幫忙修改作文英語怎麼說
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A Letter of Congratulation
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一封祝賀的信
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Dear Li Peng,
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親愛的李潘,
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Congratulations on your acquiring this year』s scholarship!
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恭喜你獲得今年的獎學金!
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I know how hard you have been working,as the saying goes,」God helps those who help themselves.
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我知道如何難的你一直工作, 諺語,"天助自助者。
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」
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」
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The fact that you have obtained the success in the field of learning suggests that it is your more efforts than others that won the honor of the stipend not only your clever.
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事實「你已經獲得學問的領域的成功」只意味著它是你的努力更甚於嬴得了薪水的榮譽不的其他你的聰明。
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Your success has given me a lot of inspiration:
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你的成功已經給我許多靈感:
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if one does not exert oneself in youth, one will regret it in the future.
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如果一不在年輕人中發揮自己，他未來將會為它感到遺憾。
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Hence, I will study more hard than before and acquire a satisfactory result as you.
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因此, 我將會學習更難的超過在而且之前獲得一個滿意的結果當做你。
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Finally, I just can』t tell you how proud I feel of you.
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最後, 我就是不能告訴你如何驕傲的我你感覺。
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Yours sincerely
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你的真誠地
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Li Ming
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李明
㈡ 幫忙修改一篇英語作文
Schools offer a lot of sources for sports.For example,the tracks are set in the playground,together with the basketball courts.Schools specially designe some places for playing badmintom and pingpong.Consequently,the sports of schools are various.
Certainly,we should try to make full use of these free sourses.When you are walking on the playground ,you can see some boys playing basketball and some students are running along the track.Enterong the gymnasium,you will find a couple of students waving the badminton rackets in the air. Obviously,they are playing badmintom.Let us look at the opposite side.The students are playing pingpong intensely.Once you put yourself into the playground ,you will be attracted by the scene in front of your eyes.
It is a very interesting thing that we do sports in the school.So we should take part in the sports activities actively.Not only can we take exercise but we can also have much fun.
㈢ 幫忙修改一篇英語作文
Corrections are made, though some might have been missed out. Question marks indicating that what you were trying to communicate is not very clear so couldn't really do any changes on those.
Part one The school yard
It is an old school with a long history. My first impression of it is that it』s very beautiful and modern. The buildings are in European style. And they are red and white. There is a big library named Yifutang in school. The students can also do their homework there.
Our classroom is amazing and clean. Every classroom has a big screen computer, almost as big as a blackboard. The classroom is very bright because there are many windows and lights.
There is a big dining room in the school. The food is very delicious and hundreds of students have their meals there everyday. And there is a nice fountain in front of the dining room. A wonderful playground is behind the Qinmianlou. Many trees are planted around the playground. We can play basketball, table tennis, football and badminton there after school .
Part two Our teachers
In senior high, we would meet some new classmates, as well as some new teachers. They are all enthusiastic. Let me introce some of them to you!
Our English teacher, Ms Gu, is really capable (experienced?). She can speak English very well. We all admire her very much and want to speak English as well as her. She is full of energy, which doesn』t depend on the age. She explains things clearly and her teaching is well organized. In her class, we speak a lot and never get bored! She will be quite strict if we forget to do the homework. But when we make progress, she is happy and praises us at once. I believe we will improve our English with her help.
We have two head teachers. One is our biology teacher, Mr. Li. And the other is our physics teacher, Mr. Yi. Mr. Li is an experienced teacher. He always gives us some useful suggestions about studying. Mr. Yi often tells us some interesting things about physics. They are both kind and patient. We like them very much.
Our Chinese teacher wears a pair of glasses and he is a little heavy (?). He is kind and always smiles. He knows a lot about Chinese literature. Our math teacher, Mr. Lei, is also knowledgeable. We all admire them.
Part three The famous students
There are always some famous students appearing in my school. In old times, there were many students, who once attended my school, who made many contributions to society. Such as Gao Junyu, the first Communist Party member in Shanxi province; Peng Zhen, a great statesman; Dong Shouping, a famous artist; Ren Zhigong, a famous physicist and so on. Now, there are also some famous students currently studying at school. Our school basketball team and our school orchestra are famous too.
Part four Our feeling
I think my school is a fantastic place to growup in. I』m deeply impressed by some special features of my school, such as its central location, enthusiastic teachers, famous students and so on.
My school is not far from the city center. Thanks to that, it's very comfortable and convenient to live there.
I was a little shy at the start of being taught. But all the teachers made me agree that there was nothing to be embarrassed about. I』m sure I』ll study better with the help of my teachers.
We can also take part in many after school activities, like MUN. I think these activities made study more fun.
I think we live a healthy and fun life.
Our school is 「the beginning of the dreams」. We are going to sprinkle our sweat there in the following three years (?). And we believe that we will reach the culmination three years later. We love our school.
㈣ 幫忙修改一篇簡單的英語作文
讓我冒昧就您這篇作文提幾句意見：我認為好的作文並不能僅是把許多單句集合一起。在描述一件事時，句子應該順暢達意，有連貫性。對同一事物，最好能避免使用千篇一律的文字或語句來表達。您的作文，如果把它翻譯成中文，大概會是如下的樣子：
這是我們的學校，歡迎您到來。體育館[我猜您是指體育館(gym,
gymnasium),
而不是gum
(橡皮糖，或橡膠)]
在花園後面，花園在圖書館旁邊，圖書館在課室大樓前面，飯廳在課室大樓旁邊，操場在校門和衛生間中間。學校很漂亮。
讀起來是否有點「只是把單句集在一起」的感覺?
讓我試試把文章改寫如下，看您是否覺得比較好一點：
This
is
our
school.
I
would
like
to
welcome
you
to
our
school
by
introcing
to
you
the
facilities
in
our
school.
First,
we
have
a
magnificent
gymnasium
where
sport
events
take
place
throughout
the
school
year.
Next
to
the
gymnasium
is
our
school
garden.
Seasonal
flowers
and
plantations
in
the
garden
always
make
our
school
more
beautiful
and
more
appealing.
Our
library
is
located
next
to
the
garden
and
in
front
of
the
classroom
building.
After
the
classroom
building,
you
will
find
our
dining
hall
where
we
eat
our
lunch
everyday.
Let
me
also
introce
you
to
the
playground
of
our
school.
This
is
the
place
where
we
play
games
and
the
place
for
formal
events.
The
playground
sits
between
the
gate
of
entrance
and
the
lavatory.
So
you
see,
we
have
a
big
and
charming
school
and
we
all
love
it
very
much.
㈤ 幫忙修改一篇英語作文，要表達准確地道
非常地道的漢語。我只是就你的文章進行了語法和部分詞法方面的修改。要實現地道的英語，還需要多多地努力。
In the past, when a person said 「I am poor」, he meant that he had financial problems. But at present, the word 「poor」 also expresses the meaning of spiritual poverty. The lack of knowledge causes spiritual poverty, which has become an apparent problem in today』s society, and the lack of input of foreign language words, not often reciting something and listening to information, causes the lack of knowledge. So, what we need is to find a way to avoid such problems.
As everyone knows, what one inputs decides what one outputs. If someone doesn』t like reading books or reads the books short of knowledge, he will not be able to avoid the spiritual poverty. Besides, the lack of information input will also make it difficult to communicate with others; we would not acquire the information from others. So, to avoid the spiritual the poverty, the first step is to read more and listen more.
To read more, people should have a big enough vocabulary, including foreign words. The lack of words is a barrier which makes it hard for many people to read for knowledge from other cultures. The way to solve this problem is to learn more words including English words, because English now is a global language and many scientific articles are written in it. To fulfill this second step, people need patience. We must keep in mind that to enlarge vocabulary is a job which should be done every day.
The third step to solve the problem of spiritual poverty is to recite more. Good essay recitation is important because essays can be a spiritual wealth which can accompany you every day and everywhere. Reciting these essays can also help you learn how to use the words and how to lead a happy life. In a word, it is a good way to solve the spiritual poverty problem.
Remember the three steps --- to read more and listen more, to enlarge your vocabulary, and to recite more. They will make your spirit full. If everyone takes the steps, the spiritual poverty will not be a problem in the future.
㈥ 幫忙修改英語作文，急！！！！！！！！
The Iceland is the first place I want to travel to .there are more than 200 volcanoes and many glaciers form it's landscape, so people said it is shaped by fire and ice.It is covered with snow and ice which have many hot springs inside.In Iceland, the scenery is so pure and unique which makes people feel relax.
The second place is the Switzerland . This country has the best chocolate proction and watch proction. She has small Land area and population but high quality life .
There are so many places I want to travel include Barcelona,a beautiful Spanish city near the sea, especially to it's splendor building which designed by Antoni Gaudi, a architect with great talent.
可能改的地方太多，主要是你的表達有點冗餘，見諒，僅供參考！
㈦ 幫忙修改英語作文
已改好，能否私信交流下？
It was 2012, the time when I had to manage a new Japanese restaurant.
My ex boss decided to open a new Japanese restaurant in XXX city, but he didn』t have any experience of how to open and manage a Japanese restaurant, and he also didn』t had much time (he got to manage a Chinese restaurant). So he assigned me to do it. One reason was that I was already his assistant and the lobby manager of his Chinese restaurant, furthermore, I had learned Japanese food courses from a Japanese sushi master in China for about three months.
It was a really big challenge for me. Obviously, I』ve learned the basic courses of marketing, operation and management, but that was just limited to book knowledge, I didn』t have much practical experience. So at first, I discussed with my ex boss for every detail: who concerned with this project and what did he want exactly. After that I began to look on the internet for the decoration and the design for the restaurant. Once I』ve got the preliminary conception, I started investigating the Japanese restaurants in that city, one by one. I collected all the informations (menus, photos, the flow of customers at the weekends, the service quality etc). By analyzing and comparing all data I got, finally I could determine the style, the customer orientation and the food price.
At the end of this period, I realized that difficulties make you stronger, do not be afraid, just do your best. By the way, the feeling of seeking solutions under pressure, that』s just amazing!
㈧ 英語作文幫忙修改
My Hobby
Different people have different hobbies , my hobby is reading books . I think reading books can learn some new knowledge.So i read different kinds of books.There are fable ,science books ,And so on. so,i think i will become cleverer and cleverer.
I reading books every day ,and I often go to the library to lend some books . My father and my mother agree with my hobby. I like reading books very much ,請注意大小寫
㈨ 幫忙改英語作文
我主要改些語法時態搭配哦。。
Some people think a name is important to them.
To a company like Coca......., a name...
你有見過a part of people嗎？ 沒有盡量別用。。錯了扣分的
can give
Other people... to them
all human being coming to this world are unique
some customers
go to buy-- purchase
just for its brand
...of goods thus regarding name to be of trivial effect
自己觀點稍少了點
...to differentiate the external part of people
...the inner essence so as to gain a full understanding of them (為什麼要看本質？)
㈩ 幫忙修改英語作文~~謝謝
注意你的問題是你把你本身寫的句子翻成中文都不是很通，第一段精縮，重新排序：It is an honor for me to introce the girl who sits beside me in my English class, Wu xuyan.
第二段，我的第一印象是她 的性格，這話其實邏輯不對，中文勉強過關，英文里是錯句。I was impressed by her characteristics at first place(或at the very beginning, 或 initially). 第二句的從句來的莫名其妙，沒有必要：She has an extrovert personality and always wears a shining smile, （一個and，就表示了在解釋之前的點，不用從句）which attracted me. Naturally, we became friends.(與其交朋友不是一個big deal，還犯不上make your mind)
第三段邏輯有些亂，我不知道她來自上海、學設計跟「我們有共同興趣愛好」有什麼必然聯系，如果你是想說我們都來自上海，都學設計，有一樣夢想，那就先別說hobby，然後這樣寫：As knowing her more, I found that we have a lot in common, not only because we are both from Shanghai and were born in the same year, but also because we both major in design and are ambitious in being a successful designer one day.
注意，the British play是特指某一部英劇。應該是 We both love watching British plays, such as "Silk" and "Sense and Sensibility", （注意雙引號代替中文的書名號，用於分開不同的作品名，不然非常confusing）and Sherlock series are our favorite. 然後這里別用of course，沒有邏輯。We also enjoy watching the same type of movies which include handsome actors. (movies 不能用 who，沒有生命的東西要用which)
接下來你要介紹不同，而不是相同，就應該另起一段，否則非常亂。
We both like reading. My taste, however, is a bit of different from hers. She loves romantic books while exciting ones (這樣改依然不妥，exciting不是一個類別，寫英語文章要在邏輯道理上讓西方人認可，你應確定是武俠還是戰爭類還是什麼)are more appealing to me.(appeal to 也對，很不錯，你知道這個). She alsos has a wise comment about reading: It's a good way to relax which at the sametime helps me eliminate the confusion in real life.（consider the confusion我不知道是什麼意思，沒有這個用法，猜你是想說解疑釋惑吧。normal這個詞不要亂用，這么解釋吧，它的反義詞，abnormal，是畸形的意思，明白了嗎，如果生活中沒有動亂、殘疾之類的，一般不至於用normal來形容一個事物，「現實生活」用real life）
Moreover,好吧， 對不起沒看到這里有what' more, 被我用掉了，就用moreover。we are both so drawn to travelling. She hankers for going up the Northern Europe for seeing the aurora and playing with penguins in the South Pole.這一段有點尷尬，你們都愛旅遊，但你不介紹自己喜歡什麼樣的旅遊，只寫了她的而沒寫你的。 你可以加一句但我們嚮往的目的地不同到中間but we have different dreaming destinations ， 再在後面加上你想去的地方，有關想去，被吸引有很多片語可用，這里給你幾個：be drawn to(我剛用了）, ache to do（想死了要做）, desire for doing, have been dreaming of doing, long(不是長，是渴望，動詞） for doing 等等。
最後一段第一句沒問題。但in the depth of my heart 是心靈深處，很文學，也很「深」，不如用from my truest heart, 然後就是少用forever，典型的中國英語，多用always，可以加上in my lifetime。pray是祈禱，有點過了，就是I wish her dreams come true!
好好學，還不錯。