英語作文電話留言格式怎麼寫
『壹』 求一封英語作文電話留言的答案
Mr. Green,
Mr.Robert from Universal Company called you at 9 a.m on January 10th,2011.Mr. Robert will come to Kunming from Hongkong and he wil discuss the detail about the cooperate according to the original schele.
Jame
『貳』 留言的英語作文 英語作文關於留言的怎麼寫
英語作文 給好朋友的留言
As time goes by.We have been clas *** ate and friend for 3 years. In the past three years. We enjoyed ourselves life . At school. We played and we had class. We did homework after school. Sometimes. We were angry. but it doesn't influence our friendship.
大學英語作文電話留言格式
說明，按電話留言的格式和要求，以秘書Jame的名義給Mr.Green寫一份電話留言，內容以下： 1，日期：2011年1月10日，2、來電時間：當日上午九時，3、來電人：環球（Universal）公司的Mr.Robert，4、事由：Mr.Robert後天中午十二點從香港來昆明，按原計劃與Mr.Green商討合作項目細陪神節
Mr. Green,
Mr.Robert from Universal Company called you at 9 a.m on January 10th,2011.Mr. Robert will e to Kunming from Hongkong and he wil discuss the detail about the cooperate according to the original schele.
英語作文留言條
感覺你給的信息不太完整，格林打電話給誰（範文仲假定為A）， 誰接的電話 To A, This morning,your colleague Green from London Company called you at 9:50am. Hesaid that he couldn't meet you today, because he didn't buy the ticket to catch the train.He will arrive on Beijing by air on the morning the day after tomorrow and meet you in his office. Your B
電話留言的格式是什麼?寫英語作文用的
1英文書信和中文書信的寫作有那些不同呢？
信封(Envelop)
與中文信封相反，英文信封上收信人的地址和姓名寫在信封的中間，發信人的地址和姓名寫在信封的左上角，或信封背面。
英文書信胡悶的地址應從小寫到大，先寫門牌號碼，再寫街道、城鎮、省或州及郵政編碼，最後是國家名稱。國家名稱的每一個字母都要大寫。
信頭/個人信頭(Letterhead/Personal Letterhead)
公司信紙上一般都印有其名稱、地址和聯系號碼，這就是通常所說的信頭。在沒有信頭的普通信紙上寫信，作者就需要寫明回郵地址和聯系號碼。
封內日期(Date Line)
封內日期是寫信或打字時的日期。封內日期寫在信頭或作者地址的下兩行。
封內地址(Inside Address)
封內地址是收信人的地址，包括姓名，職務(如適用)，公司名稱(如適用)，街道名稱或信箱號，城市，州或省，郵政編碼和國家。
封內地址通常寫在左手邊，在日期線和稱呼之間。
稱呼(Salutation)
稱呼是一封信開頭對收信人的稱呼，寫在封內地址或提示句下兩三行。稱呼後可以寫冒號或逗號。
在商業信函或其他正式書信中，用冒號。
在非正式書信蘆做虧中，稱呼後用逗號。(注意：盡量避免使用「To Whom It May Concern」或「Dear Sir or Madam」,因為這種稱呼已經過時，並且不很友好。改進方法是爭取確定收信人的姓名，或使用「Dear Human Resources Manager」，「Dear Friends」這樣的稱呼。在給律師或外交領事寫信時，可以使用「Esquire」或「Esq.」這樣的頭銜，但它們不應出現在稱呼中。同樣，如果收信人的姓名後面有「Jr.」或「Sr.」，如「Gee Bush, Jr.」也不能把它們包含在稱呼中。)
頭銜(Titles)
除非寫信人與收信人熟到可以直呼其名，通常要在收信人名字前加上「Mr.」，「Professor」等表示禮貌的頭銜。
提示句(選擇性)Attention Line(optional)
提示句的用途是指明把信送給某個具體的人或部門處理，盡管信是寫給這個組織的。另外，在指明的收信人不在時，它也允許組織中其他人查看信的內容。提示句通常寫在封內地址的下兩行或封內地址的上面。
主題句(選擇性)Subject Line(optional)
主題句簡要說明信的內容。通常寫在封內地址和稱呼之間。如果寫信人不知道收信人的姓名，也可以用主題句代替稱呼。為了收到最佳效果，可以給主題句加下劃線，或大寫主題句。
正文(Body of the Letter)
正文的格式多種多樣。商業信函最好使用齊頭式。而私人信件通常不用齊頭式。在齊頭式書信中，全部內容包括日期和信尾問候語，都從左側頂格開始。段落開頭不空格，各段之間空兩行。
修正齊頭式，是使用最為廣泛的一種格式，商業和私人信件都可以使用，盡管在私人信件中不一定要寫回郵地址和封內地址。使用沒有印刷信頭的普通信紙時，這種格式最合適。與齊頭式不同，發信人地址、日期，信尾問候語和簽名都從中間開始寫。其餘部分從左邊開始。
寫信人簽名(Writer's Identification/ Signture)
寫信人的簽名、名字和頭銜(如果適用)，寫在信尾問候語同側三四行以下的位置。
附註(Notions)
附註寫在寫信人簽名下兩行的位置，附註包括參考縮寫，附件的數目和內容以及將收到這封信副本的人員名單。附註寫在左側。
信尾問候語(Complimentary Closing)
信尾問候語是寫在信尾的告別話語，例如「Sincerely」，「Sincerely yours」。通常位於正文兩三行以下。第一個單詞的第一個字母要大寫，最後以逗號結尾。
附言(Postscript PS or P.S.)
附言用來說明沒有包括在信中的想法和內容。通常在附註下兩三行的地方，從左側頂格寫起。在促銷和私人信件中，附言也可以用來強調寫信人請求收信人採取的行動和做出的考慮。
求職信分為推薦信和自薦信兩種，寫求職信可按下列七個步驟進行。下面舉例說明：
1.簡況：姓名，李平；年齡，30歲；身高，1.80米；健康狀況，良好；業余愛好，游泳、唱歌、跳舞。
2.簡歷：1994年北京大學畢業後分配到南通中學工作，1996年調至蘇州中學工作至今。 3.工作：工作認真負責，與人相處融洽。
4.特長：精通英語，尤其口語，已將多本中文書籍譯成英語，懂一些日語、能用日語與外賓對話。
聯系電話：3654731?
聯系地址：蘇州市人民路一號
第一步：介紹消息來源
介紹消息來源實際上是求職信的開篇交待句，它可使求職信顯得自然、順暢；而不介紹消息來源，會使收信人感到意外、突然，文章也缺乏過渡、照應，本文消息來源可作如下介紹：
Dear manager,
I learned from the newspaper that your pany wanted to hire an English translator.
第二步：表明求職心願?
介紹完消息來源後，應向收信人表明自己的求職心願，即寫信的目的，本文求職心願可作如下介紹：
I"m interested in this job very much. I"d like to get this job.
第三步：介紹個人簡歷
某單位需要新人，求職人也有求職心願，但這並不意味著這項工作非你莫屬。如果你沒有干好這項工作的經歷、實力，也是難以適應的。因此，介紹個人簡歷是必不可少的。本文個人簡歷可介紹如下：
Now I"d like to introce myself to you. My name is Li Ping. I"m 30 years old. I"m 180 cm tall. I"m healthy. I like swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time. I graated from Beijing University in 1994.Then,I went to work in Nantong Middle School. In 1996，I began to work in Suzhou Middle School and I have worked there until now.
第四步：擺出求職優勢
僅有一定的工作經歷而沒有自身的優勢和特長，也很難求得稱心如意的工作。因此，求職時應表明自己除了具有一定的工作經歷之外，還具有一定的優勢和特長，這樣才能穩操勝券。本文可通過如下方法擺出自己的優勢：
I work hard and I can get along well with others. I"m good at English and especially my spoken English is very good. I"ve translated many Chinese books into English. I can understand Japanese and I can talk to foreigners in Japanese freely.
第五步：提出獲職打算
豐富的工作經驗，一定的優勢和特長，只能代表過去和現在的情況，如果獲職後自以為心願已了，從此高枕無憂，馬虎從事，那也是得不到用人單位認可的。顯然表明獲職後努力工作的決心是感動用人單位的領導從而順利謀得此項工作的重要一環。本文獲職打算可作如下介紹：?
If you agree with me, I"ll work hard and try to be a good translator.
第六步：請求答復聯系
如果單位領導同意了你的求職要求，你必然要請他和你聯系，以便你及時做好准備，到用人單位應聘或報到。為准確起見，請求答復聯系時你還應當提供你的通訊地址、郵政編碼、電話號碼、電子信箱等。本文答復聯系的內容可作如下介紹：
If you agree with me, please write a letter to me or phone me. I live at No.1 Renmin Road, Suzhou city. My telephone number is 3654371.
第七步：表明感激之情
無論你的請求是否能夠得到滿意的答復，你給用人單位寫信就是給對方添了麻煩，因此你應向對方表明感激之情。本文可這樣來表明感激之情：
Thank you very much.
上述七步內容聯成一個整體，再加上下面的信尾，就成為一封完整的求職信。?
Yours Truly
LiPing
留學申請時，推薦信的作用很重要，好的推薦信對申請人來說能夠起到事半功倍的作用。在寫推薦信時，必然會提及被推薦人的品性（Characters）。介紹每個人獨特的個性用詞也十分講究，下列Characters是國外大學所欣賞的形容詞，請各位讀者參考。列舉該類詞彙的目的並非要各位將之奉為圭臬，而是希望在大家頭痛腳痛渾身都痛的時候有個參考。請別忘了你的獨特性，還請別忘了別人同你一樣看過這個表格。
（1）Scholastic aptitude（學習方面的才能）
a． Native intellectual ability（天賦）
b． Imagination（想像力）
c． Creativity（創造力）
d． Capacity for *** ytical thinking（分析思考能力）
e． Intellectual curiosity; spirit of inquiry（好奇心）
f． Ability to work independently（獨立學習工作的能力）g． Memory（記憶力）
h． Accuracy（准確性）
i． Methodology（研究方法）
j． Capability for abstract reasoning（抽象推理的能力）k． Potential as a researcher（研究的潛力）
1． Potential as a teacher（教學的潛力）
m． Ability to express his ideas orally and in writing（口頭或文字的表達能力）
n． Capacity, desire and determination for good quality graate
work（獲得學業成功的能力、願望與決心）
o． Probable success as a graate student（作為研究生成功的可能性）
（2）Academic performance（學業上的表現）
a． Breadth of general knowledge（知識豐富）
b． Knowledge of literature in his field（本專業領域知識）
c． Grade or achievement（成績或成就）
d． Instry, diligence（勤勉）
e． Participation in discussion（討論積極）
f． Academic maturity（學業上的成熟）
（3）Languages（語言能力）
a． Ability to speak, understand, read and write the English language（聽、說、讀、寫英文的能力）
b． Ability to read significant literature in other languages than English（英語以外的語言閱讀能力）
（4）Character（品行）
a． Honesty; integrity（誠實）
b． Sincerity（誠懇）
c． Sense of responsibility（責任感）
d． Cooperation （合作）
e． Enthusia *** （熱誠）
f． Conscientiousness（自覺性）
g． Ethical and moral standards（倫理與道德標准）
h． Reliability; dependability（可靠性）
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『叄』 關於英文電話留言範文
利用迅猛發展的網路實耐腔含時通訊技術的交互性、實時性強等功能輔助英語口語教學,使英語學習者有機會同英語母語者交談、溝通,將極大改善學習者的英語口語水平。我整理了關於英文電話留言範文，歡迎閱讀!
關於英文電話留言範文一
(A：Jim Brown B：Receiver)
A：Hello.This is Jim Brown of the Export Department.May Ispeak to Mr.Wang?
B：I'm sorry，but he is out of the office right now.
A：When will he be back?
B：He should be back at any moment.
A：I wonder if you could give Mr.Wang a message for me?
B：Yes，certainly.Just a minute.I'll get a pen.(Pause)OKay，please carry on.
昌笑A：There will be a very urgent meeting at three o'clock and Iwould like Mr.Wang to attend it.
B：OKay，an urgent meeting…three o'clock…May I ask whatit's regarding?
A：Yes.It's regarding the foreign exchange market and our salesstrategy this year.
B：Shall I tell Mr.Wang to prepare any material?
A：Yes，thank you.
B：I'll let him know，Mr.Brown.
A：Thank you very much.Bye.
B：Bye.
關於英文電話留言範文二
(A：Mary B：Receiver C：John's voice)
A：Hello.Is John in?
B：No，can I take a message?
A：No.I really need to talk to him personally.
B：Would you like to leave a message on his voice mail，then?
A：Yes.Thank you.
B：Hold on and I'll transfer you.(Pause)
C：Hi，圓埋this is John.I'm not available to take your call，but pleaseleave your name，number and a brief message.I'll get back toyou as soon as possible.
A：Hi，John.It's Mary and I really need to talk to you.I won't beable to go to the party with you.Please call me at 556-3243when you get back.
關於英文電話留言範文三
(A：Jan Wise B：Receiver)
A：Hello.Can I speak to Mr.Clark?
B：May I have your name，Please?
A：This is Jan Wise speaking.
B：Hold on，please…I'm sorry，but he's on another line now.
Would you care to hold?
A：Well，I need to leave in a ninute.Could you take a message，Please?
B：Gertainly.
A：It's a little complicated… I'm Mr.Clark's former classmate.
B：OK.
A：I was supposed to meet Mr.Clark for lunch at 12∶30 at Ernierestaurant with a friend of us，Miss White…
B：Ernie…Miss White——OK…
A：But Miss White's flight arrived late，and I need to pick her upat the airport now…
B：Airport ——OK…
A：So please tell him that the time is changed to 1∶00…
B：One o'clock…
A：And I hear that Miss White likes to eat Chinese food recently，so I want to meet at Beijing restaurant instead of Ernie's. Bythe way，please tell him not to book the table，I have done it al-ready.
B：Beijing restaurant… Chinese food——OK，Miss Wise，I'll givehim the message.Anything else?
A：That's all.Thank you for trouble taken.Good-bye.
B：Good-bye
『肆』 英語電話留言的格式範文
A phonecall for Mr.Black,
From:Mr.Webber of Honeywell
Time:10:00A.M.20/12/2007
Sum.:Mr.Webber will go to Shanghai for business tomorrow(21/12/2007),so the appointment with Mr.Black in 22/12/2007 will have to be canceled.There will be another appointment when Mr.Webber come back.
Cindy
『伍』 大學英語作文電話留言格式
說明，按電話留抄言的格式襲和要求，以秘書Jame的名義給Mr.Green寫一份電話留言，內容以下： 1，日期：2011年1月10日，2、來電時間：當日上午九時，3、來電人：環球（Universal）公司的Mr.Robert，4、事由：Mr.Robert後天中午十二點從香港來昆明，按原計劃與Mr.Green商討合作項目細節
Mr. Green,
Mr.Robert from Universal Company called you at 9 a.m on January 10th,2011.Mr. Robert will come to Kunming from Hongkong and he wil discuss the detail about the cooperate according to the original schele.
『陸』 電話流言格式,英語作文怎麼寫
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『柒』 電話留言英語作文範文怎麼寫
手機簡訊與電話留言在中美兩國的不同市場反應在一定程度上受制於思維模式、商業習慣及文化傳統等社會因素。電話留言英語作文怎麼寫呢?本文是我整理的電話留言英語作文，歡迎閱讀。
篇1：電話留言英語作文
Apr.20,2008
Dear Yang,
A Mr.Liu Bing called you this morning but you were not in.He wanted to meet you this coming Saturday,9 a.m.,at the university gate.If that is not convenient for you,you are requested to ring him up at any time evening from 8 p.m.to 10 p.m.at 123454576.
Yours,
Amelia
篇2：電話留言英語作文
Hi,shelley,
This is jonn.I called you this morning,but you were not in.would you like to have dinner with me tonight?
Please call me back.Thanks!
篇3：電話留言英語作文
Apr.20,2008
Dear Fiona,
This afternoon,I came to your dormitory to return” Gone with the Wind” that you had kindly lent me last week.Unfortunately,you were not here and your roommates seemed to be out as well.I had no choice but to take the book back.I wonder if you could contract with me anytime in the evening so that I could find appropriate time to visit you.
Sincerely yours,
Amelia
篇4：電話留言英語作文
Mr. Green,
Mr.Robert from Universal Company called you at 9 a.m on January 10th,2011.Mr. Robert will come to Kunming from Hongkong and he wil discuss the detail about the cooperate according to the original schele.
『捌』 英語 留言條格式
英語留言條格式：
1.日期：
日期寫在右上角，只要寫出月、日或星期幾，有時只需寫明上、下午的具體幾點。
2.稱呼：
稱呼寫在第二行，要左起頂格寫。語氣可隨便一些。如Dear Tom, Tom, Xiao Wang等。
3.正文：
正文應再起一行，用詞要通俗簡明，只要把事情說清楚就行。
4.署名：
署名要寫在正文的右下角。一般的留言條只寫留條人的姓名，姓或名均可。請假條、借條的署名要正式些，在姓名前寫上Yours, Your student , Your friend等。遺失、啟事、招領啟事，有時不署名，只留下聯系單位的電話號碼。
2.請假條
請假條(written request for leave)是中學生必須掌握的常用應用文之一，它包括請病假(note for sick leave)和請事假(leave of absence)。請假條是用於向老師或上級領導等因身體狀況不好或因某事請求准假的場合。
英文請假條寫作需注意三點：
1) 英文中請假條的寫法和漢語請假條相同，它一般由四部分組成，即時間、稱呼、正文和簽名。
2) 一般而言，可認定請假條是一種簡單的書信文體。請假條一般寫在紙上，不用信封。其書寫格式與書信有很多相似之處，是書信的大大簡化。
3) 請假條的特點是要求開門見山、內容簡短、用詞通俗易懂。
『玖』 幫忙寫篇英語作文
The 「property」 he stole is a dog he calls Flash. Allen doesn't particularly want Flash –檔肢 in fact， in a few hours he'll drop him off at a stranger's house and never see him again. 「I couldn'行則世t just stand by and do nothing，」 he explains. 「The owner was plainly neglecting the dog，盯鎮 but the police wouldn't do anything about it.」
『拾』 電話留言英語範文作文參考
在對方無法接電話的情況下，而我們又有急事時，一般都會進行留言，期盼著對方能早點回電。下面是我給大家整理的電話留言英語 範文 ，供大家參閱!
電話留言英語範文篇1
Telephone: Messages
Can I speak to …, please?
I’m afraid he’s in a meeting
Can I help?
Can you call back later?
Can I take a message?
Could you tell him that…
Can I take your number, please?
OK, I’ll make sure he gets the message
Claire: Hello, finance department.
Jennifer: Hello, can I speak to Adrian Hopwood, please?
Claire: I’m afraid he’s in a meeting at the moment. Can I help?
Jennifer: No, I need to talk to Mr Hopwood, I think. What time will he be out of the
meeting?
Claire: In about an hour. Can you call back later?
Jennifer: Okay, I’ll do that.
Claire: Or can I take a message?
Jennifer: Actually, would you mind? Could you tell him that Jennifer McAndrews
called and that I’m in the office all day if he could call me back. Claire: Can I take your number, please?
Jennifer: Yes, it’s 5556872
Claire: 5556872. Okay, I’ll make sure he gets the message.
Jennifer: Thanks very much for your help, bye!
Claire: Goodbye!
電話留言英語範文篇2
中國家庭並不常用電話答錄機(Answering Machine),但在北美家庭，幾乎家家都用。外來電話撥入時，若該電話號碼的主人不在，就會讓撥入者聽到一段留言，這叫Answer。絕大多數的Answer都是千篇一律的：說明主人不在，請撥入者留下簡簡訊息及姓名電話號碼等慧者嘩。以下幾前行則特別的 Answer 體現了美國佬的幽默，嫌陸你能體會出其幽默所在嗎? 同時，本人希望讀者能舉一反三，從美國家庭電話留言中學到一些有用的東西，從而可以應用到商務電話留言當中來：
1) My wife and I can’t come to the phone right now, but if you’ll leave your name and number, we’ll get back to you as soon as we’re finished.
2) Hi. This is John. If you are the phone company, I already sent the money. If you are my parents, please send money. If you are my financial aid institution, you didn’t lend me enough money. If you are my friends, you owe me money. If you are a female, don’t worry, I have plenty of money.
3) Hi, I’m not home right now but my answering machine is, so you can talk to it instead. Wait for the beep(beep：主人的Answer講完以後，Answer Machine會發出一聲beep, 這時候來電話者就可以開始留言了。).
4) Hi! John’s answering machine is broken. This is his refrigerator. Please speak very slowly, and I’ll stick your message to myself with one of these magnets(磁鐵).
註：通常情況下，來電話者面對錄音講話都不太自然，所以語言往往很急促，三句兩句話就完了。這可苦壞了接聽留言的主人，聽多少遍都聽不清留言者到底是誰，講了些什麼。對於母語非英文的人，這種感覺會更深。所以，以下這兩段幽默乾脆就首先告訴電話撥入者，我的Answer Machine不好使，你且慢慢來。
5) Hello, this is Sally’s microwave. Her answering machine just eloped(私奔) with her tape deck(磁帶驅動器), so I’m stuck with taking her calls. Say, if you want anything cooked while you leave your message, just hold it up to the phone.
6) Hello, you are talking to a machine. I am capable of receiving messages. My owners do not need siding(牆板，壁板), windows, or a hot tub(浴盆), and their carpets are clean. They give to charity(慈善團體) through their office and do not need their picture taken. If you’re still with me, leave your name and number and they will get back to you.
7) Hi. I am probably home. I’m just avoiding someone I don’t like. Leave me a message, and if I don’t call back, it’s you.
8) This is not an answering machine -- this is a telepathic(心靈感應術) thought- recording device. After the tone, think about your name, your reason for calling and a number where I can reach you, and I’ll think about returning your call.
註：tone：與對第3)句beep 的注釋含義完全一樣，主人的Answer講完以後，Answer Machine會發出一聲beep, 這時候來電話者就可以開始留言了。
9) Hi, this is George. I’m sorry I can’t answer the phone right now. Leave a message, and then wait by your phone until I call you back.
6) Hello, you are talking to a machine. I am capable of receiving messages. My owners do not need siding(牆板，壁板), windows, or a hot tub(浴盆), and their carpets are clean. They give to charity(慈善團體) through their office and do not need their picture taken. If you’re still with me, leave your name and number and they will get back to you.
10) If you are a burglar(夜賊), then we’re probably at home cleaning our weapons right now and can’t come to the phone. Otherwise, we probably aren’t home and it’s safe to leave us a message.
11) You’re growing tired. Your eyelids(眼皮) are getting heavy. You feel very sleepy now. You are graally losing your willpower(毅力) and your ability to resist suggestions. When you hear the tone you will feel helplessly compelled to(感到無助而被迫做某事) leave your name, number, and a message.
12) Please leave a message. However, you have the right to remain silent. Everything you say will be recorded and will be used by us.
註：you have the right to remain silent：電影電視里警察出示逮捕令時常講的一句話。西方社會講究人權，任何疑犯在未審判之前不得認為有罪，因而不能逼供、更不可拷打：他們有權保持沉默。
13) Hello, you’ve reached Jim and Sonya. We can’t pick up the phone right now, because we’re doing something we really enjoy. Sonya likes doing it up and down, and I like doing it left to right ... real slowly. So leave a message, and when we’re done brushing our teeth, we’ll get back to you.
電話留言英語範文篇3
在電影里經常看到美圖人最愛用電話留言功能了，但是你知道嗎，這個預設留言可以隨意按個性要求來改，從這些留言我們也可以發現美國人的性格特徵。
Hi. I am probably home. I’m just avoiding someone I don’t like. Leave me a message, and if I don’t call back, it’s you. 嗨，我可能在家裡，但我不想給我討厭的人回電話。請留言吧。如果我沒有給您回電話，那麼您就是我討厭的那個人。
Please leave a message. However, you have the right to remain silent. If you give up the right, everything you say will be recorded and will be used by us. 請您留言。當然，您有權保持沉默。如果您放棄這個權利，那麼您說的每句話都將被記錄在案，並且將被我們所利用。 Hello, you’ve reached Jim and Sara. We can’t pick up the phone right now, because we’re doing something we really enjoy. Sara likes doing it up and down, and I like doing it left to right. So leave a message, and when we’re done brushing our teeth, we’ll get back to you. 嗨，這里是Jim和Sara的家。我們現在不能接電話，因為我們正在干一件我們非常喜歡乾的事情。呵呵，你自己想吧。好吧，請留言吧，等我們刷完牙，我們將給您回電話。
寫到這里，我突發奇想：乾脆也給我自己的電話機編寫一段幽默提示吧。於是我仿照我的美國朋友Brian家中的提示，編寫了下面這段話，您看看怎麼樣?