英語作文怎麼又條理闡述理由

『壹』 請問如何才能把高中英語作文寫的有條理 有亮點。作文分數只能在及格線邊緣徘徊 求救啊 謝謝。

運用一下關聯詞可以讓作文條理清晰，下面的詞用的高端一點呢，也就算亮點了
關聯詞整理
一、開頭：表觀點
In myopinion/view
From myviewpoint/perspective/perception
From mypoint of view
As far as I am concerned

二、中間
1、表示分類
首先：initially, first of all, in thefirst place, for one thing, above all, to begin with, for a start
其次、另外：also, additionally,subsequently, furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition

2、表示原因
Because/since/for/as+ 句子
Becauseof/ e to/owing to/ result from/as a result of/in response to + n(短語)
Seeingthat…, now that…, in that…, for the reason that…
Consideringthat…
Giventhat….

3、表示結果
Thus,hence, consequently, therefore, in that case, as a result, as a consequence（不好的）

4、表示轉折
But/yet/while/whereas+ 句子
However,nevertheless, contrarily, in/by contrast, in comparison, on the contrary

5、表示解釋
Indeed,in fact, in particular, in other words, to be precise, that is to say, by thisI mean that…

6、表示舉例
Suchas/ just as/ just like + n（短語）
Forexample/instance, to illustrate, take… as an example/illustration

7、表示結論
Toconclude/summary/sum up
Inconclusion/summary/short/brief/a word/the end
Overall,briefly, eventually, ultimately