夾敘夾議的英語作文怎麼寫

⑴ 中考英語作文寫作方法

英語寫作是學生學習的一個盲點，缺乏對寫作的專門訓練和反思，老師的工作量大，造成作文講評大多數時候只談現象，因此學生學得也不具體、不深入，忽略寫作技能的提高，甚至誤認為只要句子結構正確，無單詞拼寫錯誤就應該得滿分。同學們應該走出對英語寫作認識上的誤區。那麼怎樣才能寫出一篇優秀作文，而在中考中獲取高分呢?

一、寫作決竅

總體把握，要點齊全;人稱時態，邏輯清楚;

關鍵詞彙，動詞第一;組詞成句，結構完整;

組句成文，連詞增色;此路不通，繞道迂迴;

字跡工整，留好印象;從句適量，高分有望。

二、寫作步驟

1.認真審題。審題包括要點、格式、詞數以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什麼樣的信息，告誡讀者什麼(即寫作目的)。

2.確定文體和時態。確定文體後，根據不同文體的特點和要求進行組織材料;同時確定出該篇文章的總時態與時態的變化。

3.寫完要點，但不隨意發揮。

4.先草稿，後抄寫。

三、習作點評

[2004年全國中學生英語能力競賽初賽初三組] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

寫作要求：

1.根據所提供的內容，適當拓展想像空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現在文章中。

2.條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規范。

3.詞數60-80.

[學生習作A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改為reading books，動詞作表語時應該用動名詞。

②also的位置應放在can之後。

[點評]：檔次9-11分。

①要點不全，漏掉最後一個要點。

②句子基本無誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過渡不自然，給讀者感覺在回答上述問題。

③有少量錯誤。

[學生習作B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren』t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①開門見山、點題。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中帶圈的連詞使用得恰當，使文章過渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表決心。

[點評]：檔次13-14分。

①清楚表達寫作目的，要點齊全。

②語言表達靈活多樣，字里行間流露出真情實感，文章有感染力。

③恰當使用連詞和從句，語言流暢，且無錯誤，是一篇高質量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文體：記敘文。

②要點：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③時態：一般現在時，一般過去時，一般將來時的自然變化。

內容具有開放性，但它也是「控制性」的寫作試題，因此不能隨意發揮，要善於抓信息，寫完要點。選用這兩篇學生真實習作，一是因為他們選材相同，二是因為他們都是英語成績優秀的同學。同學B靈活使用連詞so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好處地使用新句型和短語used to,became interested in,come true……等，使內容豐富，讀起來優美流暢。其實這些表達同學A也會，只是缺乏技術加工。通過這兩篇作文點評，同學們便能悟出其中的奧妙。

四、培養途徑

1.根據老師布置的寫作內容，獨立完成一篇寫作。

2.與同伴合作，交流自己的寫作，通過交流找出各自作文中寫得好的地方和優美的句子，合作創造一篇新的文章，供大家欣賞。

3.找老師點評，請求老師指點，尤其是怎樣潤色。

4.自己糾錯，寫下反思。

五、備考演練

A

縉雲山是重慶著名的游覽勝地，每天有大量的遊客。請你根據下面提供的信息寫一篇報道，說明現在的遊客在環境保護方面的變化。

寫作要求：

1.詞數在100左右。

2.條理清楚，語句通順。

3.開頭已寫好，但不計入總詞數。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

閱讀電視廣告詞：「If we don』t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.」根據提示，寫一篇60-80詞的短文。

提示：

1.生活離不開水。

2.可飲用水在減少。

3.水污染嚴重。

4.應保護水源，再利用水。

思路點撥與參考答案

A. [思路點撥]：

①文體：記敘文。

②時態：一般過去時態，一般現在時態。採用正反對比的寫作手法，增加感染力。

③寫作目的：告訴讀者保護環境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into stbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路點撥]：

①夾敘夾議(說明現狀，談談感想)。

②時態：一般現在時態。

③廣告詞的含義——水很重要，應保護和再利用(寫作意圖)。

Water is very important to humans.We can』t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don』t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don』t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

⑵ 英語作文議論文怎麼寫

議論文的寫作要注意三個要素：1.提出論點；2.組織論據,進行論證；3.得出結論.
常用的論證方法包括夾敘夾議法、例舉法、比較對照法、因果法、邏輯推理法（包括歸納法和演繹法）.可以從正面論證,也可以從反面進行反駁.
常規整體構建模式
在一篇文章中,各自然段,各句子都為文章的中心思想服務,各段落之間,句子與句子之間存在著某種邏輯關系.文章段落之間的邏輯關系主要由過渡詞來完成,在修辭中稱為啟、承、轉、合.「啟」就是開頭,「承」是承接,「轉」是轉折,「合」是綜合或總結,一篇文章
與一段文章一樣都有「啟、承、轉、合」關系.
常規段落構建模式
考研英語寫作的文章一般包括一個開頭段、若干擴展段和一個結尾段.開頭段和結尾段
一般比擴展段短.在這里,主要給同學們分析開頭段的寫作模式.
開頭段一定要語言精練,並且直接切入主題.開頭段一般不對主題進行深入的探討,具體的論證或敘述應該在擴展段進行.一般在開頭段寫四或五句即可.考生應注意以下若干要點：
1） 開頭段的作用
概括陳述主題,提出觀點或論點,表明寫作意圖.
2） 寫開頭段時考生應該避免的若干問題
① 開頭偏離主題太遠；
② 使用抱歉或埋怨之詞句；
③ 內容不具體,言之無物；
④ 使用不言自明的陳述.
3） 開頭段的使用方法
① 使用引語
使用一段名人名言,或人們常用的諺語,習語,以確定文章的寫作和方
向；
② 使用具體詳實的數字或數據
引用一些具體詳實的數字或數據,然後做出概括性分析,指明問題的症
結所在；
③ 提出問題
提出有爭議或探討性的具體問題,然後加以簡要回答或展開引導性簡短
討論；
④ 給出背景
描述具體事件的時間、地點和發生背景等；
⑤ 定義法
針對討論的主題或問題加以定義,然後進行深入探討；
⑥ 主題句法
文章一開始就以主題句點明全文主題,然後圍繞主題內容進行發展

⑶ 英語作文 this time next year

寫作思路：寫出自己希望的明年的此時想要成為的樣子，表達出對自己的期許。

正文：

I think my life will be wonderful at this time next year.

我想，明年此時，我的生活會是美好的。

At this time next year,I will be a senior high student,and I will make a lot of new friends.

明年的這個時候，我將成為一名高中生，我將結交很多新朋友。

l hope to be more independent so that I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English.

我希望能更加獨立，這樣我就可以參加國外的夏令營來提高我的英語口語。

Also,I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.

另外，我會幫助我的父母做家務，以便知道如何照顧自己。

Life will be totally different,but I'm really looking forward to it.

生活會完全不同，但我真的很期待。

⑷ 寧澤濤英語作文。夾敘夾議。

NingZetao was born in ZhengZhou,HeNanprovince on March 6 ,1993. He is the Chinese navy』s swimming athlete, and he
has 1.91 meters tall . This benefits of swimming a lot . What』s more ,he isChina』s power
pop idol .
The
Asian games in incheon ,2014 ,he has win the four gold medals . He has such a
big achievement from his efforts in normals times . Due to the weak ,he was
learn to swim . In the end , He became a good swimmer . However , 「My
parents regart that allowed me to be a swimmer .」 He said .
「They think that as a athelet is very hard.」 But he proved that he is a
man of great to us .

⑸ 求歷年各地高考英語作文範文，要有題目與範文，要有書信。日記。通知。看圖。夾敘夾議。食物介紹。記敘類

《5年高考英語滿分作文》這本書就不錯，不僅僅有各地最新五年（當然包括2010年）考高滿分作文，還有範文。我高考的時候用的就是這本書！如果我沒有記錯你說的內容上面都有，真的不錯！新華書店就有的賣！

⑹ 求夾敘夾議英語作文120字

Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools.
Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas ecation is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.
After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the ecational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?
We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.

⑺ 如何寫高考英語記敘類作文

嘿嘿，我們老師的經典原則，用起來很好用，就是用簡單的句子寫簡單的話，但是高考一定版得高分。因為閱權卷老師在短時間改大量的文章，肯定無暇去欣賞你的優美文風，最多就是挑錯，如果沒有錯，當然就是高分了（他每年都要去改高考作文哈。） 至於具體的東西，你可以背個兩三篇範文（信啊，事啊），這樣寫的時候就有一個良好的格式，而且開頭幾句大都雷同，你只要改一點就可以了。呵呵，剩下的，就是想怎麼簡單怎麼寫了。先把簡單句想好，再寫，卷面一好，成績也大大提高。 我高考英文作文大概23哈，還算不錯，差不多就是怎麼簡單怎麼寫了。希望你加油哈。