就受奶奶宠爱,一点活也不干,脏衣服什么的,都是成袋成箱地捎回去,父母也不责备他。
As a result, when I went abroad, I died alone because of my poor self-care ability. How pathetic!
结果等到了国外,由于生活自理能力差,自己也不合群,就这样孤独地死去了。多么可悲!
Living examples show that the students who study well but do nothing are "high marks and imbeciles", which is harmful to cultivate students' independent living ability and children's health.
活生生的事例表明:学习再好却什么活也不干的学生,那就是“高分低能儿”,这对培养学生独立自主的生活能力以及孩子的健康是有害无益的。
『柒』 小学生英语作文整理房间50词
写作思路:确立中心,围绕选材,确定重点,安排详略,选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想,选择真实可信、新鲜有趣的材料,以使文章中心思想鲜明、深刻地表现出来,具体如下:
This Sunday, my mother asked me to tidy my room. I'm glad to do that. First, I made my bed tidily, and then I put my pillow on the quilt.
As for my books, I laid the books I often use on the unimportant ones.After I did that ,my mother praised me for what I did.
译文:这个星期天,我妈妈让我整理我的房间。我很高兴这样做。首先,我整理了我的床,然后我把我的枕头放在被子上。
至于我的书,我把我经常用的书放在不重要的上面。在我做了这件事之后,我妈妈表扬了我所做的事。
『捌』 50年后的学生生活英语作文带翻译
范文:How will the world be different in the future,50 years from now?Predicting the future can be difficult.But we can try to predict the future.I think people will have robots in their homes in the future.And they won"t use money.
Everything will be free.Books will only be on computers,not on paper.Kids won't go to school.They will study at home on computers.There will only be one coutry in the whole world.I also think people will live to be 200 years old.
50年后的未来世界会有什么不同?预测未来可能很困难。但我们可以尝试预测未来。我认为未来人们家里会有机器人。而且他们不会用钱。
一切都将是免费的。书籍将只放在电脑上,而不是纸上。孩子们将不去上学。他们将在家里用电脑学习。全世界将只有一个国家。我还认为人们将活到200岁。
英语翻译技巧:
第一、省略翻译法
这与最开始提到的增译法相反,就是要求你把不符合汉语,或者英语的表达的方式、思维的习惯或者语言的习惯的部分删去,以免使所翻译出的句子沉杂累赘。
第二、合并法
合并翻译法就是把多个短句子或者简单句合并到一起,形成一个复合句或者说复杂句,多出现在汉译英的题目里出现,比如最后会翻译成定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等等。
这是因为汉语句子里面喜欢所谓的“形散神不散”,即句子结构松散,但其中的语意又是紧密相连的,所以为了表达出这种感觉,汉语多用简单句进行写作。而英语则不同,它比较强调形式,结构严谨,所以会多用复杂句、长句。因此,汉译英时还需要注意介词、连词、分词的使用。
『玖』 如何写好英语作文的方法和技巧六年级
那么小学生英语作文怎么写?
一、先模仿写作
刚开始写英语作文,孩子们总是觉得无从下手,所以,这时可以放低要求先从模仿开始。仿写可以是局部的、片段的,也可以是整体的。仿写能使孩子写有样板练有目的,是初学写作的孩子行之有效的方法之一。通过仿写训练能引起学生对英语时态和语态的重视。模仿例文仿写,通过对比,使学生对同一时态不同人称动词的运用有了更深刻的理解,而不仅仅停留在记忆的层面上也可免去老师重复的讲解和提醒。
二、词汇量的积累
对小学生来说,只有量的积累达到一定的程度,才会发生质的变化,所以提高英语写作,光会说也是没用的,积累词汇量,书面表达出来才是最重要的,为了让孩子积累大量的词汇量,运用自然拼读教学方法,让孩子摆脱死记硬背的学习方式,通过拼读的方法记忆单词,做到听词会写,见词会读。
三、多看,多积累
小学英语作为不是很难,一般需要怎么积累呢?很简单的方式就是让孩子记住书本上面重点的英语知识,然后可以看一些课外的英语书籍,像少儿英语方面的书籍,可以让孩子多看多积累学习。
小学生英语作文怎么写?上面就是我分享的一些方法,小学英语作文重在积累,多写作练习,也能取得好的效果。
『拾』 写一篇怎么做一个受欢迎的学生的英语短文八十词左右
A popular student
As a popular student, need not wear the new in order to be different, but the heart of the independent mature.(作为一名受欢迎的学生,需要的不是穿着上的标新立异,而是心灵上的独立成熟。)
We need to do:(我们需要做的:)
The first, the basic principles of the person: respect, respect each and every teacher, every student, every one.(第一,是做人的基本准则:学会尊敬,尊敬每一位老师,每一位同学,每一个人。)
The second, to be punctual, do not be late, listening carefully in class, so, to leave a good impression on the teacher, students.(第二,要守时,不迟到,上课认真的听课,这样,才能留给老师,同学们一个好的印象)
The third,nquisitive, be polite, say hello to the teacher to see, be diligent, finish your homework carefully.(第三,要勤学好问,要懂礼貌,见到老师要问好,要勤恳,认真完成作业.)
Finally, more to help others, give person rose hand there are lingering fragrance.(最后一点,要多多帮助别的同学,赠人玫瑰,手有余香。)
如果有什么出误,请多多包含。