四级简单话题英语作文
高中生写的文章居然被引用到四六级，不害臊，我给上面文章的评价是，第一个分论点与观点矛盾，词汇量小，句式变化不多。下面是一篇谈旅游业发展与传统文化冲突的文章，自己比较下吧。
The booming tourist trade has brought about mass exchange of population between different nations. At first glance, this bridges the understanding and communication between different cultures. In my opinion, however, this fast-growing instry has proced tension between people from different cultural background.
The first barrier for curious tourists from all over the world is the problem of language. The most attractive destinations of tourism are, ironically, less developed areas where the world language --- English, has not been prevalent. Therefore, the direct contact between tourists and local residents has been cut down. The tour guide, normally interpreter too, becomes the only link of communication. But unfortunately, as indicated in any guide-training handbook, the responsibility of a tour guide is to arouse the tourists’ interest and passion rather than present a lecture on cultural difference. Thus, tourists, beyond their expectations, cannot fully understand the cultures which appears to be exotic.
Another obstacle is from the local government. As I argue before, in most of case, the ‘local’ refers to the less developed regions. In order to attract foreign investment and maintain the local tourism instry, the officials, deliberately or not, only hope to show outsiders the positive side of the area, hence, the part of local living. As a result, concted tours are carefully censored. The tourists, or ‘prisoners’ to some extent, are allowed to see only what the organizers want them to see and no more. A window-shop schele gives no opportunity to wander off on one’s own. In this way, even for a knowledgeable traveler with practical experience can only ‘see’ the superficial of the local culture. If so, an instant misunderstanding will be falsely shaped.
All things considered, the international tourism contributes absolutely nothing to increasing understanding. Instead, in its way as it is today, a hideous prejudice and misinterpretation will be established.
利与弊：
……(用一个从句引出的话题) graally becomes a pressing/hot-button/controversial/heated issue/opinion . In my point of view , trere are some advantages/strenthens/merits and disadvantages/weakens/shortcommings . In this essay , I want to compare them in several aspects and suggest some actions to take to solve its bad parts .
接下来讲这个问题的几点缺点。（两三个即可）
然后再讲解决方法，要注意有针对性。
最后再结尾，提出一些设想和对未来的展望就可以了。
其实什么模板套句都是没有什么用的，关键是怎么样让作文更有表现力，这是要长期训练的结果。
我可以举个很简单的例子：
非洲国家有很多人正在遭受饥饿、痛苦和贫穷。
高中生可以这样写：
Many people in African coutries are very poor , pain and hungry .（词汇贫乏句式简单，pain用词不恰当）
一般的大学生可以这样写：
Africans are suffering from stavation , misery and poor life .（虽然有一定的词汇，但是没有表现力，很乏味，相信改卷老师看了太多这样的句子了，已经是睡眼惺忪了。）
英语专业的学生就不一样拉，他们寻求表现力：
Stavation , misery and poverty(贫穷) are embracing tens of thousands of residents(居民) living in African coutries .（不简单，不用人做主语，形象生动，句式有些复杂，用现在分词做定语，词汇量大，表现力强。）
所以写作的时候要绞尽脑汁（rack your brain）来想出一些办法增强表现力，但是这是一个长期的过程，不可能一蹴而就的！
Ⅱ 英语作文，四级水平
My Idol
Everyone has his idols,and they differ from people to people.My
idol is Zhou Enlai,who was the first premier of new China.
Zhou Enlai was a great revolutionary who had devoted all his life to the cause of liberation of China.He took part in the War Against Japan and the War for Liberation of China.He fighted bravely against the enemies in order to save the people in great sorrow.After the foundation of new China,Zhou Enlai was elected premier.
Zhou Enlai was such a man who cared much more about the people than himself.He put all the people in his heart except himself.I admired him so much though he has been away from us for a long time.I like him best and believe that he will alway be alive on the minds of Chinese people.
Ⅲ 话题为四级考试的英语作文
Today we visited Red Star Farm. Early in the morning, we met at the gate and went there together. About two hours later, we arrived. On arriving there, we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm. We were very glad to see the crops and vegetables growing so well. At noon, we had a picnic happily. After the picnic, we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine. We listened to music, dancing and singing. Some were talking happily and even two of our classmates played chess. How time flies! It was time for us to leave though we didn't want to. It was really an unforgettable visit for us. 讲参观红星农场的,比较长,我觉得这篇不错的.你可以删掉点的.
Ⅳ 大家帮忙我写一篇英语作文，四级水平就可以
Pay More Attention to the Spelling
As we know,spelling is an important part of English learning.Only when we spell an word correctly,can we remember it clearly.Hower,many students attach little importance to spelling.The cause is that they don't think spelling is important.What's more,spelling is hard work,and they don't it.
In my view,we should pay great attention to our spelling.It's a good way to remember words.We should spend more time on spelling so that we can remember the new words clearly.
Ⅳ 求一篇120字的英语作文，四级水平
College English Learing
As English is the most useful tool of communication in the world and one of the most important subjects in school,we go on learning it after entering college.But in a way college English learing is different from that of middle school.That lies in the flowlling aspects.First of all,we learn the phonetic symbols,pronunciations ,as is known as the base of a language learning in junior school.Then we begin to learn new words and expressions and grammar when we enter a senior grade.And grammar is one of the most important part in this period.All teachers and students concentrate on it.
College English learing differs a lot.In college we don't focus on those that are taught in middle school but to attach importance to speaking,listening and comprehension.We'll spend much time pratising our speaking and listening,such as talking with a foreigner constantly.Meanwhile,to enlarge our vocabuary is another important thing in college.We are supposed to grasp as many words as possible in order to meet the great demands of our future work.
To sum up,our English learning never comes to an end.Remember,Never too old to learn.
Ⅵ 四级英语作文字数问题
一般来说，字数要来多于源要求的字数为宜，但也不能超过太多。
要求120字，你写多20字也正常，但以150为上限。
用句子的数量来衡量的话，一般控制在10到十五句左右。如果能长短句结合运用的话 12句就很理想
（平均每句单词数为10个左右）