我有篇英語作文不知怎麼寫

1. 兩篇英語作文,

第一篇： It is said that there is a beautiful 農場 . and it just near our school. so, i am going to have a great time with my good friends. we will go there by bike together,and we can go hiking,go fishing,taking photoes and so on. last but not the least, what the enjoyable thing is that we can enjoy the happinese of the natura. How wonderful it will be !

第二篇：
Dear friend:
I heard that you got the cold again. I『m sorry to hear that . Beasides, I still want to talk to you something about your health. well,you know,you like to eat meat too much. I have to say that's really a bad habit. It not only makes you become more and more fat but also become more and more wake. Could you change a little about it for your health? Besides, I think you need to do more exercise. It will makes you feel fit. and I』m sure that one day you will truelly like it .
Hope you will be better tomorrow.

yours
LIN HAI

2. ...信中說他的英語很差,不知怎麼提高,希望你能給予幫助 英語作文...

寫作思路：分點論述提高英語成績的方法，最後表達對李明的美好祝願。正文如下：
Dear Li Ming:
I am very happy to see your letter. You mentioned that your English was not good enough, and hoped to improve it. Acutally it is not a tricky question. As long as you make up your mind to take measures, you will achieve your progress.
Firstly, you should keep in mind that English, as a tool for communication, is essentially a language. And as a language, the ultimate purpose for learning it is to use it to express yourself and understand others. So we can not learn it the way you learn math or physics. It has its own way.
Secondly, you should try to remember the words. Because it's the basic of English without which the language system can not be formed. It is not recommanded to rote. Yet, you should try to learn the words through context. It works better especially for the beginners.
Thirdly, you should read more English mateirals in order to foster a sense of language. By watching English movies or TV series or reading English newspapers, you will hold a vague impression of the sentence, and it may help establish your own language system. After reading a lot, you will find it easy to express yourself with proper expressions.
And last, you should find more oppurtunities to practise your achievement. Namely, to find some native English speakers or friends or teachers to chat in English.?
During the conversation, you should try to pay attention to what others use to express their mind. And if it is something new to you, you should memorize as much as possible and make it your own.
I hope with the methods stated above, you'll soon make achievement in learning English. Good luck to you.
Sincerely
Tom
翻譯：
親愛的李明：
我很高興看到你的來信。你提到你的英語不夠好，並希望提高它。事實上，這不是一個棘手的問題。只要你下定決心採取措施，你就會取得進步。
首先，你應該記住，英語作為一種交流工具，本質上是一種語言。作為一種語言，學習它的最終目的是用它來表達自己和理解他人。所以我們不能像你學習數學或物理那樣學習它。它有自己的方式。
其次，你應該試著記住單詞。因為它是英語的基礎，沒有它就無法形成語言體系。不建議死記硬背。然而，你應該試著通過上下文來學習單詞。特別是對於初學者來說，它更有效。
第三，為了培養語感，你應該多讀英語材料。通過看英語電影、電視劇或閱讀英語報紙，你會對句子有一個模糊的印象，這可能有助於建立你自己的語言系統。讀了很多書後，你會發現用恰當的表達方式表達自己很容易。
最後，你應該找到更多的機會來實踐你的成就。也就是說，找一些以英語為母語的人或朋友或老師用英語聊天。在談話中，你應該注意別人用什麼來表達他們的想法。如果對你來說是新的東西，你應該盡可能多地記住，讓它成為你自己的。
我希望通過上述方法，你很快就能在英語學習上取得成就。祝你好運。
真誠地
湯姆

3. 我想學好英語該怎麼寫作文

1. 我想學好英語的作文

According to the natural laws of learning language, learning English will first listen to, say, to read, and then only to write, don't understand English students is impossible to read good English or written English. That is to say first learn "listening, speaking >" language "and in" text ", also is the study of grammar. Our previous study, Taiwanese language is the principle of this nature, Americans are learning English or Japanese is also not fool enough to go to grammar school, if the first study of the "grammar" in the future when you want to speak, will want to grammar, it can not speak fluent statement. Ask: you in Taiwanese or Mandarin said "my mouth very thirsty, want to drink a can of Coca Cola", you will not want to Grammar: I > subject, > noun thirsty > adjectives, drink verb >, cola > nouns. I don't believe that. Why is it? Because our ears have formed the correct grammatical habit. Therefore in learning English, we should first to train yourself to listen to, the correct habit of English pronunciation and colloquial and try to imitate, and don't be afraid, to dare to speak, is the most important to in learning "read and write" is secondly, that is to say, the first English pronunciations and tones as a kind of habit formation, and then bined with the second stage "sound and thought," powerful bination, so they have a gut reaction. This is in line with the learning of human language environment of the o principles, said the "first language text" of the concept is that must be established, so learn language can get ice the result with half the effort. When we develop the correct usage of grammar habits, we must pay more attention to one thing: when we speak English, always first to the Chinese and then translated into English, but we understand the meaning of this, in the mind just a deep impression on the Chinese, and English itself, the impression is unclear. In fact only in we pletely out of the Chinese, let yourself into thinking in English a prehensive environment, the ideal mind is the English vocabulary and structure, and will be very natural to find and match the correct English. When you are familiar with the syntax used, and can think in English, also need to "actual practice" to help you to practice makes perfect realm! First (a) intensive listening to tapes - > to see Textbooks - > first probably understand meaning - > imitates said - > sound and meaning bined with the preliminary (second) listen to tapes - > really distinguish the sound difference - > the heart and clear the meaning - > pletely into the English world. (III) see text and pictures > speak correct English > graally develop the habit of thinking in English > of mean response to natural to speak. (four) think of what you have just learned to say, naturally, when you are practicing, even if you are studying alone, it is as if someone is talking to you, and I believe that it will help you in your English. Is there a shortcut to learning English? Certainly not. Is there a way to learn English? Certainly there. Do anything there is sure to be the best way to learn English and certainly there are ways, if the right way, the inevitable plication of efforts, but again good if there is no practical work as a foundation, then it can only be empty and useless. If you ask, is there a shortcut to learning English? I said no, so-called shortcut is effortless to reach the destination path, so far has not been heard of a shortcut to learning English to learn English by which people, if there is such a shortcut, then have the shortcut must have made a big fortune the. Practice has proved that there is no shortcut to learning English. Then there is a way to learn English? The answer is yes. Everyone in the learning process are aware of learning methods, there is a good way to learn people can easily learn the course, get good results, or make good results. Since there is a way to learn English, then there must be one of the best ways. Our goal is to find a good way to learn English well in the shortest time. Do not try to be successful, but if the right way is not successful. Method of learning never say to someone, a head into the ocean of knowledge, the results never the light of day. It's a waste of your energy. Why do we learn English for so many years in school, English or not to learn it? On the one hand, because of our effective study time is not enough, although every day has English class, but we have to use the effective use of each class?。

2. 「我想怎麼學好英語」翻譯成英文,並且寫成一篇作文

Some people think that if we want to learn English well we must learn English grammar well first of all. Others believe we can't learn English well unless we keep in mind as many English words and phrases as possible.

In my opinion, grammar rules, new words and phrases are very important, but they are not enough. Fox example, some of my clas *** ates are quite good at grammar and have learned by heart a lot of English words and phrases, yet they can't express themselves in English when they meet foreign friends.

The best way to learn English well, I think, is to learn and use English all the time. Don't be afraid of being laughed at. We'd better do a lot of listening, speaking, reading and writing. If you can form the habit of thinking and writing in English all day, you are sure to grasp the spirit of English and will be able to read works in English within a short period of time.

Only in this way that I suggest, can we learn English well. So I think this is the best way.

3. 【怎麼寫好英語作文我也不是學習成績差的那種,但一寫起英語作文

寫作在英語學習中是培養和提高語言能力的有效手段，它有助於鞏固和掌握所學詞彙、語法等語言知識，有助於訓練直接用所學語言進行思維，有利於提高駕馭語言的能力.中學生該如何寫好英語作文呢？經過多年的教學實踐，在英語寫作方面我總結如下幾點淺見： 一、增加詞彙 英語寫作要求有一定量的詞彙，沒有詞彙就好比巧婦無米難以下廚.寫作時可能出現要寫的詞記不起來、要用的詞拿不準、尤其是遇到同義詞、更不知用哪一個好、或詞性沒記住，結果亂用……. 這都說明平時對單詞的記憶不夠牢固，理解不清.這就要求我們在記單詞的時候多花點力氣，要從單詞的音、形、義入手，最好不要單獨記憶單詞，這樣容易遺忘，要把它放在句子或文章中一起記憶，這樣可把握單詞的詞義、用法、搭配等詞彙特點.除了課本上的詞彙必須掌握外，還要進行廣泛的課外閱讀，來增加詞彙. 二、掌握語法 英語中雖有很多句子與漢語相似或相同，但語法與漢語不盡相同，它有自己的基本句型固定搭配、固定短語等.要想寫好作文，必須學好語法.英語中有五種基本句型結構，幾乎所有的英語句型都是五種句型的擴大、延伸或變化，因此，應牢記這五種基本句型，並不斷地練習運用. 1. S +V 2. S+V+O 3. S+V+O+O 4. S+V+P 5. S+V+O+C 這五種句型雖能表達一定的意思，但無法比較自由地表達思想，因此還需對學生進一步進行擴句訓練，在課堂上充分發揮學生的想像力，進行擴句練習.其次，要加強句型教學，要對一些句子進行分析，增強他們利用各種句子進行一意多種表達的訓練.再次，充分利用新教材中「鞏固語言練習」對學生進行基本語感的訓練. 三、背誦範文 古人說：「熟讀唐詩三百首，不會做詩也會吟」.背誦範文是中國人學習語言的傳統方法，它不但可以加強記憶、積累語言材料，而且可以定型語式句式，語套模式和行文模式，將背誦用於英語學習更是見效.因為一種語言的具體句子和語篇是無限的，而其結構模式則是有限的.掌握一個結構模式或行文模式就意味著具有生成無數語氣和語篇的能力.語言模式的作用類似於數學公式，非常重要.而經典的語言模式則存在於範文之中，所以要熟讀背誦. 四、以說促寫 說話是作文的先導，是作文的起步.俗話說：「只有出口成章，才能下筆成文」.在教學過程中，教師可有意識地讓學生用詞造句，由詞生文練習.由易到難，循序漸進地讓學生說. 可以把現實生活搬進課堂，模擬生活中的各種人物、情景，讓學生在真情實感的角色扮演中 進行口語交際.讓學生把生活中的人物通過語言、動作、心理活動表演出來，讓學生自由發揮，暢所欲言.也可以通過演講培養口頭作文能力，並引導學生把「說」和「寫」聯系起來，這樣說說寫寫，寫寫說說，不僅提高了口語表達能力，而且通過說話過程中對口頭語言的敘述，提高了書面語言表達能力，使學生寫作能做到中心明確，條理清楚. 五、勤於動筆 適當地進行寫作練習是不可缺少的，如果光大談寫作，而從不去動筆寫，是寫不出好作文的，所謂的熟能生巧就是說的這一點.可以讓學生採用寫日記的方法來提高自己的表達能力，也可以就不同的題材，自擬題目來寫或者就某篇課文來擴寫、縮寫、改寫等，這些都可以用來練練手筆.也可以要求學生隨讀、隨學、隨寫，讀有所得，學以致用. 六、寫作步驟 1. 審題 在動筆之前，必須認真審題，分析命題意圖.根據題目確定文章體裁，考慮文章內容，把與題目有關的材料分析，整理加以取捨.對屬於同一類材料的擬出標題，作文審題在很大程度上關繫到整篇文章的成敗.有的考生唯恐時間不夠，急於成文，不認真審題，結果寫出的文章不是離題太遠，與原命題大相徑庭，就是抓不住重點，雜亂無章，缺乏邏輯性與關聯. 2. 列題綱 審明了題義，了解了命題的意圖，接下來就是列提綱.提綱有兩種形式，即標題式和句式.標題式提綱就是用短語和片語列出文章的層次和段落以及各層次、各段落的大致順序.這種提綱的特點是簡潔、清楚.句式提綱是用完整的句子列出的提綱，這種提綱提供了更加詳盡的輪廓.列提綱時，應防止兩種形式的混用，句式提綱是句子，而標題式提綱是名詞片語.列提綱時要盡量使用平行結構，編號要統一.有了提綱，文章在材料安排上才會層次分明，整體性強. 3. 起草稿 審明了題意，列出了提綱，下一步就是應該分段寫作.每段應該只有一個中心，段落的結構要完整.自然段多以該段的主題句開頭、中間展開說明和敘述，末句常是結論或內容的歸納.在推展主題目時，要充分利用學到的寫句子、寫段落的技巧，注意句與句、段與段的銜接和過渡.注意段落的完整性和連貫性.為了使文章緊湊，全文最好一氣呵成. 4. 修改 修改是寫好文章必不可少的一環.修改是指初稿完成後對文章從內容，形式到語言等進行加工提高，通過修改使文章達到主題明確，內容翔實、結構嚴謹，語法正確，無拼寫和標點錯誤. 5. 校閱 修改後的文章要認真抄寫一遍.謄寫時要注意：標題寫在第一行的中央，除介詞，連詞、冠詞外，標題中每一個實詞都應大寫.標題除了疑問句或感嘆句外，標題不加標點，即使是一個完整的句子，也不加句號；注意段落首縮進3-4個字母；書寫要工整，規范，卷。

4. 寫一篇我怎麼學習英語的英語作文

How to learn English Well?

如何學好英語

With the development of the society, China has stepped on the road of internationalizaion.And as all sides of reasons, English has bee the international language.Thus, there are more and more Chinese learn English as to catch up with the world.Chinese government also realize this, so they require Chinese, especialy students, learn English.Then there is still a question that how to learn English well.

隨著社會的發展，中國已經踏上了國際化的道路。由於方方面面的原因，英語也成為了國際語言。因此，越來越多的中國人為了與世界接軌而學習英語。而中國 *** 也意識到這一點，所以他們要求中國人學習英語，尤其是學生。問題是如何學好英語呢？

First of all, learning English well needs perseverance.Because learning English well is a long-term process.If we insist on leraning Eglish everyday, we will master it one day.If we just study it for a short time and then give up, we will gain nothing in the end.Therefore, we should stick to learn English erveryday in order to learn it well.

首先，學好英語需要毅力。因為把英語學好是一個長期的過程。如果我們堅持每天學習英語，總有一天我們能夠掌握它。如果我們只是學了一小段時間就放棄了，到最後我們會是什麼都沒有學到。因此，為了學好英語，我們應該每天學習它。

Secondly, learning English well needs us open our mouth.The aim to learn a language is to speak it.No one will admit you learn a langeuage well without speaking it out.Many Chinese students have learned is「mb English」.That is a big problem.So, in order to learn English well, we should often talk with our friends, clas *** ates and teachers in English.

第二，把英語學好我們應該開口說。學習一門語言的目的就是講那門語言。如果你不會說，沒有人會承認你把那門語言學好了。很多中國的學生所學的就是「啞巴英語」。這是一個很大的問題。因此，為了學好英語，我們應該經常和我們的朋友，同學和老師用英語交流。

Thirdly, the best way to master a language is tobe personally on the scene.So I advice those people who have condition go abroad for a while.When they e back home, their oral English must have improved.

第三，掌握一門語言的最好的方法就是身臨其境。所以我建議有條件的人可以去國外待一段時間。當他們回國的時候，他們的口語肯定有所提高。

To sum up, learning English well is not easy.But we can take masures to make it done through perseverance, talking and going abroad.

.總之，學好英語並非易事。但是我們可以採取措施通過堅持，講，去國外來學好它。

5. 以《我怎麼學好英語》為題寫一篇英語作文

How do I learn English well

English is very important for us. Everyone wants to learn it well. My English is very good. How do I learn English?

First, I listen to the teacher and make notes carefully in class. I revise my old lessons and prepare my new lessons after class.

Second, I like speaking English withmy clas *** ates, not only in classroom, but also on the playground. It's to improve my spoken English.

Third, I keep a diary every day to practise my written English.

Besides this, I often read English newspapers or magazines in order to enrich my knowledge on English culture.

英語對我們來說很重要。每個人都想學好英語。我的英語很不錯。那我是怎麼學英語的呢？

首先，我聽老師講課，認真記筆記在課堂上認真。下我復習舊功課，預習新功課班。

第二，我喜歡一樣喜歡和同學們說英語不僅在教室里，在操場上也。它是為了提高我的英語口語。

第三，我堅持每天記日記來練習寫作。

除此之外，我經常閱讀英語報紙和雜志來豐富我的知識在英語文化。

6. 以（我想在英語課上學習什麼）為題的英語作文怎麼寫

Learning English takes time so if we want to learn it well, we should spend much time practicing using English every day. Besides, we should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Go over what is learnt regularly and finish doing our homework carefully. If we have time,we'd better isten to English radio programmes, read English stories and newspapers, watch English films and TV programmes ,keep a diary in English . If we make mistakes, correct them at once and try not to make the same mistakes. What's more, we should look up new words in the dictionary before class and prepare each lesson carefully before class. I believe if we work hard and have good ways of learning English, we will learn English well. 怕你不清楚意思，我翻譯了以下。

學英語是要花費時間的，因此我們要花大量的時間每天練習使用英語。而且我們應該上課認真聽講、記筆記、經常復習我們所學的、認真完成作業。

如果我們有時間，最好聽英語廣播、讀英語故事和報紙、看英語電影和電視節目、用英語記日記。如果我們出錯了，就要馬上更改並盡力別再犯同樣的錯誤。

並且我們在課前要查字典認真預習。我相信如果我們努力學習並且有好的學英語方法，我們一定會學好英語的。

7. 我打算如何學好英語作文200字

When you are learning English,listening,speaking and writing are important,but reading can also be very helpful.When you read,you can't only learn some new words,but also you can learn how to use these English words.When you read,it gives you a good example for writing. 當你在學習英文時，聽力、口語和寫作固然是非常重要的，但是閱讀也會相當有用。

當你閱讀時，你所學到的並不僅僅是一些新單詞本身，而是有關如何使用這些英文單詞方法。當你在閱讀時，你其實是在為你的寫作打基礎。

Good reading tips（建議）： 好的閱讀建議： Try to read at the right level（水平）.Read something that you can (more or less) understand.If you need to stop every three words to use a dictionary,it is not interesting. 嘗試閱讀和你水平相符的材料。讀那些你能夠理解的東西。

如果你每讀幾個單詞都要用下字典的話，那就會很乏味了。 Try to increase the number of your new words.If there are four or five new words on a page.write them in your notebook.But you don't have to write them while you are reading. Instead.try to guess their meanings as you read,and mark them with a pen.Then e back when you have finished reading to look them up in a dictionary and write them in your own vocabulary book.Then try to remember them. 試著增加你的詞彙量。

如果一個頁面上有四五個新單詞的話，把它們寫在你的筆記本里。但是你不需要在你閱讀的時候做這項工作。

你閱讀的時候應該做的是去猜測這些單詞的意思，並且給它們做上記號。等你讀完全篇之後，再回來在字典里查出這些詞的意思，並且把它們寫在你自己的詞彙本中，然後試著記住它們。

Try to read regularly（定期）.For example,read for a short time once a day.Fifteen minutes every day is better than o hours every Sunday.Fix（固定）a time to read and keep to it.For example,you could read for fifteen minutes when you go to bed,or when you get up or at lunchtime. 試著保持規律性的閱讀。比如，每天都花上一點時間來閱讀。

每天讀十五分鍾比每周讀兩小時的效果要好得多。固定一個閱讀時間並且堅持下來。

比方說，你可以在你臨睡前讀個十五分鍾，或者在你起床或吃午餐的時間也可以。Read what interests you.Choose a book or a magazine about a subject that you like. Because you are going to spend time and money to read it,choose an interesting one.You can also read newspapers.There are many English newspapers in Chink For example,21st Century Teens.It is easy enough for you to understand.There is something interesting in it. 讀你感興趣的材料。

選擇那些內容能夠引發你興趣的書或雜志。畢竟閱讀是一件需要你費時費錢的事情，所以選擇那些有趣的閱讀材料吧。

你也可以讀報紙。中國有許多英文報紙。

比方說《21世紀中學生英文報》，是很容易讀懂的材料，內容也非常有趣。

8. 怎麼樣寫好作文

我個人認為寫好作文還是要靠平時的積累，沒有積累你的詞彙就很少，無法寫出好作文。

學英語我們要明白學習英語絕不是看一部動畫片，不是一蹴而就的事。要想不下一番苦功夫、不費一點力氣就能學好英語，那是絕對辦不到的。

因此，我們學習英語時，一定要有信心，要有耐心，循序漸進地堅持學習下去，這樣才會有收獲。 第二，要想學好英語，就得先從聽、說入手。

課上認真聽老師講，聽同學們說，自己積極舉手發言，大膽地去講英語。 課下多聽錄音帶，反復練習，盡量模仿正確的語音語調。

每天堅持讀半個小時的英語。人們常說的「拳不離手，曲不離口」，就是這個道理。

第三，要想學好英語，就得有股子韌勁兒。學過的生詞和句子一定要記住，真正掌握它，千萬別把希望只放在考前的突擊記憶上。

期中、期末考試時，成百上千的單詞怎麼能一下子背下來呢？所以，記單詞一定要日積月累，備一個小本兒隨身攜帶就更好。比如今天學了10個單詞，記住了7個，其餘3個怎麼也記不住，這時你就可以把它們記到小本子上。

小本子隨身帶，有空你就掏出來，看它幾眼，說它幾遍。看的次數多了，說的次數多了，再難記的單詞也能記住。

當然，記生詞最好連句子一塊記效果更好，這樣記得牢。通過句子記新單詞，不但擴大了詞彙量，而且還記了單詞的用法，真是一舉兩得。

第四，要想學好英語，還要多動腦筋。要採用多種方法、多種形式來巧學巧記。

對於一些較難理解的知識，我們可以把它的核心部分用一兩句好記、好上口的話概括起來，進行記憶。比如few和little的用法同學們常常用錯，就可以用以下的話來記憶：「『字母少的』修飾可數名詞；『字母多的』修飾不可數名詞；有a，就有少數幾個，就有一點點；沒a，就幾乎一點兒也沒有了。」

有的則可以用順口溜、警句等來幫助記憶。 我好想學好英語能告訴我怎麼學可以學的 去 e a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent American? Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments. Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time. You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will. If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid.翻譯：每個人都有自己的夢想，我也一樣。

但是我的夢想不是律師，不是醫生，不是演員，甚至不是一種行業！我的夢想也許大人們會覺得可笑，但是，這是我一直追尋的！我的夢想是想要自己有一個七彩的人生！我要它成為一幅美麗的畫，它不但要有鮮明的顏色，也要有暗淡的顏色，我不排除這幅畫有一部分的黑色，我反而會很珍惜這些暗淡的顏色！不是嗎，試問一下，一幅色彩鮮艷的畫，如果不加一點暗淡的顏色，又怎能更突出它的美呢？人生就象畫一樣，畫中鮮艷的顏色就代表著人生美麗快樂的時光。畫中暗淡的顏色就代表著人生遭遇困難，不愉快的時候。

也許你會覺得擁有一條平坦美麗的路不是很好嗎，但我並不覺得。一個人如果一生平坦那有什麼意思呢？人生只有短短幾十年，我要他走到最後時，每一個回憶都事充實的。

4. 應該如何寫英語作文呢

寫作是本人的老本行，高中一般都是21-23這個級別，大學英語作文被老師在班上推介為範文！！
對於作文，我說的最多的就是：不走尋常路！你不要以為在網上下載那些所謂的優秀作文，拿來背背，你就成為高手了，其實大錯特錯！因為我看了之後也覺得一般，甚至有些拙劣，嘩眾取寵的味道，比如有的所謂優秀作文竟然還用什麼be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 這樣低等的寫作詞彙，說它低等，那是因為這些詞彙已經廣為人知，閱卷老師已經看的麻木不仁了！
要寫出高人一等的作文，我覺得並不難，只要你有一定的語法基礎和一定量的寫作詞彙（越高級越好），寫作句型，就足可以應對常規的高考，四六級考試……（我記得高中25分滿分的作文我可以保持在21-23這個級別，四六級的作文都是110多分）
首先是語法，在你的語法達到一定層次之後，你就可以追求更多的變化了，比如，用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等，這樣可以增加你的語法亮點，讓已經有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮，在你的試卷上多掃射一番！
其次，是詞彙，我覺得，在你的語法達到基本不會出錯的程度上，作文便應該以詞彙取勝，因為在這個層次上，大家的語法都差不多，沒什麼變化，唯一有變化的就是你的詞彙！給你打個比方吧，很多想到「許多」就用many，但是你別忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到「專家」就寫expert，但很少人會想到specialist，很多人在想到「擅長」這詞，就寫be good at ，卻不知還有更高級的表達法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就體現在這些細微的差別上！
再次，是怎麼將文章潤色，從而使你的文章大放異彩！！關於這方面，我覺得我自己使用最多的，也是我自創的------叫做「添油加醋」，包括如下幾個方面：盡可能地在形容詞前使用副詞，在介詞短語中加入適當的形容詞和副詞，在過去分詞前加入副詞，在名詞之前盡可能多用形容詞……，總之就是盡可能地使用形容詞和副詞。我覺得這樣做有一個好處，那就是使原本乾巴巴的句子變得血肉豐滿，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver』s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver『s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最後，我建議你，平時讀報，或者做題的時候，發現有好的句子好的詞彙，你要抄下來，長期下來，你的作文會有提高的，需要說明的是，這個提高過程可能很緩慢，但是最後能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保證在21-23這個級別，靠的就是對語法的熟練掌握和積累了許多較高級的詞彙，句型，句子。