四級英語範文現象描述
範文來自《2010年6月英語四級作文考前預測範文》
預測作文（四）
Teenagers' Studying Abroad
1. 現在有很多青少年出國留學
2. 有些人認為這種做法是有益的
3. 我認為這種觀點是不對的
【範文】
Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people, especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas ecation is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.
After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the ecational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?
We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.
【點評】
第一段指出當前某種普遍的做法，之後分兩點闡述人們支持這種做法的原因；第二段首句鮮明地指出自己反駁的意見，然後分兩點來闡述理由；最後一段進行總結，並請當事人在做出決定前多加斟酌。
範文首句點題，指出青少年留學這一現象，並給出支持者的理由，即獨立的生活會教會他們自信和堅持不懈，而且國外的教學水平會讓學生進入更好的大學、找到更好的工作。第二段給出反對理由。首先，早期獨立不一定是件好事。另外，太多的國外學校的目標是掙錢，所以它們的教學質量是令人質疑的。末段總結說青少年留學可能會帶來好處，但令人擔憂的問題也很多。
第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示「有更好的機會做某事」。第二段首句中的biased表示「偏激的，存有偏見的」；第三句中的aim at表示「目的在於」；第四句中的guarantee表示「保證」，adapt to表示「適應」，fierce表示「激烈的」，修飾competition(競爭)。
2. 英語四級優秀作文範文
大學英語四級寫作部分，只有多練才能在考試中寫出一篇好的英語文章。下文中特為大家總結了一篇英語四級優秀作文範文，大家可以進行參考借鑒。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Opinion on Campus Lectures. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1、大學校園里的講座豐富多彩
2、 聽講座的益處
3、你對在大學校園里聽講座的評論
【範文】
My Opinion on Campus Lectures
In recent years, more and more lectures are being given on campus. They are organized either by the departments or by the students unions with an aim to improve the students quality both mentally and academically. These lectures are usually in series and on different topics, such as arts, life, economy, psychology and world issues.
Generally speaking, the advantages of good lectures are various. First they broaden the students knowledge horizon and cultivate interest in different fields. Second, they make the life of the students colorful and enjoyable.
With these merits, lectures are just complementary and subordinate to our school work. If students spend too much time attending lectures, their regular study will be affected and disturbed. So, in my opinion, the students should, on the one hand, do their class work and homework well first, on the other hand, set as more time as possible to attend good lectures which are helpful to our life and study.
3. 英語四級作文範文有什麼特點
2012年6月英語四級作文題目及範文「ExcessivePackaging」.Takingalookaround,wecanfindexampleswithease:,clothesareputtedinawell-designedplasticbagsandmoon-.Whatarethecausesofthisproblem?Ontheonehand,toearnmoreeconomicgains,'sattention,.Ontheotherhand,,thesuperiorthequalitywillbe,.Tochangethissituation,.First,.Moreover,''tequaltoquality..（185words）中文譯文：我覺得你應該對「商品過度包裝」現象也不陌生。在我們生活的周圍，我們隨處可見這樣的例子：小電腦包裝在一個又厚又重的紙板盒裡，衣服包裝在設計精美的塑料袋裡，月餅通常也放在精緻的包裝盒裡。這個問題的原因到底是什麼？首先，很多製造商為了獲得的經濟利益，通常都將商品用不必要卻吸引人的包裝里，目的在於吸引顧客的注意力，喚起他們的好奇心然後刺激他們的消費慾望。另一方面，相當多的顧客認為，包裝越精緻，產品的質量就越高，這個想法也加劇的了商品過度包裝的趨勢。為了改變這個現狀，我認為應該採取以下的措施，首先，必須制定是執行相關的法律限制商品過度包裝；其次，我們應該開展廣泛的教育運動喚起人們的意識，那就是，包裝不等於產品質量。只有這樣我們才能杜絕這種趨勢。
4. 四級英語作文範文
Nowadays, there are more and more [某種現象] in [某種場合]. It is estimated that [相關數據]. Why have there been so many [某種現象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. Besides, [原因二]. The third one is [原因三]. To sum up, the main cause of [某種現象] is e to [最主要原因]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解決辦法一]. On the other hand, [解決辦法二]. All these measures will certainly rece the number of [某種現象].
Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 槍手] in [China's examinations / 中國的考場]. It is estimated that [5％ examinees are ghost writers / 5％的應試者是槍手]. Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 槍手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [hirers' ignorance / 僱主無知]. Besides, [hirers' indolence / 僱主懶惰]. The third one is [hirers' obtusity / 僱主遲鈍]. To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 槍手] is e to [hirers' low IQ / 僱主智商低]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打]. On the other hand, [decapitation / 斬首]. All these measures will certainly rece the number of [ghost writers / 槍手].
5. 四級英語作文 看圖寫作 描述圖像，並且寫出自己的觀點和建議。
十面霾伏
三年級 | 寫景 | 345字
早上醒來，外面是天昏地暗，灰濛蒙的。一看錶，是六點零兩分，我有點納悶。都六點多了，外面怎麼還那麼黑。對了，昨天天氣預報說今天有霧霾。我從小到大還沒見過霧霾呢，真想見識見識！我和媽媽吃過早飯，整理好東西後，出發了。我和媽媽都小心翼翼的靠著路邊走，大約近兩米處的地方都看不清事物。這如煙籠罩的世界使車輛難行，使人舉步維艱，不辨南北。 據媽媽所說這是因為汽車尾氣排放，工業製造污染等對大自然的破壞。我似懂非懂的點了點頭，媽媽又告訴我霧霾天影響交通，容易出事故，它是一種災害天氣，對農作物的生長有害，同時也對人類的身體健康構成了威脅。 我們通過這煙霧繚繞的世界，終於到達了目的地—學校。下課後我們都認為霧霾天氣很好玩兒，可誰又知道他的壞處？動手保護大自然，盡量少出現霧騰騰的霧霾天氣，讓我們一起行動吧！
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名師點評
本文小作者向我們描述了霧霾的天氣，文章的語句通順，句意流暢，敘寫較為生動，文章的語言的表達能力較好。文章的不足之處在於雖有中心主題，但表達不夠充分有力，言而不實，空而無力。
6. 求觀點論述型英語四級作文範文
範文來自《2010年6月英語四級作文考前預測範文》
預測作文（一）
My View on Double BA Degree
1. 現在大學生讀雙學位的現象很常見
2. 我對這一現象的看法
【範文】
Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graate from the university several years later.
Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.
Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.
【點評】
首段直接點題，說明現象；第二段分述三個優點，其中首句為讓步狀語從句，意思是「雖然可能帶來負面的後果，但總體上是有益的」；第三段呼應第二段，得出結論。
範文首段提出大學生讀雙學位這一普遍現象；第二段分三點進行論述，其中前兩點是優點，即學生會更加勤奮，並且有利於他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作，最後一點是解釋可能帶來的學費問題並不嚴重；第三段下結論，呼應第二段。
第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示「大有希望」；第三段末句中的compel sb．to do sth．表示「迫使某人做某事」。
7. 英語四級作文範文
The Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
1.體育運動的好處.
2.體育運動可能帶來的副作用.
3.我參加體育運動的體會.
範文：
To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English ring the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress.
The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it.
Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain 「a sense of English language」. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are 「good English」 and which are not.
Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English.
8. 英語四級考試寫作必背範文140篇的介紹
《英語四級考試寫作必背範文140篇》一書的出版社是北京航空航天大學出版社，出版時間是第1版 (2011年3月1日)。
