一怎么写成英语作文怎么写
㈠ 的一篇英语作文怎么写
一篇英语作文怎么写
文章写好要注意的要点“
(一)要留主干、去枝叶。在缩写课文内时,我们要删减次要的人容物、次要的事件,以及说明、交代等地方,留下课文的主要内容。
(二)要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,既使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
(三)要保持文章脉络清晰。缩写课文要注意保持文章主要脉络的清晰和完整,特别是故事发生的时间、地点、 人物、事件的起因、经过、结果等要素要齐全,让人读了对原文有个大概的了解。
(四)要不改变课文原意。缩写课文最要紧的是缩写后不可改变课文原意,做到内容基本保持和原文一直,不会使读者产生歧义。
㈡ 该怎么写英语作文
开头万能公式
1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
结尾万能公式
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
写作的“七项基本原则”
一、 长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、 短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、 多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
㈢ 求一篇英语作文.怎么写
关于生命
生命是在什么状态下成长呢?生命是在快乐、舒展的状态下成长。人人都想快乐、都想找到陈明歌里的“快乐老家”,可总是怎么走都走不到。
其实最复杂的问题往往要把它最简单化,我把它概括成一句话:“开”心是福,“关”心是魔。
为什么“开”心是福?想开了。人想开的时候,心灵之门是敞开的,什么都看清了,就不怕了。
人的恐惧都来自看不清,想开了,恐惧没有了,心情就好了,一好百好,人逢喜事精神爽。在想开的时候,人的目光是盯着光明的地方,生命处于一种开放状态,旺盛状态。
为什么“关”心是魔?想不开了。心灵之门关闭了,“一朝被蛇咬,十年怕草绳”,觉得这个世界上充满了黑暗。心灵之门一关,一切都看不清了。因为看不清而充满了一种警备、焦虑的心理,心情当然不好。
曾经看过一个小哲理故事,说的是:一个老太婆有两个女儿,大女儿家是给人洗衣服的,二女儿家是卖伞的。每到下雨天,老太婆就为大女儿犯愁,怕没有办法晒干衣服,不能挣钱;而到了晴天,又为二女儿难过,怕卖不出伞去,不能糊口。所以老太婆日复一日的沉浸在痛苦担忧中。后来让一个老和尚知道了,他去对老太婆说:老人家,恭喜你呀!你看,晴天你大女儿家发财,下雨天你二女儿家发财,你老真是福气啊!老太婆一听,豁然开朗。从此老太婆无论晴天还是雨天,都过活得非常幸福。
看,换一个角度思考问题,完全是两种结局,两种心境。
我们在生活中往往会自觉不自觉地成为了那个以前的老太婆。所以当你遇到困难与挫折甚至严重打击的时候,不要钻牛角尖,不妨换个角度思考,自己当一回老和尚,劝解自己,也许生活就没有过不去的坎了。
有个朋友讲了这样一个故事:一位年轻的企业家,事业很成功,对家里毫不顾念。
几乎得到了一切的企业家所得到的仍然不满意,觉得上天应该给自己更多。
有一天,经妻子一再恳求,他带着妻子和儿子到野外去兜风。谁知中途车子出了意外,跷在悬崖上千钧一发。
面临生命危机,全家人前所未有的团结,用尽所有的智慧,终于脱险了。
脱险后的企业家好像脱胎换骨了一般,他觉得一切都满足了。对爱人、对孩子、对所有人都充满了爱心,每一天都过得很开心。
也正所谓是“大难不死,必有后福”。听了这个故事,仔细体味,这个“福”字其实是经过大难的人自己给自己的,他对人生的态度发生了变化。大难之后,想开了,人的生命状态从一种狭隘的、关闭的状态转化为一种开放的旺盛的状态。
想得开,人生便会充满阳光。
黑暗最容易滋生人的恐惧,因为在黑暗中,什么都看不清,因什么都看不清又引发了害怕与焦虑,一旦看清了,心中便充满了光明,也就不怕了。现实生活中,太需要一种能穿透黑暗的心灵,做家长的,这一点尤为重要,因为家长不仅需要照亮自己的人生,还需要照亮孩子的人生。
㈣ 写一篇英语作文。怎么写
On July 5th my parents took me to Beijing. We stayed at Huabei Hotel. On the first day, we went to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. It has millions of bricks. Each brick is very big and heavy. Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall. We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall. We also went to the Palace Museum. The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history. I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum. What nice palaces these are! I visited the Palace Museum and felt excited. If you want to know more about the Palace Museum, you can go to Beijing and have a look. The following days, we went to the Summer Palace, Tian Tan, North Lake and Xiang Hill. I now know more about the history of China. I also like modern Beijing. The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. Later, I went back with my parents by train. I really enjoyed the trip to Beijing.
㈤ 英语作文格式怎么写
一、英语作文题目的书写
1、题目是首先映入读者眼帘的,所以要注意题目的书写位置。一定要在试卷作文纸上的上方中间位置书写。同时还应在话题和正文之间留出一定的距离,即比正文行距稍宽一些。
2、其次,要注意题目的大小写,第一个单词的第一个字母和最后一个单词的第一个字母一定要大写。中间的单词除冠词、连词(但如连词的字母多于5个,则大写)和介词外,其他的词都应该大写第一个字母。比如:
例1误:Attitudes toward Money
正:Attitudes Toward Money
3、写题目不要用括号或引号。题目后除了问号和感叹号之外,不加其它标点符号。
二、文章本体
文章第一段的第一行应与题目隔一行或两行。每段的开头一般应该缩格;即向右缩进约四个字母的间隔;单词与单词之间须留一个字母的间隔,句与句之间须留两个字母的间隔。假若每行的最后一个单词写不下,最好不要轻易拆字移行,可将该单词移到后一行去书写。
三、标点符号
英语的标点符号与汉语的'标点符号在形式上与使用上大同小异。学生容易疏忽的地方,大致有以下几处:
1、英语句号是实心点,而不是小圆圈,如果英语的句号也和汉语一样,则容易和字母“o”相混淆。
2、英语的省略号一般使用“…”是3点,不是像汉语那样用6点“……”
3、字符号不要写得太长,写长了容易跟破折号混淆。其长度应该与一个字母的宽度相当。破折号的长度约占两个字母的位置。书写破折号时,与前后的单词应有一定的距离。
4、英语中没有顿号“、”。要表示句中较短的并列词语之间的停顿,汉语习惯用顿号,而英语只能用逗号;汉语中连词“和”、“及”等之前不可用顿号,而英语中连接一系列并列项目的“and”或“or”之前往往可以用逗号。
5、使用所有格符号时,要注意放在正确的位置上,以免引起意义上的混淆。如my fathers book不能写成my fathers’book。
6、汉语中直接引语前的“某某说”等词语之后一律用冒号。而英语中既可用逗号,也可用冒号。当“某某说”等词语在直接引语后时,汉语的引语末尾用句号,而英语一般用逗号。如句子"Its none of your business," the young men said rudely.的汉语译文是:“这不管你的事。”年轻人粗暴地说。
7、英语中没有书名号《》,书名一般用引号。如:Yesterday she saw an English film "Gone with the Wind"
四、英语字母何时要大写
1、英语句子开头的第一个单词的首字母要大写。实例:How are you?你好吗?
2、姓名中的姓和名的首字母都要大写。
实例:Ann Read安·里德,Zhou Hua周华
3、表示称呼语或职务的词首字母要大写。
实例:Mr Green格林先生,Dr Li李博士
4、地名、语言名、某国人等词的首字母应大写。
实例:England英国,Beijing北京,English英语,Chinese汉语、中国人
5、表示编号的词要大写。
实例:Lesson Two第二课Row 3第三排
6、星期、月份、节日名称也应大写。
实例:Sunday星期日,September九月,Teachers Day教师节
7、大多数的缩略词要大写。
实例:CCTV(中国中央电视台), ID(身份证), CD(光盘)
8.、"I"和"OK"在句中的任何位置都应大写。
实例:Tom and I are students.汤姆和我是学生。
Thats OK 不用谢
9、文章的标题、书名、报刊名称等,第一个单词和每一个实词的首字母都要大写。
㈥ 一篇英语作文怎么写!
Dear John,
How's it going lately?
I am writing to tell you about our camping plan this Saturday morning at Yulong Mountain. There will be six of us and we will gather at the train station square at 8:30 a.m.. We are going to catch the 9:30 train and arrive at our destination at 11:30. We will make our return trip this Sunday afternoon.
Tents and sleeping bags are necessary. Some food and water are recommended, too. And don't forget to bring your coat! It gets pretty chilly in the night.
Best,
Li Hua
㈦ 怎么写一篇英语作文
怎样写好一篇英语作文
写作中需要注意的问题
1.整体要求
了解短文写作的内容及要求 把握好写作步骤
写作时要注意“三忌” 形式上要一致
避免犯小的笔误(语法,拼写) 书写规范,工整
2.形式上的一致也是运用英语进行表达时需要十分注意的 a.主谓一致
b. 人称、指代要一致 c. 平行(对称)关系要一致 d.时态(语态)的起点要一致 3.书面表达注意衔接与连贯
表示转折关系的词:but, while, however, yet, rather than, not … but, whereas,…
表示选择关系的词:or, either…or, …
表示原因,结果关系的词:for, thus, because, since,… 表示并列关系:not only … but also, and, both … and, as well as. neither… nor.., …
表示时间关系的词:when, while, as, before, after, …. 表示目的的词:for this purpose, so that, in order that, … 表示让步关系的词:although, though, even though/ if … 表示条件的词:if, unless, as/ so long as,…
写好主题句:
一. 主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种。
1. 段落开端: 后面的句子提供支持信息或论证。
2.段落结尾:前面提供细节的支持句,最后用一句总结性的主题句来概括。 二. 写好段落主题句的三原则
1.概括全段主要内容,既不能以偏概全,也不能随意扩大范围 2. 有体现中心思想的关键词或短语。
3. 以简洁明了的句子为主,避免为追求使用复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子。
写好段落扩展句
扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持。写好扩展句要注意以下三点:
1.扩展句要紧扣文章中心和主题句的内容。扩展句是主题句的补充和支持。 2. 扩展句的层次很重要。一个主题句可以从以下几方面展开,每一个方面就是一个扩展句。这些扩展句只有按照时间,空间,因果等逻辑顺序展开,文章才能层次分明,条理清晰。
3. 关联词对扩展句来说很重要。汉语注意思想相联,英文强调 形式相联。从属于一个主题句的几个扩展句不能简单地堆砌 在一起了事,而要用丰富多采的连词连接起来。
写好结尾句
结尾句要紧扣段落主题,有要有所扩展。 结尾句要力求简洁有力,意味隽永。 结尾句可以借鉴一下几种方法: 1. 总结法
2. 引用法 引用名人名言是使作文大放异彩的好方法。 3. 反问法
㈧ 一篇英语作文怎么写
我来帮你。(我在澳大利亚5年了,英语可以的)是关于关爱儿童的,我觉得对你的水平已经很棒了。 The Caring of Children
Do we care about children today? No, people today don’t really care about children because we get
pushed about by alts. Children are also getting abused by alts at
home.
We children go into shops on our own and we get thrown out, or
followed around the shop. The shop owners think that we are going to
steal there goods of the shelves without paying for them. The shop
owners are having to put up more security cameras and prices of there
stock because we are stealing from them. They are putting up the
security cameras to watch where and what we are doing in the shop,
they are even following us to see what we are doing if the cameras
can’t see us, and they act as they are putting up new stock on the
shelves. If we have bags on our back the shop owner will sometimes ask
you to open your bag, so they can see weather you have anything,
showing that they don’t trust us.
Surveys show that one in six children today are getting severely hurt
at home by there parents. Only some parents are admitting to hitting
there children, and who do get hurt by there parents are to afraid to
tell someone about it. Research shows that a few parents put their
children’s heads under water and held it there, others have poured hot
water over them. A few mothers admit to pinching, scratching and
biting there children. Some children’s parents make them wash there
mouths out with salt and/or soap, and if they refuse to eat there
supper they are made to eat mustard sandwiches. In recent surveys it
is showed that mothers are more likely to hit their children than
fathers are, even when the care of the child or children are shared
evenly. Half of children in a survey said it was right for there
parents to smack them and are going to hit there children when they
are alts.
Some children who have jobs are working illegally in factories. The
children who work in factories don’t get paid fairly, an example of
this is in a carrot factory in England. In this factory there is
children working from the age of ten years old to fourteen years old,
who are getting paid thirty pence [IMAGE]a crate of carrots they fill.
Some of them are getting paid nine pounds for eighteen thousand
carrots. They are working for four hours each night, starting from
three thirty in the afternoon till seven o’clock in the evening. Two
million children are getting used as slave labour each year in
Britain. In the carrot factory the workers are working in terrible
conditions, they are working in a big shed which is run by a parish
councillor, on the floor there is wet carrots that have been dropped
and when the children are walking with the crates they can’t see very
well and may slip. The machines that they work on have very sharp
blades which are slicing the carrots, this is also where the children
are putting their hands to get the carrots out. Their hands are just
millimetres away from the blades and could end in a fatal accident.
Children should only work for two hours on a school day and no later
than seven o’clock in the evening. Since that report mothers and
fathers said that they were not going to send there children back.
Parks are now being designed by architects for younger children
between the age of two to nine years old, children over that age have
no place to go so they hang around the streets. When they hang around
the streets and get into bad habits like drug tacking and smocking at
young ages. Children from the age of ten and above want to explore new
things than be locked in a cage with swings and slides. We want to be
heard and seen by alt but they just ignore us all the time. We
children want a place where we can go to where there is only a couple
of alts. The government have just spent approximately four hundred
million pounds on the new parliament buildings in Edinburgh where they
could have spent some of that on us children. This year it is all
about the play station, micro scooter and gadgets. Children are now
into technology and want to see more of it. If a child had a choice
of either whether to play in a park for an half hour or to play a play
station for an half hour the child would definitely go for the play
station.