四级英语作文批改
一、be different from 改为be different for（我觉得你想表达的是“因为工作学习的领域不同而不同”而版be different from是和什么不同），权二、has two side改为two sides，三、on appropriate time改为at appropriate time（“在合适的时间”介词应为at）至于格式考试要求的！还有几处不太确定，就没提出来！以上答案仅代表个人意见，希望对你有帮助！
B. 急！！！四级快到了！求帮忙修改一篇四级英语作文吧！感激不尽！！！
我的意见是这样的：
一种时尚潮流直接就 a fashion就行了
1.第二段最后一句 Therefore, it is urgent for us to attach great importance to this phenomenon.个人认为更好
貌似我没看出什么问题了。 不过我看出你在表达某些东西的时候过分追求高级词汇。
C. 跪求批改英语作文，CET-4
I was so excited when Iwas admitted to XX College that I picked up my package at once and booked aticket to school immediately.
College is quitedifferent from my middle school which area is the largest I ever seen.
There are so manysorts of courses provide me interests, such as Advanced Mathematics, the Theoryof Chinese Growth, and so on. All of these courses were taught so vividly thatI have to express my thanks to our lovely teachers. Among them, the ComputerProgram Design, an optional course, impressed me the most which I took part inwith full confidence.
What’s depressed mewas the result that I failed to design my program through all kinds ofknowledge learned from class with good combination. Despite of this, it’s mylucky to take part in the class since from which I got the most precious giftfor my future: Combining the knowledge is necessary to learn something truly well.
D. 怎样批改英语作文
从教二十年，每天改作业，最怕的就是该学生的英语作文。写错单词的，用错句型的，存在语法错误的，毛病皆是。有的同学的作文如要一一帮他改正错误，等于老师重新帮他写了一篇作文。这样势必造成批阅时间过长，影响其他环节的工作。如果粗略批阅则会阻滞学生英语写作能力的提高。针对这一问题，我摸索出一套自认为行得通的方法。 根据不同情况采用不同的批改方法。如果是在课堂上进行的写作（每个单元拓展部分都有写的能力的活动）。采取大家批。具体操作是抽两名同学在黑板上写，其他同学在练习本上写。写完之后，和同学们一起当老师，找黑板上两位同学写的文章的错误。让有类似错误的同学改正。指出文章的不足之处，有哪些地方需要改进。同时也要指出优点有哪些地方可供同学们学习.效仿。通过大家当老师一起改作文的方法既调动了学生的学习气氛又加深了犯错同学的印象，让他们不再犯同样的错误。 如果是课后作文，则采用收上来祥批和略批方式交叉进行。要确保每个同学在一期的英语写作中有几次祥批的机会。祥批时改出学生写作中词汇.句法.章法的错误。甚至包括单词拼写，大小写，标点符号和其他语法错误。指出学生存在的问题指明其努力方向。略批则只画圈圈点点，打分分等级。启发学生自己去找错误。培养其自发学习的能力。 如果是自习课上的课文，则采取互相批改的方法。先由老师讲解批改要点，指出批改方法和原则，注意要指出批改的具体注意点。如：大小写，单词拼写，标点，时态，语态，人称，句子结构，句子顺序等等。让学生心中有数，从而批改更详细。 当然，经过不同方法的写作批改后，有的同学可能写作水平任是涛声依旧。这时则需要找空闲时间面对面的批改了。就是当着学生面对面地批改。当面指出其存在的错误，让学生自己改正错误以加深印像。改完之后，让学生再体会一下。以便更好的整理思绪。 以上这些就是我在批改英语作文中找到的一些方法。希望同行多提意见，帮助我更好的搞好教学工作。
E. 帮忙修改英语作文（四级）
in my opinon ,Job Interview is very impotant when you seek for jobs.(find是找到的意思，不能表示寻找的过程）Firstly,Interview Jage ？ can help you to know about your knowledge、confidence and so on;Secondly,you can know your own weakness.
Job Interview include many elements（如果用consist of 我认为写成the success of job interview consist of。。。,比较符合逻辑），such as （for example 后面要加句子的）appearence、ability、knowledge、confidence and so on.I think knowledge is the most important element in Job Interview.It is the basic of our do any jobs.（我认为应该是it is the sc requirement of every job) And confidence is very impotant too.Only when we have confidence, can we do good jobs.At last,we must trust other people.Because if you have trust them,everyone will appreicate you,then you will（can比较好） have good jobs
我认为第二段最好是讲自己的观点的时候，有自己的依据。希望能帮到你
F. 英语好的进！【请】修改 我的【四级作文】~~高分哦
Children's crimes is becoming a serious social problem. Almost every school has different
degree of school violence. Should their parents have no responsibility for the children's
crimes? Of course not. Parents must ecate their children except feeding them.
There are several reasons why parents are responsible for children's crimes.First, they don't give their children a lesson
about law. It would be their whole life shame and dirty pot if they crime. Secondly, there
are no efficient way of communication (缺乏有效的沟通，好像太中国英语了，不地道) Most of the time youngsters must
be very(可以换什么成熟的漂亮又不做作的词儿) nervers when they first crime.
Unfortunately， their parents don't realize this. Third, there is a special situation that is
parents are not good models(好榜样). Wagering,lying and using violence are usually acted on
their children.
The solution to solve the problem is start with parents. Their responsibilities are not just
feed children up, what's more,are to make their children become lawful and justice
people.(这段最后写的乱着急的 整体不好 但现在也想不出别的了！)
G. 我的英语四级英语作文格式写错了！内容还可以，请问能得分吗
应该是能得分的，毕竟有内容嘛，况且老师批改的时间很短，不会看太仔细，四级神马的还是听力和阅读是大头。
H. 英语作文批改
第一段引入话题，阐述和你相反的观点，第二段用一个转折引入你的观点，并找观点支撑你的观点
第三段总结
In recent years,many college students have some part-time jobs. some people consider that they should not get any (否定句里面不用some)part-time job，（不用句号，because链接两个句子）because their majoy ty is still study hard in order to pass the exams. if they take(不是用do吧，太中国化） part time jobs,their time will be shared and their study may be degraded.
In my opinion, 加你的观点 空闲时间多，避免浪费 用于看电视玩游戏， 提高学生能力，处理事情，合作精神，有利于接触社会，挣钱减轻家庭负担 等等
As far as I concerned, taking part-time jobs have many benefits,for example,例举一些。。。。for those reasons,we should encourage the students to take part-time jobs
剩下的自己修饰哈 套路就是这样的 这样更清晰明了，每段开头都要yoga那些老师教的套语 加分
I. 我自己写了一篇四级英语作文，希望大神给我修改一下,或对我的思路提出一些建议
The disposable plastic bags have widely applied because（ 去掉OF语法错误） it's convinience.Neveretheless,it( result in plenty of可改高级词组) issues owing to this condition （as well.可改）
First and foremost,this plastic bags will damage our health if we frequently use it,because it contains various of materials that was capable of doing harm to our body.Additionally,the disposable plastic bags is easily broken down and might destroy we just bought. (去掉the）Last but not least,(it would result in the pollution of environment and the most painful to us is that witness plenty of disposable plastic bags in street.)可改强调，更高级词组
By and largre, I am strongly convinced that cannot emphasized（ too mush of 可改）limiting （the use of ）可改disposable plastic bags.Not only can benefit our healthy,but it would defend nature and make the society more harmonious.
修改的不多，但是分数能提高四分左右
你的文章基本定型，只能通过改一些边边角角。多用些高级单词和高级句式吧，看起来真的很像高一的学生作文。
J. 哪位英语达人帮我修改一下英语作文（按四级水平要求修改）
With the time passing by, I have got accustomed to the university life, I find life in university is different from that in high school.
Firstly, we have more choices. It’s up to us ourselves to choose optional course that we are interested in, and no one around us will force us to do what we dislike. Secondly, we have more freedom. Since we don’t have so many classes each day as we did in high school, we can take part in countless activities after class. Meanwhile, life in the university brings plenty of challenges. On the one hand, we have to obtain knowledge mainly by ourselves, since we can hardly meet our teachers out of class. On the other hand, we have to spend a lot of time washing clothes, buying food, etc. Thus, what we care about are not just studying and playing.
Considering the transformation from a teenager to an alt, the changes in this life stage are crucial. Only when we overcome the difficulties and get used to the changes can we grow up to a real man who can enter and stay in the society successfully. And I believe I’ll do better and better in the next four years.
写的不错，第三段基本没什么错，倒装句也用的正确。